Two and a half stars. I have noticed a trend in modern Canadian authors for the young...if you don't know the story is set in Canada before you start, you won't realise it by reading the book. There are no markers, no sense of place, very little description to tell you where you are. The passing references to New York and Cambridge made me wonder just at first if it were set in New England, but the text didn't feel right for that either, with its constant references to "the tea things" etc. There is one passing reference to the year, 1937 (or was it 1934?), but other than that there is no sense of period, either--beyond the fact that the kids use pen and ink to practice their penmanship. There was absolutely zero attempt at building a 1930s atmosphere. The characters feel too modern for the 1930s, particularly in the way they speak. I've read a lot of fiction that was actually written in the 1920s and 30s, aside from having parents who were young at that time, and the characters don't work. All of the characters but Alma are mere background scribbles, even her beloved Miss Lily is just there to help Alma work out her personal angst.
The plot was rather predictable; okay, so it's a book for children, but surely they are smarter than the author seems to suggest? I would in no way consider this YA fiction; at most, an intelligent nine or ten. The serving up of the tired old "story within a story" trope is garnished with the even worse one of poor girl makes friends with rich pop-u-luuurrre girl...and yet the reader is given almost no insight into how this happened, just that both girls are "suprised" by it. No character development to speak of, skimped and superficial development of situations beyond the central "conflict" (quotation marks entirely intentional). There were also a few terrible proofreading errors, particularly verb tenses which switch in mid-sentence--not something I'd care to teach young readers.
With a little more development and attention to detail, this story could have been wonderful and gripping. As it was, cramming most of the real action into the last few chapters and then topping it off with the "story within a story" had me skimming to finish it. If the author had known how to weave Alma's creation into the story of her year, it would have been so much better.
Report Card: Bell has considerable imagination, but does not apply himself. He would do well to review basic mechanics of the English language. Unsatisfactory.