2 stars (Spoilers near end of review, don’t worry I’ll warn you)
Thanks to Netgalley for granting me an ARC of First Comes Love in exchange for an honest review.
I really had high hopes for this book. I was coming off a light & fun, but still smart, romance (The Bookish Life of Nina Hill) and thought I’ll give another romance a go. In fairness, I should tell you this is a DNF. I’ve finally given up on p. 213, which is more than I give most books, but seeing as this was an ARC I gave it a little more time. I started into the second story which seemed promising but then smart goal-driven girl is quickly reduced to “ooh hot guy might be my boss, how will I ever handle this?“
First let me say that there were some great qualities to the plot concept in story one, told in alternating timelines of the same characters, and good parts here and there throughout the first story surrounding Gemma and Jake. If you’re going to read it you’re going to need to employ a serious suspension of disbelief, which I’m okay with. However, there are a lot of “coincidences” that have to happen for things to “fall” into place that go so far beyond suspension of disbelief and fall trap to a story that hasn’t been well developed. Secondly if you’re thinking of picking this up you better want to read something cloyingly sweet, almost sickeningly so. Barf.
It’s the shallow character development that really lost it for me. First, you have Gemma a lawyer with big goals & dreams who walked away from her first love, Jake, who is a doctor with big goals & dreams of his own. In order to go after her career dreams that she’s had forever, Gemma moves across the Atlantic to be a hard goal-driven lawyer and breaks up with Jake so he can be free to pursue his own big dreams and goals. Then she refuses to answer his letters and calls/texts. How about having a conversation with each other and talking it through before going nuclear?
But then Gemma’s always whining about losing Jake, her one true love. The one scene that made the most sense to me was right before Gemma’s upcoming wedding to Richard and she’s whining to her best friend, pining over having left Jake who then subsequently married another woman (who btw, also ends up being Gemma’s opposing counsel...righhhhht). Another customer in the coffee shop who overhears Gemma’s conversation is disgusted and tells Gemma straight up “seriously?!!! You’re marrying this great guy, who by your own account adores you, is kind and loving, along with being a powerhouse lawyer at his firm, does good things for people, is wealthy, stupid-handsome)...like, any girl would love to have and yet here you are pining over the love that once was?” Clearly Gemma has issues with being able to have an adult conversation about what’s not working in her relationships. No matter the romantic in us, it just gets taken too far and I’m screaming for this be over with, get a hammer and nail this coffin shut already!!
The story needed more depth (work in other details about life not just Jake, Jake, Jake, Jake, Jake, Jake, Jake, Jake....every dayyyyyy), better character development and slightly more reality...or clock it as full on fantasy romance and call it a day.
These things all said, I will say I have immense respect for authors who create stories and write hundreds of thousands of words and put themselves out there to be judged by the likes of me, who couldn’t create a complex well-written story if her life depended on it. Kudos to Isley for that! She has a knack for creating dialogue and vernacular that speaks to a millennial audience. I may give another one of her books a try to see if the character development and story complexity issues were only in this book.
Cover Illustration: 3.5 stars it is a bit swoon worthy.
SPOILER ALERT:
Storyline 1
Girl leaves boy and moves across the Atlantic.
Girl changes her mind and it’s too late because boy is marrying someone else.
Girl breaks up wedding.
Girl and boy live happily ever after.
Storyline 2
Girl leaves boy and moves across the Atlantic.
Girl ponders about boy.
Girl meets great guy.
Great guy proposes and girl accepts but has lots of signs it’s not right for her and she needs to face her past & get closure or let it go.
Boy breaks up the wedding.
Girl and boy live happily every after.