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Reversed Order Existence

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An apocalypse made by indicting the nature, manipulating the Natural Order of Existence. If all the existing energies, resources that exist in the Natural Order of Existence are sucked out from the particular world and stored and concentrated in another, then the former gets rid of the natural conditions of life and existence.

BLAZON, A TIGER, IS TRAPPED IN THE DEADLIEST APOCALYPSE- REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE.REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE has engulfed Tra Land. It is the weapon of the rising Mediocre (Monsters) led by MIZARD, the monster lord against the Meritorious (Tras) led by their Reverend Crown DIAMONDES. Meritocracy is responsible to have created dangerous divisions and deprivations amongst citizens through Status States. But BLAZON is no tra or monster but is tortured and chased. There is too little time to survive and incomplete deaths are rapid. Identity, love, betrayal, treachery, power, survival, family, friendship, tiger-human conflict will be judged in REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE. There is no going back!

322 pages, Hardcover

First published February 7, 2020

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Blaze Goldburst

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BLAZE GOLDBURST, the award-winning author is inspired by life in and around the planet. Follow BLAZE GOLDBURST on social media using @blazegoldburst

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Profile Image for Lisa Henry.
Author 107 books2,259 followers
November 10, 2020
Updated review:

Originally I didn't star this review at all because the sock puppetry on this thing tells the entire story, but ah, fuck it, it's a one star now. But here's the best part!

DOES ANYONE OUT THERE WANT TO BE YOUTUBE FAMOUS?

All you have to do is also notice the appalling writing in this blurb, or check the book stats for the sheer number of sock puppets that have already been removed in GR's whack-a-mole attempt to get Blaze to shut the fuck up for a minute, and you too can be immortalised forever in Blaze's AmAziNG yOuTUbe VIdeO agAInSt tEh HATERZZZ!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aPN4m...

My favourite part is how it's called "20 SECRET THINGS THAT HATERS ATTEMPTED ON BLAZE GOLDBURST |REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE| #BlazeAgainstHate"

You got me, Blaze. I sure did post that public review here secretly, I guess.

Meanwhile Blaze, oops, sorry, Reena, is now attempting to link the video to my author profile:

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Gosh, with this much time and dedication on their hands, you'd think they'd concentrate on writing a better book instead.
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Original review: I have never seen so many sock puppets on one review.

Check out these hundreds of "people" who have all five-starred this book, and who have all only reviewed this one single book and followed the author. No other activity at all.

Also, they all sure do LOVE THEIR CAPS, don't they? Almost as much as the author does, in that largely incomprehensible blurb.
Profile Image for Marc *Dark Reader with a Thousand Young! Iä!*.
1,416 reviews302 followers
November 16, 2020
UPDATE - November 9, 2020: The author has produced a video, titled "20 SECRET THINGS HATERS ATTEMPTED ON BLAZE GOLDBURST |REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE| #BlazeAgainstHate" and it is epic! So epic that it deserves a liveblog. Scroll past the review to see it! Can you guess who the first featured "hater" is???


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REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE: Not the absolute worst self-published novel that I have ever read, but a very close second!

REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE: Yes, I read the entire 8 chapter free sample! Really, one or two chapters is plenty to understand what you are reading.

REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE: Lots of people are saying that the promtional blurb sounds like it was written by a neural net. You know, a computer program that can be fed many examples of a thing and then can try to create its own versions of that thing based on whatever rules it gleans? For example (thanks to aiweirdness.com for this), after learning 100,000 heavy metal band names and asked to come up with its own, one network produced gems such as "Black Clonic Sky", "Staggabash", and "ChaosWorge le Plague".

At least the book itself appears to have been written by a human person, because there is some kind of linear story in there, and it goes something like this: Blazon, a tiger, comes to awareness in a pile of eggs. Blazon is weak and starving, but never gets around to eating the small creatures all around, because a giant creature of some sort comes stomping through and Blazon is like "oh noes I will be crushed" but the small creatures are all like "nah brah, we're safe". Then Blazon tumbles down and goes into the sea, and is blocked by giant things, a row of Ents behind which is a row of humans behind which is a row of hornless rhinos, and a giant upside-down turtle with multiple snake heads shows up. Blazon sinks down into the ocean and he needs to breathe, luckily for him the little creatures say "Dude don't breathe in then out, you gotta breathe out then in" because REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE. At the bottom of the ocean Blazon uncovers a pit and jumps down it, then all the giant creatures poo and pee down the pit on top of him, so he runs through a tunnel and at some point encounters multiple reflections of himself, but he doesn't understand that they are his reflections (presumably because tiger?), which leads to the single best line of the entire 8-chapter sample:
Their satire on me was too humiliating.
Then Blazon comes out into a room with a human and is tempted to suckle from her "two soft round moons, hanging in its body!" But Blazon hates all humans so he escapes and ends up hiding in a depression to watch a bunch more Ents, humans and other creatures who are all walking on their heads or backs because REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE and then Blazon thinks back to when his mother was killed and skinned by humans, after which he spent a lot of time trying to put new skin back on his dead mom before giving up and then being adopted by a cheetah. Thus ends the free sample. Take a deep breath, but out, not in. REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE.

I am amazed that I was able to get even that much out of it, because very few sentences make sense on their own. Was this written in another language then put through Google translator? It certainly reads that way. Take this example:
I stepped accidentally into the mouths of the dark-hole. It shrieked with pain watching me going sunk under and under. I knew croc's tear, how pretentious. A deviant's great fall didn't bring in it cheers.
Or,
I kicked at them my clawless paws, but they didn't get the hurt. I went on giving more pain to my paws, but all my attempts remained the same unsuccessful.
What the hell am I supposed to do with any of that? The entire thing is written in this manner. Very occasionally there would be a paragraph that was fully grammatically correct, and it was shocking. Shocking, I say! I tried all of the following to help make sense of the prose, to no avail:

-interpret it as the speech of a tiger, non-human. This helped a little to accept some terms such as "baddie-feet" (some kind of animal) and "croc-lizards" (just crocodiles), but it was insufficient to explain the severely mangled grammar.
-read it backwards, because REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE. Nope, help any not was this.
-take everything to mean the opposite, again because REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE. Still a big no.

The only available conclusion is that the author had no idea that he or she was not writing in correct, comprehensible English. Blaze GoldBurst may have run spellcheck on this manuscript (thank you for that small mercy) and obtained decent cover art, but neglected every other necessary step in producing a book that is remotely readable or marketable, especially getting a copy editor or even paying a native English speaker five dollars to give some honest feedback, which would consist of them shouting, "No!" while spritzing water at you.

Thus is tiger-human conflict judged in REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE.

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And now, as promised, a liveblog of "20 SECRET THINGS HATERS ATTEMPTED ON BLAZE GOLDBURST |REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE| #BlazeAgainstHate"

Link, but if you don't trust it then search for the title on youtube, or search for "blaze goldburst versus haters" or whatever, you'll find it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aPN4m...

00:01 - Nice opening sequence. See, there is some talent. Maybe you can focus on graphic and video production instead of trying to make Reversed Order Existence happen.

00:10 - Never mind. Where are we? These books all have blank spines. How are you supposed to find the book you need? Oh, we're going through a door... and back into the same library of blanks. This is going to be a trip. Watch for volume shifts.

04:10 - So, the argument here is that everyone who has said negative things about the book and author are "hired by BIG influential people with million dollar bank accounts..." WHY DIDN'T ANYONE TELL ME I COULD HAVE GOTTEN PAID FOR THIS!

05:02 - LOLOLOL What on earth? WHY ARE ALL THOSE CLONE PHOTOGRAPHERS CLAPPING AND DANCING OVER A STADIUM??!?

05:55 - "the BIG Influential people don’t want unique ideas and people to ever capture the limelight in the book world." Yes. Those millionaire influences are terrified by the cut that Reversed Order Existence is going to take away from them, if they didn't have an army of paid haters to malign it. Makes perfect sense.

06:21 - More stock footage, this time of generic business people doing some business walking, and photoshopped (or whatever the video equivalent is) T-shirts. Hey, have you heard, reading books is for suckers now. All the cool kids are wearing books.

07:00 - Again, claims that all the "haters" are paid by BIG interests. WHAR MY HATER BUCKS?

07:47 - PEOPLE! We haven't just abused a book; we have abused Literature, and Knowledge! Oh noes!!

08:04 - "Blaze is perhaps a bit too Blazed?" lol.

08:14 - GUYS! HE'S TALKING ABOUT ME! OMG OMG OMG. But how did he get my voice down so perfectly? "Find me a solid proof where I have personally attacked anyone." Okay, for this one, we need a screenshot with the full context, plus just a little conjecture. These are the full comments from Ann's review of Reversed Order Existence:

"you are a fraud"
"you are a donkey head"
Those are the personal attacks. "But wait, Marc *Dark Reader of the Woods*," you say, "those comments are from user Reena Pradham, not from Blaze Goldburst." I am pretty confident that they are one and the same, whether Reena Pradham is Blaze's real name, or whether it is just the primary sockpuppet account. Reena Pradham is the one that posted the link to this video in all of the "haters'" comments (now deleted):

The same account is the only active defender of Blaze and this book on Goodreads, and the first and only rater on the next book to be published by "Reverend Crown Production", the purported publisher of Reversed Order Existence, titled Lord's Ordinary Children, which is a whole other thing. Based on everything, I see only three possibilities, in order of exponentially decreasing likelihood: "Reena Pradham" is "Blaze Goldburst", or "Reena Pradham" is a friend or relation of Blaze and is acting as Blaze's attack dog, or (least likely) it is just some random person who truly believes that Reversed Order Existence is a heartbreaking work of staggering genius.

09:50 - "I already know that these people created fake accounts to inflate and deflate the ratings and reviews..."
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10:23 - "After indirectly calling my book a scam, he shifted to call my work a poor attempt at writing." Did you actually read my comment? I wrote, "To be fair, I don't think this book is a "scam"..." The other part is true. I did call your work a "poor attempt at writing." I should have been more specific. The attempt appears to have been significant. It is the outcome that is poor.

10:34 - "This person has never read my book, never purchased it..." I was clear in my review, I read the first eight chapters. That was more than sufficient to pass judgment. We will see this come up again in the video; Blaze appears to think that you have to read the entire 322 page book before you can legitimately say anything about it. I read more than enough to know that I was going to hate the rest of it. Let's try an analogy: someone gives you a sandwich, and tells you that inside it you will find the most flavorful, unique taste sensation you have ever encountered. You take a bite and find out that the sandwich is full of shit. The giver insists that if you keep eating, you will find the promised wonder eventually. Are you going to keep eating?

But, you make one fair point. I had not purchased the book. If I am going to write a vicious and HILARIOUS negative review of a book by an independent author, I ought to at least give them a sale if the book is reasonably priced. So, I HAVE NOW PURCHASED REVERSED ORDER EXISTENCE on Kindle. Enjoy your US$2.79 royalty.

11:04 - Blaze plays ignorant of the fact that hundreds upon hundreds of fake GR profiles were created to give this title five-star ratings and subsequently deleted by the Goodreads powers-that-be. Who else do you think did this?

12:02 - "These hired PR Team, heavily fed with cash, seek to destroy and crush many talented people's livelihood". More conspiracy mongering. With all the references to parallels of his experience with those of the tiger in the book, I have to wonder - is this elegant integrated marketing, or does Blaze truly believe himself in essence to be Blazon the tiger, enduring the same struggle?

14:40 - And for the next target of Blaze's ire: Lisa, look out! Hey, I didn't get a flashy graphic sequence when I was introduced, no fair! I am just as much against Literature and Knowledge as you are.

14:48 - WHY ARE THERE DANCING STORMTROOPERS ON THE SCREEN????!!!!

15:51 - "What made you hide your identity behind a mask?," asks BLAZE GOLDBURST.

16:51 - "...couldn't understand Basic English, or pretended to forget the English language..." Do I really need to use my "projection" photo again? Blaze, please look up the word "syntax".

17:26 - Speaking of appearing desperate...

17:54 - WOW. Really, the cheapest and meanest comment was shelving the book as "Do Not Give This Author Money"??? Blaze thinks this created a "strong lobby". Blaze does not appear to understand Goodreads custom bookshelves. What did you think of my shelf for the book: "Self Published Manatee Abortion", as in the aborted fetus of a sea cow? That's WAY meaner.

19:54 - Dancing avatars and raining money!

21:23 - Is saying 'lol' aloud done? I honestly don't know. Here, Blaze criticizes those who describe the book or blurb as akin to something a neural net would generate. The fact that multiple people thought this should be a clue, not proof of conspiracy.

25:45 - Another great voice-over performance, this time for reviewer Karina.

33:39 - Under the heading of "Biography Lies", Blaze highlights hired hater Brian's C+ review. "I read the first two chapters, and if I had to guess, I'd say this book was written by a sophomore poetry major" Blaze doesn't understand that this is the most charitable review of all!! He's not trying to rewrite your life!

35:46 - I'm sorry, you spent 7-8 years writing Reversed Order Existence??? Well geez, that helps explain why you can't take criticism of it.

This is getting quite boring, and I am approaching the review character limit. So let us summarize:
-The only reason so many people bash the book is because they are paid haters, funded by secret millionaires who are so threatened by an emerging talented voice in literature that they must enlist hordes to beat them down on social media, deny their livelihood and cause mental illness. Sure.
-Irritating over-marketing of the book simply does not exist and is not a factor in any of this.
-Yes, I'm a big blue meanie.

Final word: The book is devoid of correct English grammar and syntax, the marketing of the book has been unwelcome to say the least, and you really need to read and heed the Goodreads Author Guidelines.
Profile Image for Krystal.
2,150 reviews478 followers
April 24, 2020
**Edit 25/04/20**

We're down to a mere 32 reviews and there are still so many fake ones. I think that tells us a lot.

**EDIT: 04/20**

I'm adding a 1-star rating to this piece of trash because more fake reviews seem to be cropping up. It frustrates the heck out of me. Didn't we already go through this with The Seduction Expert?

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A note to "friends":

Please never, EVER recommend books to me that are clearly backed only by fake/friend-of-the-author reviews.

You are not doing yourself, or these books, any favours by bringing them to my attention.

I fkn LOATHE this kind of behaviour.

Rather than encourage me to read it, you've instead encouraged me to add it to my 'douchebags' shelf and advise as many people as possible against reading it.


Consider our "friendship" revoked.

Thank you, that is all.
Profile Image for Pandora.
119 reviews
April 14, 2020
I love that Goodreads decided to delete one of the 5 or 6 real reviews this book has and left so many obvious fake ones. I really love that. Good job, Goodreads!

An author that believes they've written something good puts all their energy into advertising it and maybe gives away a few copies to gather reviews. In general, they don't spend hours upon hours creating a couple thousand fake accounts hoping that eventually one person in this world might come across that insane average rating and be fooled into buying their bullshit.

So, seeing the faith this particular author appears to have on this particular book, OF COURSE I wasn't going to spend money on it, but I actually did read the first chapter on amazon, out of curiosity. I encourage others to do the same because it's so bad it's kind of amazing. Awe inspiring.

In summary, I give it one star because that's what it's worth.
Profile Image for Graisi.
562 reviews16 followers
March 1, 2020
I started to read the excerpt, but barely got through about a page, while smirking. It's one thing to use an abstract writing style (something Catherynne Valente does well in some of her earlier books), but quite another to make no sense in any version of English. It's also a shame this is so bad, because the concept is intriguing.

As another reviewer noted, it's almost certain that the author created piles of fake accounts just to give his book high reviews. He has an overly slick looking site and videos which seem to be begging people to buy the book.
Profile Image for Kris.
407 reviews58 followers
July 13, 2020
"Published February 7, 2020"

February 26 = 1,603 ratings (mostly 5 stars)
February 29 = 1,709 ratings

March 2 = 113 ratings. Massive number of FAKE RATINGS deleted by Goodreads.

UPDATED: July 13 = Not all FAKE RATINGS and FAKE ACCOUNTS have been removed -- and new ones continue to be added...
Profile Image for DaisyDoesBooks.
112 reviews23 followers
December 3, 2024
09.11.20 update - the author has now put a video on YouTube with the names and pictures of people who have given him a negative review for spamming. I’m included in that video as someone with a ‘team of PR’ because I have social media accounts .. I’m absolutely lost for words. This is so, so weird. (For the record, I don’t have a team of anything, I just like social media....it is 2020 after all!). Having a millionaire PR team targeting his book makes more sense to Mr Blazon than that his book might have negative reviews because it’s not very good....

Original review: Any book that relies on spamming and bots to get its name out there isn’t worth a read. Honestly, I didn’t even finish the blurb of this book, even that reads like it was written by a programme over a person.
Profile Image for Reena.
2 reviews4 followers
March 4, 2020
I thoroughly enjoyed reading Reversed Order Existence. Very important issues like reverse ageing, reverse breathing, climate reversion, etc has been invented

Merged review:

highly enjoyable read
Profile Image for Jess Rose.
1 review
May 16, 2020
If only it were possible to reverse the existence of this absolute waste of my time. Urgh. Worst. Book. Ever.
1 review
March 5, 2020
Best fantasy novel. A must read for everybody looking for a unique concept/story.
1 review
December 19, 2019
An incredible fiction and hope to read the whole series..........great for the animal lovers!
Profile Image for Satish Jain.
1 review
March 7, 2020
Reversed Order Existence, a great novel written by Blaze Goldburst. I have read it. Highly recommend this amazing book to everyone.
Believe me guys, it's a great concept. You can see the videos on youtube. I have also given a video of the book on Youtube and Facebook.
Lastly, I have been witnessing some jealous and useless people trying to attack this great book by defaming and abusing the author because she has written a great novel. Beware of these jealous people as they are not readers but someone who cannot tolerate great works.
Thank you. The book can be ordered from Barnes and Noble, Flipkart, Kobo, Amazon and all international sites. Give it a read and believe me, it's an amazing book.
Profile Image for Reena.
2 reviews4 followers
March 24, 2020
I am in love with Reversed Order Existence. And yes, i highly recommend this dystopian science fiction/fantasy to every reader. It is a very promising debut novel and deserves attention. The issue of Reversed Order Existence is serious and may affect us in the future.
1 review
March 1, 2020
"Reversed Order Existence" is a very unique dystopian novel. It will take over us some day! "🌍🌎🌏🌐"
Let us support Blazon, the Tiger🐯 and hope that he escapes "Reversed Order Existence". 🌏🐅🌎🐅🌍🐅
Profile Image for Book Readers.
1 review1 follower
December 17, 2019
Reversed Order Existence, the theme, the world, the characters have made me immensely interested. A very rare dystopian fantasy.
Profile Image for Steve Williams.
1 review1 follower
December 17, 2019
Excellent novel. Far Better than any dystopian novel i have ever read. There is a lot to learn from the Reversed Order series. I am with Blazon, and you?
Profile Image for Riya Chatterjee.
1 review
December 17, 2019
I love fantasy novels. Reversed Order Existence feels so unique. The clash between Meritocracy and Mediocrity is very new. I recommend it to all my friends.
Profile Image for Karina.
367 reviews14 followers
May 17, 2020
what a joke.
Profile Image for Ann.
127 reviews
June 9, 2020
This book is a scam. Literally. Pretty freaking sad!
Profile Image for Brian.
277 reviews19 followers
May 13, 2020
I saw a post on social media calling this book out for fake reviews so I downloaded Amazon's free sample to see if it's really that bad. I read the first two chapters, and if I had to guess, I'd say this book was written by a sophomore poetry major with an abundance of spare time, got their first B+ and decided to give writing a go.
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