Single mom Sherry lives in a trailer park with her six-year-old son Jake, trying to make ends meet as a waitress. Madison’s life couldn’t be more different. She’s been raised by her rich grandmother, and her only goals are partying and bedding women. When her grandmother threatens to disinherit her if she doesn’t clean up her act, Madison has to find a way to convince her she’s changed. After a chance encounter with Sherry, Madison comes up with a crazy idea that will rock both of their worlds: she wants to hire Sherry to play her fake girlfriend.
Alison has been writing since the age of ten. Her first works were poems and short stories; then she wrote her first novel-length book when she was eleven. It was a Star Trek: The Next Generation fanfiction. In addition to writing, Alison likes spending her spare time with her friends. The vegetarian also loves cooking and baking. If she’s got enough time, she reads books about history and about social and political sciences.
3.75 Stars. This was a good read that I needed at this time. I really struggled with YLVA’s releases this month. In fact I felt like I was slipping into a bit of a reading slump. I’m really glad this was the kind of book that works for me and hopefully it put the brakes on my slump.
This is a fake relationship storyline. Fake relationships were a big trend in lesfic last year and are still holding on strong. I personally love this storyline. I’ve mentioned this before but the reason this storyline works for me is because this type of book is never based on insta-love. The characters are normally strangers or even dislike each other before their fake relationship begins. The authors have to work hard to go from that beginning to a believable real relationship. You get to see the chemistry build and when love finally clicks. If you are a fan of these types of books, chances are high you will enjoy Contract for Love.
The two mains come from totally different backgrounds. Madison is a spoiled rich woman and Sherry is a hard working single mother. I do have to give a warning that Madison is a very difficult character to like. I could not stand her for almost half the book. Madison is not an ice queen; she is just well pretty awful. I was worried her being so unlikeable was going to ruin the book for me. I thought she might be too hard for Grey to turn around. Surprisingly enough Grey managed to do it. Madison’s back story and the way she grew, was good enough to win me over before the book ended.
When it comes to the romance it is a very slow burn. I like slow burn, and with the way the characters grew and their circumstances, slow burn worked here. I thought the chemistry was good and once I clicked with Madison, I then believed in them as a potential couple. Overall the book is lower on angst, but I didn’t feel like it was missing. It was nice to see that communication was a big deal as the book went on. I thought those parts were well done.
If you are a fake relationship romance fan, I think you will enjoy this book. Madison is tough to like, but the payoff I thought was worth it. I’m looking forward to trying another book by Grey.
An ARC was given to me by YLVA for a honest review.
'ARC provided by Ylva-Publishing in exchange for an honest review'
**'Books are for readers and writing them means the crafty,patient,selfless construction of effects..The best stories don't come from good vs. bad but from good vs. good...'
In 'CONTRACT FOR LOVE' Ms.Grey paints an elaborate picture where enormous wealth contrasted against desperate poverty,of social scorn,of a fake relationship which may or may not lead to something genuine and more.
This storyline did explore the efficacy of true friendships,relationship and family: think about your friends. Who has your back and will pull you up when you're feeling down. Who are you ready to encourage,lend/give money to and in return receive support from. Because the truth is everything mentioned pertains to Madison -- that good living with her money and prized possessions does not mean there are supportive people around her. But she will learn that having a trusting relationship with Sherry and caring family members might be some of the most valuable treasures
Having Sherry,Jake,Rita Mae and Danielle in her life will prove essential to her growth and a friendlier disposition and push with her determination to build her own future without her grandmother or inheritance. Also what Sherry brings into their friendship is helping her try to become the best possible version of herself and will Love her for her journey from party girl to domesticity. Throughout her story, Ms.Grey also richly describe the manifestation of the Love between both main characters (Madison and Sherry) -- from sham to affectionate,enchantment,resignation,respect then rediscovering purpose. It's even loaded with a few wonderful moments,it has empathy,pun & wit,good chemistry and interaction. In addition, this was also a tightly written love story about the limits and complexities of both Madison & Sherry's most benevolent urges -- in measuring what both can give and how losing themselves then eventually ending up appreciating what they have.
I ended up liking this story a lot more than I thought I would. I wasn't the biggest fan of Grey's "Hot Line" and reading how awful one of the leads is, Madison, from other reviews I was wary.
What Grey did a fantastic job of, though, was giving concrete character motivations which guided Madison and Sherry's actions through the whole plot. Regardless of whether it was a popular decision or not, it made sense for that character. She also did a good job of establishing the chemistry between our leads and giving us a slow burn romance which made the evolution of their relationship more believable. The book really thrived with all of the interactions shown between Madison and Sherry. We're also rewarded with one of the better written love scenes in lesfic.
There was a scene that irked me, however, and it has surprisingly nothing to do with Madison. For whatever reason, the author chose to describe a character as "the slut" numerous times which seemed completely uncalled for and rubbed me the wrong way. Basically, a woman keeps coming onto Madison despite Madison's protests. If the woman was referred to as "the aggressive woman", "the forward woman", "the promiscuous woman", fine. But to repeatedly refer to her as a slut seemed not only wrong but it was actually an inaccurate descriptor especially considering the irony that Sherry was acting as an escort of sorts. I also agree that Rita Mae's character was underdeveloped and fell into the mammy role which is a shame.
Despite these complaints, I did enjoy this read and was more entertained than I expected. Recommend.
Perhaps it's because I've simply read too many books about this fake girlfriend/wife trope but this story didn't really wow me, though I did find it an enjoyable read.
I think my biggest issue with this book was the behavior of Madison. It's not because in the beginning I really wanted to run her over with my car and towards the end I only wanted to gently hit her with it. It's because her warming up to Sherry and Jake started off very slow and then rapidly sped up. She went from spoiled brat & Lothario to playing house pretty damn fast.
Sherry, I liked a lot more. Though she had a rough childhood she still tries to be the best mom possible for her son Jake. I think what I liked most about her was that she's no pushover and she really knows how to handle difficult people. That really came in handy when dealing with bratty Madison and the crypt keeper also known as grandma Eileen.
Oddly enough Madison and Sherry do have good chemistry together when we finally got to that point since this is a really slow burn. I was actually worried this might be an issue since I really didn't like Madison but the author managed to pull it off. By the end I even ended up liking her enough to no longer want to hit her with my car. (I'll settle for hitting her over the head with a traffic cone.)
The only other thing that had me scratching my head was the character of Sherry's best friend Rita Mae. Either develop her character more like Danielle or Eileen or simply leave her out of the story after Sherry met Madison because she had no other purpose other than cooking and being Jake's sitter once in a while.
TW: alcohol abuse, mentions of past drug use, child abuse.
I enjoyed this. More then I thought when I first started reading it. At first Madison's character was a bit off putting, but gradually she becomes more likeable, which is one of the main reasons I enjoyed the story. Seeing how the charactor changed and grow as a person really made the story for me. Madison is a cold hearted, obnoxious bitch who needs to learn how to love. The other main character sherry, was a loveable softy. As the story persists the chemisty grows between the pair.
But, fecking hell... the " grandmother" was the bitch from hell.
Anyway, I enjoyed it, but can see why a few people have been put off by Madison's character...
Fake relationship stories are popular at the moment. I confess that when they’re done well I really enjoy them. There’s something indefinably attractive about the forced intimacy and pretence that grows first into liking and respect and then develops into love. I’m sure that it wouldn’t happen very often IRL – although I did marry a man many years ago so he could stay in the country and a weird kind of intimacy, respect and friendship did grow from that, so who knows? After all, some arranged marriages seem to turn out well.
It’s difficult to keep the fake relationship trope fresh, though. There are only are few scenarios for fake relationships that are plausible enough to be believable. Citizenship and money are the two most common reasons. The latter is the motivation in Alison Grey’s Contract for Love. As the blurb says, Madison needs to convince her grandmother that she has settled down and become responsible in order to get her inheritance while Sherry is living in poverty trying to raise her son alone.
Madison’s motivation seems poorly thought through – although that’s in keeping with what we know of her character. The additional fillip of a bet with her lawyer provides further motivation. I would dismiss Madison’s actions as unrealistic, but Grey does a good job of providing enough hints that Madison is more than she presents to herself and the rest of the world. Perhaps she wants an excuse to grow up?
The story unfolds to show how faking it until you make it can work. Madison’s transition to mature responsibility is gradual enough to be plausible and I liked watching her develop into a likeable character. Sherry is always likeable. She is the foil to Madison in almost every way – poor, hardworking, responsible, honourable, and chaste. She’s no shrinking violet, though, and is more than a match for Madison.
Although there’s nothing amazingly original about the story, Grey is a skilful writer and deft at developing her characters. The supporting cast of characters are interesting and mostly well developed – especially Rita Mae – although Andy (Sherry’s landlord) is an odious caricature of a drunken redneck.
As a non-American, I’m always appalled when I read about the reality of a waitress’s job. Having to work for tips means having to put up with rude and obnoxious customers who seem to enjoy having the power to make someone else suffer while making themselves feel superior. Wait staff therefore experience harassment that would not be tolerated in any other job. I don’t understand why restaurants don’t simply pay their staff a living wage and add the expected tips to the menu prices. I noticed that some restaurants in New York do that – presumably because overseas tourists don’t have the same custom about tipping (ie, having to directly pay wait staff their wages). Still, that’s a bandwagon to be jumped on another time – it’s only tangentially relevant to this review!
I enjoyed this book. The writing and the story flowed along and kept me reading it to the end in one (rather long) sitting. It was a satisfying read and I recommend it – especially if you enjoy the fake relationship storyline.
Note: I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Madison is living off her trust fund. She drinks, she parties – rinse and repeat. Her grandmother is so disgusted by her behavior it prompts her to cut Madison out of her will. While consulting with her lawyer and watching a waitress in a diner, an idea comes to Madison. Sherry is struggling to make ends meet; working two jobs, living in a trailer park and worrying about her sickly son. When she’s called home because her son’s fever is raging she knows she could lose her job. Sitting in the hospital waiting room hours later, her son still not seen to, she is approached by Madison with an outlandish proposition.
Most of my conflict in this novel lands squarely on Madison’s shoulders. It took a really long time to warm to her and even then I struggled to believe in her strength of character. (I’m not sure if this is a spoiler or not, even though it occurs in the first ten percent of the book, but just in case…) Madison made great strides in overcoming her ignorance of poverty and learning how to treat people with a modicum of respect but her actions in the beginning coloured my view of her.
Other than that, it was an enjoyable read. Sherry is a pleasant character and I liked the way she was constantly examining her feelings for Madison. The secondary characters, like her ghastly grandmother, definitely help in understanding Madison’s choices. Three and a half stars rounded up.
Book received from Ylva Publishing for an honest review.
This book has me wondering? Does money let you off the hook regarding manners and humility?
The two main characters are like chalk and cheese. One a multi millionaire, who puts the word privilege to shame and has never worked a day in her life. Has no real friends and thinks she is better than anyone else.
The other a hard working woman from no money. Working two jobs just to keep her head above water. She has a young son and a caring neighbor. She lives on a trailer park and not a good environment for anyone. She has a very hardworking ethic.
Ok, so the story has been done before. Two people getting together to convince a third party they had changed. In this case Madison's aunt. I really disliked Madison. Sort of person who just rubs you the wrong way because for her money is everything and anything can be bought. Until she meets Sherry.
I took an instant dislike to Madison but she turned me around. She woke up in my opinion. By the end I really liked her.
This is the third story I’ve read by this author. I open this way not because I used to open this way, but because I’ve a specific point: this is the first book I’ve read by them that was only by them.
The first story I read by them was book-length and one they co-wrote with Jae and I loved it. Wanted to find more by this author, more in that series. There was more in that series, but only a short story and only by Jae. Then I read a short story solely written by Grey and I only gave it 3.5 stars – but, eh, I’ve always held that short story writing and long-length writing are different skills, so maybe I’ll love something solely by them in long form.
Even so – it still took me longer than expected to read this book here. Mostly because it had everything going against it. I do not really like power imbalance stories, be it one involving employee-employer or cultural/financial/societal power imbalances, or whatever imbalances come with massive differences in age. And so forth and so on. Well this one had all of that in the story (except potentially the age one – some guesses were made by one character about another’s age, but I do not believe it was ever firmly established what Sherry’s age was). Toss in somewhat disagreeable characters, bitch grandmothers, and horrifying side characters and . . . I’d normally not even try this book. But still, I’d been waiting to try a solo book length work by this author.
The fact I rated this book as high as 3.5 stars is actually a testament to the author’s ability. Since they were working against so much that I loathe/dislike reading.
Right, so – Madison’s a ‘rich bitch’ who has no redeeming qualities at the start of the book. Her grandmother, who controls the family fortune (Maddie’s parents are dead, as a toss in), has always been a bitch to Madison since she, Maddie, moved in after the parents died. Maddie’s a college graduate now, but speeds her time partying and fucking random people, and the grandmother has point blank stated that she’s cut off – she’s not going to be in the will. Maddie has some money of her own but . . . ‘she can’t do that!’ or something.
A random thought goes across Maddison’s brain as she’s in a diner – what if she could show grandma that she’s all grown up and responsible and stuff? So – 1) get wife (grandma, although disliking that Maddie’s a lesbian, already knows she’s a lesbian); 2) get job; 3) xxx?; 4) profit!
Her eye wanders as she’s in the diner and spots a waitress. One that is super thin (from lack of eating – she’s poor! She cannot afford food!), and completely unlike any woman she’d ever find attractive but . . . let’s go with her! So rich bitch decides to make an offer to waitress.
Waitress, this being Sherry the other main character and POV, ‘gets away’ before Maddison can make the offer. Instead of deciding to move on to another potential ‘fake girlfriend/wife’, Madison’s mind is locked onto Sherry. And eventually runs her down. Learns she has a sickly kid. Offers to pay for everything to make kid not sickly. BUT! Must be pretend girlfriend/wife. Also some amount of money will also go to Sherry. The contract term does not have an end point beyond ‘until grandma accepts Madison’s changes, puts her in or keeps her in (depending on the state of the will) and, this part is important, dies.’ Yes, the contract is ‘until grandma dies’.
Sherry doesn’t want anything to do with it but has, like, 800 jobs that pay her pennies, lives in a very bad trailer park where the neighbor (or was that the owner?) is very very fat and ugly and grope-y, and needs to get son ‘fixed’. So . . . she takes the offer.
And so the book unfolds from there with a fake relationship. With the constant reminder that Sherry is nothing more than an employee, and Madison is the boss. Oh, and in addition to Madison assuming things about Sherry’s age which is never actually answered – Madison also assumed that Sherry is straight. Never asks. Deep deep into the story, there’s this vague idea that Sherry never liked boys, but hadn’t thought deeply about women and . . . she doesn’t really know what she is – but that’s something thought deep into the story.
Oh, and lots of angst. Another thing I do not particular love to read. Not a deal breaker, but …eh.
Madison is presented as unlikeable in beginning, never really changes (other than ‘growing up’, she’s still pretty unlikeable), but is ‘likeable’ enough to me. Sherry is presented as a down on her luck single mother . . . who had some really dislikeable opinions and thoughts revealed deep into the book. By the time everything was done, I do not think I actually liked Sherry that much. But, meh.
Madison Fielding is the only heiress to her family fortune, that is, if she stops partying non-stop and being a womaniser. To convince her Grandmother that she is a responsible adult worth of getting the inheritance, she has to prove that she's changed. She decides to get herself a fake girlfriend and who could be better candidate for the job than straight, poor, single mother Sherry who is the exact opposite of Madison. Nothing can go wrong with that plan for sure...
This is another fake relationship/sham marriage novel which lately are commonplace in lesfic. The main characters couldn't be any different from each other: Madison, a self-centrered, superficial, indolent and rich woman, and Sherry, a dedicated, down to earth and hard working single mother. Could they be more different? Well, yes, Madison is gay and Sherry is straight. The story goes from low to high so if you don't like it at the beginning I suggest that you stick with it and give it a chance as it gets better. As the story goes by and their fake relationship evolves into a real one, the reader witnesses their transformation and how their personalities change (specially Madison) and their chemistry builds up. The final result doesn't seem unrealistic or forced and here lies the beauty of this book. The secondary characters are well rounded and realistic, specially Sherry's 6 year old son and her friend Rita Mae.
Overall, ‘Contract for love’ is a slow-burn romance, low in the level of angst, sometimes funny, others emotional. Recommended for those looking for a feel-good and light entertaining read. 4 stars
ARC provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
2nd book from Ms Grey which I’ve read. I liked how the book is written - the flow is just nice.
Madison, the rich spoilt brat, and Sherry, single mum who’s trying to make ends meet, met at a diner where Sherry was waiting table. Things didn’t get moving till they met again in the hospital when Jake (Sherry’s Son) was down with high fever. A proposition was tabled which had Sherry cornered and hard for her to refuse. Loved the scene where they had a sex talk with Jake; had me laughing there 😂
A really entertaining read for me and loved the storyline; which gave you that feel good factor/warm fuzzy feeling when you read the last line. It’s a slow-burn romance - MCs didn’t come together till like you are at 90% of the book
This was a very nice and very sweet slow romance story. Yeah, it's just another fake relationship novel. They are really popular right now, and that's wonderful because I am a fauxmance fan. I think there are few romance storylines as fun as the fake relationships. Here we meet obnoxious rich girl Madison and lovable single mother Sherry. Fortunately for everybody Madison goes from unlikable to likable.
I loved this book! I enjoyed every minute of the story of Madison and Sherry!
Madison is definitely a spoilt brat but as the story develops, she grows as a person, you discover there is more than what first meets the eye, which was the most enjoyable bit about this book for me.
It follows Sherry as she enters into a ‘fake’ relationship with Madison when circumstances regarding her son leave her very little choice. Madison’s offer is a once in a lifetime thing for Sherry and despite her hesitance, I loved how she just took the bull by the horns and tumbled in head first.
Of course, both Sherry and Madison get a lot more than either of them bargained for!
An enjoyable and exciting read, a page turner you won’t be able to put down easily and a fantastic story! I highly recommend this book.
When I started reading this book it felt very familiar. After a few pages I recognised the book. It’s not a new book by Grey but seems to be a translation of her ‘Liebe im Trinkgeld inbegriffen‘ from 2015. The comment after this title at Amazon is ‘German Edition.’ There’s no information about the earlier German edition of Contract for Love at Amazon or Ylva about the German edition. Both present the book as completely new. Well that said, as I remember enjoying the German book I’ll go on reading the ‘new’ english edition now. You never know, there might be some new scenes or developments in this book that differ from the German edition and I remember enjoying that one. I would rate the German edition 4 stars. Still I’d probably not bought the English edition and preferred to spend my money on another book, if I’d known that it was previously published in German.
Well I finished it and I still liked it. Well developed characters and slow growing warm romance. Didn’t like Madison much in the beginning, can’t imagine anyone with a brain to be so uninformed and shortsighted as Madison. So that was a bit of a downer for me because I like my romances to be a little realistic. But Madison grew and Shelly was already there. Recommend 4 stars
One of the rare times when I’m hoping that they don’t end up together. I really hated Madison. And it went past the point of redemption for me. Sorry, Sherry, but you probably deserve better.
I always enjoyed fake relationship story. This book included of course.
Madison is a snob, spoiled rich kid. Though i wouldnt say ‘spoiled’ after her past had reveal. But anyway, everything about her was money. She didnt seem to understand why she need to work or do anything when she has money to throw at people to work for her. Sherry, on the other hand, she is a hard working single mother who worked two jobs for her son, Jake.
This is a slow burn. I like how the story progress, their feeling developed for each other. With their personalities, they compliment each other well. I enjoyed the changed in Madison when Sherry came to her life. She becomes a better person and come to enjoy domesticity. And somehow I found their love-making scene is beautiful. o.o
I also like Rita Mae. I always like the book that have her type of character. You know, a character who look after and care about one of the MC and One or both of them can rely on him or her. And Jake, of course, he is a smart and understand kid. He’s adorable. And I also like Danielle. Though I would also like to see more of Janice, Madison’s lawyer and closest friend or best friend, I’m not sure, to show more in the book. But she only showed up twice or thrice? She seem like a funny character i think.
This is the second book I have read from this author (Hotline being the first) and I enjoyed it. It's not a new plot or anything mind blowing but it does prove the saying "money can't me love." Its cute story about Madison, a spoiled rich brat, and Sherry, a single hardworking mother. They strike a deal to pretend to be a family so Madison can get on her grandmother's good side and inherite everything. Madison is a womanizer. Sherry is heterosexual. You can figure the rest out I am sure. I liked the story because Madison is beyond flawed and so is Sherry. The chemistry works but it takes tome for them to get there. I liked it and with it being on Scribd it made it even easier to read.
Enjoyed it - little silly but I love this sort of thing. Good back characters and kept me entertained with the prerequisite number of tears. Thank you. Excellent 2nd time round!
“Contract for Love” is frequently hilariously funny, and features really wonderful narration.
MCs Sherry and Madison setup a fake relationship so that Madison’s rich grandmother won’t disinherit her because of her embarrassing partying and womanizing. Sherry had a difficult life, and slept once with Jimmy when she was lonely, and now is a single mom to Jake.
Sherry is likable, but for much of the book Madison is pretty arrogant and unpleasant as she waits for her grandmother to kick-the-bucket.
For the first 80% of the book, Madison is convinced Sherry is straight, and it isn’t until 65% that Sherry realizes she’s attracted to Madison, so yeah…slow slow burn without much communication.
The side characters are terrific, especially Rita Mae the snoring housekeeper.
While I love fake relationship stories, Madison annoyed me for too much of the book to really love this story. 3.7*
This is sweet fake relationships story. There some love from me for the simplicity of the story. This is a feel good romance with light atmosphere and beautifully written mc. You can only be satisfied with this book. Looking forward for Alison Grey book in the future.
This book is unavailable on KU. Kindle price USD9.99 Available on Scribd.
I had mixed nuts over this book. I liked some of the nuts but couldn't care much about the rest. I am a fan of fake relationship trope but due to some weird characterization i.e. Madison, her friends and her grandmother made me disliked it a lot. Sherry, she had so much potential, she'd basically raised herself, worked since she was 12, graduated from high school while she was pregnant and raised a perfect lil boy. I wanted her to have a bit more backbone and get on Madison's face for some of the things that she did/said. I wanted her to have more involvement in The Archer .. What's with the I wants? Maybe because I am listening to "I Want It That Way" by The Backstreet Boys as I'm typing this review.
ARC received from YLVA in return for an honest review.
I’ve read a few of Alison Grey’s short stories and was looking forward to reading a full length story by her. This was ok, but not great. The basic premise is one I usually enjoy, the fake relationship trope, but I didn’t really like this version of it. First because Madison is a really unlikeable character for about the first half of the book, and second because this is also the first fake relationship book I’ve read that involved a child, and I didn’t really buy that Sherry would involve her son (Jake) in a scheme destined to disapppoint him if it went as planned.
I liked Sherry more than Madison (involving Jake in the scheme not withstanding) and Madison’s cousin Danielle was also fairly well fleshed out and helped make Madison more sympathetic. Madison’s grandmother was a heartless bitch, which also somewhat explained Madison’s character flaws. Rita Mae seemed wasted here, only serving the purpose of having another adult around to look after Jake. Her reaction towards Sherry and Madison at the end of the book was also weird and somewhat surprising, and then just glossed over. The book didn’t actually need the character and probably would have been better without her.
There were also multiple editing errors (Sixteen’s instead of sixteenth, were instead of was, me instead of I) and missing words, which kept pulling me out of the story. I did like that there was no major angst between the two leads, they managed to resolve their issues by actually discussing them and being honest about what they wanted/expected, which was refreshing.
In all honesty though, even though I usually enjoy slow burns, I didn’t really feel any actual chemistry between these two characters, so I couldn’t really get into this one. It’s an ok read, but I had hoped for more. 3.5 stars, rounded down, because I can’t give it 4.
I need to say this upfront… I adored this book. Absolutely everything about it, I loved. Fake romance trope is my new favourite.
Madison hires Sherry to be her girlfriend to make sure she gets her inheritance from her grandmother who thinks Madison is nothing but a play and party girl. Sherry agrees as her son needs medical treatment and Madison has vowed to take care of her son, Jake.
I really didn’t like Madison to begin with, I thought she was nothing but a over privileged woman who never grew up but the more I read I realised she was a product of her very bad upbringing. Don’t get me wrong, that's not me being sympathetic, it's reality. Sometimes even the richest of people can be the loneliest and that was Madison. It really bugged me she used Jakes health to get Sherry to go along with her plan but as they spend time together I realised it had to happen this way for them to truly understand each others past and help one another grow.
As they began to fall in love I did too with them both. They really bonded as a couple and I think together were stronger than they were apart, even though it was fake.
I think this book is a really great read and it really struck a chord with me as a mum because I could understand Sherry’s feelings and thoughts often.
I still keep hoping that Alison Grey will extend Hot Line into a novel at some point… I mean the first 3-4 chapters are there already…
But anything else she writes I will definitely read.
Maybe the rating isn’t too realistic but since I REALLY ended up liking the book (after so many hit and misses lately) I had to give it 5 stars.*
It had it’s not-so-good moments and probably the biggest flaw is that it did feel a bit too short for something like this to develop but I still enjoyed it. It was cute and fluffy and I really love the family feels. I can’t get enough of these books and sadly there aren’t that many good ones with similar gxg-with-a-kid theme. But this one was good.
This is also the first book by the author that I’ve read and if all their books are like this - I’ll definitely keep reading them.
1/10 audio**
Honestly, I'm so sad to rate it this low. Originally, I wanted to listen to the audiobook. I tried three times but something about Emily Beresford's*** narration really didn't sit well with me and I had to stop the audio after about a minute. That's the reason I postponed reading it but I'm happy that in the end I read it (by myself).
* Really it’s probably more of a 4 star book (8/10).
** This is really just my subjective opinion and I can't pinpoint what was it about the narration I couldn't get past. Some may think this is one of the best narrations, who knows. Maybe I really compare all the narrators to Angela Dawe and, recently, to Melissa Moran, too.
*** I, also, wasn't a big fan of her narration in Just Married? by Natasha West but unlike this book, listening to that one was bearable.
A fake relationship/rich-poor story whose biggest strength lies in the charting of the protagonist's growth from selfish, womanizing heiress to self-aware and thoughtful friend/partner. I think the inner lives of both Madison and Sherry are well documented in this book, so that the ending feels earned and satisfying. The writer takes her time developing our understanding of the characters and their budding relationship.
Okay, so one thing I found distracting enough that it prevented me from fully enjoying this book is the portrayal of Sherry's best friend Rita Mae. I feel I have to say it: I think this character has a whiff of the "Mammy" stereotype about her - she seemed to have almost no function but to make things easier for our two leads.
But let's not talk about just her race. More often than not, the "best friend character" can be such a cliche in books. They're just there for comfort, advice, and tough love. They seem to have no life but to exist for our main characters. In this case, I'm sorry to say that Rita Mae falls into that overdone trope. I like that she's an older African-American woman but I think she wasn't fully thought through the way that some of the other supporting characters were (like Madison's cousin Danielle). I know this is a romance and romances aren't always realistic - particularly fake relationship stories - but with Rita Mae, the real world seeped in for me and I couldn't completely get past it.
3.25 stars - This is a typical faux-romance novel with a rich main protagonist who hires a woman to be her pretend girlfriend. Madison needs to clean up her act in order to get back in her grandmother’s good graces and get the inheritance she believes she deserves. And so, she hires Sherry, a mother who’s struggling to make ends meet. Madison have them moved in, without really taking a second to consider the implications. It took me a while to be able to stand Madison. She definitely grows by the end, so there’s that. And it gets a little easier to feel sympathy for her when you meet her grandmother. I also felt there wasn’t a lot of chemistry between her and Sherry.
While I personally don't think this brought anything new to the table, it was still an enjoyable read and well written. I’ll definitely read more from this author.
Madison is a complete ass at the beginning of this story, but watching her transformation into a caring woman was wonderful. Sherry and her son Jake help Madison see what having a family means and she wants that so much she will risk her grandmother’s wrath. It’s a very slow burn romance and they do come together it’s an inferno. Great story with a lot of life lessons. What would you risk for money. Emily Beresford did a great job narrating this book.