Novellas are hard - you’ve got a short number of pages to get plot AND characters developed. There isn’t time to monkey-fart around with extraneous stuff. This anthology has some hits, and some misses. My big issue is that many of these stories are part of a series - and if the author didn’t give some backstory before the novella, or didn’t do some explaining within the novella, a reader will most likely be confused. Which is never a good thing. Here’s what I thought about each story:
Celebrating Flora - Christa Maurice
I wrote out a long and marginally scathing review for Celebrating Flora, but then decided to just say this: This is a terrible submission for an anthology - especially if you aren’t even going to attempt to explain who all the people are in the book. This is book 5.5 in a series, so I was totally lost through a good part of the story because the hero kept talking about this person and that person and I’m all “who the hell are you talking about, I’m so confused!”
As far as the actual story goes, we get some character development for the heroine, Flora - she’s an actress from the Philippines, and feels a lot of pressure to get roles (any way she can) so she can support her extended family back home. Despite not being very likeable in the beginning, I started to understand her. But only a little bit, because she had major mood swings and went from fun and charming to bitchy in two seconds flat, for no discernible reason.
The hero, Wally, does something for bands (although I’m not exactly sure what), travels constantly, and hasn’t been home for 10 years. He’s brought Flora to his home in Ohio as a favor to Flora’s publicist, because she had a meltdown and needed to go “off the grid” for a while.
Wally and Flora have a very hot and cold relationship. He tries to do something nice for her, she gets ticked off at him, they argue. This repeats through the whole story. Then Wally plays amateur psychologist, figures out why Flora acts the way she does, they have sex (I think...it was completely closed door and not totally clear), then they declare their undying love.
Add in some loose ends with the story, and I didn’t enjoy this novella much at all. But, if you were familiar with the rest of the series, you might like Celebrating Flora.
My rating for Celebrating Flora: 2 (but just barely - it took two nights to read this novella!)
One Last Gift by Nancy Stopper
Right off the bat, this book gets points for explaining itself. This story is part of the Oak Grove series, and even though I’ve read books .5 and one, I’m getting a brief synopsis of all the players in this story. Hooray!!!
I am usually a big fan of the second-chance romance. However, this author did what I really dislike...holding out on telling us what happened, and alluding to it every chance possible. We know something tragic happened that caused our hero and heroine a great amount of grief. But that’s it. This is a novella for goodness sake - just tell us already!
Once we do get the backstory, I still had a bit of a hard time feeling any chemistry between the hero and heroine as they got reacquainted. There was a lot of internal dialogue about how they love each other again but there’s no way they can be together again because she has a life in Oak Grove and his life is in Boston. Too bad nobody’s allowed to move… (Somebody needs to come up with a universal sarcasm font. I’d use it A LOT.)
My rating for One Last Gift: 3
Hat Trick by Maria Luis
One reason why I like reading anthologies is because sometimes I find a new-to-me author. And reading Hat Trick definitely has me wanting to read more by Maria Luis.
Gwen and Marshall have been dancing around each other for the past six years - ever since Marshall sat behind Gwen in an accounting class. Actually, it’s more been Marshall chasing Gwen. But she’s got some major hang ups after watching her mother fall in love and get married, and then divorced...four times.
Because this is a novella, the plot development went a little fast and left a bit to be desired, relationship wise. But I think Ms. Luis did a good job with character development. I just had a hard time understanding what flipped for Gwen that made her suddenly decide to give Marshall a chance. The writing was good though, and both the internal monologue and dialogue between the characters was entertaining. So while this may not be a great book to me, I’m definitely interested in reading more by this author!
My rating for Hat Trick: 3
The One With All the Trees by Reese Patton
Despite the plethora of editing errors/typos, I really liked this story.
Mallory and Brandt meet in an elevator on their way up to a penthouse suite for a Christmas Eve dinner party. Neither is initially aware that they are being set up, but are definitely interested in each other. However, both have demanding careers that aren’t very conducive to having relationships (she’s a paramedic, he’s a public aide lawyer). Add in some personal hang ups for each of them, and there was a lot of internal monologue about whether or not getting involved is a good idea.
Seeing them interact at the party was cute, watching things “fall apart” during dinner was sorta odd (it happened quickly), and then seeing them get together and have a happily-ever-after happened in about three pages. But these are all novellas, so I’m willing to concede some character and plot development expectations. Not sure if I’ll read anything else by this author (this story is obviously part of a series, I’m just not sure which one), but these few chapters I did read were pretty good!
My rating for The One With All the Christmas Trees: 3.5
Real Miracle by Susan Saxx
The more I read this anthology, the more I appreciate an author writing a few paragraphs to introduce the reader to her characters, a little backstory, and the series that the story is from. THANK YOU, Ms. Saxx for clarifying things!!!
Unfortunately, I still spent a good deal of time confused during this book.
Eli left town three years ago on Christmas Eve, without a word to his fiancé Tish. Now he’s back in town, on Christmas Eve, taking a stroll down memory lane in front of the old house he and Tish were going to buy and fix up. He’s filled with regret for leaving Tish behind, but he didn’t feel he had a choice if he was going to keep her, and his younger brother, safe. Now he has one last deal to make with the bad guys he’s been working for and he and his brother can escape the life they’ve been living and disappear off the grid.
While sitting outside the old house, Eli is shocked to see Tish is there. Unable to resist finding out what she’s doing at the house, he goes inside to talk to her. As you can imagine, Tish isn’t initially pleased to see him.
Over the course of the next several hours, Tish discovers why Eli left, they declare they’ve never stopped loving each other, and then Eli figures out a way to keep his brother alive, Tish safe, and get rid of the bad guys permanently. Then they live happily ever after (I’m assuming).
I’m still not exactly sure how things all worked out in the end, but I’m glad they did.
My rating for Real Miracle: 2.5
Fourteen Days Of Christmas by July Dawson
I LOVED this story. It was absolutely a novella done right!
Hunter Carson is home for the holidays on leave from the Marines for fourteen days. He expects his grandfather to come pick him up from the airport, but instead is met by Molly, his high school sweetheart, and the girl he left behind.
Watching them get reacquainted and fall back in love (well, they actually never stopped loving each other) was delightful. Hunter and Molly are cute and charming together, and while they did have issues to work through, the conflict wasn’t over-the-top dramatic. Their dialogue was witty, and the side characters added additional humor. The ending was heartwarming and sweet, and I loved everything about this story. Fourteen Days of Christmas is the holiday story I’ve been wanting to read!
My rating for Fourteen Days of Christmas: 4.5
Bottom of the Ninth: The Novella by Kimberly Readnor
We’re on a roll now, with a second really good story for this anthology!
AJ Gonzalez is your stereotypical professional baseball player - cocky and commitment-phobic. Personally, I’m kinda tired of reading about “heroes” who act like sleeping around is something to be proud of...but maybe that’s just me?
Anyway, he and eleven of his teammates get roped into posing for a calendar to raise money for childhood cancer research. AJ is stunned to discover that the photographer for the project is the one girl he really cared about, but walked away from (stood her up, actually), eight years ago. Mia was really hurt by the way AJ left her, but has moved on. When AJ shows interest in her again, she decides a quick fling with him may not be such a bad thing. Except this time AJ knows he wants more, and is willing to fight for them.
Despite being a novella, this story had good plot and character development. The first part of the relationship was cute, and fun. It was okay that things moved fast because they already knew each other. The conflict they had to deal with was realistic (considering AJ is a professional athlete), and wasn’t drawn out or over-dramatic. For being a couple in their 20s, they acted pretty mature. And I really like that!
I will definitely keep an eye out for additional Kimberly Readnor books. Hopefully she’s able to keep the quick pacing that I liked in this story in her full length books!
My rating for The Bottom of the Ninth: 4
No Reservations by Natalia Banks
The note from the author before the story started said that if I’m “obsessed with steamy hot billionaires, you’ve come to the right place!” Uh, I’m not, and I usually avoid stories with “billionaires “ so I was a little nervous about this book. And it started out a little ridiculous…
Cindy, who is 25 and still lives at home, and her father are working hard to make ends meet. When her father is fired after being accused of stealing from the restaurant where he worked, Cindy decides to confront Gavin Rossi, the head of the company that owns the restaurant.
Gavin takes Cindy to his home so they can talk (what rich, powerful man - who has security at the gate to his house - is going to take some random woman into his home?). They have dinner, Cindy tells Gavin her father has been wrongly accused, they end up in bed together without much preamble. She is put off by Gavin’s attitude, but he’s smitten with Cindy because she doesn’t act like he’s expecting her to. They spend one week together, have a bunch of steamy times, and declare their undying love. Like I said, a little ridiculous.
But once I decided to just take the story for what it is - a quick, steamy, borderline over-the-top, Cinderella-type story - it wasn’t too bad. Things moved way too fast and were resolved quickly and without much ado, but if I didn’t expect too much from the plot, I was fairly entertained.
My rating for No Reservations: 2.5
Silver Bells, A River’s Sigh B & B Christmas Novella by Ev Bishop
This nine-novella anthology has ended on a high note, with the story of Sean and Bryn being sweet and cute, and a great ending for this collection.
Bryn and Sean meet during a snowstorm when Bryn has pulled to the side of the road because of road conditions and then witnesses Sean driving too fast and sliding off the road into a ditch. They discover they aren’t too far from the River’s Sigh B&B, and hike there to take refuge for the night. Of course, there’s only one cottage available, so they’re forced to spend the night together.
They spend the evening talking and getting to know each other and fall in love - only neither one believes they have a chance with the other. Sigh. There was A LOT of repetitive internal monologue in this story, but that’s really the worst thing I can say about it. Because it really was a sweet, cute story (and completely refreshing in that they didn’t jump into a physical relationship right away - as the characters did in the previous story).
Of course, they hit a bit of a snag on their way to happily ever after. The issue kind of sneaks up on the reader, but did add some much needed conflict that happens outside of the hero and heroine’s heads. It was resolved fairly quickly though, which is what you would expect for two characters who are genuinely nice people.
My rating for Silver Bells, A River’s Sigh B & B Christmas Novella: 4