Plot 3/5
This is without a doubt intended to be read as more of a "big picture" type of story. Rather than honing in on one particular perspective, the narration constantly switches its point of view, trying to incorporate various plots that are all intertwined around the oncoming war. Now this isn't a bad strategy for a war story. My main issue with the story's structure, however is that the first half of the book reads less like the action-packed war story I was expecting and more like a casual-paced slice of life. While the "spread thin and far" can make for a good war story, for a slice of life it comes off as slow, shallow, and not as interesting as it could've been. The story picks up about half-way through the book once the war actually starts. In fact, the second half almost feels rushed in some places, such as in the first battle which turned into more of a flashback than an intense in-the-moment experience. But getting to those more desirable fast-paced action scenes was a real slog of a read and I think most of that first half could've been cut without the reader losing any context to the plot.
Characters 2/5
This was my least favorite aspect of the book. Now don't get me wrong, I like some of the characters (dragons and the witches), so it's not that I think the characters are necessarily unlikable, so much as that they were flat and one-dimensional. This stems from a couple different issues: the most obvious of which being there's way too many. Too many different perspectives often switching between them with no coherent reason. Too many mentioning of names without context on who they are aside from maybe a title to a point where it gets hard to keep track of who's who a part from the main characters. And even in the case of the main characters I feel like we only grazed the surface rather than getting to dive below the depths. Also, because I enjoy my romance, I have to say that the feeble attempt at adding romance was just flat out terrible in terms of execution. Like a cheesy and kiddish 'hero always gets the girl' situation and I think the story would've been better off without it. It really made me dislike Relkin. Well that in addition to him being some kind of 'chosen one of the prophesy' thing which the story also would've been better off without as it's basically pointing out the fact that Relkin has 'plot armor' just in case it wasn't obvious enough.
Setting 4/5
The setting, on the other hand, I feel is this story's strength. Many of the descriptions of the environment were vivid and detailed enough to captivate my attention. The fantasy world is interesting enough to at least encourage me to finish the book, even though I didn't care much about the shallowness of the characters. I especially liked the lore surrounding the witches and their society. I honestly think they could've had their own stand-alone story as I feel they managed to steal the spotlight from the dragons at times. Though I do think the dragons are interesting, too ... once again I just feel the presentation of them could've been executed better.
Overall 3/5
This was my first Bazil Broketail book (didn't realize it was part of a series when I picked it up) and while I wouldn't say I didn't get any pleasure from reading it, I don't think I'll be actively trying to pick up more of this series. At the same time, if I happen to stumble upon a used copy for a low enough price, I would be willing to read more in the hopes that they are a little more consistent in terms of pacing, structure, and focuses more on the main characters, which is just my personal preference as opposed to the "big and shallow" stories. As it is though I think there's too many obvious issues and annoying cliches that I wouldn't want to recommend this particular book to anyone.