I'm being a little generous
So, this wasn't terrible but there were distinct issues. The blurb mentions that Luke outed Mitch after supposedly seeing him in a gay bar. After 3 years, Mitch returns, sees Luke and there's little to no awkwardness. They were supposed to have been good friends since high school, yet the author NEVER had Mitch ask why Luke didn't talk to him first, instead of going directly to his fiancé. I guess that's too normal. For much of the story, neither of these two seem altogether normal in their reactions. I also don't know exactly what purpose of the visits with the ex and her new fiancé had.
There were editing issues. Grammar, spelling and punctuation mistakes were minimal, so kudos for that. But there were parts that really could have used either a sharper editor or more beta readers.
Luke was widely known to be gay, once he outed Mitch. There was this first with
Luke and Mitch talking:
"...He’d been wrong about Mitch cheating, not him being gay. Mitch had never seemed like the cheating type, but Luke had never guessed he was gay in years of knowing him. Mitch furrowed his brow, figuring that one out. “It would have been better to be wrong about me being gay?” “You never denied it.” It had driven Luke mad for the last three years not knowing why Mitch hadn’t defended himself. “I… I’m glad you outed me,..."
Shortly AFTER that, Mitchell thinks of Luke:
"Was he still gay?"
Really? Was he supposed to have somehow stopped?
They get together and have oral sex. Then the next day, Luke thinks:
"The slight possibility Mitchell was straight and just fooling around with him, or that he’d just realized after that encounter that he was straight…"
Didn't they recently have the discussion that Mitch was gay, above?
Next, there's this conversation:
"I haven’t dated anyone.” “In a while?” “No, in… well… three years.” It took Luke a few seconds to put two and two together. Then he straightened up, his expression clearing in shock, then understanding. “You mean since you, uh, broke off the…?” “Yeah.” Mitchell gritted his teeth, praying Luke wasn’t going to judge him for this. “And before that, I’ve never been with a man either. And even with Emily, we never…” “Oh,” Luke breathed out. Mitchell’s stomach twisted. Idiot. No guy ever just admits they’re a virgin..."
Then just as they're getting ready to have sex a SECOND time:
"Was that your first time?” Mitchell hesitated, embarrassment crawling up into the pit of his stomach. How sad would that sound? Would Luke judge him? Worse yet, had he been able to tell?"
He’d already told him he was a virgin before sex the first time!!
It was like the author couldn't remember what she'd written. The pace of the book was slow. If I had to hear about the paperwork Mitch was doing one more time, I was ready to DNF. No real chemistry between the two characters. The sex scenes weren't written too badly but not passionate. In spite of contradictory passages, I did want to know about the fight, it was readable and it didn't have a lot of grammar issues, so I gave it a three.