The author’s skill as a writer is improving, and again the dialogue felt real, particularly amongst the family. Even the kids, who we saw, but never really heard, in the first book. The dog is a trip and absolutely reminds me of the Irish Setter I had in high school. I’m thinking the author either had one or was closely associated with one, because the characterization of the dog was a bullseye.
The haunted house was a fun idea, although with an old abandoned house the liability alone would have made this an instant no-go. Depending on how realistic you like your realistic fiction, your mileage may vary on that one. I didn’t notice any loose ends this time, so she’s either not left any or the one’s she left were more obvious assumptions than those in the first book.
I have to say I felt bad for Max at the quilt shop. Yes, I laughed because I can absolutely see that happening, but I would have felt bad that she was upset by it because it could have happened to anyone.