I can’t even tell you how excited I was to get this book from NetGalley - I loved the first Compass Cove story, which was my first Jeannie Moon book. I loved her writing so much I immediately read three more, and loved them as well. So I had high hopes for You Send Me. However, there’s always a certain amount of trepidation going into a highly anticipated book, and this book is the reason why…
Jordan Velsor is a first grade teacher with deep family roots in Compass Cove. She lost her mother at a young age, and now her father is terminally ill. Less than a year ago she broke off her engagement the day before the wedding because she caught her fiancé with his secretary. She’s doing fine now, but you could say she’s got a lot on her plate at the moment, emotionally speaking.
Dr. Nick Rinaldi is back in Compass Cove, recovering from gunshot wounds he received while serving with the Navy in Afghanistan. He is almost completely healed, but isn’t sure where he’s going in life now that his military career is over. When he discovers his next door neighbor standing on the porch, in the pouring rain, in the middle of the night, about to cough out her lungs, his physician instincts take over and he becomes determined to make sure she gets better. One thing leads to another, and they end up telling people they are in a serious relationship.
You Send Me started off a little slow, but I wasn’t too concerned because I remember thinking the same thing about Then Came You (Compass Cove #1). But then it continued to move at a snail’s pace, caused mostly by Jordan’s continual pondering about Nick’s hot body. Too much ruminating about whether or not she had it in her to try to have a relationship with Nick after things went so disastrously with her ex-fiancé continued the slow pace and uneventful plot. But I held out hope that things would get better.
Then the lackluster writing continued, littered with tired, cliched sayings about the hero - like he’s a panty-dropper and has ovary-popping charm. I don’t know about you, but having your panties drop sounds embarrassing, and an ovary popping sounds painful and not like a good thing.
While reading this book, I had an epiphany. Books where the main conflict is the character’s own thoughts and feelings really bug the crap out of me. Give me something REAL. Give me a man who has lost his wife and is afraid to love a woman who has cancer. Give me a woman who lost her first husband to a gang shooting and doesn’t want to be in a relationship with a man who still has ties to a gang. Those are REAL reasons not to be involved with someone. If Nick had been some big playboy, maybe I could see Jordan’s hesitation. But in this book we have two perfectly nice people and the reason why they don’t want to get involved with the other is because of themselves. Not because of something about the other person. And it irritated me!!!
Also, I’m not a fan of the fake relationship trope. I can think of only one book with that plot that I really liked (The Catching Kind by Bria Quinlan). Otherwise there’s too much “I love him/her but they don’t feel the same about me” and it gets tiresome. Sometimes the fake-relationship trope can be played for laughs, with things spiraling out of control before the couple can reign things in. And I think maybe that’s what the author was trying for, having all kinds of Nick’s relatives appear in town, but it wasn’t really funny. None of it was funny.
Another thing I had an issue with is the characterizations. The good doctor is called a “take-charge alpha Navy officer” - because apparently anyone who’s in the military MUST be an alpha. Look, if you’re gonna call a guy an alpha, he needs to actually act alpha. Being a “bossy” doctor and telling you what you need to do - or not do - so you can heal from pneumonia is NOT being alpha (it's called treating a patient), and I’m tired of authors throwing that term around because it’s the “in” thing right now.
My excitement about this book slowly disappeared with each passing chapter and never recovered from the pit of disappointment. Even a decent last 10 percent wasn’t able to pull my rating up. There’s not much worse than having a highly anticipated book fall so devastatingly flat. I have loved every other book of Jeannie Moon’s that I’ve read, but this one I could barely finish (and even read two other books between starting and finishing - it's never a good sign if I can be diverted in the middle of a book). It had no heart. It had no charm. It had cliched, overused phrases and too much about how hawt they made each other - it’s like Ms. Moon forgot how to write a good plot so she filled in with all kinds of talk about pecs (and other body parts). I began to wonder if maybe I mis-remembered how good Ms. Moon’s previous books were - because you know, sometimes your tastes change and your reading standards evolve. But after I finished this book, I went back and skimmed the previous books and no...this one really does seem like it was written by a different person. I was feeling bad about what I felt the rating should be for this book, but after the re-reads it just confirmed how much I didn’t care for the writing in You Send Me.
I know not every book by a beloved author is going to be my next favorite. But it doesn’t stop me from being so incredibly disappointed when one doesn’t land anywhere close to what I was expecting. I will still be waiting anxiously for the next book in this series, but next time you can be sure I’ll be managing my expectations a little better.
* thank you to NetGalley and Tule Publishing for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review