*Disclaimer: I didn't watch the movie yet, only read the script*
I first discovered The Inner Life of Martin Frost while reading The Book of Illusions. I am doing a thesis on Paul Auster so when I realized The Inner Life of Martin Frost was an actual movie that Paul Auster wrote and directed, I had to find a way to watch it. I haven't watched it yet, but when I found the script in a second-hand bookstore, I had to buy it. And here we are now.
Here's the thing. Economically, The Inner Life of Martin Frost was not a success. And when you read the script, you can understand why.
The first half of the movie is good. It's really good. I really liked the whole muse thing. Claire is Martin's muse, helping him write his new book. Once the book is finished, she dies. Martin understands that and starts burning pages of his book to bring her back to life. The destruction of his work is bringing Claire back to life. That makes you wonder about the role of the author in his own work, how it affects him, the death of the author and what it means, and it fits very well in The Book of Illusions. That's where the movie was supposed to end. But it wasn't long enough for it to be a movie, and there comes the second half of the script.
The second half of the script is also well written, don't get me wrong, but it falls flat compared to the first half. In the second half, we understand that there is some sort of company that sends muses to artists to help them create. Anna, another muse of 18, is introduced. She has been sent to someone who's a bad writer which makes her look like some kind of zombie. Martin and Claire have to help her in order to be able to stay together. Otherwise, Claire is going to disappear forever, which is something both Martin and Claire want to avoid because they're in love. And then that's it. We don't know if they succeed or not, but let's assume they do.
In my personal opinion, I don't think this second half was necessary. I think the script would've been better if the relationship between Martin and Claire was shown more in-depth and ended with Martin bringing Claire back to life. The thing I didn't like much in the first half of the movie is the fact that Martin and Claire are supposed to fall in love, but the spectator (here, the reader) doesn't see it happening. At first, they meet abruptly and decide to stay away from each other, each staying on one side of the house. One page later, they're having a drink, and the next they're having sex. And from then on, they're in love. I have read a lot of romance books –like, a lot. A slow burn always does the trick. I think it would've been more interesting to see them falling in love than to see the whole Anna plot-line. Show us how they fell in love and what made them fall in love. Make them actually fall in love with each other. Being awkward at first. Discreet glances. Shy smiles. Eye contact. I think that would've worked better.
But hey, that's just my personal opinion. It doesn't change the fact that it's a rather well-written script.