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Dragon's Gap #1–3 omnibus
The Dragon's Gap Series #1-3
L.M. Lacee introduces her first omnibus edition in the popular Dragon's Gap Saga.
This digital box set contains the first, second and third romantic adventures PLUS a bonus novella:
Reighn & Sage's Story: Reighn had no idea when he woke one morning what the day was about to deliver. For a thousand years he had waited for his shadow and by the end of the day he would not only have his long desired mate but TWO YOUNG DAUGHTERS as well!
Sharm & Edith's Story: This is the second fantasy dragon romance book in the series 'Dragon's Gap' where we meet Edith Black who is a full bear that grew up thinking she was human. Edith is a bear that, for so long, could not shift or communicate with her other half. After she has been at Dragon’s Gap for two months this all changes so whether it is the influence of all the other shifters or the Dragon magic that fills the air, Edith’s bear starts to talk to her.
Storm and Charlie's Story: This is an inspirational romance fantasy about two people who deal in war. They must learn that they need to embrace their softer natures when their shape shifting young children need them to take on the roles of their parents. Both Charlie and her dragon shadow, Storm, find themselves rising to the occasion.
Love's Catalyst: Lars and Claire met because Kammy, Claire's adopted daughter wanted her own daddy that can fly and her new awakening instincts as a tiger cub lead her to Lars.
Lars Axton, Prime to the Dragon Lord, decides to visit the vibrant town of Dragon's Gap and finds, not only a good cup of coffee but a hesitant shadow and a little girl who informs him he is her new daddy.
What is a dragon to do?
This digital box set contains the first, second and third romantic adventures PLUS a bonus novella:
Reighn & Sage's Story: Reighn had no idea when he woke one morning what the day was about to deliver. For a thousand years he had waited for his shadow and by the end of the day he would not only have his long desired mate but TWO YOUNG DAUGHTERS as well!
Sharm & Edith's Story: This is the second fantasy dragon romance book in the series 'Dragon's Gap' where we meet Edith Black who is a full bear that grew up thinking she was human. Edith is a bear that, for so long, could not shift or communicate with her other half. After she has been at Dragon’s Gap for two months this all changes so whether it is the influence of all the other shifters or the Dragon magic that fills the air, Edith’s bear starts to talk to her.
Storm and Charlie's Story: This is an inspirational romance fantasy about two people who deal in war. They must learn that they need to embrace their softer natures when their shape shifting young children need them to take on the roles of their parents. Both Charlie and her dragon shadow, Storm, find themselves rising to the occasion.
Love's Catalyst: Lars and Claire met because Kammy, Claire's adopted daughter wanted her own daddy that can fly and her new awakening instincts as a tiger cub lead her to Lars.
Lars Axton, Prime to the Dragon Lord, decides to visit the vibrant town of Dragon's Gap and finds, not only a good cup of coffee but a hesitant shadow and a little girl who informs him he is her new daddy.
What is a dragon to do?
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Published October 14, 2018
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July 9, 2021
3.5*
This series has grown on me. It was a rough beginning and yes it desperately needs editing but Storm and Charlie’s book won me over.
Reighn and Sage - 3*
This book had potential and I read to the end which says something. But the writing is not good. It’s all over the place. It doesn’t flow and honestly it’s a bit of a mess.
That said I’m considering continuing on. I’m hoping the writing improves and I’m curious where it’s going.
Sharm and Edith’s - 3*
I nearly didn’t make it past the first chapter. I don’t know if it’s just me but the conversation between Edith and her bear had me cringing.
The writing here is better than the previous book but…
I’m not sure what’s going on here it feels more like a soap opera. But it’s an easy read which is all I’m wanting at the moment so I might continue on with it.
Storm and Charlie’s - 4*
This was my favourite so far and to think I nearly didn’t read it.
The previous two books have been okay but it seemed to be getting a bit samey. I took a break, read a couple of other books then thought I’d give it one more try. This one started really well. I liked Charlie from the get go and it’s a two for one since we get another romance as well.
I now have high hopes for the next book. So cross your fingers I’m diving straight in.
This series has grown on me. It was a rough beginning and yes it desperately needs editing but Storm and Charlie’s book won me over.
Reighn and Sage - 3*
This book had potential and I read to the end which says something. But the writing is not good. It’s all over the place. It doesn’t flow and honestly it’s a bit of a mess.
That said I’m considering continuing on. I’m hoping the writing improves and I’m curious where it’s going.
Sharm and Edith’s - 3*
I nearly didn’t make it past the first chapter. I don’t know if it’s just me but the conversation between Edith and her bear had me cringing.
The writing here is better than the previous book but…
I’m not sure what’s going on here it feels more like a soap opera. But it’s an easy read which is all I’m wanting at the moment so I might continue on with it.
Storm and Charlie’s - 4*
This was my favourite so far and to think I nearly didn’t read it.
The previous two books have been okay but it seemed to be getting a bit samey. I took a break, read a couple of other books then thought I’d give it one more try. This one started really well. I liked Charlie from the get go and it’s a two for one since we get another romance as well.
I now have high hopes for the next book. So cross your fingers I’m diving straight in.
August 8, 2019
Would it hurt to proof read????
This series has all the elements of an excellent read. I don't know what the author's background is, but the books are ruined by a constant flow of sentence fragments, run on sentences, poor punctuation, and a full range of flaws that would get an "F" grade in a high school class. I'm sorry, but the series is nowhere close to its potential, which is sad
This series has all the elements of an excellent read. I don't know what the author's background is, but the books are ruined by a constant flow of sentence fragments, run on sentences, poor punctuation, and a full range of flaws that would get an "F" grade in a high school class. I'm sorry, but the series is nowhere close to its potential, which is sad
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May 10, 2019
Great story.
I really enjoyed the story and the characters. That said, these books need an editor! As much as I love the story, I felt like I was reading an eighth-grader's writing assignment. The sentence structure is horrible and many words were used improperly, making the books feel like they were written by a child or a non-native English speaker. If these stories were edited, I would give them at least 4 stars!
I really enjoyed the story and the characters. That said, these books need an editor! As much as I love the story, I felt like I was reading an eighth-grader's writing assignment. The sentence structure is horrible and many words were used improperly, making the books feel like they were written by a child or a non-native English speaker. If these stories were edited, I would give them at least 4 stars!
January 14, 2021
Great series
Reighn and Sage
Sage is half wolf and witch, an being that should not exist. She is the liaison between her uncle the Alpha and the half breed shifters the goddess has put in his care. The Alpha broke faith with the goddess. Her chosen have been abused. She calls on Sage to lead the half breeds to a new home. Dragon Gap. The dragons are slowly dying.
Sage and the half breeds find a safe home in Dragon Gap. She makes some new and close friends. Sage continues to do the goddess work finding half breeds, and anyone else in need of sanctuary. She is worn down and ready to retire when two young orphan shifter girls choose her as their mother. Sage finds herself adopted into a bear shifter family when a widow takes on the job of housekeeper for her new family.
Reighn Kingsley is the Dragon Lord, the ruler over the Dragons. He just found his shadow in Sage. He and his family are happy to welcome Sage and her young to their family. Not all the Dragons in the Gap are happy. Reighn and his Shadow are committed to the the changes coming.
Ends on a little cliffhanger.
Sharm and Edith
Sharm Kingsley, is brother to Reighn and Chief Healer. He spends much of his time at the Center, treating those who have found their way to Dragons Gap to start a new life.
Bear shifter Edith Black has found her way to Dragons Gap. Her bear has decided it time to find her mate, which is how she found herself in the Castle and met the Dragon Lords mother Verity. Verity finds a kindered spirit in Edith, and claims her as one of her own, making her family.
Edith finds her mate in Sharm as the fairy Queen and King make contact. The fairy's wish to make a Grove at Dragon Gap, their advanced representative has her own agenda. When Edith calls her out, Sela plots her revenge.
Eddee to her new family can detect lies, she knows the age, date of birth, and type of other with just a touch. She has a nack for drawing people to her and getting them where they need to be and doing what they are ment to do. Her nonsense manor, and always speaking the truth had put her at odds with her new father in law. Try as she might, her mating to Sharm is not going well. Her new family has taken notice. Her new brothers have even threatened to separate them.
Sharm knows something is wrong. Their is no spell that works on dragons. Sharm's dragon is determined to find the answer, he will not lose his shadow. The Fairy Queen has a plan to help.
Ends with a little cliffhanger.
Storm and Charlie
Charlie Easton is alone in the world. An other with many talents, she is an assassin. Her talent brought her to an odd little town and the rescue of five young children from a trafficking ring. Her talent lead her and her children to Dragons Gap.
Charlie finds herself claimed by Rene, the father of the Dragon Lord. There of the five little ones she rescued are hers. Then she finds the Dragon that lead her to the Gap is her dragon. The fariy Queen has a claim on her as well.
Storm Kingsley, brother to the Dragon Lord, is commander of the Hunters. He just found his shadow in the fierce women his father has claimed as family. He and his dragon are thrilled that she has three little ones who are now theirs.
Charlie's frozen heat has started to melt, first with the little ones she rescued and she knows they are now hers. Then by the powerful elder dragon who sees a kindred spirit in her. The dragon healers who are caring for her young, one now her new brother. Then she finds her dragon, he is real and he is her. Charlie fears that when her new family learns what she is she will loose them.
Another Kingsley dragon makes his move. Keeper Kingsley has know that healer Ella, his brothers assistant and friend to his new sisters, is his shadow. The youngest of the brothers is a little old fashioned and has been courting his shadow in the tradition of dragons. No one is more surprised the Ella.
While Bella's family makes trouble, her new family has her back.
Charlie meets the Aunt she never knew. Learn who her mother was and what she is. Charlie has finally found home. The rogue fairy Sela tries to take it from her, and she learns their is a man hunting her.
Ends in a little cliffhanger, what did they do with Donald, hopefully the next book will tell.
Great series, the stories aren't stand alone. Each book is the story of one couple, who's story advances the overall story line. A lot of fun and interesting of primary and secondary character. There are seven Kingsley brothers. Four by birth and three by adoption. The friends that the women have made that have become family too.
Reighn and Sage
Sage is half wolf and witch, an being that should not exist. She is the liaison between her uncle the Alpha and the half breed shifters the goddess has put in his care. The Alpha broke faith with the goddess. Her chosen have been abused. She calls on Sage to lead the half breeds to a new home. Dragon Gap. The dragons are slowly dying.
Sage and the half breeds find a safe home in Dragon Gap. She makes some new and close friends. Sage continues to do the goddess work finding half breeds, and anyone else in need of sanctuary. She is worn down and ready to retire when two young orphan shifter girls choose her as their mother. Sage finds herself adopted into a bear shifter family when a widow takes on the job of housekeeper for her new family.
Reighn Kingsley is the Dragon Lord, the ruler over the Dragons. He just found his shadow in Sage. He and his family are happy to welcome Sage and her young to their family. Not all the Dragons in the Gap are happy. Reighn and his Shadow are committed to the the changes coming.
Ends on a little cliffhanger.
Sharm and Edith
Sharm Kingsley, is brother to Reighn and Chief Healer. He spends much of his time at the Center, treating those who have found their way to Dragons Gap to start a new life.
Bear shifter Edith Black has found her way to Dragons Gap. Her bear has decided it time to find her mate, which is how she found herself in the Castle and met the Dragon Lords mother Verity. Verity finds a kindered spirit in Edith, and claims her as one of her own, making her family.
Edith finds her mate in Sharm as the fairy Queen and King make contact. The fairy's wish to make a Grove at Dragon Gap, their advanced representative has her own agenda. When Edith calls her out, Sela plots her revenge.
Eddee to her new family can detect lies, she knows the age, date of birth, and type of other with just a touch. She has a nack for drawing people to her and getting them where they need to be and doing what they are ment to do. Her nonsense manor, and always speaking the truth had put her at odds with her new father in law. Try as she might, her mating to Sharm is not going well. Her new family has taken notice. Her new brothers have even threatened to separate them.
Sharm knows something is wrong. Their is no spell that works on dragons. Sharm's dragon is determined to find the answer, he will not lose his shadow. The Fairy Queen has a plan to help.
Ends with a little cliffhanger.
Storm and Charlie
Charlie Easton is alone in the world. An other with many talents, she is an assassin. Her talent brought her to an odd little town and the rescue of five young children from a trafficking ring. Her talent lead her and her children to Dragons Gap.
Charlie finds herself claimed by Rene, the father of the Dragon Lord. There of the five little ones she rescued are hers. Then she finds the Dragon that lead her to the Gap is her dragon. The fariy Queen has a claim on her as well.
Storm Kingsley, brother to the Dragon Lord, is commander of the Hunters. He just found his shadow in the fierce women his father has claimed as family. He and his dragon are thrilled that she has three little ones who are now theirs.
Charlie's frozen heat has started to melt, first with the little ones she rescued and she knows they are now hers. Then by the powerful elder dragon who sees a kindred spirit in her. The dragon healers who are caring for her young, one now her new brother. Then she finds her dragon, he is real and he is her. Charlie fears that when her new family learns what she is she will loose them.
Another Kingsley dragon makes his move. Keeper Kingsley has know that healer Ella, his brothers assistant and friend to his new sisters, is his shadow. The youngest of the brothers is a little old fashioned and has been courting his shadow in the tradition of dragons. No one is more surprised the Ella.
While Bella's family makes trouble, her new family has her back.
Charlie meets the Aunt she never knew. Learn who her mother was and what she is. Charlie has finally found home. The rogue fairy Sela tries to take it from her, and she learns their is a man hunting her.
Ends in a little cliffhanger, what did they do with Donald, hopefully the next book will tell.
Great series, the stories aren't stand alone. Each book is the story of one couple, who's story advances the overall story line. A lot of fun and interesting of primary and secondary character. There are seven Kingsley brothers. Four by birth and three by adoption. The friends that the women have made that have become family too.
April 3, 2022
Great series, sometimes hard to read as much feels like you are reading a newspaper article rather than a book. With CHARACTER P.O.V but is still such great stories that are addictive you ignore many grammatical errors and discombobulated writing. If you can get past all that. You will enjoy the stories and characters themselves
Reighn and Sage
Sage is half wolf and witch, an being that should not exist. She is the liaison between her uncle the Alpha and the half breed shifters the goddess has put in his care. The Alpha broke faith with the goddess. Her chosen have been abused. She calls on Sage to lead the half breeds to a new home. Dragon Gap. The dragons are slowly dying.
Sage and the half breeds find a safe home in Dragon Gap. Sage continues to do the goddess work finding half breeds, and others in need of sanctuary. She is worn down and ready to retire when two young orphan shifter girls choose her as their mother. Sage finds herself adopted by bear shifter family headed by Grace when the shifter widow takes on the job of housekeeper for her new family.
Reighn Kingsley is the Dragon Lord, the ruler over the Dragons. He just found his shadow in Sage. He and his family are happy to welcome Sage and her young to their family. Not all the Dragons in the Gap are happy. Reighn and his Shadow are committed to the the changes coming.
Sharm and Edith
Sharm Kingsley, is brother to Reighn and Chief Healer. He spends much of his time at the Center, treating those who have found their way to Dragons Gap to start a new life.
Bear shifter Edith Black has found her way to Dragons Gap. Her bear has decided it time to find her mate, which is how she found herself in the Castle and met the Dragon Lords mother Verity. Elder former dragon lady Verity finds a kindered spirit in Edith, and claims her as one of her own, making her family.
Edith finds her mate in Sharm as the fairy Queen and King make contact. The fairy's wish to make a Grove at Dragon Gap, their advanced representative has her own agenda. When Edith calls her out, Sela plots her revenge.
Edde can detect lies, she knows the age, date of birth, and type of “being” with just a touch. She has a knack for drawing people to her and getting them where they need to be and doing what they are ment to do. Her manor, and inclination to always speaking the truth had put her at odds with her new father in law. Sharm knows something is wrong. Sharm's dragon is determined to find the answer, he will not lose his shadow. The Fairy Queen has a plan to help.
Storm and Charlie
Charlie Easton is alone in the world. A “being” with many talents, she is an assassin. Her talent/magic has brought her to an odd little town and the rescue of five young children from a trafficking ring. Her magic leads her & the children to Dragons Gap.
Charlie finds herself claimed by Rene, the father of the Dragon Lord. There of the five little ones she rescued are hers. Then she finds the Dragon that lead her to the Gap is her fated dragon. The fariy Queen has a claim on her as well.
Storm Kingsley, brother to the Dragon Lord, is commander of the Hunters. He just found his shadow in the fierce women his father has claimed as family. He and his dragon are thrilled that she has three little ones who are now theirs.
A powerful elder dragon who sees a kindred spirit in her. The dragon healers who are caring for her young, one is now her new brother. Then she finds her fated mate a dragon, he is real and he is her’s. Charlie fears that when her new family learns what she is she will loose them.
Keeper Kingsley has know that healer Ella, his brothers assistant and friend to his new sisters, is his shadow. The youngest of the brothers is a little old fashioned and has been courting his shadow in the tradition of dragons. No one is more surprised the Ella.
While Ella’s family makes trouble, her new family has her back.
Charlie meets the Aunt she never knew. Learns who her mother was and what she is. Charlie has finally found home. The rogue fairy Sela tries to take it from her, and she learns their is a man hunting her.
what will they do with Donald, hopefully the next book will tell.
There are seven Kingsley brothers. Four by birth and three by adoption. The friends that the women have made that have become family too. There are other characters in Dragon’s Gap we will hear from too
Reighn and Sage
Sage is half wolf and witch, an being that should not exist. She is the liaison between her uncle the Alpha and the half breed shifters the goddess has put in his care. The Alpha broke faith with the goddess. Her chosen have been abused. She calls on Sage to lead the half breeds to a new home. Dragon Gap. The dragons are slowly dying.
Sage and the half breeds find a safe home in Dragon Gap. Sage continues to do the goddess work finding half breeds, and others in need of sanctuary. She is worn down and ready to retire when two young orphan shifter girls choose her as their mother. Sage finds herself adopted by bear shifter family headed by Grace when the shifter widow takes on the job of housekeeper for her new family.
Reighn Kingsley is the Dragon Lord, the ruler over the Dragons. He just found his shadow in Sage. He and his family are happy to welcome Sage and her young to their family. Not all the Dragons in the Gap are happy. Reighn and his Shadow are committed to the the changes coming.
Sharm and Edith
Sharm Kingsley, is brother to Reighn and Chief Healer. He spends much of his time at the Center, treating those who have found their way to Dragons Gap to start a new life.
Bear shifter Edith Black has found her way to Dragons Gap. Her bear has decided it time to find her mate, which is how she found herself in the Castle and met the Dragon Lords mother Verity. Elder former dragon lady Verity finds a kindered spirit in Edith, and claims her as one of her own, making her family.
Edith finds her mate in Sharm as the fairy Queen and King make contact. The fairy's wish to make a Grove at Dragon Gap, their advanced representative has her own agenda. When Edith calls her out, Sela plots her revenge.
Edde can detect lies, she knows the age, date of birth, and type of “being” with just a touch. She has a knack for drawing people to her and getting them where they need to be and doing what they are ment to do. Her manor, and inclination to always speaking the truth had put her at odds with her new father in law. Sharm knows something is wrong. Sharm's dragon is determined to find the answer, he will not lose his shadow. The Fairy Queen has a plan to help.
Storm and Charlie
Charlie Easton is alone in the world. A “being” with many talents, she is an assassin. Her talent/magic has brought her to an odd little town and the rescue of five young children from a trafficking ring. Her magic leads her & the children to Dragons Gap.
Charlie finds herself claimed by Rene, the father of the Dragon Lord. There of the five little ones she rescued are hers. Then she finds the Dragon that lead her to the Gap is her fated dragon. The fariy Queen has a claim on her as well.
Storm Kingsley, brother to the Dragon Lord, is commander of the Hunters. He just found his shadow in the fierce women his father has claimed as family. He and his dragon are thrilled that she has three little ones who are now theirs.
A powerful elder dragon who sees a kindred spirit in her. The dragon healers who are caring for her young, one is now her new brother. Then she finds her fated mate a dragon, he is real and he is her’s. Charlie fears that when her new family learns what she is she will loose them.
Keeper Kingsley has know that healer Ella, his brothers assistant and friend to his new sisters, is his shadow. The youngest of the brothers is a little old fashioned and has been courting his shadow in the tradition of dragons. No one is more surprised the Ella.
While Ella’s family makes trouble, her new family has her back.
Charlie meets the Aunt she never knew. Learns who her mother was and what she is. Charlie has finally found home. The rogue fairy Sela tries to take it from her, and she learns their is a man hunting her.
what will they do with Donald, hopefully the next book will tell.
There are seven Kingsley brothers. Four by birth and three by adoption. The friends that the women have made that have become family too. There are other characters in Dragon’s Gap we will hear from too
February 10, 2023
A complex shifter world to enjoy
The three books in this set contain our introduction to a paradigm shift in this fantasy. Once, the Goddess chose wolf shifters to be her chosen race to rule, but her agreement with their King and Queen was spelled our clearly in it's expectations and yet the King and Queen ignored their obligations to the Goddess and did harm to the vulnerable ones she required them to protect. The Goddess responded justly and shifted her efforts to accomplish her original purpose with a new race, with an evolution among the world of shifters. Change is ongoing in this new way of things. The time of wolf shifters is dying, and the rise of dragons and dragon magic has come.
Book 1 tells our opening story of the Goddess, the Elementals, and Sage our heroine wolf shifter and witch. Sage is the beginning of new things, and becomes the Shadow to Reighn the Dragon Lord. Both pure of heart and just in deed. Sage is the head of the Goddesses spear for change and Reighn is the wise Dragon who sees her for all she is and cannot help but be impressed by her.
Book 2 is Sharm and Edith's piece of the story. Sharm is a healer, dragon, royal, brother to Reighn. Edith is a null bear, mut more importantly she is a grounder. Enter the faeries, and one crappy spy for the High Queen Faery, and we have a lot of additional challenges in Dragon's Gap.
Book 3 tells the stories of Storm and Charlie... and Keeper and Ella's. Storm is a warrior, long searching for his Shadow, and so close to giving up. Charlie is a bit of a mystery, but also an assassin. Charlie brings justice wherever she may be. And Storm and the family bring love to Charlie. Charlie arrives in Dragons Gap with children she has rescued, and so many new threads are opened up with her arrival. Keeper has been courting Ella's (healer working with Sharm for 5 years now) although she may have missed the memo. He's also a warrior, but like his father Rene he is also a keeper (mental health resource for the dragon community) and a hoarder of books. Ella's is our story's Cinderella...and the evil stepmother and stepsisters do show up.
Life and community are growing in Dragon's Gap.. and I'm quite ready to continue into the next set of stories.
The three books in this set contain our introduction to a paradigm shift in this fantasy. Once, the Goddess chose wolf shifters to be her chosen race to rule, but her agreement with their King and Queen was spelled our clearly in it's expectations and yet the King and Queen ignored their obligations to the Goddess and did harm to the vulnerable ones she required them to protect. The Goddess responded justly and shifted her efforts to accomplish her original purpose with a new race, with an evolution among the world of shifters. Change is ongoing in this new way of things. The time of wolf shifters is dying, and the rise of dragons and dragon magic has come.
Book 1 tells our opening story of the Goddess, the Elementals, and Sage our heroine wolf shifter and witch. Sage is the beginning of new things, and becomes the Shadow to Reighn the Dragon Lord. Both pure of heart and just in deed. Sage is the head of the Goddesses spear for change and Reighn is the wise Dragon who sees her for all she is and cannot help but be impressed by her.
Book 2 is Sharm and Edith's piece of the story. Sharm is a healer, dragon, royal, brother to Reighn. Edith is a null bear, mut more importantly she is a grounder. Enter the faeries, and one crappy spy for the High Queen Faery, and we have a lot of additional challenges in Dragon's Gap.
Book 3 tells the stories of Storm and Charlie... and Keeper and Ella's. Storm is a warrior, long searching for his Shadow, and so close to giving up. Charlie is a bit of a mystery, but also an assassin. Charlie brings justice wherever she may be. And Storm and the family bring love to Charlie. Charlie arrives in Dragons Gap with children she has rescued, and so many new threads are opened up with her arrival. Keeper has been courting Ella's (healer working with Sharm for 5 years now) although she may have missed the memo. He's also a warrior, but like his father Rene he is also a keeper (mental health resource for the dragon community) and a hoarder of books. Ella's is our story's Cinderella...and the evil stepmother and stepsisters do show up.
Life and community are growing in Dragon's Gap.. and I'm quite ready to continue into the next set of stories.
September 10, 2021
Dragon's Gap Books 1–3
I liked the characters and the story isn't bad, but I found the horrible sentence structure very distracting. There are commas in odd places for no reason, creating pauses that shouldn't be there, so the sentence makes no sense and it has to be read again to decipher the meaning. Moreover, there are periods where there should be commas, creating sentence fragments on practically every page (if not every paragraph). There are also numerous sentence fragments that are just adverbial phrases without the clauses they are meant to modify (usually the rest of the thought is found in the next sentence fragment). Some paragraphs are nothing but a single fragment of a sentence.
In addition, the spelling errors also make it really difficult to understand the meaning of some sentences. Again, they create a sense of confusion until the reader re-reads the passage while mentally correcting the misspelled word.
It's bizarre. I've seen strange grammar in e-books on free websites, but I never saw one this bad from Amazon. This is particularly unfortunate, because aside from the lack of editing, the stories are engaging and heartwarming with a delightful premise and magical characters. The plots are appealing and enjoyable, although the conclusions to the stories seem somewhat forced and quick. The narratives are lacking a satisfying denouement where all remaining questions are addressed and we have a complete picture of the characters and their lives moving forward.
I liked the characters and the story isn't bad, but I found the horrible sentence structure very distracting. There are commas in odd places for no reason, creating pauses that shouldn't be there, so the sentence makes no sense and it has to be read again to decipher the meaning. Moreover, there are periods where there should be commas, creating sentence fragments on practically every page (if not every paragraph). There are also numerous sentence fragments that are just adverbial phrases without the clauses they are meant to modify (usually the rest of the thought is found in the next sentence fragment). Some paragraphs are nothing but a single fragment of a sentence.
In addition, the spelling errors also make it really difficult to understand the meaning of some sentences. Again, they create a sense of confusion until the reader re-reads the passage while mentally correcting the misspelled word.
It's bizarre. I've seen strange grammar in e-books on free websites, but I never saw one this bad from Amazon. This is particularly unfortunate, because aside from the lack of editing, the stories are engaging and heartwarming with a delightful premise and magical characters. The plots are appealing and enjoyable, although the conclusions to the stories seem somewhat forced and quick. The narratives are lacking a satisfying denouement where all remaining questions are addressed and we have a complete picture of the characters and their lives moving forward.
August 5, 2025
L.M. Lacee’s Dragon’s Gap Saga Omnibus is a heartwarming and imaginative collection that brings together the first three books in the series—Reighn & Sage, Sharm & Edith, Storm & Charlie—plus the bonus novella Love’s Catalyst. This fantasy romance box set is rich in emotion, magic, and the theme of found family.
In Reighn & Sage’s Story, a Dragon Lord finds not only his long-awaited mate but also two surprise daughters, setting the tone for a saga filled with unexpected love. Sharm & Edith follows a woman who learns she’s actually a bear shifter, discovering her true self in a magical community. Storm & Charlie brings together two warriors learning to be parents, while Love’s Catalyst delivers a sweet, fated romance sparked by a child’s innocent wish.
Lacee’s world is vivid and full of heart, blending fantasy and romance in a way that celebrates connection, healing, and destiny. A must-read for fans of shifter stories and feel-good fantasy romance.
In Reighn & Sage’s Story, a Dragon Lord finds not only his long-awaited mate but also two surprise daughters, setting the tone for a saga filled with unexpected love. Sharm & Edith follows a woman who learns she’s actually a bear shifter, discovering her true self in a magical community. Storm & Charlie brings together two warriors learning to be parents, while Love’s Catalyst delivers a sweet, fated romance sparked by a child’s innocent wish.
Lacee’s world is vivid and full of heart, blending fantasy and romance in a way that celebrates connection, healing, and destiny. A must-read for fans of shifter stories and feel-good fantasy romance.
February 23, 2022
Such an interesting story, but so poorly told.
I beg the author of these books to find a good editor and a bunch of decent arc readers to go through these books and fix all of the grammatical errors and plot holes.
The storyline itself promises to be brilliant, but even after struggling through the entire first book, I am still at a loss as to where or what Dragon Gap is, why people are going there, what is happening to those left behind, and what period of time is taken from beginning to end of the tale.
There are lots of moments of explanation, but they never seem to fully explain anything, and the whole story jumps around a bit.
That being said, once edited this book promises to be great! Unfortunately it really is almost unreadable at the moment.
I beg the author of these books to find a good editor and a bunch of decent arc readers to go through these books and fix all of the grammatical errors and plot holes.
The storyline itself promises to be brilliant, but even after struggling through the entire first book, I am still at a loss as to where or what Dragon Gap is, why people are going there, what is happening to those left behind, and what period of time is taken from beginning to end of the tale.
There are lots of moments of explanation, but they never seem to fully explain anything, and the whole story jumps around a bit.
That being said, once edited this book promises to be great! Unfortunately it really is almost unreadable at the moment.
October 8, 2022
Read the first three of these books in just 4 nights. I really enjoyed them. I love any books with dragons even though I am a 64 year old grandma. I usually share them with my teenage grandaughters who also enjoy them.
Last night as soon as I had finished book 3, I bought books 4-6 directly from my Kindle and started book 4 as I couldn't wait.
I found the story lines and the characters good, they are well written and interesting. However as has been pointed out by others there were many spelling and grammatical errors in the books which can be a bit off-putting, really just needs a good proof reader and these would be much better.
Despite that small hiccup I still give then 5 stars.
See you all in Dragon's Gap later
Last night as soon as I had finished book 3, I bought books 4-6 directly from my Kindle and started book 4 as I couldn't wait.
I found the story lines and the characters good, they are well written and interesting. However as has been pointed out by others there were many spelling and grammatical errors in the books which can be a bit off-putting, really just needs a good proof reader and these would be much better.
Despite that small hiccup I still give then 5 stars.
See you all in Dragon's Gap later
July 23, 2021
Reads like a work-in-progress
The story being told is interesting. The characters show growth from one book to the next.
However, the mechanical errors (missed or incorrect punctuation, missing words, incorrect word choices) lead me to believe the author used word processing software and relied on that rather than proper proofreading.
I noted each problem in my e-reader. By the end of this three book omnibus, I had marked over 250 problems. That being the case, it is my opinion that this is still a work-in-progress and should be removed from online booksellers until such time as the above problems have been addressed. I cannot in good conscience recommend that anyone spend money to purchase this set until the numerous errors have been addressed.
I will not be spending money on the next omnibus in this series until Amazon notifies me there is an update for this set.
The story being told is interesting. The characters show growth from one book to the next.
However, the mechanical errors (missed or incorrect punctuation, missing words, incorrect word choices) lead me to believe the author used word processing software and relied on that rather than proper proofreading.
I noted each problem in my e-reader. By the end of this three book omnibus, I had marked over 250 problems. That being the case, it is my opinion that this is still a work-in-progress and should be removed from online booksellers until such time as the above problems have been addressed. I cannot in good conscience recommend that anyone spend money to purchase this set until the numerous errors have been addressed.
I will not be spending money on the next omnibus in this series until Amazon notifies me there is an update for this set.
November 17, 2021
Extraordinarily magical!
This series is so beautiful, tho it describes some of the darkest parts of life. It reaffirms that love conquers all, family and friends are the truest treasures of life, and a foundation of true caring can create a place if sanctuary.
I read some of the earlier reviews, and I am sad for those who let grammar or other concerns keep them from seeing this series for the excellence it represents. I found the baby speak sweet and realistic, not a reason to disparage the books.
This is my third time reading the series, and I applaud the writer for the concept of such a welcoming sanctuary.
This series is so beautiful, tho it describes some of the darkest parts of life. It reaffirms that love conquers all, family and friends are the truest treasures of life, and a foundation of true caring can create a place if sanctuary.
I read some of the earlier reviews, and I am sad for those who let grammar or other concerns keep them from seeing this series for the excellence it represents. I found the baby speak sweet and realistic, not a reason to disparage the books.
This is my third time reading the series, and I applaud the writer for the concept of such a welcoming sanctuary.
March 3, 2022
great interplay of people
I really Liked the values and conversations characters had between other characters. Showed how the family was built, maintained and all loved. The little kids characters were fun and thoughtful. I recommend the books. I liked that the bonding was about love, caring and getting to know each other without the vivid matings in other shifter/dragon Novels. I do think the typos should be looked at. Sometimes I had to reread the conversations to get the correct thoughts. Misspelled words, missing words and incorrect words got in the way. But the books are definitely worth reading for the characters and their progression in the books.
I really Liked the values and conversations characters had between other characters. Showed how the family was built, maintained and all loved. The little kids characters were fun and thoughtful. I recommend the books. I liked that the bonding was about love, caring and getting to know each other without the vivid matings in other shifter/dragon Novels. I do think the typos should be looked at. Sometimes I had to reread the conversations to get the correct thoughts. Misspelled words, missing words and incorrect words got in the way. But the books are definitely worth reading for the characters and their progression in the books.
July 24, 2022
DNF 20%. Yes it has. Terrible, editing. (I mean seriously it's like that, I'm not exaggerating). I could probably look past editing with a good story, but in this book it's so distracting. At times, the writing is so messy it's hard to get a grasp on what's going on, who's talking, etc. Also, the author writes using a lot of hyperbole and insta-everything. Insta-love, insta-friendship, and insta-parenting. Yes insta-parenting- I'm still not entirely sure how that works. Maybe I didn't read long enough, but the main characters are pretty generic and not endearing in any way. The world building is somewhat interesting, but I'd just rather go read something else honestly.
June 16, 2023
Good, but get an editor - PLEASE
I truly enjoyed these stories. Each family wove thru the series, showing life in a large, loving home. I giggled. I cried. I wanted to kill the bad guys right along with the heros and heroine's.
But, cruddy punctuation, horrid spelling, and bad formatting made it rough to read. The 3rd book even had such a big error that chapter 34 and 36 were the exact same, but there was NO chapter 35. Major plot drivers were often referenced that either weren't in this omnibus (Lars & Charlie) or maybe got skipped over. Hopefully, the individual books are better, but these omnibus versions are....shaky
I truly enjoyed these stories. Each family wove thru the series, showing life in a large, loving home. I giggled. I cried. I wanted to kill the bad guys right along with the heros and heroine's.
But, cruddy punctuation, horrid spelling, and bad formatting made it rough to read. The 3rd book even had such a big error that chapter 34 and 36 were the exact same, but there was NO chapter 35. Major plot drivers were often referenced that either weren't in this omnibus (Lars & Charlie) or maybe got skipped over. Hopefully, the individual books are better, but these omnibus versions are....shaky
November 27, 2023
These stories have so much potential. However, as many others have mentioned, they are hard to read due to sentence structure. There are a lot of characters and there were several times I didn't realize who was who.
The main problem I have is also, the author gets right up to the edge of where there story gets good, and then just glosses over everything to get to the end. The details just aren't there and there are a few continuity issues.
Mainly, a good editor and some more writing is desperately needed for these series. I got through this book, but couldn't convince myself that I cared enough to continue with the others.
The main problem I have is also, the author gets right up to the edge of where there story gets good, and then just glosses over everything to get to the end. The details just aren't there and there are a few continuity issues.
Mainly, a good editor and some more writing is desperately needed for these series. I got through this book, but couldn't convince myself that I cared enough to continue with the others.
May 6, 2024
Interesting new world of shifters, witches and dragons.
I have enjoyed the first three stories and novella set in Dragon’s Gap. It is a world of fantastic dragon shifters who offer refuge to half shifter/half human females who have been treated as low born slaves by full shifters for many years. The sanctuary in Dragon’s Gap becomes a home and dragons find their ‘shadows’ or mates among these strong women. There are drastic changes as some dragons hold with maintaining pure blood lines and are aghast at the changes as they occur. The series shows how tolerance and love can overcome bigotry, the stories contain humour as well as drama and intrigue.
I have enjoyed the first three stories and novella set in Dragon’s Gap. It is a world of fantastic dragon shifters who offer refuge to half shifter/half human females who have been treated as low born slaves by full shifters for many years. The sanctuary in Dragon’s Gap becomes a home and dragons find their ‘shadows’ or mates among these strong women. There are drastic changes as some dragons hold with maintaining pure blood lines and are aghast at the changes as they occur. The series shows how tolerance and love can overcome bigotry, the stories contain humour as well as drama and intrigue.
November 30, 2019
Enjoyed this series. Totally different from my usual genres. Characters were fun and interesting. However, these books are in need of some major editing. Book three was not too bad. But the first two books were very difficult to read. Sentences in need of commas. Sentences ending abruptly or starting in mid thought. Some sections read as if they were edited by someone who did not have English as their first language. These books need to be pulled, thoroughly edited and then republished.
May 4, 2020
Shouldn't have waited to read this.
I borrowed this set 3 times before actually reading it.
I am so mad at myself for that.
I found a story that was filled with, love, family, mystery and happiness. The characters put a smile on my face and it stayed there throughout the set.
This series told a story of the love of a mother and father that goes beyond the surface of a child. The skin of the child never entered into the love of the child.
If the world could find the capability to do as this author has written we would be better off.
Thank you for a wonderful story.
I borrowed this set 3 times before actually reading it.
I am so mad at myself for that.
I found a story that was filled with, love, family, mystery and happiness. The characters put a smile on my face and it stayed there throughout the set.
This series told a story of the love of a mother and father that goes beyond the surface of a child. The skin of the child never entered into the love of the child.
If the world could find the capability to do as this author has written we would be better off.
Thank you for a wonderful story.
September 28, 2020
Editing is important
Let me start by saying this is a good series, I enjoyed it enough to finish. That said, tge first 2 books are in serious need of editing. Normally I can't finish an unedited book, it drives me crazy. This though had such a good story & world I pushed through. I'm glad I did, because the last book was edited & much easier to get through. I read on the authors site that they were sent to a new editor in March 2020, but I don't think that was possible. I hope the next books are edited better because I would like to read them all.
Let me start by saying this is a good series, I enjoyed it enough to finish. That said, tge first 2 books are in serious need of editing. Normally I can't finish an unedited book, it drives me crazy. This though had such a good story & world I pushed through. I'm glad I did, because the last book was edited & much easier to get through. I read on the authors site that they were sent to a new editor in March 2020, but I don't think that was possible. I hope the next books are edited better because I would like to read them all.
October 7, 2021
Lovely story!
I enjoyed the three stories in this omnibus. I enjoyed the characters and the world that surrounds them. However there needs to be a good editor to go over the whole book. Punctuation is out of place, words are misspelled and incorrectly used. It was a little jarring to be reading and have to stop and figure what was meant when a comma in the right place would have fixed the whole sentence.
Overall I really like this world and the people who are making it a good place for all to live in it.
I enjoyed the three stories in this omnibus. I enjoyed the characters and the world that surrounds them. However there needs to be a good editor to go over the whole book. Punctuation is out of place, words are misspelled and incorrectly used. It was a little jarring to be reading and have to stop and figure what was meant when a comma in the right place would have fixed the whole sentence.
Overall I really like this world and the people who are making it a good place for all to live in it.
June 30, 2022
I am a sucker for stories about mistreated children finding loving homes, but...
This author needs the services of a copy editor and proofreader, stat! Multiple sentence fragments on every page, apostrophes omitted, apostrophes used incorrectly, commas used incorrectly, "to" used for "too" and vice versa, other homonym errors - all these obscured the author's desired meaning and frustrated me no end. Losing patience, I skimmed past many sections in books 1 and 3, and skipped book 2 completely. I doubt that I will ever read this author again.
This author needs the services of a copy editor and proofreader, stat! Multiple sentence fragments on every page, apostrophes omitted, apostrophes used incorrectly, commas used incorrectly, "to" used for "too" and vice versa, other homonym errors - all these obscured the author's desired meaning and frustrated me no end. Losing patience, I skimmed past many sections in books 1 and 3, and skipped book 2 completely. I doubt that I will ever read this author again.
November 22, 2023
Dragon's Gap 1-3
Interesting characters and storyline. I like seeing more of each character from past books in each new one. I don't like the errors in the writing. The punctuation is off sometimes and it makes it challenging to read/understand. I had to back up and read again. Also, in books 1-3, I didn't get to see how a few of the couples got together. Lars and Claire, for example. Overall a great read. Laughted and cried while I read them. I look forward to the next books in the series.
Interesting characters and storyline. I like seeing more of each character from past books in each new one. I don't like the errors in the writing. The punctuation is off sometimes and it makes it challenging to read/understand. I had to back up and read again. Also, in books 1-3, I didn't get to see how a few of the couples got together. Lars and Claire, for example. Overall a great read. Laughted and cried while I read them. I look forward to the next books in the series.
August 23, 2019
Shadow, Mate, Light
Sage and others find their Shadows (bond mates) among the royal dragons. Finding the Shadow for whom they have waited for a thousand years does not ensue that everything will go well from the get go. Especially if others with agendas, curses, and spells get in the way. The characters are very strong and compelling. I like the action, humor, and romance. I will be exploring more of their lives and adventures in the next compendium
Sage and others find their Shadows (bond mates) among the royal dragons. Finding the Shadow for whom they have waited for a thousand years does not ensue that everything will go well from the get go. Especially if others with agendas, curses, and spells get in the way. The characters are very strong and compelling. I like the action, humor, and romance. I will be exploring more of their lives and adventures in the next compendium
November 4, 2019
Loved the plot but not the grammar!
I really wanted to finish reading this book. The plot elements - dragon shifter king, witch-wolf shifter hybrid, the love story, the societal changes - were compelling. However, the sentence fragments, run-on sentences and inadequate punctuation were so disruptive that I had to stop reading it. If the book were properly edited, I would gladly finish reading it. I will recommend it only after it has been thoroughly and completely revised.
I really wanted to finish reading this book. The plot elements - dragon shifter king, witch-wolf shifter hybrid, the love story, the societal changes - were compelling. However, the sentence fragments, run-on sentences and inadequate punctuation were so disruptive that I had to stop reading it. If the book were properly edited, I would gladly finish reading it. I will recommend it only after it has been thoroughly and completely revised.
March 4, 2020
Fantastic series with lots of oh dear moments
Love this series and can’t wait to read more. Half shifters were being abused and when one was killed, the Goddess saw that it was time for change and led the pack of half shifters to Dragon’s Gap. This was the start of the dragons finding their other half, their shadow. Danger and evil was never far away, even in Dragon’s Gap but love can overcome it.
Can’t wait to check out more in this series.
Love this series and can’t wait to read more. Half shifters were being abused and when one was killed, the Goddess saw that it was time for change and led the pack of half shifters to Dragon’s Gap. This was the start of the dragons finding their other half, their shadow. Danger and evil was never far away, even in Dragon’s Gap but love can overcome it.
Can’t wait to check out more in this series.
October 31, 2021
Did the author have anyone proof-read these?! The number of grammatical errors, incorrect use of commas, incomplete sentences completely ruined this series for me. Not to mention: Reighn - really? Fan fiction, much (Channeling JR Ward: Tohrment, Rhage, etc. - it's bad enough in Ward's books)?!
I kept reading because the stories held my interest, but the issues ruined them for me and I won't be reading this author again.
I kept reading because the stories held my interest, but the issues ruined them for me and I won't be reading this author again.
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February 19, 2022Unlimited read, feb 2022
DNF at 8%
What this needs, is a MASSIVE edit. Sentences chopped. Off in the middle (just like that!) make it hard to get into the flow. And when those sentences get chopped into new paragraphs, it makes it even harder.
Sorry, but not one for me.
Ive tagged it as shifters, cos there were wolves at the beginning but I've no idea if there are any actual dragon shifters in this book, I didn't get that far!
DNF at 8%
What this needs, is a MASSIVE edit. Sentences chopped. Off in the middle (just like that!) make it hard to get into the flow. And when those sentences get chopped into new paragraphs, it makes it even harder.
Sorry, but not one for me.
Ive tagged it as shifters, cos there were wolves at the beginning but I've no idea if there are any actual dragon shifters in this book, I didn't get that far!
March 12, 2022
OMG!! hire an editor!!
The stories were pretty good. The characters were cute. But there are SO many grammatical errors. Words left out or too many. But the punctuation was atrocious!! Commas placed everywhere. It was nuts. I almost stopped reading, but I hate not finishing books. It drives me nuts. So, I took it as a personal challenge to soldier through the overuse of commas and word misplacement to finish the books. I gave two stars simply for the characters.
The stories were pretty good. The characters were cute. But there are SO many grammatical errors. Words left out or too many. But the punctuation was atrocious!! Commas placed everywhere. It was nuts. I almost stopped reading, but I hate not finishing books. It drives me nuts. So, I took it as a personal challenge to soldier through the overuse of commas and word misplacement to finish the books. I gave two stars simply for the characters.
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