This was an okay romance, by new author McKenzie. I thought the writing was pretty well done for a debut author, but I think next time McKenzie sholud work on getting the reader to feel for the characters a bit more. As other reviewers have noted, McKenzie tried to hit on a lot of different themes, with this book. I think she would have been better off just focusing on one or two, and doing them really well.
The story is about a mother Lauren, and her daughter Kat, who move to New York State to escape an emotional abusive husband, and bullies from Kat's school. Kat, has had a hard time dealing with her sexuality, and Lauren just wants her to be safe. At the new school, they meet Kat's counselor Sarah. Sarah can tell Kat has been through a lot, she wants to help Kat, find a place in the school. As Sarah tries to help Kat, she grows closer to Lauren. Can a real relationship work for them, or a they destined to be nothing more than friends?
Instead of just having Lauren and Sarah as mains, this book also is about Kat and Bridget. I would say about 1/3 is YA and 2/3 is an adult romance. That was one of my issues with the book. While Kat was going through a lot, I don't think her POV was needed. I didn't really get the "feels" from her story-line, that you do in most YA's. I think McKenzie would have been better off having the whole book through Lauren and Sarah's POV, or make the whole book YA.
As I mentioned before, Kat's character was dealing with being bullied. I want to be careful what I mention so it does not spoil anything, but another huge issue arises for Kat. This ended up being another problem for me. McKenzie, decided to tackle another huge, tough topic, and it just did not work. I didn't see why it was needed, almost purely to throw more drama in. Then almost nothing came of it, and it was almost just swept under the rug. Not the way to handle such a tough subject, it just should have been taken out of the story-line.
This is a very slow romance. I like books that are not insta-love, so I was happy about that. My problem was it was so slow, that it lost some of the chemistry. Lauren and Sarah, came across more as best friends than lovers, for me.
While I obviously had some issues with this book, overall I think the story flowed well, and was written well. I just think McKenzie tried to tackle too many things at once. If she can narrow her ideas down, I might just enjoy her next book. I will absolutely give her another chance.
An ARC was given to me by BSB, for a honest review.