Interesting Premise Handled With A Lacking Execution
I have to be honest here. After reading the synopsis, this thriller seemed to offer an interesting reading experience.
However, as the pages went by, all I was offered had been an underwhelming narrative chained by illogical choices when it came to further developing the story.
What are the most important elements of a murder mystery? The graphic depictions of the murders, the looming mystery of the one who could be behind them, and most important of all, THE MOTIVE.
This thriller failed in each of those elements. The problem with the murders announced by the deliveries of organs is the laughable execution with a reaction from our protagonist who is more annoyed than shaken with each organ that arrives at his desk. The reveal of the murderer is also quite underwhelming to the point that it doesn't make any sort of impact on the reader because the one behind the killings is only briefly mentioned in a line or two through the entirety of the narrative up to that point. What should I say about the motive? While it does offer an explanation for the murders, the reader is not hinted to it before so that a connection could have been made which would make the motive at least a little more impactful rather than the one offered in such a manner that leaves you sighing while whispering, "Sure, we got the reason."
In conclusion, the "Organ Donor" offers an interesting premise which pulls you into purchasing this book. However, beneath the well-designed cover is a story handled with a lacking execution, leaving you sighing in defeat as to how better it could have truly been rather than the experience offered.