The Yellow Silk was one of the first non-Drizzt, non-Drow Forgotten Realms books that I read. Suffice to say, I liked it, and began reading non-Drizzt, non-Drow Forgotten Realms books. Imagine, though- had I not liked it, I wouldn’t be here right now. What a scary alternate reality. Having gone back and read The Yellow Silk again, I can affirm that the book was good. Sadly, though, it wasn’t as good as I remember it being.
First, let me get to the characters. Tychoben Arisaenn was a great bard. He was roguish and cunning, as evidenced by his dealings with organized criminal Brin. He was goodhearted and charming, as evidenced by his living situation with Veseene, his mentor. Kuang Li Chien was a sort of generic, stereotypical “Easterner who knows kung-fu”, but he was a tolerable character. Brin, the Halfling gangster, I liked. I don’t know why, but there is something about Halfling gangsters that I like. I know, in my own setting, there exists at least one very powerful Halfling crime lord, so for all I know, Brin right here might have been the latent inspiration. Veseene, Tycho’s teacher, was another character I liked. A former Bard, who’s now, more or less an invalid. A depiction that you don’t see too often in the heroic fantasy literature that most Forgotten Realms novels are.
Yu Mao was one character I didn’t like. His curse was very unique, and was a major swerve, though. It wasn’t a surprise this time around, since I am re-reading the book, but I remember being very surprised at the revelation the first time reading it, when he transformed from Black Scratch. That said, his motives for doing what he did were very anti-climactic and generic. He was the first-born son of a respected family in Shou Lung who didn’t want the burdens and pressures that came with it. So, what did he do? Become an evil pirate. It felt pretty unrealistic to me. Not wanting to deal with the pressure and propriety that come with being the heir to a semi-important lineage in Shou Lung? That works. Randomly becoming a pirate, and consorting with Faerûnians to escape it? A little less realistic.
Speaking of unrealistic, I found the final battle scene to be just slightly reinforced by plot armor. And, when I mean just slightly, I mean a lot. Tycho and Li against a bunch of Brins thugs, a few more hired thugs for good measure, and two Red Wizards, and the two of them pull it off? Even though they had a plan, and the Yellow Silk artifact on their side, if you ran a percentages program about the likelihood of their victory, the chance that they pull it off would be very, very, slim. And, yet they do, with very little problem.
I liked the city of Spandeliyon, itself, too. Dan Bassingthwaite really captured the essence of the city. Its “grittiness”. Its “seediness” Its “Elf hate”. It was big enough to be a city, but small enough to be an intimate setting for the book.