This book...... I really wanted to give it more stars, but I just can't.
Here's what I liked: The honor the hero has, his internal struggle about doing what is right for his family, not kissing a woman engaged to someone else, worry about an unborn baby. The heroine has such drive and passion to avenge her friends death. Her willingness to travel to destinations unknown. Her passion for life.
Here's what I didn't like:
In the first chapter we meet the heroine and her 2 male friends. There was no depth to the friendships, there was no explanation of the history that would create such a bond. It was very unrealistic and frustrating. It was as if the author had a checklist of what makes a good story and just checked the box "Scooby friends".
The implication of the hero's past "jobs". He would have been a much larger, well rounded character if we could have witnessed a "job". Again it was a flat resume, as a reader we just need to believe what we are told (or inferred) and move on.
SPOILER and entry into Disneyland:
You really think an experienced captain/smuggler/mercenary/who knows what? would truly believe that a gun just got lost? Really? We as readers are that stupid? And have you ever stuffed a gun in your bra? Do you have any idea how heavy it is? How uncomfortable that would be? How dangerous, especially for a civilian who hasn't been trained with that weapon?
The pace was way to fast to the end. When her target is in her room first she has been attacked and has all that adrenaline in her system. You really think her hands wouldn't be shaking, or NEVER having been trained or practiced with this new weapon she will really hit her target and then conveniently pass out.
Next we have her friends who just were able to show up to help her be with her hero? And the magical bow that was wrapped around the shooting. Her hero wasn't upset that she lied? WTF?
This is a book that could have been so good. It was free on Amazon unlimited, I am glad I didn't pay for it. Even saying all of this I still want to read the rest of her books, because I like this world and 2 dimensional characters she created. I have hope her next ones will be better.