Sometimes I'll be really enjoying a book, and suddenly come to a part where you can see the seams coming undone. It begins to drift further and further from what I want it to be, until I wind up at a hot mess of an ending. Sadly, that happened with Perfect Little World: a book with a lot of potential that somehow manages to squander every one of its interesting premises.
I'll start with the good, because I really don't want to be massively negative about this. I gave it 3 stars, after all! And that is mostly because of how much I enjoyed the first 2/3rds or so. PLW is about the 'Infinite Family Project,' where ten families (9 sets of parents and one single mom, Izzy, our main character) raise their children communally. It sounds like a hippie commune, but it's led by a child psychologist and funded by a billionaire. So it's a really scientific commune! With a premise like that, you expect one of two things: a really annoying utopia, or a utopia-turned-dystopia narrative. Thankfully, PLW skirts the border between the two and gives us a story grounded in humanity.
It's not perfect, but it's not the wreck the reader (and the outside world in the novel) expect. Sure, there is tension and not all the parents get along. Sure, our main doctor has a host of issues from his parent's bizarre choices when raising him. Sure, the woman funding the project is really, really old. But for the most part, it presents a nuanced and mainly positive spin on the idea.
However... I had a lot of issues. Many of them I could have overlooked had the ending not been so terribly trite, rushed, and sappy. For instance, our main character Izzy is so annoying. She's perfect. Perfect grades in school (literally), she's good at everything she does, she's beautiful, she's kind. Kevin Wilson tries to balance her away from being a Mary Sue with a tragic backstory (ironically one of the trademarks of a Mary Sue) and her strange sense of aloofness. Izzy doesn't like being close to people. She comes off very holier-than-thou yet incredibly boring at the same time. But she's a decent narrator when she is not talking about herself, so the whole book is not through this "woe is me, poor damaged but perfect girl" lens.
I think the moment I realized I was not going to love this book was when Izzy started falling for the doctor leading the project (this is not a spoiler, it's mentioned in the prologue). I actually said "oh god really? We're going there?" when it happened. It's SO TRITE. Only single woman on the project, only single man, both are damaged by ~rough childhood~, of course they end up together. I though Izzy was actually going to get the "you know what? I don't need a man" narrative which I would have really respected. Instead it's so chick-lit-y and sappy and bleh.
The last half of the book feels very rushed. We get quite a few pre-IFP chapters with Izzy, and the intro chapters to the project itself are quite long. And after that, every year in the IFP is only one chapter, with some of them being quite short (like 20 pages short). It's so rushed! We don't get the in-depth look at either the children's development or the parental relations. A LOT of these chapters are spent on Izzy at art school (a plot that goes nowhere because she doesn't even want to be an artist, sigh).
And the ending! Oh god. It's so sappy and wrapped in a bow. I was really disappointed in it, mainly because it doesn't fit at all what we are told about the family & children. Literally makes no sense in its own universe, which is one of the worst things you can do with an ending.
I do think this book had a lot of potential. I think Wilson was too smitten with Izzy as a character, and needed to cut that cord badly. The book should have had a different narrator every year (we follow a different set of parents, for example) and should have been much longer (or the intro chapters should have been cut). Too much of this novel felt like useless fluff to the narrative, and we were left with so little meat on the bone.