This review consists almost entirely of notes on the choice of translation.
Having further researched the translation options of this story, I have to say, I wish there were resources about the two main English options. Here is what I’ve surmised:
After finishing the first half, I realized that Plum in a Golden Vase is the same story as the Golden Lotus - assumed they were different and would have it read next.
However, from what I can tell, and from the fact that there are almost double the pages in PGV compared to GL, that translation is much more in depth and gratifying - potentially more worthwhile.
If you just want to get into the story, don’t have much knowledge about the literature of the time, GL is the better (1200 pages) taster choice. Overall, especially with the first part of the two volumes, I was satisfied with the way the translation handles the story. Much is condensed but the most juicy, dramatic parts are given a good amount of space and explanation/description. As in, SPOILERS, Pan Jinlian and Ximen Qing’s meeting, the death of Li Ping-er’s baby, and Ximen Qing’s own death.
It reads quickly since it gets quite repetitive, Ximen visited this guy, gave money to this maid, these silks arrived in a trunk, blah, blah, blah. Though it seems this could be doing a service to those of us who would be bored by the details of such interactions/events in the longer translation, it may also be coming at the cost of the natural rhythym of the plot line as it seems to pause for the reader as we read a sort of to-do list of all of Ximen’s recent economic ventures.
Another thing to note is that, though sold as erotica, this version is quite tame compared to what I have heard about PGV. The translator, Clement Egerton, put the explicit scenes in Latin in his original 1939 translation - this is no longer true, at least in the copy I read, and remains strongly metaphorical in nature and again, repetitive.
To conclude, do your own research into Golden Lotus versus Plum in a Golden Vase - if you’re feeling super ambitious, I’d say go for PGV over GL, but if you want to get the story and the general culture, morals, and ideas of the time, through the framework of literature, Golden Lotus suites that purpose just fine! Also, PGV may be harder to find, at least it was for me - through a library system.