TW: abuse, violence, rape, slavery, suicide, racism, slut-shaming
Unpopular Opinion Time 🐸☕️
Actual rating: 1.5 ⭐️
Boy oh boy. Grab some sugar because this Rather Random Review™️ is gonna be salty AF and you'll have to balance all this out with some sweetness.
For as much as I appreciated the discussion around internal slavery, and I liked the fact that one of the two main characters was bi, I personally thought this book wasn't great.
Actually, I really hated this book, if I have to be completely honest.
So here I am. Dragging it.
Characters and Relationships:
So. Aminah and Wurche, eh? Man, these two were the definition of two-dimensional characters.
They were childish, their personality was not flashed out and their actions were irrational.
I get that they were teens but...I mean, the things they do are always dictated by some "strange force" that pushed them to do something. Bitch, where's the logic in all that? But what's worse is the fact that this "strange force" popped up during the most ridiculous scenarios - not even during the important scenes! For example, at one point, Aminah offers Moro to help him building a new hut and the narration basically goes "I don't know why I did it. A strange force possessed me". Mmmm...dude, you just offered your help, you didn't do anything groundbreaking 🙄 They sounded so childish because of that. Their reasonings were all based on emotions and love and that was just stupid.
And as I mentioned love. I mean, there are basically three (if not, arguably, four) love stories in this book and WOULD YOU BELIEVE that all four were based on insta-love?! Because I sure as fuck was not willing to believe my own two eyes.
All relationships are based on ONE single look and BOOM, they're in love. Yeah, no. I'm not about that life. There was absolutely no build-up. No tension. No will-they-won't-they. Everything was immediate and hallow.
You know what else was hallow? Well, my dear, the two main characters themselves. Yes.
Aminah is painfully naive and innocent. In the first chapter is mentioned that she'd love to sell shoes like her father and travel the world but...these interests are mentioned ONCE and then that's it? She has no quirks nor particularities that could strike the readers and make them think "well, Aminah sure is somebody special!" Nope. She's just beautiful. Oh so beautiful. And that's it.
Wurche is not innocent either. She keeps on saying that she'd love to be part of the political world but she knows absolutely nothing about anything. Zero, nada, il vuoto più assoluto, rien de rien. All the things she knows and mentions are told by other people and she just parrots them and shows off. She's impulsive and selfish. She does not participate in the world that she'd love to be a part of - the world of politics - and what is worse is that she doesn't even try to be. She just complains that people aren't letting her do the things she wants.
Both of them, I couldn't stand for the life of me 😩
All men are trash, tbh. Every single one of them but Dramani. Dramain was a small, innocent child that has to be protected. But that's it.
Also the familiar bounds were lacking. During the first chapters it feels like Aminah's family is incredibly important to her but the more the story goes forward, the more they become irrelevant and forgotten. Also, the story of the twins, the father and the mothers were too easily tied up with unsatisfactory and unclear endings that just left a bad taste in my mouth.
The plot and writing style:
Nothing much to say about these two aspects apart from the fact that I was not a fan.
The writing style felt completely disjointed and sometimes there were some immense gaps between two paragraphs that just didn't make sense. Or, even worse, you were happily reading about something, then OUT OF THE BLUE, another topic/scene/thought would pop up for three lines, and then BAM, back where we were before. For example, there's a scene in which Aminah is cooking and describing the food and then BAM, random thought about the caravans and then BAM, back to the cooking. It was just confusing and made the story not flow effortlessly. Quite the opposite. Keeping things straight was a challenge. And that's also because the writing style was too heavy on the descriptions. It felt like it was trying to be poetic and whimsical, but failed miserably.
The plot itself was also just a hot mess.
And that's because there are too many important topics that the author wanted to tackle. The final result is that nothing is approached or analysed properly and everything fell short.
It wanted to be a feminist book - through the characters of Aminah and Wurche and their (non existent) friendship - but it didn't deliver because the characters themselves were not feminists and didn't interact with each other not even for the lols.
It wanted to be a book about war and politics but it didn't deliver because these two topics were just barely mentioned and tackled.
It wanted to be a comment about slavery and how bad that is but it didn't deliver because it didn't bring anything new to the discussion.
It wanted to be a book about friendship and family but it didn't deliver because both were easily forgotten and brushed aside.
Basically, this book wanted to be lots of things, but got to be none.
And the ending felt ridiculously rushed and just underwhelming.
I am sorry if this is your favourite book and I dragged it through the mud and back. But I honestly really hated it. Appreciated the African setting, but that was literally the only thing I liked.