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508 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 5, 2019



Just wait till the end of the book for that. Having it repeatedly throughout the book makes it trite and not special.
2. I hate manufactured relationship conflict.
It's not believable. These people all get along. Don't create drama between the characters to "spice things up" Don't create a random outsider for the purpose of drama. It's lazy and uncreative writing.
3. Stop with the therapy sessions in romantic relationships!
None!! None of these people are qualified to head shrink anyone! And yet book after book I've read these BS Filler therapy troupes. That's what they are. Advising someone and sharing a life experience to help them in their situation is understandable and realistic. But in romance books, it always comes off as amateur therapy. These scenes are tedious and I kept having micro-naps struggling to read them. I would love it if going forward new writers would STOP putting these in their books. You aren't clever and you are just copy-pasting this.
4. Repetitive
The "drama" was throughout this whole book. It didn't add to the story. It was almost like re-reading one of Laurell K. Hamilton books. I went on a frothing-at-the-mouth rant on one of her books too. I have since stopped reading her crap. Reading this book was giving me Ptsd flaskbacks from the times I struggled to read the Anita series hoping each new book would get back to why I loved the series. This book felt like a fanfiction of an Anita Blake book. It's very disappointing.
The first book was really good. This book constantly used to word Whore. Which didn't add to the plot. But it did add to the irritating therapy sessions. I know I read either in the previous book or the start of this one that that word wasn't going to be used anymore to describe the main characters.
5. Very little story. Lots of filler.
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What I wanted from this book was an adventure. It was set up perfectly for a siege at the very least.
But what we get is couples Drama. I was struggling to read this. I had to take breaks. I skimmed the sections when the character started in on their woe-is-me baggage.
On a positive note. I liked the magic system. I liked that we weren't getting this from a negative emotion mage. I don't think I could have handled reading about how pain made a mage feel and what was done to create pain. I like when magic was used and how much could be done with magic.
Even though Jade ends up being a Mary Sue, I will overlook that. This book ends with a real conflict. I want to see how it plays out in book 3. I am hoping that all their relationship and self-hate drama was sorted out in this book. Because there is no good reason to continue that baggage to book 3.