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Judging a Book by it's Cover --
Nice colors. But I'm not a big fanor the overall design. Both models on the cover poorly depict the characters as described in the book. The male model looks older and "softer", at the same time the pose makes him look like he's one of those grabby PitA guys who think they're cute but they're not. Sadie also looks older and way more "buttoned up" than described. The model's got that look like "Oh yeah? I don't think so buddy". It seems more playful and cheeky, but you really do not sense any romantic connection from the cover.
Synopsis sounds okay, not like something I'd pick up on my own though. I'm not a huge fan of baseball and it sounded a little too redneck as well. But, as a favor to a friend, I've agreed to read it. I have liked the author's firemen series, so I'm hoping the writing style will transfer over to this new series as well.
Looking Deeper --
Caleb is a great brother. But, the way he approaches Sadie? I'm surprised the guy hasn't been charged with sexual assault. He's always pawing at her, and more! And, maybe it's some sort of hole-in-the-wall small-town mentality, but if Sadie's so dang shook up over what Ham did to her, without looking into the violation of privacy laws and reporting the photos and video to the proper channels, how did she expect to ever become a successful lawyer? I get the familial tie in the law enforcement thing, but once it hit the web, it became Federal and she would not have had to deal with Ham's podunk father. Their parents were a hot damn mess, both of them. The cast of secondary characters were enjoyable, but are currently little more than filler... only two or three actually contributed to the plot. The whole slug cause seemed like an odd and unusual mockery. The conflicts were rather plentiful and with their less-than-stellar communication, resolutions were not found quickly nor easily. The plot, as a whole, was good. There was some predictability, but not enough to be off-putting. The conclusion was solid, with a completed HEA and hints of others to come.
For the first time in a Jennifer Bernard book, I actually found it difficult to connect to the characters. Caleb and Sadie seemed to have some trouble connecting as well... almost like an engine with one cylinder misfiring. The dialogue was still classic Jennifer Bernard, however. Smart, sassy and fun. Maybe it's because this is the series' debut and a whole new world needs building, but I'm not really a fan of the small-town busybody mentality in Kilby and hope like hell that future books in the series will focus less on the narrow-minded, nosy inhabitants. Fans of Jennifer Bernard will also note that this book is quite a bit steamier than her Bachelor Firemen books ever were. I have a pet peeve about "boner" being used in adult plots, my opinion is that it's a term used by children, teens, and up into college. It is suitable for Young Adult and New Adult, but I don't feel it is a mature word for mature adults. Unfortunately, the terminology had made an appearance a few times throughout the book. I felt as though maybe Jennifer's alter-ego had a more predominant hand in writing this book, especially in the amped -up, sexy scenes.
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Heat Level: 4.25 ~ Score: 3.7 ~ Stars: 4
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I'm so sorry, Jenny, for the less than AWESOME score! If it were "rate an author", you'd always get a 5 from me! <3