His term of service to Lord Rishdah now complete, Aiden returns to his home in Braeton. As he travels he hears rumors that trouble plagues Braeton. Clan Canich is being attacked from within. He arrives, determined to save his father, his brothers, and his Clan from the treachery of one man.
A year has passed since the Calorins were driven from Aredor and Corin is struggling to rebuild his country. Despite the peace, a fear haunts him that the Calorins aren’t far away. The Hawk Flight takes to the forest again to defend the borders against a possible attack from the neighboring country of Durna and its Calorin ally.
As Aiden and Corin struggle to adapt to their new lives they know one thing for certain - war is coming to the North!
Claire M. Banschbach also writes as C.M. Banschbach.
Claire M. Banschbach is a native West Texan. She discovered a deep and abiding love for fantasy and science fiction at a young age, prompting her to begin exploring worlds armed only with an overactive imagination and a pen. She's an overall dork, pizza addict, and fangirl. She enjoys meshing stories of family and faith with healthy doses of action and adventure. She talks to fictional characters more than she should while trying to find time for all their stories. She currently resides in Arlington, TX where she works as a Pediatric Physical Therapist.
Ooh, hard one to rate! Don’t let my low(ish) rating (3.5 stars) stop you from picking up this novel; The Wildcat of Braeton really was quite an impressive book…set in the middle of a well-done, fascinating, non-magic fantasy world, and brimming with great characters.
It follows The Rise of Aredor and continues the grand adventures of Aiden and Corin, and all their friends and loved ones. There’s epic battles, wonderful friendships, and endearing romance. The quest to guard Aredor continues as both Corin and Aiden rise to new heights and responsibilities in their lives.
I did really enjoy it, truly. It is probably not exactly my style book though. I would recommend it more to boys 12/13 or so and on up. And also, girls with more Claire Banschbach’s taste! Some portions of The Wildcat of Braeton just didn’t capture me as much as an epic, gorgeous fairytale would, you know, ;-) But for the most part, I really liked this tale. I found myself wanting to return to Corin and Aiden and see where things would go next. Their lives intrigued me. Their fight for their homeland stirred my patriotic side, :-)
Since this book is titled for Aiden, I shall mention his family a bit. So the Clans, (including the Braetons), were really fascinating. I almost feel like the idea of these group of people was taken from Scottish ancestry or something of that sort. In any case, their traditions and lifestyle charmed me, :-) Loved the dancing, the bards, and the songs! So fun.
I will say again, I felt Claire’s world building was quite well-done. It has the feel of being thought-out and all. So that was great. I was inspired by the world of The Rise of Aredor and The Wildcat of Braeton. And Claire has definitely found her writing style/flow. I didn’t notice any choppiness in this book. It all came together very nicely!
And we get some romance this time! ;-) :-) Some friendships developed into something more, and there were a few sweet kisses and moments. Some words of love exchanged. I was happy to see more of the girl characters and explore a bit of their thoughts, feelings, and adventures.
There isn’t very much of a faith element. We have some talk of singing the dead off to Lleu’s Halls or something to that sort; and other little mentions of Lleu. A few Clan-traditions/folk-lore kind of thoughts scattered throughout as well.
As I mentioned above, there were some endearing kisses exchanged as for romance. All sweet, :-) There’s some talk of cursing and rough(er) bantering between friends. Also, there’s frequent mentions of ale/drinks.
But, after enjoying the story for a while…then we start getting to the heart-rending parts. Be warned, fellow readers, your heart will be (utterly) crushed a time or two. As for me, I like that “happily ever after” fairytale ending feel most of the time, so it was really hard for me to come to grips with certain happenings of The Wildcat of Braeton. And the ending was…different. I’ve read one other book, I believe, with that sort of ending; it leaves me with a bit of a surreal feeling. I haven’t decided if I’m okay with it or not yet, lol! ;-) So there is some sorrow in this book that my girly, fairytale-ish self had a very hard time holding up under. That would be the reason for cutting off a half of star from the rating I wanted to give.
But overall, I really liked The Wildcat of Braeton! A chance to explore Aiden/Emeth’s story and journey along more with Corin as well. Just the last bit left me floundering. :-p Here’s what I suggest. Read The Rise of Aredor and also give The Wildcat of Braeton a try. We have a fantastic writer here and wonderful non-magic fantasy. :-) You can see if the story elements are more to your taste than my personal preferences!
I received a proof copy of The Wildcat of Braeton from the author in exchange for my honest review.
Shh, leave me alone. I need to stop sobbing before I can gather my thoughts to review this. It might be awhile.
UPDATE: Okay, I'm *mostly* fine now. ;)
This book. While I do have a few critiques, I REALLY loved this book! Let's start with what I didn't like and get it out of the way.
The writing was a bit all-over. There wasn't really a main storyline, more like a bunch of storylines all spread throughout, some major ones even being wrapped up in the first 30% of the book. While it didn't bother me too much, and I enjoyed each of the storylines, I can see how it would annoy some people. POV Changes. Okay, I think this was my biggest problem with this book. There were rapid POV changes throughout the entire book, jumping from the main character Corin to the other main character Aiden, then to Kara, to Martin, to Adulwulf, to Ranulf, etc. It made the story rather difficult to follow and left me wondering "Wait, whose head am I in right now?"
What I liked: I simply ADORE the character of Aiden! Cheeky, cocky, kind, tender-hearted, loyal, he's just the best! I often found myself smiling as I compared him to my brothers.
I also liked the inner-struggles portrayed in this book. That wasn't really something that was touched very deeply in the last book, and I liked the inclusion of more personal struggles, as opposed to the outer struggles, such as war, battles, etc.
I LOVED the shipping that went on in this book! :D So cute! I love how Amaura and Queen Elain kept trying to set Corin up. XD And everybody teasing Aiden about Rona . . . so hilarious and real-life.
I also loved the addition of the character of Gwilym. He is so cute! And after a certain something happens (I won't tell you what) . . . Oh my heart! Claire did a wonderful job portraying him! His actions and speech was so realistic.
Another thing I really liked was the way the violence was portrayed. This book is practically a compilation of numerous battles, and I liked how the author didn't describe the gore in detail. She described just enough so you understood clearly what was happening, but not to much that it was unsettling. Also, I liked the compassion the she gave the characters. Corin and Darrin and Aiden and those people didn't just kill for the fun of it, or out of vengeance and heartlessness. I appreciated how the characters weren't just out for wild, random, merciless slaughter.
One of the things that Claire proverbially nailed was the humor. Oh my word! I was laughing out loud a good portion of the time. It worked really well to combat the seriousness of the rest of the story. I adored the relationships between the men of Corin's warband. The teasing and comradery was so fun! I also loved the running gag between the men about waking Corin up. XD SO SO funny!
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And the ending, wow! Heart-wrenchingly wonderful! I tried vainly to keep my tears in check. It was quite tragic, and very unexpected! I really liked the epilogue, it wrapped each person's storylines up so well, and brought perfect completion to the story. Although, I almost wish the epilogue was left off and there was a third book. I still really want a third book!!!!
And can we just rant about the cover art for a bit here? It is amazing! I love it! It fully portrays the story PERFECTLY! Love it.
Overall, WOW! I loved this book and I think it is something I will come back to again and again.
Like The Rise of Aredor, this book is written in an epic, build-up style of writing. It takes a long time building the characters, building the threat, building the culture, before everything explodes in the climax. The character problems adjusting to their new lives gives enough drama to keep the reader hooked all the way until the end.
I loved connecting with Aiden and Corin again. After so long in Calorin, both of these main characters struggle with the adjustment of returning home and reconnecting with the families they'd lost.
I grew to love all the characters, then the end ripped my heart out. Can't really say more than that.
Like the first one, this isn't an overt Christian fantasy. There are some references to Lleu, and talk of life after death, but it is very scattered. In this way, it feels more like an epic fantasy in the vein of Lord of the Rings, where the Christian aspect comes from the heroic values held by the characters.
Overall, it's a clean, epic story that would appeal to readers looking for an adventure.
I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. All opinions expressed in this review are my own.
The Wildcat of Braeton is definitely a step up from The Rise of Aredor. I certainly liked it better. While it still doesn't make it to my favorites, it is enough for me to continue following this author's career.
Writing: 4/5
It felt better written than the last book, certainly. There's still more telling than showing, and the character point of view could be deeper, but there was less head hopping and the story was much easier for me to follow. Claire has certainly improved between books.
Setting: 4/5
The worldbuilding is expanded upon in this book. You get to see what Braeton is like. It reminded me of the Scottish Highlands as portrayed in Little House: The Martha Years. I always loved those books, so being able to draw that connection was a definite plus. It feels like a real world, and I like it.
Plot: 4/5
I liked this storyline much better than that of the first book. Aiden finally leaves Calorin to go home to Braeton. He had some difficulties with his family prior to running away, so fixing those relationships and fitting back into a very different culture from the one he has lived in for so long is an important part of the story. Also, Corin has trouble fitting into his old life. He doesn't really like being a prince. And the guys start finding girls. :) The threat of war hangs over them for most of the book, but battles don't happen until the climax, which is just where I like it. There are deaths, though, which, well, I didn't like them--at all--but at least it isn't as bad as Mockingjay. The story structure could still use some work. The plot line kind of rambles rather than following traditional story structure, as far as I could tell. Still, I liked the story.
Character Development: 4/5
In the last book, I felt like I was watching a group of close friends. In this book, I felt like I was on the outer edge of the inner circle. Certainly an improvement. Deep character point of view would make these characters fantastic because, while they are well developed, they are still a little difficult to connect to. That being said, the deaths in the battle did certainly affect me. I was sad. Very sad. They did feel like somewhat pointless deaths, but I guess it is kind of unrealistic for that many characters to survive the battle. I have to say goodbye to the characters before I know them as well as I would like, but I do wish I could know them better in later books. (The epilogue kind of seems to indicate that this is the end of the Aredor/Braeton books, at least for these characters.)
The Wildcat of Braeton was a good book. I enjoyed it and do recommend it.
This was great!!! I loved seeing all these characters again and meeting new characters that were just as fantastic.
Aiden has finished his seven years of service to Lord Rishdah. He stays a little longer, but then knows he must head home…to Braeton. He is frightened. He does not know how his family will receive him after running away so long ago. Even more important, is the troubling news he hears of Clan Canich. Someone is slowly taking control of his clan, from the inside. He has to save them all before it’s too late. Meanwhile, Corin is struggling to rebuild his country from the Calorin War a year before and to take on the responsibilities as leader of the warbands. While all this is hard, he has a nagging fear that rumors begin to affirm: war is coming to Aredor.
So…we get to see a lot more of Aiden (known as Emeth in the first book) which was so sweet. I loved meeting his bothers! I love the Braetons’ accent. Ranulf was the oldest. He was wise, had a bit of a temper, and was such a leader. Will was adventurous and most like Aiden. Tam was the youngest and was a amazing bard. He was quiet, caring, and shy. Rona was a orphan. Kind and not made for war, though she knew how to fight. She was stubborn and brave. Now let’s talk about some Aredorians. Corin changed. He had to take responsibilities as a leader, and as much as he hated it, he still did it. It meant a lot of paperwork. He fell in love and it was perfect. Martin, didn’t play as big as a part as he had in the first book, but almost every part he was in was hilarious. His humor is the best. Mera, Martin’s sister, was the sweetest. She worried her poor little self to death. But so was brave and full of strength. There were so many great characters, but I won’t go through them all.
This was exciting and intense in many moments. There was action, but not as much as the first book. In this one, the focus felt more on developing and growing the characters. Many of them fell in love and I desperately wanted them to be together, while worrying which ones would die in some battle. The battles were always thrilling. Some people lived; some people died. Though it was very sad at times, in a way, it was realistic.
The writing was much better in this one. It was not choppy at all. Though I will say that there were still moments when it seemed like the stories switched point of views randomly. But it totally flowed smoother and was better written.
So, I’d recommend this to teens and up. Don’t hesitate. This was a really good book and I definitely should not have waited so long to read it.
I got this book from the author in exchange for my honest review.
I don't automatically give points to a book just because the author takes the daring step of killing off characters. There's a right way and a wrong way to arrange deaths. Fortunately, Claire Banschbach knows how to destroy lives with skill and sensitivity.
Yes, of course I mean FICTIONAL lives and deaths. Though I did feel a little destroyed myself once I'd finished...but in a good way.
You have to understand that I haven't quite recovered from this book yet, even though it's been a few months since I read it. The point is, while Banschbach does not pull any punches, the heart-wrenching twists in this conclusion to the story begun in The Rise of Aredor feel earned. And there are still plenty of light-hearted moments to balance out the darker scenes, plus all the great world-building and adventure that made the first book so enjoyable. I'm very glad that The Wildcat of Braeton had high stakes and big repercussions. It made the story as a whole feel more meaningful. I've said many times that endings are hard to write, but this one is magnificent. My favorite books are those which make miss spending time with the characters once I'm finished, and this is definitely one of those titles.
Whelp. I have some mixed feelings here, though I don't think they are bad.
I GREATLY appreciated the humor in this story! Though we had some humor in book one, it felt much more prominent in this one, which I am very thankful for. Thanks to a few friends, I already knew the ending would be a tear-jerker and they were in fact right. Remembering those snarky comments and general laughter helped eased some of the pain, but at the same time made it worst.
Confession: I might have skimmed some of the "peaceful" parts because I was so hooked on the battle. LOL! I don't mean that in a mean way, but I totally understand when Corian and Aiden say that it's hard to transition.
Overall, a very good series and loved seeing our strong heroes reunite. If you enjoy high action with little romance, yet some snarky brotherhood that leaves you smiling along as you read, be sure to give this series a try.
*(I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts expressed are my own and was not required to write a positive review.)*
This book is amazing!!!! Ah, i just love Corin! :) And Aiden. :) For those of you who have not read this series read it right now!! ;) But do NOT read the Epilogue AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! *Sobbing* The whole book was totally amazing one of my favorite books, but the epilogue was just so sad! :(But still read the book. If you don't like sad endings don't read the epilogue. Well I thought it was really sad but some people might like it. :) But all in all it was totally amazing!! :D
I personally liked this better than Book 1 in the series. It still took me a few chapters to get into it, but I loved reconnecting with the characters from Rise of Aredor. Just like Aredor, this book is filled with battles and oppressors. Claire does a good job depicting battle scenes (for my preference) -- not too much gore but just enough details for you to understand what's going on and feel the heat and excitement.
For about the first half, I had a hard time keeping characters straight because there were so many -- and a couple of the characters from Aredor had name or position changes. Also, several of the characters were similar in character and speech (not enough distinguishing features), so I had to stop and think, "Now which one is this?"
At the same time, there were a few characters that took their shape nicely and were stand-alone. (Martin. Tam.) Also, relationships were progressing and, as the story continued, I found myself enjoying the balance of battles and character plots. There is more romance in this book, but it is not heavily emotional (e.g. if there is a kiss, it is more stated "he leaned and kissed her" rather than focusing on their emotions of how this kiss affected them).
Warriors and children! Ah! I thoroughly enjoyed these parts of the story. Especially towards the end between a specific warrior and child. But I shan't divulge names.
The last battle ... wow. Talk about a swirl of events and emotions! Half of me was like, "Yay, this is so realistic!" and the other half was, "But... but... _________ can't die!!!!" Well done.
Again, things related to religion, death, and heaven were a bit strange to me. I won't rehash what I wrote in my review of Aredore, but many similar things were in this book.
Overall, this was a very interesting two-book series and I enjoyed them.
*I received this book from the author in exchange of my honest review*
I enjoyed reading this book. I had some difficulty with sorting out the different characters at first. As I got to know the characters better, I really felt like I was in the story, which is great! I would not recommend this book for younger kids because of the description of the battle scenes, but overall it was a great story and a good read. I look forward to reading more books by this author. Oh, and I really like the front cover!
I received a free e-copy of this book as part of a promotion in exchange for an honest review.
It is one thing, to write one book. Incredibly difficult, and well worth the time, but many writers wear themselves and their ideas out on the first one. Others, are filled with the insatiable need to keep writing. This sequel felt like it came from a writer who had suddenly discovered the monster inside; the beast that thirsts for words, sentences, paragraphs...all full of character development, subplots and a worrisome amount of conflict.
The reading was a lot smoother in this one, and I can almost pinpoint the moment where I felt it- Banschbach hit her stride running at one point and never lost her footing after. It's only uphill from here, folks.
After reading The Rise of Aredor, I was really looking forward to getting into the mind of Aidan (aka Emeth). His character seemed to be one of the most well-rounded, fleshed out, alive contributions to book 1.
I was a bit disappointed that we didn't get more backstory on him, I really, really wanted to know more about the friend he lost before joining the Phoenix Guard. Throughout both books, we get tantalizing bits about the original Emeth, but never a full accounting of the events leading up to and directly following his untimely death. Perhaps a short story is in order to cover this?
Banschbach seemed to go deeper into her characters this time around, and really delve into who they were, at their core. It was nice to become better acquainted with what makes them tick, and that element succeeded in helping me care all the more for their welfare.
I spent quite a bit of the book wishing that the female characters were allowed to do more. I have been spoiled by Tamora Pierce books, where the female characters are often leading the charge into battle. As a forward thinking, yet somewhat practical person, I can acknowledge that woman can learn to fight, have some disadvantages (biologically speaking) to men, and throughout history have been treated as the weaker sex (rather than as the fairer sex-which, clearly, is the more appropriate term here ;) ).
All that being said, I was still waiting, wishing, hoping, that one of these young women would take up the sword and get to defending their homeland. Banschbach made me regret that. No spoilers, but if you find yourself wishing the same thing while reading this book, just remember: I warned you.
Speaking of the women, Kara was a joy in this one. I loved that she got more 'screen-time' in this sequel, and wished for more backstory and character development for the young Braeton. She livened up most scenes, and could probably fill an entire sequel with her continued adventures.
One of my main complaints of the first novel was that there seemed to be no gravity to the situation. Everyone kept talking about how all their lives were at risk, but no one of import died. Characters recovered from the gravest of injuries with very little effect remaining. Banschbach obviously heard my concerns coming a mile off, and preemptively struck down some key players throughout this novel. I won't lie, that hurt, Claire. But, it lent gravity to the situation, and made what they were fighting toward all the more important to me.
I enjoyed the differences between our two main cultures at play, it was clear at all times how different the Aredorians and the Braetons are from each other. Each culture had it's own traditions, way of dressing and even ways of fighting. Banschbach does a terrific job of world-building in this series, and I easily felt myself transported to whatever location our heroes traveled to.
I really enjoy the way war is portrayed in these books. The heroes of Aredor & Braeton go to war to defend their countries, and their families. They don't do it for glory, they see no honor in killing, but it is a duty that must be carried out. Banschbach is at her finest when Aidan reflects on the aftermath of battle, and what it does to the survivors.
Not only are Aidan and Corin both filled with incredible survivor's guilt, but they come home to peace and have no idea how to handle themselves. They need action, they are constantly on high alert, the only thing that helps is movement and even that only holds the darkness away for so long. It is a touching tribute to post traumatic stress disorder, and brings it down to a level anyone can identify with.
In conclusion, while this novel may have minor faults in pacing or character development, it rises above all of these in the third, and final, act. The lessons about war and peace eclipse any trivialities that came before, and fill the reader with hope and inspiration, and a heavy feeling of duty & honor.
Am I to assume that, from the detailed epilogue, there will be no more to the Aredor series? Perhaps. Or perhaps Banschbach will explore other countries of the world and their heroes. I wouldn't mind following Ahmed or Azrahil down a few more bloody paths.
The steps that Banschbach has made through this series convince me that future books will only get better, and better still. Perhaps the highest praise I can give is this: These characters, these lines, these lessons, will stick with me for a very long time.
Friendship that lasts to the end of one’s life is becoming increasingly difficult to maintain in the light of the high mobility of the nomadic 21st Century. And yet friendship – true, lasting friendship – is one of the gaping holes in our societal chests. It is a large theme fleshed out in Tolkien’s works like “The Hobbit” and “The Lord of the Rings” and it is a major tone vibrating through Claire M. Banscbach’s “The Wildcat of Braeton”. This 447 page paperback written for fantasy-fiction lovers young and old, wraps up the story that began in “The Rise of Aredor,” bringing the saga to an end.
Many of the cast of characters in “The Wildcat of Braeton” are old acquaintances met in the earlier volume, along with several newer ones. The first half of the story follows Corin’s friend, Aiden, who was still in the service of Lord Rishdah of Calorin, but has now completed his time in Rishdah’s Phoenix Guard. He returns to his homeland and to his family to find out what awaits him. When he left Scodra years before, it was on tense and troubled terms with his father, Laird Gordan, the head of Clan Canich. Upon his return things are not well, for his father has fallen under the sinister influence of Adalwulf of Clan Dyson. The aging Laird Gordan has all but alienated his Clan’s warriors, as well as his sons. What unfolds is a brave, bold and obliging reclamation of Scodra as well as the Clan, and Aiden rises out of the smoke and sweat as the grudging Champion of his Clan. Also surfacing from the dust and deadly contest is a growing attachment to courageous and committed Rona, a young woman willing to be armed and fight for her clan.
Once calm and concord have been restored to Clan Canich, other things begin slowly to be reestablished. Relationships between Laird Gordan and his sons, along with the fighters and farmers are rebuilt; forgiveness is sought and received; hope and trust grow; and life begins to return to Scodra as in days past. Yet something unseen, but sensed, is in the air.
The second section of the book unfolds with Corin preparing for what he can only suspect. The ranks of the Hawk Flight are slowly refilled, scouts and patrols are sent along the frontiers, but nothing can be seen. Throughout the time of preparing and waiting, Corin finds himself attracted to Mera, as a result of the scheming of his own sister. The relationship moves along, step by step in courteous and chaste ways, in-between patrols and frequent travels to the outposts and borders and back. Finally the concealed menace raises its callous head, and the rapacious conflict is on in earnest! Many of the characters who mount up in both books are bid farewell, and “The Wildcat of Braeton” comes to a close with finality and firmness.
All through both portions of chronicle the friendship between Corin and Aiden matures and marches on. There is loyalty, commitment, support and the willing fulfillment of duty even in the face of dim probabilities and potential defeat. Each comes to the other’s aid when called upon, and both display trust in one another. It is a friendship forged in fire!
“The Wildcat of Braeton” is a page-turner! It will keep the reader glued to it well into the wee hours of the night. It is a striking portrayal of camaraderie, moral courage, character and tenacious commitment. Older adults all the way to teenagers will delight in the book. As soon as it arrived in the mail my oldest son snatched it up and devoured it in one day! If you’re looking for a good and wholesome story for your young adults or for yourself, I highly recommend you pick up both volumes, “The Rise of Aredor” and “The Wildcat of Braeton”. You will be glad you spent the money to secure your copy!
Thanks to Miss Banschbach for providing, upon my request, the free copy of “The Wildcat of Braeton” used for this review. The assessments are mine given without restrictions or requirements (as per Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255).
This is a very difficult book to review. I feel like I have a bit of a rare opinion because there are a ton of 4-5 star ratings, so don't let my low rating stop you from trying it out. It might just be me.
Things that deserved a 4-star:
-Corin and his paperwork. It was brilliantly funny.
-Gerralt. I mean, what's not to like about the grouchy secretary that everyone's terrified of?
-Gwilym. He was adorable. And heartbreaking.
-Aiden's duel. Ahh, it was great. Blood and guts and suffering and all that fun stuff. And the near-death, high-stakes thing.
-How Corin switches to Calorin when he's angry. I don't know why, but I just loved that random fact.
-The Hawk Flight. Nuff said. They're all epic.
Things that got the 3-star rating:
-Corin didn't do any almost-dying. Sure, he spent basically the entire book falling asleep everywhere because he was so exhausted, and he got injured regularly but...
-but there was none of the lion-mauling, knife-stabbiness, near-death stuff for the Hawk like in the first book.
-The plot got me confused. I originally thought it was all going to be about Aiden rescuing his clan from some inside betrayer dude, but then that got wrapped up in chapter 15-ish and I was left wandering around for the next third of the book wondering where the plot even had gotten to. Then eventually there was a bit more war and fighting and random deaths and I think I may have discovered the plot again vaguely at that stage.
-And the mad pirate captain dude. WHERE IN THE WORLD DID HE COME FROM?! He just popped up randomly in the third last chapter and helped them fix all the problems. He just completely weirded me out.
-The Epilogue. It was a bit odd, and I didn't actually want to know how they all died years later.
So overall I'm not sure what to do about this book. I much preferred book one, but I still did enjoy it, despite everything. I recommend you read it, yes, but know that it's not for everyone. And if you don't like depressing endings and hearing how everyone dies in the end, don't read the epilogue. But give the book itself a go. Hopefully you'll like it.
[NOTE: I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review]
A satisfying ending to a lovely saga! While not as captivating as The Rise of Aredor, I still enjoyed every minute of the sequel! It was great to see my old character-friends again, as well as meet new ones. And not only that, but I got some lovely accents and worldbuild on the side. :) I think the main reason I didn't enjoy this as much was simply because I got to follow them all to their end. Some died young...others...I got to hear how they lived beyond their friends, lived their full life, and then died at an old age. So that was heartbreaking...
I wanted to pull out my fiddle and play some rousing Scottish tunes by the time I was done reading. I wouldn't be surprised if I spoke in broader accent for at least the rest of the day...
This is pretty fun. Actually, it's really fun. Fairly complex too. I think I liked it better than The Rise of Aredor.
There are many plots going on in this book and I quite enjoyed them all, I believe.
The characters are still all very excellently done. That one, though… maybe I missed something? …but I'm afraid I have a very low opinion of the said character's intelligence. I suppose there are other factors, but at the time I was thinking along the lines of, that was highly unintelligent, but well, read on…doesn't matter now and all that.
Setting, writing, and dynamics were all just fine, enjoyable, and all the rest.
And I'm done now, because I'm really too busy to review at the moment, though you wouldn't think it by looking at me—I do have 6 tabs open on Firefox that are all my personal worldbuilding wiki, and I have a text editor launched in which I am fixing the bugs of a dynamic JavaScript countdown program, and I'm connected via SFTP to a server which I am integrating with my countdown, but none of that is relevant. Oh, and I have LibreOffice open, with a fictional language root database and my book open. So, you see, I actually am busy, and not just—I don't know—lazy or something. Oh! And I have a terminal emulator open for running Git. Bye!
This is of a bad story. What is desperately lacking is a skilled editor and good proofreader. There are tonnes of missing words, wrong words, flow issues, extraneous plotlines, and general sloppiness that muddy up the generally descent characters and world building. I liked it too much to rate it lower, but certainly couldn't argue against any reader who did give a one or two star rating.
What a great series. Not sure how it is considered Christian fiction, but it is clean.
This is, basically, three stories in one. We see more of Aiden's life in this book as well as more from Corbin. Lots of battles and this one gives us some more romance than the first book did. All of our favorite characters are back, but not all of them make it to the end of the story - lots of tears.
I really wanted to love this one. However, just couldn't get past the use of the word I realize most people would not be bothered or even realize this so I'm not going to give a star rating. I also have to say that Banschbach is a very talented writer.
I was suffering for a huge reading slump while in the middle of this book. It was a big bummer.
I'm having trouble reviewing this one. We got to see most of our favorite characters again. Corin repeatedly tells his men that this second war will be harder than the first because the Calorins know their fighting techniques, but I had some trouble buying that since the last time they were fighting from the trees, collecting men to help fight by saving them from slavery. The Calorins may have had a better idea of what they were up against in this book, but the Aredorians were also more prepared. That said, the book had improved in at least one way over the old one; no more video game fights without loss of the good guys. Three major characters who we care a lot about were killed in this book. I didn't cry, but I did feel emotional. In the first book, I complained because I felt like everyone surviving was unlikely, and because the book could have made me emotional with character losses. In this book I'm complaining because I didn't want characters to die. Don't get me wrong, I think that the deaths of these favorite characters made the book a lot more realistic, and it made the stakes seem real. It's like in Harry Potter, I don't like that so many of my favorite characters died, but it does make the victory sweeter.
I gave this book four stars. So if character deaths made me emotional, one of the flaws of the first book was fixed, and the victory felt sweet, why did I knock off a star from what I gave the first book? I guess there could be a couple reasons. I really liked the setting in Calorin, and Aiden left there a lot more quickly than Corin. I also liked Corin's POV better than Aiden's. We got some of each in this book, but I think that Aiden is a little bit more likeable when we aren't in his head. But both of those things are small. I stilled liked Aiden, even if not as much, and the English/Scottish style Aredor and Braeton are still exciting, even though both books put me in the mood for fiction set in the desert. The real reason this book lost a star is the ending. The epilogue was hard. I always find epilogues that say 'and then the main characters died' hard to read. They make me feel melancholy. But this was worse than most because most epilogues like that end with the characters dying peacefully from old age, but not this one. Aiden spent the rest of his life mourning Rona, and died in an ambush on a pass. Corin and Darrin were killed in a battle with raiders and Argusians, and as he died, Corin saw his old friends who had already died AND AHMED IS COUNTED AMONG THEM, even though we barely even saw Ahmed this book, we didn't know he died, we don't know how he died. Mera had died the year before Aiden (hopefully peacefully) and Liam also eventually dies and is buried close to Martin where they become legends. Tam played a lament after Aiden's death, and then never played again. Darrin and Corin's children were strong leaders and even though their fathers died in a raid, they were able to keep Aredor free. I don't know. This ending is just not satisfying. It's frustrating. It almost feels like a tragedy instead of a triumph.
So overall I really liked this book, but I wasn't a big fan of the epilogue.
I received an ebook from the author with the request of a review. (I also have a physical copy.)
I was happy to receive a free copy of The Wildcat of Braeton from the author, Claire M. Banschbach. As the second book in The Rise of Aredor series, I was at a slight disadvantage to other readers because I hadn’t read the book before it in the series. Despite that I was able to jump right into the story and begin enjoying it immediately.
Emeth, (or as his real name was Aiden), has served seven years with the Calorins under Lord Rishdah. Although he’s had many adventures, he’s ready to leave his friend Ahmed and the rest of the Phoenix Guard, following in the footsteps of his friend, Corin who had left before him. Aiden heads back to his homeland and his clan, Clan Canich. After being gone so long after leaving without any warning to most of his family, he worries about how his return to Scodra will be welcomed, especially by his father, Laird Górdan.
He also fears for his friend, Prince Corin of Aredor as rumors of a second war invasion by the Calorin army. Will Aredor, already weakened by the last war, be able to survive another bout of it? The people of Aredor place their faith in Prince Corin, the Hawk and legendary hero that got them through the first war, but even he has limits and the armies of Durna and Calorin are large.
Bonded together by strong ties, the friendship between Aiden and Corin plays a key role throughout the book. The author does an amazing job with bringing in other characters and places. The setting was rather unique along with some of the names; but I loved the author’s creativity, especially in developing the different cultural details with everything down to weaponry, dress, dialect, and locations. I noticed a little bit of choppiness in the very beginning of the book as the author started the story. However, as the story was built upon, the ideas started moving more smoothly; and it never distracted me from the story itself.
I would recommend The Wildcat of Braeton to anyone looking for a fantasy book with a distinctive world. Although there are battle scenes, they are not detailed and the author did a great job with keeping the entire book clean for readers of younger age.
I WOULD LIKE TO STATE THAT I RECEIVED THIS COPY AS PART OF A FREE PROMOTION.
The second installment of this series was well written. The characters were more mixed this time, with more of a female presence than in the first book: The Rise of Aredor. Most of the dialogue was natural and flowed well. The banter was great, with plenty of humour. The action was spaced out more than in the previous book with less of a focus on war and more attention shown to the various relationships portrayed and many that flourished in the first book came to fruition in the second installment. I won't put in any spoilers, but partnerships were formed and many of the bonds became deeper and more profound as the book progressed. I found the ending to be both sad and also hopeful. The epilogue added quite a lot to the story and tied up various loose ends. All-in-all this book was a pleasant read and the author has shown they can weave a pretty decent tale.
The book is a sequel that is better than the original.
As with The Rise of Aredor, Claire has created wonderful characters who you care about. Like, a character I was fond of got hurt, and I was upset with Claire. That is a pretty extreme response I think. The story hit a lot of different emotional marks, far more than The Rise of Aredor. I want to be clear, I loved The Rise of Aredor.
I got a copy of this book (ebook) from Claire to review. I highly recommend this book and its predecessor.