RECEIVED A COPY IN A GOOD-READS GIVEAWAY
There were many things I enjoyed about this book but there were things I didn't as well. This story is about seeing beyond the outside of a person and looking inside to who they really are, and what made them this way. I enjoyed getting to see the characters' younger lives before getting into the present timeline. This allowed me to form a deeper connection with the characters.
On the note of connecting with characters, I can say that there are very many. We follow many, many different characters through this book, and at times I found it hard to keep track. There were even times when a single chapter would follow 3 different character's perspectives. I found this to be confusing.
I also would like to say that the synopsis and genres for this book weren't well chosen. I would have liked to have known that this book revolved around sports, specifically football. I know practically nothing about the game and so I found a lot of the story confusing or uninteresting. I would have to stop reading to look up definitions for football terms and it was quite irritating.
Almost every chapter had some sort of flashback and I I found it very annoying, confusing, and not needed. It was hard to keep track of what time point we were at. I also had a problem with the fact that there would be a conversation and I would know who was the one talking. This happened because a lot of the time dialogue wasn't followed by a dialogue tag.
This book also uses many plot devices. There were times where the author pulled something out of thin air, something that had not been mentioned before, and used it as a huge shock moment. The shock was really just disbelief because there had been no context that a certain thing was coming.
There would also be foreshadowing where the narrator literally told us what was going to happen and then went on to tell the story right after. Why couldn't we have read it? Why were we just told?
I also didn't particularly like the way everything wrapped up.
[SPOILERS AHEAD]
It felt abrupt and everything that had been a conflict or problem during the entire story was just washed clean. There was no explanation of how or why the character now didn't have a problem they had since childhood. EVER SINGLE character, no matter how small, had a happy ending. Everything was wrapped in a bow and so now they were going to live a 'perfect' life.
Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the book, but there were many things that could have been done better. More original aspects and less plot conveniences could have been used. Even with everything, I'm glad I read it.