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Meet Brad.
A quiet, hardworking man who goes about his daily routine with joy. He works as a telemarketer, trying his best to sell poorly made, over-priced products to the unsuspecting people on the other end of the phone. Brad doesn't mind though, it's a means to an end.
Life's about to change for Brad. Now that Father has anointed him the Chosen one, the one to open the gates and allow them to flock into the Black Heavens.
Eternity awaits.
But is Brad ready to perform on the big day?
This book contains scenes of extreme violence and sexual content. Do not purchase this book if you are easily offended or require trigger warnings!
Meet Brad.
A quiet, hardworking man who goes about his daily routine with joy. He works as a telemarketer, trying his best to sell poorly made, over-priced products to the unsuspecting people on the other end of the phone. Brad doesn't mind though, it's a means to an end.
Life's about to change for Brad. Now that Father has anointed him the Chosen one, the one to open the gates and allow them to flock into the Black Heavens.
Eternity awaits.
But is Brad ready to perform on the big day?
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About the author
Steve Stred
88 books672 followersAn award-winning author, Steve Stred lives in Edmonton, Alberta, Canada, with his wife and son.
Known for his novels, ‘Mastodon,’ ‘Churn the Soil,’ and his series ‘Father of Lies’ where he joined a cult on the dark web for four years, his work has been described as haunting, bleak and is frequently set in the woods near where he grew up. He’s been fortunate to appear in numerous anthologies with some truly amazing authors.
His novel ‘Mastodon’ will be translated into Czech and Italian over the next few years.
His novel 'Churn the Soil' won the Best Horror Novel award in the 2024 Indieverse Awards.
His novel 'Mastodon' and his novella' Sacrament' were both nominated for Splatterpunk Awards.
He is represented by Kodie Van Dusen at The Rights Factory and Alec Frankel at Independent Artist Group.
Outside of writing, Steve received his Bachelor Degree in Kinesiology from the University of the Fraser Valley in 2008, and became a Certified Canadian Pedorthist in 2013.
Known for his novels, ‘Mastodon,’ ‘Churn the Soil,’ and his series ‘Father of Lies’ where he joined a cult on the dark web for four years, his work has been described as haunting, bleak and is frequently set in the woods near where he grew up. He’s been fortunate to appear in numerous anthologies with some truly amazing authors.
His novel ‘Mastodon’ will be translated into Czech and Italian over the next few years.
His novel 'Churn the Soil' won the Best Horror Novel award in the 2024 Indieverse Awards.
His novel 'Mastodon' and his novella' Sacrament' were both nominated for Splatterpunk Awards.
He is represented by Kodie Van Dusen at The Rights Factory and Alec Frankel at Independent Artist Group.
Outside of writing, Steve received his Bachelor Degree in Kinesiology from the University of the Fraser Valley in 2008, and became a Certified Canadian Pedorthist in 2013.
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May 10, 2020
Being in a cult can be a real pain in the ass, especially when you start dicking around with things you can't control.
Steve, Steve, Steve...eish, buddy, you leave me so conflicted with this one...
Let's start with the good things;
The minimalism and ease with which this story flows is superb. Without saying it directly, Stred gives you shocking visuals with so few words. If there are writers or aspiring writers who gets accused of over-description, this one is a must read if you want to improve your game.
But...
I'm going to be the proverbial turd in the drinking water here:
I've read most of the reviews for this one, some of them from people who's opinion I usually trust and agree with, but this story did nothing for me. The way my mind works, it was simply traveling from A to B - so I will suck it up and say: It's not you, it's me.
Rating you down the middle with this one, Mr. Stred, because the writing was absolutely brilliant.
Steve, Steve, Steve...eish, buddy, you leave me so conflicted with this one...
Let's start with the good things;
The minimalism and ease with which this story flows is superb. Without saying it directly, Stred gives you shocking visuals with so few words. If there are writers or aspiring writers who gets accused of over-description, this one is a must read if you want to improve your game.
But...
I'm going to be the proverbial turd in the drinking water here:
I've read most of the reviews for this one, some of them from people who's opinion I usually trust and agree with, but this story did nothing for me. The way my mind works, it was simply traveling from A to B - so I will suck it up and say: It's not you, it's me.
Rating you down the middle with this one, Mr. Stred, because the writing was absolutely brilliant.
November 18, 2019
RITUAL!
Brutal! Dark! Cults! Short! Novella! Twisted! Messed Up! Weird! Devils! Biblical! Ceremonies!
This was so much brutal, twisted fun AND can easily be read in one sitting, which is what I did. The protagonist Brad is so painfully ordinary that when things start going downhill, you're pulling for him, weirdo that he is. At least, you're pulling for him up to a certain point, anyway, and then you're more likely to be physically backing away from the book, except your eyes are glued and you must go on to see what happens next.
In short: RITUAL gets medieval on your ass!
Highly recommended for fans of warped, sick horror such as myself!
Get your copy here: https://amzn.to/2NYjXYf
*I was provided an e-copy of this novella in exchange for my honest feedback. This is it!*
Brutal! Dark! Cults! Short! Novella! Twisted! Messed Up! Weird! Devils! Biblical! Ceremonies!
This was so much brutal, twisted fun AND can easily be read in one sitting, which is what I did. The protagonist Brad is so painfully ordinary that when things start going downhill, you're pulling for him, weirdo that he is. At least, you're pulling for him up to a certain point, anyway, and then you're more likely to be physically backing away from the book, except your eyes are glued and you must go on to see what happens next.
In short: RITUAL gets medieval on your ass!
Highly recommended for fans of warped, sick horror such as myself!
Get your copy here: https://amzn.to/2NYjXYf
*I was provided an e-copy of this novella in exchange for my honest feedback. This is it!*
December 19, 2020
At the beginning the book was very compelling with Brad selling overpriced stuff for his company and his bizarre leisure activities for a cult community. I reckoned with everything, satanic masses, group sex and all kind of gory excesses with regard to the descriptions on amazon. Well, they bit off more than they chewed. Of course there are some violent scenes here, no question, but nothing that takes you completely off the rocker. Is Brad really the chosen one? What will he become to? The author took a bit too much time until the ritual got started at the end. He could have done more black mass scenes (okay, I maybe into cliche now but I missed it) and shown a bit more of "Father". Well written, but not as good as I expected. For those interested in bizarre cult rituals definitely worth a reading!
October 1, 2019
A fast-moving chiller about an ancient cult functioning in the modern world. The simplicity of the main character makes him easy to relate to, making the perversions he endures all the more horrible. The violent and deviant rituals practiced by the cult to summon dark gods to bring their Stygian universe into our world inspires dread and hopelessness. This is a dark and effective novella that drives its point straight through the heart of darkness. Well done.
July 27, 2022
Recommended!!
I have been looking forward to reading one of Steve’s books for some time, and I wasn’t disappointed. This was a short read, and I would have read it in one sitting but started it at 3am, which wasn’t such a good idea. The story centres around Brad, who is a telemarketer by day, and who lives in a gated commune. This story works towards the day of ascension when the ‘chosen one’ Brad will open the gates into the black heavens. There are ritualistic preparations which have to be adhered to before this day, which include, sexual activity with ‘Father’, and regular beatings, self inflicted and also provided by ‘Father’. Most of the book is about preparing for this day, and contains blood, torture, sex, horned beasts and all the good sh*t, which make a great horror story. I really enjoyed this, and am looking forward to reading the others in this trilogy!
4 ✝️✝️✝️✝️
I have been looking forward to reading one of Steve’s books for some time, and I wasn’t disappointed. This was a short read, and I would have read it in one sitting but started it at 3am, which wasn’t such a good idea. The story centres around Brad, who is a telemarketer by day, and who lives in a gated commune. This story works towards the day of ascension when the ‘chosen one’ Brad will open the gates into the black heavens. There are ritualistic preparations which have to be adhered to before this day, which include, sexual activity with ‘Father’, and regular beatings, self inflicted and also provided by ‘Father’. Most of the book is about preparing for this day, and contains blood, torture, sex, horned beasts and all the good sh*t, which make a great horror story. I really enjoyed this, and am looking forward to reading the others in this trilogy!
4 ✝️✝️✝️✝️
October 7, 2019
Ritual is a dark little tale about a pretty normal guy named Brad. Brad has a routine and he sticks to it. He reads the Bible, buys food and sells over-priced crap for a call center. He seems perfectly okay with his dull routine because he knows he has a bigger purpose in life. He also spends most evenings getting sexually abused and flagellated by “Father” as well as doing a little self-flagellation of his own and he doesn’t seem to mind that very much either.
Yeah, I know, things just got a little weird. You didn’t think this story would be about a boring dude and his tedious routine, did you?
Lately Brad is a little stressed because he is preparing for his big day and is tasked with getting everything just right. There is no room for screw-ups. Brad, you see, is The Chosen One in the little cult he belongs to and he must guide them all into the Black Heavens. Yep, you read that right. The Black Heavens!
This was a twisted tale that gets increasingly revolting the more pages you read so make sure you read it all, haha. Ritual is more about the build-up to what is about to happen and it’s short so there isn’t a lot of time spent character building. There’s a short flashback somewhere in the middle to help explain things that felt a wee bit out of place for me but that’s a minor thing. The story is very dark and very gory and I think you horror fans will have fun with it and it might have you giving the side-eye to that boring guy at work.
Yeah, I know, things just got a little weird. You didn’t think this story would be about a boring dude and his tedious routine, did you?
Lately Brad is a little stressed because he is preparing for his big day and is tasked with getting everything just right. There is no room for screw-ups. Brad, you see, is The Chosen One in the little cult he belongs to and he must guide them all into the Black Heavens. Yep, you read that right. The Black Heavens!
This was a twisted tale that gets increasingly revolting the more pages you read so make sure you read it all, haha. Ritual is more about the build-up to what is about to happen and it’s short so there isn’t a lot of time spent character building. There’s a short flashback somewhere in the middle to help explain things that felt a wee bit out of place for me but that’s a minor thing. The story is very dark and very gory and I think you horror fans will have fun with it and it might have you giving the side-eye to that boring guy at work.
May 19, 2021
All across the mountain, the man led his sheep.
All across the blackness, the devil watched him weep.
The time would come,
The flock would run,
As the horned beast, he did creep.
All across the landscape, the winds blew the trees.
On the floor of his bedroom, he stayed on his knees.
The day grew near,
The flock would cheer,
And he hoped that his god heard his pleas.
All across the aeons the stars swirled bright.
All across the pentagram, the candles shone their light.
The humans were back,
His soul was black,
As he descended upon the masses that night.
All across the colony the watchers drank their tea.
All throughout the village their prayers let them see.
The day arrived,
Their hopes revived,
For soon the winged beast would set free.
All across the blackness, the devil watched him weep.
The time would come,
The flock would run,
As the horned beast, he did creep.
All across the landscape, the winds blew the trees.
On the floor of his bedroom, he stayed on his knees.
The day grew near,
The flock would cheer,
And he hoped that his god heard his pleas.
All across the aeons the stars swirled bright.
All across the pentagram, the candles shone their light.
The humans were back,
His soul was black,
As he descended upon the masses that night.
All across the colony the watchers drank their tea.
All throughout the village their prayers let them see.
The day arrived,
Their hopes revived,
For soon the winged beast would set free.
October 31, 2019
RITUAL by author Steve Stred, is a fast-paced novella that takes you into some deeply uncomfortable situations, without warning. We have a common worker, Brad, who strictly adheres to his routine day-to-day. He's someone you wouldn't think twice about in passing. He goes to work, reads his bible, visits the "Father" of his church, goes to bed at a regular time, and doesn't like disruptions to his schedule.
Sounds mundane enough, doesn't it?
However, throughout these little excerpts of Brad's routine, we see the darker, more uncomfortable things that are not your "ordinary" life patterns. Stred describes events in the same, matter of fact tone he uses throughout the novella: whether it's when Brad is selling overpriced television sets at work, or the nature of the visits with Father.
Brad, while seen as a nondescript, everyday man, has been chosen for a role that the average person would never think of. And Stred delivers all the gory details of this for his readers to digest. This isn't your average horror novella. This is a unique style that delivers its chills throughout, increasing the tension even when you don't think it can get any higher.
Steve Stred is an author I definitely look forward to reading more from!
Recommended.
Sounds mundane enough, doesn't it?
However, throughout these little excerpts of Brad's routine, we see the darker, more uncomfortable things that are not your "ordinary" life patterns. Stred describes events in the same, matter of fact tone he uses throughout the novella: whether it's when Brad is selling overpriced television sets at work, or the nature of the visits with Father.
Brad, while seen as a nondescript, everyday man, has been chosen for a role that the average person would never think of. And Stred delivers all the gory details of this for his readers to digest. This isn't your average horror novella. This is a unique style that delivers its chills throughout, increasing the tension even when you don't think it can get any higher.
Steve Stred is an author I definitely look forward to reading more from!
Recommended.
November 3, 2019
Ritual is a twisted, brutal novella that combines elements of extreme and subtle horror in a perfect blend. Steve Stred knows exactly when to slap the reader on wrist, and when to punch them in the gut. His prose is also easy to fall into and possesses the right amount of intrigue to keep the pages turning. Highly recommended, but not for the faint of heart.
September 5, 2019
This viscous little page turner of a novella delivers! My first go with Steve Stred, and certainly not my last. Will be reading more of his work in the near future. 😉📚
December 27, 2020
Psalms 1:6
For the LORD knoweth the way of the righteous:
but the way of the ungodly shall perish.
This story follows Brad, the chosen one. He is a hardworking man with a strict routine surrounding work, worship, and bible study.
"The Ritual" and its coming events are told in pieces and also past rituals are told in savage detail that left me all the more intrigued to find out what was in store for poor innocent Brad.
Well, far out, brussel sprout (language) my bloodthirsty brain slurped this story up!!
The tale takes us down a dark and twisted path of a large congregation preparing for the ritual of Brad in the hopes he will lead them to the black gates of eternal life.
Dark, perverted, sadistic, and brutally mind fuckingly awesome!!!
For the LORD knoweth the way of the righteous:
but the way of the ungodly shall perish.
This story follows Brad, the chosen one. He is a hardworking man with a strict routine surrounding work, worship, and bible study.
"The Ritual" and its coming events are told in pieces and also past rituals are told in savage detail that left me all the more intrigued to find out what was in store for poor innocent Brad.
Well, far out, brussel sprout (language) my bloodthirsty brain slurped this story up!!
The tale takes us down a dark and twisted path of a large congregation preparing for the ritual of Brad in the hopes he will lead them to the black gates of eternal life.
Dark, perverted, sadistic, and brutally mind fuckingly awesome!!!
May 30, 2021
I do love a good cult story, and this was one of them. It's a quick read, has a lot packed in and sets up perfectly for more to come. Which is what I'm gonna do....onto the next one!!
June 26, 2022
Holy cow. So glad I don't have a dad like Brad's. Ouch!
November 20, 2020
Brad’s a hardworking telemarketer, but he’s also the Chosen One, and soon enough he won’t have to sell over-priced products and tolerate his irritating coworker. Counting down the days on the calendar, he continues with his strict routine until the time finally arrives when his destiny can be fulfilled – the Black Heavens await.
(WARNING: This review contains minor spoilers.)
The thing about Ritual, is that it started off as portraying a life so mundane that many would be able to relate. The monotony of Brad’s daily routine – getting up, brushing teeth, having breakfast, going to work, followed by going to church – should strike a chord, because it’s how we live, doing the same things over and over. It was difficult not to empathise with Brad right at the beginning; a lonely individual, and someone you’d walk past in the street without a second glance. As soon as the underlying strangeness of his religion came to light, however, any and all understanding simply crumbled. It’s not that Brad was the villain, but merely a gullible member of the flock, and the component in someone else’s schemes. “Father” was the masterful cult leader, and if you know me, I love devious and manipulative antagonists. Stred did brilliantly in crafting this terrible character, and the shock value that worked in its favour kept piling up, more than definitely eliciting the desired effect.
Whether intentional or not, I felt there was a message about faith and the extremes of such beliefs – I mean, it’s not that far-fetched, history and the modern day can both paint a picture of the ugliness relating to religious ideology. I find it interesting, especially the fine line between cult and religion, and Stred was able to make me think while simultaneously disgusting me with vivid and graphic imagery that only got worse.
In conclusion: What began as rather calm and quiet, turned distinctly unpleasant as Ritual brought to life biblical lore, its disturbing content snowballing until I felt more than enough discomfort. I was easily engaged by the style of writing, as well as the twisted relationship between Brad and the authority figure known as Father. Likely not for everyone, it includes a whole lot of sexual abuse and fanaticism of the highest degree, but I certainly enjoyed it and its shaping of monsters that had disturbing appetites.
Notable Quote:
He drifted off to sleep with visions of beasts ripping apart the group’s limbs as an inferno blazed behind them.
© Red Lace 2020
Wordpress ~ Twitter
(WARNING: This review contains minor spoilers.)
The thing about Ritual, is that it started off as portraying a life so mundane that many would be able to relate. The monotony of Brad’s daily routine – getting up, brushing teeth, having breakfast, going to work, followed by going to church – should strike a chord, because it’s how we live, doing the same things over and over. It was difficult not to empathise with Brad right at the beginning; a lonely individual, and someone you’d walk past in the street without a second glance. As soon as the underlying strangeness of his religion came to light, however, any and all understanding simply crumbled. It’s not that Brad was the villain, but merely a gullible member of the flock, and the component in someone else’s schemes. “Father” was the masterful cult leader, and if you know me, I love devious and manipulative antagonists. Stred did brilliantly in crafting this terrible character, and the shock value that worked in its favour kept piling up, more than definitely eliciting the desired effect.
Whether intentional or not, I felt there was a message about faith and the extremes of such beliefs – I mean, it’s not that far-fetched, history and the modern day can both paint a picture of the ugliness relating to religious ideology. I find it interesting, especially the fine line between cult and religion, and Stred was able to make me think while simultaneously disgusting me with vivid and graphic imagery that only got worse.
In conclusion: What began as rather calm and quiet, turned distinctly unpleasant as Ritual brought to life biblical lore, its disturbing content snowballing until I felt more than enough discomfort. I was easily engaged by the style of writing, as well as the twisted relationship between Brad and the authority figure known as Father. Likely not for everyone, it includes a whole lot of sexual abuse and fanaticism of the highest degree, but I certainly enjoyed it and its shaping of monsters that had disturbing appetites.
Notable Quote:
He drifted off to sleep with visions of beasts ripping apart the group’s limbs as an inferno blazed behind them.
© Red Lace 2020
Wordpress ~ Twitter
August 16, 2019
A true trip down into depravity. Steve Stred has straddled the line of extreme horror while bringing you a story that knows when to look away. Not for the faint of heart. Bravo, sir.
March 30, 2020
Inside a death cult from the point of view of one of its happy members, and while that sounds depressing (and it does get pretty grim at times) the pace of the story and the weird imagery of the back half really keep things moving along at a comfortable clip. It's not long, but as the author has stated it's part of an intended trilogy (got part two on my Kindle and looking forward to it) so I'm totally onboard to see where this strange, spooky ride takes me next.
January 22, 2020
We all know "horror" has many subgenres. This one I'd file under demonic as well as DISTURBING. Stred plays on many of today's sexual controversies in the church...and we are sickened, as we should be! In this book, "sick and twisted" is an everyday occurrence. To say any more would be to spoil it. If you like what I've said so far, you'll enjoy RITUAL.
April 20, 2020
Full review to come. Man this was twisted and extremely well-written. Looking forward to part 2!
July 16, 2021
Well...that escalated quickly.
RITUAL is the first of novella in the FATHER OF LIES trilogy and I was not prepared. I read this as part of a read-along with Richard Martin and, as I typically do, I read nothing about this before going in. This story came at me sideways. Some light spoilers for the beginning of novella to follow, but nothing after that.
We start by being introduced to Brad. He's a very religious fellow who takes his beliefs very seriously, spends most of his free time reading the Bible, and watching America's Funniest Home Videos when he needs to wind down. Basically, Flanders from The Simpsons. He goes to buy supplies for his church and buys candles and robes(?). Robes? What are those for? The next morning he does his yoga because it's important to stretch out those scars he has from all the lashings he thinks he deserved. Huh...ok. Then he goes on to sharpen the antlers(!) for the headdresses his church wears. At this point it's clear that his church isn't typical and things go off the rails from there.
There is way more going on here than I thought I was getting into when I started. As we learn more about why Brad is the way he is and what's coming, things get EXTREME. This book has a warning in the front. Heed it. Abuse, violence of all types, rape(?)...you name it, it's in here.
As gross as it gets, I felt compelled to find out what this was all for. I read this in one sitting because I wanted to see where this was all going, so hats off to Steve for making me care about a story where I'm not sure I'm supposed to like anyone. I still have some questions, but seeing as this is just the first entry in the trilogy, I'm hoping we find out more about the church's endgame.
3.5 stars rounded up to 4
RITUAL is the first of novella in the FATHER OF LIES trilogy and I was not prepared. I read this as part of a read-along with Richard Martin and, as I typically do, I read nothing about this before going in. This story came at me sideways. Some light spoilers for the beginning of novella to follow, but nothing after that.
We start by being introduced to Brad. He's a very religious fellow who takes his beliefs very seriously, spends most of his free time reading the Bible, and watching America's Funniest Home Videos when he needs to wind down. Basically, Flanders from The Simpsons. He goes to buy supplies for his church and buys candles and robes(?). Robes? What are those for? The next morning he does his yoga because it's important to stretch out those scars he has from all the lashings he thinks he deserved. Huh...ok. Then he goes on to sharpen the antlers(!) for the headdresses his church wears. At this point it's clear that his church isn't typical and things go off the rails from there.
There is way more going on here than I thought I was getting into when I started. As we learn more about why Brad is the way he is and what's coming, things get EXTREME. This book has a warning in the front. Heed it. Abuse, violence of all types, rape(?)...you name it, it's in here.
As gross as it gets, I felt compelled to find out what this was all for. I read this in one sitting because I wanted to see where this was all going, so hats off to Steve for making me care about a story where I'm not sure I'm supposed to like anyone. I still have some questions, but seeing as this is just the first entry in the trilogy, I'm hoping we find out more about the church's endgame.
3.5 stars rounded up to 4
September 2, 2019
Reading "The Ritual" is like being invited to an exclusive party, only after arriving you realize you've stepped into the inner circle of a cult on a night you might only remember as your last. And yes, you will be praying you get out alive.
Stred's approach to the subject matter is quite unique, taking us into the normal-seeming world of Brad, a character who has an ordinary job he suffers through, who deals with relatable issues, and is, on almost all accounts, the epitome of normal.
Except for that one thing.
The writing style suits the story and its take well, disarming the reader with its simple approach, allowing the darker moments--of which there are plenty--to really take hold. And let's get one thing straight, when Stred explores those darker corners, he makes sure the reader comes face to face with everything you were hoping, and simultaneously fearing, you would encounter. This tale does not shy away from uncomfortable material. The finale is both extreme and utterly satisfying, and though it hits the points you expect it to, it does so with an added measure of gusto. Oh, and a lot of blood.
I love finding emerging and new authors who aren't afraid to swing for the fences and will do so while developing their own style rather than trying to imitate those they admire. If this is the start of where Stred is willing to take us at this point early in his career, I can't wait to see where his writing and stories will eventually lead.
Stred's approach to the subject matter is quite unique, taking us into the normal-seeming world of Brad, a character who has an ordinary job he suffers through, who deals with relatable issues, and is, on almost all accounts, the epitome of normal.
Except for that one thing.
The writing style suits the story and its take well, disarming the reader with its simple approach, allowing the darker moments--of which there are plenty--to really take hold. And let's get one thing straight, when Stred explores those darker corners, he makes sure the reader comes face to face with everything you were hoping, and simultaneously fearing, you would encounter. This tale does not shy away from uncomfortable material. The finale is both extreme and utterly satisfying, and though it hits the points you expect it to, it does so with an added measure of gusto. Oh, and a lot of blood.
I love finding emerging and new authors who aren't afraid to swing for the fences and will do so while developing their own style rather than trying to imitate those they admire. If this is the start of where Stred is willing to take us at this point early in his career, I can't wait to see where his writing and stories will eventually lead.
July 4, 2021
Ok. So. I try not to read blurbs or other reviews before starting books, and I had read Steve’s Wound upon wound, and loved his prose, so when presented with a present for father’s day from my son, I went all out and bought – I think – 5 (?) of Steve’s books. This is the first of them.
And this is a tough one.
I think this boils down to “I don’t know what I just read.”
Bear with me on this.
Steve’s writing is, once again, clear, precise, concise, easy to read. The presentation of the main character's pov is flawless (Well, actually, it’s not, there’s a pov break at 72% where we go into Father’s head as he enjoys himself at Brad’s expense, but hey, that’s a nerd detail). It’s eminently readable, regardless of the content of what is happening to the character at any point in time.
And there lies the problem - that content is pretty tough reading. We go through the whole array of taboo subjects with an un-emotional documentation of those events. We have sodomy, (suspected) bestiality (well, a demon type animal – fur is involved), repeated rape (arguably, I think it would be a stretch to say this was consensual if it can be construed that his participation was due, in part, to a form of manipulation), male sexual organs being removed, mass suicide etc.
You get the idea.
My issue with the content is not the content itself, I think I am left wondering at the Why? of it all. I think it’s mainly Stred’s intent to shock the reader. And I’m not sure that’s enough reason to have events in the book.
Hear me out.
SPOILERS BELOW
We have, for example, a mass suicide. Be it willing, or mind manipulation, it’s happening. The women of a cult (lots, like 500?) take knives and simultaneously cut off their male counterparts’ penises. They then simultaneously slash the throats of their male partners, before then turning the knives on themselves and slit their own throats.
So. We are left with the why of that? In a ritual, as this is presented, everything is symbolic. In most religions, every step of the many tiresome rituals they consist of has a base in the religion. If the women are cutting off penises as a ritual display of the removal of sexual procreation, a way of stopping that line of DNA, the same thought process would be applied to the women too? Like, why aren’t the women destroying their own genitalia? Honestly, I felt that this was simply shock writing, Steve writing something he thought would shock his audience. And I mean, this is horror, of course, that’s ok. But I just felt that it was something that was there simply to add shock value. It didn’t do anything for the storyline.
Likewise, the many moments of the main character's sodomy rape. Part of a ritual? Were we to understand that it was for the “Father’s” own pleasure (he was manipulating a believer for his own personal pleasure?) or was that also “required” in the ritual? And why? For what point? Is this Steve saying anal sex is “wrong” because then we also go into a morally grey area – Regardless of our own personal belief about anal sex, in a time when we are all trying to become more inclusive, accepting people’s identity choices and sexual preferences, we should be doing everything we can to normalize sex. Now, I’m not saying Steve is demonizing this, but I do think it’s portrayed in a negative light. This is manipulation, it’s not presented as a loving experience for the abused main character. He is enduring it. This is the presentation of abuse, as something to be lived through to get to his goal, death by sodomy from a demon. A warm-up, of sorts. So – we still haven’t got to the why of it all.
The story was well written. There’s no doubt here of Stred’s writing, he’s presented something horrific for the MC as almost ordinary. It happens, we are emotionally distant, we move on. That removal of emotion makes reading the events doable. But the why is missing (for me). It reads like an account of rape, sodomy, and mass suicide with emotional content removed. A plain statement of facts. And in that removal of emotion, I don’t know what the story was? If that makes sense? I can’t sympathize with a character willingly undergoing repeated abuse who then willingly sacrifices himself to death by sodomy from a demon, by cutting his own throat as that event happens, to burn to death in those seconds of the demon coming. I don’t know the story there? As a showcase to brutality clearly written, emotionally detached violence – it succeeds. Stred has managed to make (what must be) a horrific act, readable.
But I still don’t know why? What am I taking away from this – I can’t say I learned a lesson
It seemed more to be a test of how something shocking can be somehow reduced to something that is just happening, and by removal of that emotional attachment? Is this, then, a showcase as to how, by repeated exposure, one can become desensitized to even the most brutal and horrific instances of abuse?
I don’t believe so. I can’t believe that was Steve’s point here.
So – I think I can best sum this up by saying – Great writing, Steve. I wasn’t shocked, but I also don’t know at the end of the book, what I am going to take away from reading it– it left me feeling like a chapter of “closure” to the story was lost. Threads were unexplained – Larry and Brad's boss as part of the cult at the end – just so? No explanation was offered, and we move on, all friends again?
I’m pretty conflicted with this one. I’m giving it a 4 out of 5 ⭐s for writing, even though I wasn't emotionally moved by the content
Sorry, steve. Let's see if the next book answers some of my questions.
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And this is a tough one.
I think this boils down to “I don’t know what I just read.”
Bear with me on this.
Steve’s writing is, once again, clear, precise, concise, easy to read. The presentation of the main character's pov is flawless (Well, actually, it’s not, there’s a pov break at 72% where we go into Father’s head as he enjoys himself at Brad’s expense, but hey, that’s a nerd detail). It’s eminently readable, regardless of the content of what is happening to the character at any point in time.
And there lies the problem - that content is pretty tough reading. We go through the whole array of taboo subjects with an un-emotional documentation of those events. We have sodomy, (suspected) bestiality (well, a demon type animal – fur is involved), repeated rape (arguably, I think it would be a stretch to say this was consensual if it can be construed that his participation was due, in part, to a form of manipulation), male sexual organs being removed, mass suicide etc.
You get the idea.
My issue with the content is not the content itself, I think I am left wondering at the Why? of it all. I think it’s mainly Stred’s intent to shock the reader. And I’m not sure that’s enough reason to have events in the book.
Hear me out.
SPOILERS BELOW
We have, for example, a mass suicide. Be it willing, or mind manipulation, it’s happening. The women of a cult (lots, like 500?) take knives and simultaneously cut off their male counterparts’ penises. They then simultaneously slash the throats of their male partners, before then turning the knives on themselves and slit their own throats.
So. We are left with the why of that? In a ritual, as this is presented, everything is symbolic. In most religions, every step of the many tiresome rituals they consist of has a base in the religion. If the women are cutting off penises as a ritual display of the removal of sexual procreation, a way of stopping that line of DNA, the same thought process would be applied to the women too? Like, why aren’t the women destroying their own genitalia? Honestly, I felt that this was simply shock writing, Steve writing something he thought would shock his audience. And I mean, this is horror, of course, that’s ok. But I just felt that it was something that was there simply to add shock value. It didn’t do anything for the storyline.
Likewise, the many moments of the main character's sodomy rape. Part of a ritual? Were we to understand that it was for the “Father’s” own pleasure (he was manipulating a believer for his own personal pleasure?) or was that also “required” in the ritual? And why? For what point? Is this Steve saying anal sex is “wrong” because then we also go into a morally grey area – Regardless of our own personal belief about anal sex, in a time when we are all trying to become more inclusive, accepting people’s identity choices and sexual preferences, we should be doing everything we can to normalize sex. Now, I’m not saying Steve is demonizing this, but I do think it’s portrayed in a negative light. This is manipulation, it’s not presented as a loving experience for the abused main character. He is enduring it. This is the presentation of abuse, as something to be lived through to get to his goal, death by sodomy from a demon. A warm-up, of sorts. So – we still haven’t got to the why of it all.
The story was well written. There’s no doubt here of Stred’s writing, he’s presented something horrific for the MC as almost ordinary. It happens, we are emotionally distant, we move on. That removal of emotion makes reading the events doable. But the why is missing (for me). It reads like an account of rape, sodomy, and mass suicide with emotional content removed. A plain statement of facts. And in that removal of emotion, I don’t know what the story was? If that makes sense? I can’t sympathize with a character willingly undergoing repeated abuse who then willingly sacrifices himself to death by sodomy from a demon, by cutting his own throat as that event happens, to burn to death in those seconds of the demon coming. I don’t know the story there? As a showcase to brutality clearly written, emotionally detached violence – it succeeds. Stred has managed to make (what must be) a horrific act, readable.
But I still don’t know why? What am I taking away from this – I can’t say I learned a lesson
It seemed more to be a test of how something shocking can be somehow reduced to something that is just happening, and by removal of that emotional attachment? Is this, then, a showcase as to how, by repeated exposure, one can become desensitized to even the most brutal and horrific instances of abuse?
I don’t believe so. I can’t believe that was Steve’s point here.
So – I think I can best sum this up by saying – Great writing, Steve. I wasn’t shocked, but I also don’t know at the end of the book, what I am going to take away from reading it– it left me feeling like a chapter of “closure” to the story was lost. Threads were unexplained – Larry and Brad's boss as part of the cult at the end – just so? No explanation was offered, and we move on, all friends again?
I’m pretty conflicted with this one. I’m giving it a 4 out of 5 ⭐s for writing, even though I wasn't emotionally moved by the content
Sorry, steve. Let's see if the next book answers some of my questions.
This review integrated as a part of the horroroasis and Rick's-read-along.
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July 25, 2019
I was gifted the ARC and my review is my own..
This dark and unnerving novella hits a mark, the Dark mark of the biblical apocalypse. The mark of the beast. A warning story of cult members ready to follow ceremony into death and showing loyalty to a terrifying entity. Don’t drink the cool aid comes to mind and the abuse that Brad the ordinary who is now the chosen and endures horrific abuse that is hard to read. Always vivid images that makes your imagination over react and why Mr. Stred isn’t afraid to horrify you as well as engage you. No spoilers.. as it’s to easy to do with novellas and I’ve already said too much.. read immediately!
This dark and unnerving novella hits a mark, the Dark mark of the biblical apocalypse. The mark of the beast. A warning story of cult members ready to follow ceremony into death and showing loyalty to a terrifying entity. Don’t drink the cool aid comes to mind and the abuse that Brad the ordinary who is now the chosen and endures horrific abuse that is hard to read. Always vivid images that makes your imagination over react and why Mr. Stred isn’t afraid to horrify you as well as engage you. No spoilers.. as it’s to easy to do with novellas and I’ve already said too much.. read immediately!
August 24, 2019
Steve Stred takes us along Brad’s quick descent into darkness.
Ritual is a short (but far from sweet) read. A dark tale involving a cult, human sacrifice and, of course, ancient rituals of biblical proportions!
It was my first time reading Steve's work, and I'm not going to lie, it feels good knowing that I have more of his stories waiting to be read.
Thanks a lot for sending me a copy of the book, Steve!
Ritual is a short (but far from sweet) read. A dark tale involving a cult, human sacrifice and, of course, ancient rituals of biblical proportions!
It was my first time reading Steve's work, and I'm not going to lie, it feels good knowing that I have more of his stories waiting to be read.
Thanks a lot for sending me a copy of the book, Steve!
September 5, 2019
A fantastic novella from Steve Stred. I was immediately engaged and drawn into this strange cult. I liked that there was just enough information to be haunted by the unknowns and the strangeness. I also liked how it focused on the ritual and Brad’s mental state. I’m often bored by demonic horror but this one was incredible. Add it to your Halloween reading list! Many thanks to the author for sending me an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
November 8, 2019
RITUAL by Steve Stred is a disturbing supernatural novella, but more-so, a chilling look at the power of belief. Unsettling and brutal, the most stark horrors comes from its unflinching take on faith. Whether it’s the banality of humanity’s supposed wickedness or malevolent entities from beyond, you cannot deny Stred’s captivating tale.
July 3, 2021
Review to Follow
August 26, 2019
This book doesn't come out until October, but I was lucky enough to get an eBook copy from the author because he's a really cool guy.
Brad is living a bland life and going about his business in the exciting world of telemarketing. Except, he's also the Chosen One. When he's not at work or reading his bible, Father keeps him busy by preparing him for the upcoming ritual.
As Brad suffers through the painful preparation, his life takes some unexpected turns. But he won't be swayed, all of his focus remains on Sunday...
OMFG. 👀
This novella is not quite what I expected. It's dark, full of sadistic characters, and is SO disturbing my skin actually crawled during several scenes. And it's got nothing to do with the satanic overtones, or the demonic influence. It's not even the violence or the blind cultish attitude these fools live by. Nope. The most vile thing about this story was Father. He's totally gross. A sexual and physical abuser who uses his power over the foolish sheep in his congregation to hurt them.
He actually convinces Brad that he's helping him, when all he's doing is serving out his depraved punishment.
I wanted to feel sorry for Brad, but couldn't. He was so passive about the awful treatment he gets from his condescending workmate, and even worse when it comes to Father. It's hard to sympathise with such a deluded and weak individual. But I suppose that's the point.
I really liked how the narrative in this novella mirrors the devout devotion of religious zealots. It reminded me of the fine line between religion and cults. The way people allow their faith to blind them to what's really going on, and how they'll defend that shit even when it's literally fucking killing them.
Not to mention that I spotted many shades of Aleister Crowley in this story. A man who spent his life trying to find the dark path and using weird ritualistic vices to convince others it was the way to unlock the secrets they desired. 😲
I also really liked the writing style, and found this to be what kept me interested in the story. Steve managed to weave his tale in a way that kept me glued to the pages in spite of the mundane and the brutality. In spite of not liking any of the characters much.
If you're squeamish about physical violence, this might not be for you. But if you're into freaky horror and enjoy seeing the kind of shit we see in real life reflected in the darkest of ways, then you should definitely check this out!
Brad is living a bland life and going about his business in the exciting world of telemarketing. Except, he's also the Chosen One. When he's not at work or reading his bible, Father keeps him busy by preparing him for the upcoming ritual.
As Brad suffers through the painful preparation, his life takes some unexpected turns. But he won't be swayed, all of his focus remains on Sunday...
OMFG. 👀
This novella is not quite what I expected. It's dark, full of sadistic characters, and is SO disturbing my skin actually crawled during several scenes. And it's got nothing to do with the satanic overtones, or the demonic influence. It's not even the violence or the blind cultish attitude these fools live by. Nope. The most vile thing about this story was Father. He's totally gross. A sexual and physical abuser who uses his power over the foolish sheep in his congregation to hurt them.
He actually convinces Brad that he's helping him, when all he's doing is serving out his depraved punishment.
I wanted to feel sorry for Brad, but couldn't. He was so passive about the awful treatment he gets from his condescending workmate, and even worse when it comes to Father. It's hard to sympathise with such a deluded and weak individual. But I suppose that's the point.
I really liked how the narrative in this novella mirrors the devout devotion of religious zealots. It reminded me of the fine line between religion and cults. The way people allow their faith to blind them to what's really going on, and how they'll defend that shit even when it's literally fucking killing them.
Not to mention that I spotted many shades of Aleister Crowley in this story. A man who spent his life trying to find the dark path and using weird ritualistic vices to convince others it was the way to unlock the secrets they desired. 😲
I also really liked the writing style, and found this to be what kept me interested in the story. Steve managed to weave his tale in a way that kept me glued to the pages in spite of the mundane and the brutality. In spite of not liking any of the characters much.
If you're squeamish about physical violence, this might not be for you. But if you're into freaky horror and enjoy seeing the kind of shit we see in real life reflected in the darkest of ways, then you should definitely check this out!
October 29, 2019
Brutal, but impossible to put down
The author doesn’t pull any punches. There are two Rituals at work here, the Ritual which is the focus of the story and the ritual of constructing a plot that captures the reader interest and attention.
What I liked about the book is that it is definitely not a slow burn. Graphic, violent and at times appalling. You, the reader, are thrust (which, btw,...oh nvm) into extreme situations and then just as quickly, you find yourself living out the daily schedule of the protagonist’s routine. This constant hot vs cold ride keeps the pace pumping.
This book was recommended to me by a trusted source and she was right as usual.
The author doesn’t pull any punches. There are two Rituals at work here, the Ritual which is the focus of the story and the ritual of constructing a plot that captures the reader interest and attention.
What I liked about the book is that it is definitely not a slow burn. Graphic, violent and at times appalling. You, the reader, are thrust (which, btw,...oh nvm) into extreme situations and then just as quickly, you find yourself living out the daily schedule of the protagonist’s routine. This constant hot vs cold ride keeps the pace pumping.
This book was recommended to me by a trusted source and she was right as usual.
February 18, 2021
I discovered Steve Stred on twitter, he was a fellow horror fan, a reviewer, and an author. At some point I nabbed his ebook for Wagon Buddy, and then I grabbed up Ritual. I forget I buy ebooks a lot of the time, but looking through my kindle app one day I saw Steve's books and thought I needed to check this guy out. I chose to read Ritual first, partially because that cover is wicked cool and partially because the premise sounded so interesting. Turns out it was very interesting.
This is the story of Brad, a boring, normal guy that is devoted to his religion. You get that he is preparing for something, that he knows he is meant for something bigger.
Steve starts the story out small, and as we progress through it reveals bits about what was going on. It gets dark, it gets really twisted. There was a lot of 'what the?' happening as I was reading. It was well written and kept me engrossed throughout.
I'm definitely going to be reading some more of his work (after this one I read Wagon Buddy, which should have a review from me soon). Steve Stred is an author I would suggest to any fans of horror or fans of good books that just get a little horrific.
This is the story of Brad, a boring, normal guy that is devoted to his religion. You get that he is preparing for something, that he knows he is meant for something bigger.
Steve starts the story out small, and as we progress through it reveals bits about what was going on. It gets dark, it gets really twisted. There was a lot of 'what the?' happening as I was reading. It was well written and kept me engrossed throughout.
I'm definitely going to be reading some more of his work (after this one I read Wagon Buddy, which should have a review from me soon). Steve Stred is an author I would suggest to any fans of horror or fans of good books that just get a little horrific.
January 17, 2021
Rituals...
No spoilers:
Hmm... Reading this short story was like watching an old Hammer horror flick from the 60s. You've seen it so many times you just know how it's going to end...no surprises there...
I liked the ritual parallels: There were the daily rituals performed with love by the main character Brad. He ate the same meals, did the same chores, arrived on time for his job, and read his daily Bible devotional...
...Then there were the daily preparations leading up to THE RITUAL...you'll know what I'm talking about when you read it...you probably already have an idea...
Really, no surprises for me as the story unfolded...except for the very end...That was cool...
Warning to some readers about graphic sexual story content.
3 stars for this interesting comparison but in the end it basically read like many other stories of its ilk both fiction and real. I removed 1 star for proofing errors and 1 star for some, not many grammatical errors.
No spoilers:
Hmm... Reading this short story was like watching an old Hammer horror flick from the 60s. You've seen it so many times you just know how it's going to end...no surprises there...
I liked the ritual parallels: There were the daily rituals performed with love by the main character Brad. He ate the same meals, did the same chores, arrived on time for his job, and read his daily Bible devotional...
...Then there were the daily preparations leading up to THE RITUAL...you'll know what I'm talking about when you read it...you probably already have an idea...
Really, no surprises for me as the story unfolded...except for the very end...That was cool...
Warning to some readers about graphic sexual story content.
3 stars for this interesting comparison but in the end it basically read like many other stories of its ilk both fiction and real. I removed 1 star for proofing errors and 1 star for some, not many grammatical errors.
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