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Chaotic Love
Finn
I’ve never been anything but a man’s property.
First my father, then others.
I exist for everyone else’s pleasure but my own.
This is my life.
Loveless. Broken. Hopeless.
Only death can free me from my bonds.
But then a monster steals me from my captor.
At first, I think Damon is like all the others… but he’s different.
He wants more than just my body—he wants my soul.
Damon
The Omega is damaged in a way I’ll never understand.
He thinks he wants to die, but I won’t let him.
I want to corrupt him. Claim him. Make him feel again.
I keep him in a cage not unlike the one I took him from.
I’ll make the Omega scream with pleasure, and with pain.
On his knees, I’ll make him submit.
No one will take him from me.
Because he’s mine.
Chaotic Love is a darkly delicious mpreg romance. It’s dark. I mean it. Some themes may (and probably will) disturb.
I’ve never been anything but a man’s property.
First my father, then others.
I exist for everyone else’s pleasure but my own.
This is my life.
Loveless. Broken. Hopeless.
Only death can free me from my bonds.
But then a monster steals me from my captor.
At first, I think Damon is like all the others… but he’s different.
He wants more than just my body—he wants my soul.
Damon
The Omega is damaged in a way I’ll never understand.
He thinks he wants to die, but I won’t let him.
I want to corrupt him. Claim him. Make him feel again.
I keep him in a cage not unlike the one I took him from.
I’ll make the Omega scream with pleasure, and with pain.
On his knees, I’ll make him submit.
No one will take him from me.
Because he’s mine.
Chaotic Love is a darkly delicious mpreg romance. It’s dark. I mean it. Some themes may (and probably will) disturb.
- GenresM M RomanceRomanceAbuse
130 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 25, 2019
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March 3, 2019
this was interesting and erotic.. good plot and characters... emotions were real and good writing. i really enjoyed it and cant wait to see what this author has next
March 1, 2019
A bit of a weird read because of the character's behavior. It's appropriately named because Damon and Finn's love story is chaotic. It felt rushed in places and Damon came off as less rough and dominant than he first appeared. Damon seemed very badass not giving a damn at the start but that was very inconsistent. It felt like he was going soft and in his line of work it just gave me an off feeling that he wasn't the harden brass character I expected from the first page. Damon and Finn's behavior were kind of off kilter, going from extreme to a low. Finn because of drug withdrawal and a lifetime of abuse. He was like a puppy, snapping up affection where he could get it while being somewhat cautious. Damon was messed up because of his time in the middle east and his time as a POW.
Damon approach at getting Finn to obey was passive aggressive. There's very light bdsm to do so (of which I didn't think sex was the answer esp. with a sexually abused character that's been abused for about half his life). Damon went on for a couple chapters that he wanted to break Finn and to me that built up some expectation that Finn would have to go through a bit of a trial and that kind of fell through because all Damon did was punish him sexually by once denying him pleasure and lastly by punishing him by overwhelming him with orgasms and boom Finn was ready to love Damon. I'm not saying he should have beat him (which he does a little by whipping his butt) but I think there could have been more or a different approach was needed.
The thing with Stanislav happened quickly. I was expecting a big showdown that would wham bam, what happened was a nice surprise but it took the wham bam and just gave me a pop. No wham bam ka-pow. It was fast, it was tidy. The epilogue was nice. I liked the premise and I was on my way to liking the characters. I did feel for them which was a plus.
Damon approach at getting Finn to obey was passive aggressive. There's very light bdsm to do so (of which I didn't think sex was the answer esp. with a sexually abused character that's been abused for about half his life). Damon went on for a couple chapters that he wanted to break Finn and to me that built up some expectation that Finn would have to go through a bit of a trial and that kind of fell through because all Damon did was punish him sexually by once denying him pleasure and lastly by punishing him by overwhelming him with orgasms and boom Finn was ready to love Damon. I'm not saying he should have beat him (which he does a little by whipping his butt) but I think there could have been more or a different approach was needed.
The thing with Stanislav happened quickly. I was expecting a big showdown that would wham bam, what happened was a nice surprise but it took the wham bam and just gave me a pop. No wham bam ka-pow. It was fast, it was tidy. The epilogue was nice. I liked the premise and I was on my way to liking the characters. I did feel for them which was a plus.
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April 7, 2019
This book started off great and I was immediately hooked. It was going great an them it just did a complete 180. While I enjoyed the rest of the book, I feel like after the fire the characters did a complete chaange. Going from one extreme to the other in one paragraph. One minute the omega is starting a fire just to escape and in the next moment he is in love and never wants to leave. It felt a bit rushed for me. I really wish more time was taken to get to the love and trust. I don't regret reading it and did enjoy it but it could have been better and less rushed.
February 28, 2019
What am I supposed to review ... besides the crappy description, the predictable ending and the amateurish narration? 😒
March 6, 2019
Dark and Delicious
Great story. Lots of suspense, bad guys, and terrible circumstances. But the obsession of one Alpha turns to love for a broken Omega. And it only gets better.
Great story. Lots of suspense, bad guys, and terrible circumstances. But the obsession of one Alpha turns to love for a broken Omega. And it only gets better.
June 19, 2019
This book started out good, you had the build up and the idea of what will happen further. Though it climbed a steep hill of expectations only to plummet in the end.
It went from breaking in a defiant person only for it to lead to a heap of sex and a lack of anything else until it was love and ever after.
Basically I had some plot with my porn.
The book should have been longer and just more, it says in the blurb that it's dark, but it's more gray than anything. It should have built more on the past that made them in to the broken people they had become. Instead it felt glossed over.
The book was okay. but at the end I didn't really feel like finishing it.
It went from breaking in a defiant person only for it to lead to a heap of sex and a lack of anything else until it was love and ever after.
Basically I had some plot with my porn.
The book should have been longer and just more, it says in the blurb that it's dark, but it's more gray than anything. It should have built more on the past that made them in to the broken people they had become. Instead it felt glossed over.
The book was okay. but at the end I didn't really feel like finishing it.
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