Man, these books are fun to read. I love the characters, love the stories and the development of boths. They are just so believable (the protagonists, at least), and engaging. I hope I will have the chance to read quite a few more of this series!
That said, I have a few minor and one major gripe with this novel.
First, the season in which the book takes place. What is it?
Is it late winter, and Indilen looking forward to "spring and summer, warm months meaning she could wear those favored sandals a little more often"? Or is it, like the middle of the novel suggests, somewhere mid-spring? Or even, like suggested later, early summer?
Either the seasons go by in a flash in this world, or I don't know what happens, here (well, I DO know, but it confused the heck out of me, and made me a bit disappointed)...
Secondly, at some point Rem finds himself in "coyote country".
Really?
I mean, really, really?
I am no American, but even I know this to be quite a specific nomer for a particular type of terrain. And deep woods it ain't. Yes, coyotes live there, too. But it is not specifically "coyote country". That is more a venn diagram of grassland, desert and canyons/mountains.
Of course, fantasy settings can take liberties, but it is just weird that the protagonist uses this specific wording.
And thirdly, I was hugely disappointed about the treatment of orcs in this book. After building a world where the races depicted were no hollow repetitions of known tropes, and where individuals had enough space to develop apart from "racial stereotyping", I see this as a step backwards.
Let me explain this a little better (careful, minor spoilers ahead).
In the first and second book (and also in the third), Lucas paints the picture of a very diverse, very unique setting. There ARE the "common" races to be found (Human, Elf, Dwarf, Orc, Goblin, Troll etc.), but they are not hollow stereotypical tropes. Instead, there are differentiations between different types of cultures within these races, aswell. Most commonly presented in the human species, of course (these are more numerous in the premier locale, i.e. Yenara), but some races (like the dwarves), due to being a very close-knit community of people (at least where Torval comes from), seem to be a little more "generic". Still, there is a lot of room for individuality, and separate development. This not only shows in Torval, but also (and more diversely) in the second book, where the dwarven community in Yenara is the focus of the narrative.
The same is true for the orcs that are presented in the first book. While they do not take up too much room in that story, there are lots of points where it becomes clear that orc is not simply orc is orc is orc, but that there are also individuals that differ greatly from one another (this is stressed even more in the third book). But not only that - in the first book of the series, we see through the eyes of Rem, and it is made quite clear that Orcs are more than just "evil beasts" or "no better than animals" (like Torval might want to make us believe, sometimes). Already in the first book, this generalizing stereotype is rent asunder by the portrayal of the orc characters within.
So far, so good.
Unfortunately, when Rem encounters the Orcs in this third novel, and we (consequently) are provided with narrative as seen either through Rem's eyes or, even more likely, through the eyes of a more impartial narrator, the Orc characters become classified as animals. Yes, they have names, personalities and are quite distinct, quite far removed from the stereotypical orc template, that is true. But why, then, is the young orc called a "buck"? The strong, muscular one called a "bull"? And the female a "bitch"? And not by characters in the book - just in passing, like you would describe a female dog or a male deer, etc.
Reading this, I was very disappointed. It seems the voice of the author comes through at this point, in these more or less impartially narrated sections, and that he cannot dispense with the idea of Orcs being brutish, being animals. Not being perceived as aminals - BEING animals.
Mr. Lucas, I really hope you do better in the future. Your world is so full of potential, so accepting and diverse (at least in parts, and even if some of it is not completely publicly). So much creativity, thought and love goes into this world, into the characters, so please don't let genre-specific stereotypes weigh you down.