This book was painful to read, and I'm actually surprised by all of the positive reviews. I guess you should know right from the first chapter if this is going to be a book for you or not. Right from the get-go, we're told EVERYTHING! And any one of these EVERYTHINGS would have worked to show the MC has had a rough go of things as of late. She's in remission from cancer, her mom died, and her last serious relationship ended while her mom was dying because the guy she was with couldn't handle his significant other having cancer. Yeah. It's a lot, but this all wasn't necessarily my biggest issue. I mean, all of that was pretty much in the blurb about the book.
My first red flag that this book wasn't for me was the dialogue. Boy howdy, it was bad. In a very, boy howdy kind of way. Here's a direct quote from the first few pages:
"Remember Pilgrim Cove? Remember the beautiful beach?" Laura watched her sister's eyes widen and a grin light up her face.
"Do I remember? Of course I remember. What great summers we had. So, what's your idea? A summer vacation at the beach?"
"Not exactly," replied Laura. "I'm not going to wait that long."
"You're going to the beach in the middle of winter?" Alison asked in disbelief as she hugged herself. "Brr. Not me."
....For me, this was like reading really bad dialogue from a script for a movie with terrible actors. Yet, none of this was done on purpose, and it was definitely not for comedy purposes.
Yet still, this saccharine dialogue isn't even my biggest gripe with this book. That would be our main man Matt. That man threw some serious red flags my way. From the very first meeting, we get to see he gets irritated entirely too easily, and he doesn't know if he's coming or going. One second he seems irritated, next, he's asking our MC out on a date, and gets upset with her when she turns him down. So, it doesn't take long to see he's a little overbearing. This is a theme you see throughout the story, and there are a few times where he's being a bossy butt and our MC thinks to point it out to herself, but then reflects that he really does know what he's talking about so it's kind of okay. No. Just no.
I really am okay with flaws in our characters. That's not what I'm saying. It just seems so poorly done here I could hardly handle it. I felt like the author was trying to create this deep, heartfelt story, that in the end was written rather shallowly. I am apparently in the minority in thinking this, but I had to get this rant out and warn others.
If you take nothing else from this review, please, if you find a lost kitten in the freezing rain, DO NOT feed it milk and cereal. And on the same note, if you're an author, do at least a little research. Because if a kitten is too young for its shots, it's probably too young for just hard cat food, and may very well still need to be on formula multiple times a day, or at the very least have the cat food soaked enough for its tiny little teeth to chew.
Okay, end of rant.