“Everything Between Us” felt like an assignment done for a creative writing class, where many incompatible elements were thrown together and had to be used….sort of like those Top Chef shows.
We have:
MC#1 - Nearly 50yo feminist book author and renowned player Caitlin, who fervently dislikes monogamy - because the sex gets boring after awhile, openly only wants open relationships. Despite being an academic, she’s very rich, as well as gorgeous. Best friend since college days with Pink Bean co-owner Sheryl.
MC#2 - Josephine, 28yo PhD candidate who TAs for Sheryl, and also works for her at the Pink Bean. Josephine’s thesis is on Body Positivity, but she has a VERY negative view of her own body, and let’s us know her self-image at every opportunity. Yes, she is fat (she says she’s triple the size of a slight girl, which would put her in the 250-330 pound range), but I can’t tell if Harper wants us to join Josephine at disliking her size, or to accept her despite her size. Frankly, her size is irrelevant to me….it’s her negative, self-doubting, personality I disliked.
Amber returns - pretty much to let Josephine know she and Caitlin slept together, and she’s still distrusting of Caitlin.
Micky (from Pink Bean #1) returns - with a personality transplant. Instead of the insecure divorced housewife who’s never worked, and mother of two teenagers who finds herself attracted to a woman…she’s now a teasing, taunting, bitchy coworker.
The story is essentially that sex-focused Caitlin really wants Josephine, and Josephine can’t understand why. I couldn’t really figure out why either was the right fit for each other either. Caitlin is not the type to go for personality, and an open-sex relationship doesn’t sound like the basis for anything good for Josephine, with all of her insecurities.
Perhaps Harper Bliss, with all her talents, is rushing out these Pink Bean books a bit too fast. Yes, the Pink Bean is a forum for characters that make us think - divorced straight woman falling for a girl, an alcoholic partner, and now a person with low self esteem because of her body. But the characters and story just didn’t come together in this one….it just felt too artificial - that creative writing assignment comes to mind again. 2* for the book.
BUT - because this book is first person POV, Harper changed the narrator to Melissa Moran. WOW what a great voice! Perhaps she was chosen because Josephine has a terrific singing voice, and the narrator makes us believe that. Perhaps she was chosen to help us see past Josephine’s body into her heart and soul. Well, as I said, I didn’t particularly like Josephine, or understand why she thinks non-relationship Caitlin will be good for her self-image….but WOW did I like the narrator’s voice! She earns an extra star for the audiobook, so 3* it is.