The path to hell is paved with good intentions. I feel that is quite true of this novel.
It's clear that Barry Lyga was told a moving story, or bore witness to a particular event or trend, and so felt compelled to write this book. It's basically a little tome that's trying to make us think about our attitudes and our actions when it comes to soldiers and the war effort. The problem is that the narrator, and the story, aren't all that interesting.
For starters, Kevin Ross, the narrator and subject of this novel, is dull. This is due in large part to Lyga's prose, which sounds very much like a middle-aged man trying to sound like a 15 year old boy. "But of course I didn't say that. Duh." And so on. He's someone that's very hard to care about, which is a huge problem - you need to be able to root for this guy given what he's up against. As it was, I was so distanced from him that I didn't much care what happened - he's so annoying at times that you actually want him to get beat down. Also, his friends, who are supposed to be lovable misfits, are just annoying little idiots. Only 'Fam' comes out of it feeling like an actual person, and don't get me started on the scene where Kevin ('Kross' to his friends) wonders if Fam wants her to kiss him. It's weak writing, and wholly unbelievable. All in all, it took me three attempts to finish this novel, which is awful considering how basic the prose is and how short the chapters are - I just couldn't get into this novel at all.
Anther issue that there's a great mess of themes here that don't quite connect, and whilst the primary theme is bashed into our heads in the most didactic manner possible, there are also themes of stalking, family, secrets, shame, the idolization of women, and more. It's all over the shop, and it never really comes together in a way that makes you care, or is even all that interesting.
This book is doubly disappointing given Lyga has produced some terrific work in the past - Boy Toy is a personal favourite of mine, and a sensitive handling of a difficult subject. Sadly, Lyga shows no such nuance here. It's heavy-handed, repeatedly dull, and filled with characters it's near impossible to invest in.
File it under "Noble Misfire", and read Boy Toy instead.