I have read and enjoyed most of Sean Costello’s novels. In addition to writing thrillers, he is by education and training an anesthesiologist. His impressive vocabulary, clever metaphors and medical background are on full display here. Indeed, Eden’s Eyes displays some dazzling writing before eventually sinking into supernatural nonsense.
Karen had been blind her entire life, until at age 28 she was given the gift of sight courtesy of two brilliantly blue eyes donated by the father of an unpleasant young man named Eden, age 27, who lay brain dead following a bar fight. The book is at its best as the author describes what it’s like for Karen after the transplant to see light, objects and colors having only known darkness.
Unfortunately Eden’s father made the donation without consulting his wife, Eden’s mother, a fanatical Christian who considered organ donations a sin. That Eden’s heart and kidney were also harvested for transplants with his father’s consent made matters even worse in her eyes, which by the way, were also bright blue like Eden’s.
Eden’s mother, coincidentally named Eve, distorted biblical verses to suit and justify her needs and deeds, as she aimed and swore to avenge her son against everyone who had a hand in harvesting his organs, starting with her husband, the doctors and the recipients, including Karen. She wanted them to pay with their lives. She felt her son had paid with his life.
It was downright spooky in Chapter 13 when Eve was happy to hear that Eden’s body had been stolen from his grave. I suppose that in her warped mind it meant he had been resurrected — and still lived. In another creepy scene in Chapter 11, after reciting incantations at Eden’s grave in the middle of the night, Eve with her ear to the ground was convinced she heard the sound of nails scratching against wood.
Adding to the story’s tension is Karen’s neighbor, Danny, age 29. Karen and Danny grew up together in rural Canada, and for decades he was her constant companion and helper who had fallen in love with her. Until her transplant, Karen had no way of knowing Danny was ugly, and he bitterly resented her gift of sight which gave her that knowledge — although the author fails to explain why Karen would consider Danny ugly since she had no experience knowing what ugly looked like. In any event, in Danny’s anguish he wanted Karen blind again. It was because of her sight that she found him repulsive.
The book goes awry when Karen becomes haunted by horrible visions of an eyeless and naked Eden — a man she had never met — in addition to her dreams and premonitions of murder and mutilation that she is horrified to learn are actually happening … to the two other recipients of Eden’s harvested organs given to an old man and a young girl. His heart and his kidney were literally ripped from their bodies.
The author never explains how Karen is able to “see” these grotesque murders in such graphic detail, asleep in her bed forty miles away from the crime scenes. But he leads us to believe that a resurrected Eden is mutilating those who now have his organs and is coming next for Karen to reclaim his eyes.
And what about Danny? He wants to take her eyes too.
So the book has two climaxes. The first conventionally deals with Danny. The second deals with Eden in a final chapter unworthy of a writer with Sean Costello’s intelligence. It’s roughly like Hitchcock’s “Psycho” in reverse, where this time the mother becomes the son.