This is bad because of the potential lost. This could've been a pretty cool series if the writing and plot had gotten more thought put into them, but as it is the writing kills this book. It's bland, boring and flat. The characters get no depth, the descriptions are nowhere to be found, the dialogue is like barely stuff that people would say, there are character inconsistencies, a lack of originality- it could've been different enough from Eragon if it had tried. But it didn't.
So there's a prologue that's useless as usual, the characters there are never mentioned again and we didn't need to see that scene, in fact I'm still confused as to how that ties in with the rest of the story. Like, these 2 dudes are running away from an empire, find dragons and one bonds with a baby dragon, end. I don't even know if that dude became the founder of the Dragonia empire, or if it existed before and he created the resistance instead, or if it's totally unrelated and he was just a dude who bonded with a dragon.
Let's talk about the characters. There's like, 3 main ones that are all barely anything you can call a character. The best example is Devarius. We first meet him when he's leading away this band of 29 people to find the Resistance- CAN PEOPLE START CALLING IT SOMETHING ELSE AAAHHH- and I'm still baffled at how nonsensical his character is. It's like the author knew you need characters to emote and grow and stuff, but not that they need to be consistent with their personality and backstory. Devarius' backstory is that his family was all killed by the IRS and his sister was kidnapped. Then a few years later the dragonriders came and were about to genocide the entire town bc they thought resistance members were there. So Devarius convinced 28 people to come with him to the resistance. The story about his family we learn it well after we've met him and his friends, and even the village thing seems barely like a problem for anyone here.
Like, the 2 other important characters are Paedyn and Aquila, and until the actual last chapters, we only learn that Paedyn was Devarius' oldest friend. Until that, it's like these characters had no history together despite living in the same village. They never acknowledge or reminisce about anything, including the fact that their entire village and families were annihilated. Except Devarius shedding one tear when talking about his family, no one has an emotional reaction to what happened and is happening. They act like Aquila and Devarius have some deeper emotional bond that we're somehow privy about which, we are not. It's just obvious they're going to end up together bc of their incredibly unsubtle dialogue and the fact that she's like the only other named character we see Devarius talk to.
Yeah about that, the fact that we never get any names for people that aren't the MCs or important characters (except one scene in the beginning) is ridiculously bad worldbuilding. They have a party of 29 but change it to only Devarius, Aquila, Paedyn and Dasyra and nothing changes. Their numbers don't force them to do anything, the other 25 don't matter in the slightest in the overall story. Like Devarius's family members never get names until they become relevant.
Talking about worldbuilding, the writing again kills any feeling of immersion. It's just so simple and basic, "They were in a big forest with mountains in the distance." Nothing about the smells, the feel, the temperature, the exhaustion, the noises, the weight of the trek they've traveled. Nah, it's all just this to that and then this. We never get to explore these characters, the world or anything- which is why I think this is a first draft, that's when you write everything down as fast as you can and then you add details, but editing is hard I get it.
And yeah it doesn't help that this is incredibly reminiscent of Eragon. Devarius gets a blue dragon, he almost calls her Sapphire, they end up talking telepathically, they bond, they hide in a mountain running away from an empire of dragons... like come on. Also the dragon talk is absolutely horrible, she doesn't even get "" these or italics, her dialogue is just on the same level as a paragraph, it was the saddest most annoying thing I'd ever seen.
And the characters, as flat as they are, still manage to be weirdly inconsistent sometimes. Take the resistance captain. When Devarius gets his wyvern, he insists he spend time with her to bond, but when Devarius starts showing deeper trust and understanding of her, the captain is like "don't let this thing fly away" and refuses to call her by her name or "her". It didn't really work? Either he thinks they're dumb animals or he thinks there's something else there. Then Devarius gets really weird in the middle when he gets this really out of place Karate kid training, he starts getting angry at dumb things when he'd never shown that before, like it could've worked had he gotten anything for character development but as it is it was jarring, like this is what makes you upset? Have to train, not your whole village being wiped out? Oh and the worst thing- you only learn his motivation at like 80-85% of the book- he wants to save his sister, the one that was kidnapped. I mean... ok? She was mentioned only one before, without a name. Sure made me care.
Also they try to have racism and it was so bad? Like the 29 people walk into a village and people start giving certain people dark looks. They figure out they're racist bc the only ones they're glaring at are the dark skinned bozos. Which is, for one, impressive, you can exactly see who someone is glaring at in a group of nearly thirty all together, and two, no. They would prolly be glaring at the pale bozos too for hanging out with the darker bozos. And they still get a ton of rooms in the tavern and shit, the racism literally hindered nothing at all, so why was it there.
I liked the wyverns tho. The powers were super simple but I liked the way they were explained and how they behaved, that was cool.
So yeah really wasn't good. I would've enjoyed it if the writing had been something, anything, bc I love dragons but as it is I don't know who this is for and why read this instead of other, better books out there.