This series is so close to being one I really like. Fair warning (if the cover isn't enough of a hint): this particular volume might be a little bit of a tough sell for anyone who was super attached to the main couple, since they barely appear except to provide occasional pushes to get Yu and Kagami together.
In their occasional scenes, Satoru continues to be adorable, and I continue to love how balanced and caring their relationship is. After Yu and Kagami get steamy - in one of those traditional "no means yes" scenes - it was refreshing to see Tamiya specifically and clearly ask his boyfriend if it'd be ok if they progressed to making out. From the beginning, he's done a great job of both showing his interest and respecting Satoru's boundaries, which is probably why they're so happy and stable that Takanaga finds it more difficult to continue writing them.
Kagami, in contrast, is (as Satoru himself says) very, very pushy. It's not always in bad ways - people do have different personalities, and it'd be a bit dull if both relationships followed exactly the same formula. But there was room for other really interesting storylines here...I loved the introduction where we met Yu's mom and learned about her needing surgery and an extended hospital stay. This is the Yu I'd really liked from Volume 1...while he was a bit of a "villain" in Tamiya's eyes, Satoru had a reason for thinking of him as a good friend and an all-around good guy, and seeing more of his home life really sold that for me.
Plus, Yu gets to display a wider range of emotions; while he'd been prickly and manipulative with Tamiya and sweet with Satoru, his softer, more vulnerable side really comes out in these early pages as he worries about his mom and their finances, and picks up a part-time job to try to help out with the bills. I liked that Kagami noticed his distraction, sleep deprivation, and anxiety. I liked that his pushiness, in these scenes, mostly just boiled down to poking his nose a little too far into Yu's business, with the best intentions.
Kagami showing up at Yu's restaurant, finding out about his mother, and taking steps to relieve him of some of his school council responsibilities so he could have a few less things to worry about...those were all fantastic character- and relationship-building moments, and I wish the whole volume had stayed on that path. It would've given them a lot of room to learn more about each other, and for Yu to recognize that Kagami is someone worth loving...and trusting, which is the primary obstacle right now.
Instead, we jump way too quickly into a sex scene - probably mostly to bump the rating up to something readers had grown to expect from this series? - and then squeeze in a double date at an amusement park so the main couple can interact with them again. It all feels a little forced, and that's a bummer because the beginning of this volume was so promising.
I get the impression that Takanaga isn't a very outline/plot-based writer, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but that lack of structure and tendency to bounce after new ideas shows.
Unfortunately, this could have been a really, really good book, but it lost steam by trying to go in too many directions at once, without fully tying them together. I loved the scene in the rain, where Yu realized he'd been buying into rumors about Kagami without questioning them - which made him start seeing Kagami a little differently, and trying to understand him better, without buying into his old prejudices. I loved the bit in the amusement park where he saw Kagami almost turning into a different person as he talked to one of his father's friends - a politician who expects Kagami to follow the same path.
What would happen if Kagami did decide to become a politician? Would he cut off this budding high school romance? Yu is worrying here about what happens in six months, when their lives diverge and they part ways, and he wanders off in an emotionally turbulent daze...and instead of addressing this super interesting issue, we just get another steamy scene in the ferris wheel.
At least Kagami was trying to pay more attention to Yu's comfort level, and taking him on less frightening rides. But he was still trampling over Yu's signals, trying so hard to start up a relationship that it felt increasingly less likely that they should be in one.
I really wish this series and this storyline had a clearer narrative arc. At this point, I really like Yu, and I'm as unconvinced as he is that Kagami is a good fit for him, especially in a longterm view. And I want to see more of his job and his mother and even his relationship with Satoru, who never just talks to his friend about what he's feeling and whether he actually wants to be pushed into this relationship. Yu's a stubbornly independent guy who needs more people to talk to. I loved that he actually had some of that with his mother, but she drifted out of the story partway through, and he was left floundering again.
Hopefully Volume 4 will give him firmer footing, and let him make solid decisions about what he wants.