1.5 stars perhaps... I liked the book until the chapter 16. From then on the story is in a shambles. There's at the very least 1/3 of the book missing and not accidentally either.
There is this weirdest jarring transition of the main character from an unskilled novice to a master magical fighter. The point of any book where a main character learns to master skills and their powers is reading about how they do it, how they progress, what sorts of mental and other blocks they overcome and so on. Not here.
Zhanna found the door in the cave, she together with her cat and two mercenaries stepped through it and that's all. Next, they all back and the description follows how changed they all are - how they became calmer, stronger, more skilled, there's some extra jewelry in the picture and also suddenly they work together beautifully like a team. We're told three days passed here but few months in that universe or plane to where they'd been to. MONTHS. Six months to be precise:
However, the training and advice that she had gotten over the last six months had made her into something different, something different even than the old Volkhvy. She was the new type of Russian witch.
Just like that, from one paragraph to the next six months just gone, and I am not on the same page with any of the characters anymore, forgive the pun. Zhanna wasn't sunning herself on the coast in Spain all that time, you know for this time jump to be acceptible. So many major changes missed.
Not to mention there's a whole new history here somewhere with new friends, acquaintances, new bond with Stephen and Mikhail. Not that we get to read about it.
This should've been the book two in the series. It's so unprecedentedly ridiculous I'm speechless.
No wonder I felt detached emotionaly from all the characters and couldn't understand the scope and limits of Zhanna's skills or powers afterwards. Often Zhanna's reasoning and in addition her emotional processes seemed very off, opaque and consequentally her actions. Those scenes that concerned Krava particularly.
I cannot tell what happened here. I read the book with Dascha's perspective first and though I felt some confusion as to why exactly she thought relationships between witches and familiars were akin to slavery, it's a well written book overall and an example of the very good storytelling. Also I read a short story Still Air from the Christmas anthology by the same author and same as with Dasha's story, I thought the vignette was well written, a smooth read. Inexplicably odd.
And no, the couple of short stories to fill that gap won't cut it. Especially if you have to hunt for them through recipe books.
My conclusion - this book should've been a duology or a much longer book.