I read ‘Pandora’s Clock’ a couple years back and still remember it well. It was a true thrill ride from beginning to end. I also read ‘The Last Hostage’ and like Pandora’s Clock, John Nance crafted another great book. No, it wasn’t as good as ‘Pandora’s Clock’ but still a great novel.
I just completed ‘Fire Flight.’ Or tried to. I think this was a huge disappointment. It takes a lot for me to start a book and not finish reading it. It REALLY takes a lot for me to read 2/3 of a book and not finish it. I got to page 255 of this 350 page novel and sadly had to give up.
While I am a fan of Mr. Nance—or at least of his 2 other superb novels—I found nothing interesting in this book. Even getting through 250 pages was a real struggle. This is a fiction novel. But yet, the book frequently read more like a boring technical manual.
Mr. Nance’s ‘thing’ is airplanes, as he proved in the other 2 novels I’ve read. He also was a fighter pilot in Viet Nam. I thank him for his service. I, however, never served. I have never piloted a plane. Yet, this novel relied and much lingo, jargon and terminology that was over my head. Words and expressions were used that left me scratching my head.
I found Mr. Nance’s writing style in this book to be over-the-top wordiness. Even the so-called ‘action’ scenes were boring due to his wordy style and overly verbose descriptions. Scenes that should have had my heart beating quicker were boring. This entire novel—or at least for the 250 pages I got through—was a difficult, tedious and draining read.
I found the story itself somewhat boring. True, I’ve never been too interested in pilots who fight fires from the air by dumping fire retardants from the sky. But I was willing to learn, to be pulled in. Mr. Nance didn’t do it.
I’ve always liked characters I could identify with. All of the characters in ‘Fire Flight’ was utterly boring, cardboard and stereotypically one dimensional. There’s Jerry Stein, the penny pinching CEO who puts his people’s lives at stake for the bottom line. Trent is the chief maintenance guy with a short temper who always yells. Sam Littlefox is the tough-as-nails pilot who will NOT be kept out of the cockpit. Judy is the damsel-in—distress, the abused woman who gets knocked around by her husband while struggling to leave him. Larry Black is the typically inept bumbling mayor of a small town. Jimmy Wolfe is the smug arrogant millionaire British Rock God who, as he sleeps with 2 women at a time, doesn’t think the rules apply to him. And of course, our hero, Clark Maxwell. He is so perfect, so smart, so handsome, so wonderful, so intelligent, so principled, so well-respected—it’s annoying. As he tries to fight fires and save both Yellowstone National Park and the Grand Tetons, he’s also trying to deal with saving a woman from an abusive relationship. And when his co-pilot teases him about feelings for this woman, this middle-aged man blushes like a school boy.
I’m rating this 2 stars. I loved the 2 other novels by Mr. Nance and had hoped to enjoy this one. But, to me, it was simply unreadable.