The Two Mr. Kings

by xxLissaMaexx

Eden was 15 when she met her new neighbors Harper and Jasper King, the billionaire brothers who her alcoholic abusive mother has her eyes on. Eden expected them to be like all the other men who walked into her life. They surprise her by being nice and understanding. Now that Eden is 19, she thinks of them as brothers but do they think of her as a sister now that she is an adult, especially after seeing something she shouldn't have?

Genres: Romance, Abuse, Erotica

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Reviews

[Shanna Clowser · Rating 2 out of 5]

I hate to give this book 2 stars because I LOVED almost every second of it up until the last 3-4 chapters. It seemed super rushed and random. Harpers ending almost made me throw my phone i was so angry. It made absolutely no sense because he loved her so much throughout the whole book and then that?! WTF. It was completely out of character for him and it killed the whole book for me. Also her sister was just random crap that no one cared about and was unnecessary. Heck I could have even done without her dad being in it. I loved this book for Eden, Jasper and Harper.i loved how crazy they were about each other and how well they all fit together in every way. The ending completely ruined it. PLEASE if it's at all possible write an alternate ending!! I was seriously so upset and I didn't want it to end until it ended so badly that I even deleted the reading app so I wouldn't be this disappointed again. :(

[Holly · Rating 2 out of 5]

This story had potential to be a really good polyamorous romance. I was able to look past the grammar issues and there are a lot of them. There were a few plot twist such as Eden’s sister that really didn’t need to be there. The ending Is what really changed my mind on this story. I love ago polyamorous romance with a happy ending and this didn’t have that for me. I guess you could say there was a happy ending but I just felt I wasted my time with how it ended. Glad I didn’t pay for it.

[Jessica · Rating 4 out of 5]

I loved the book! I would have given it 5 stars but the ending was off Harper's behaviors was wow! Not like him. He loved her and the arrangements all threw the story them bam he met someone, what in the hell. And what's with her sister? Man that ending I wanted to cry I was so hoping the 3 of them and little sis live happily ever after.

[Brittney Miller · Rating 3 out of 5]

Im doing a 3 bc i absolutely loved this book. I have not put my phone down the last 2 days and i finished it. I love the characters and the whole thing but toward the end of it i felt like it was being rushed. I liked the whole taking harper out and him finding new love to be a cool and unexpected twist that worked if you finished the story!!!!! I was so angry at the end when i found out there's no more to it. After all this and thats how it ends. We dont find out the father. I just have to say if this is a new writer i wish you the best bc you have a gift but you need to slow down and check your work if this is what you want. I was so angry that this is how it ended and with all the grammer issues and it just being rushed at the end i just hope you are working on the next book to this like asap. I need to know how this story turns out. I want to know where cassie is and jennifer. I just so upset it ended this way with really no ending its just like a cut off 3 /4 of the way through the story. I am not writing this to make anyone mad or upset just hoping that the writer sees this and wants to do better. Good luck and god bless. Ps i really want to read what happens next like asap.

[Hermione;) · Rating 4 out of 5]

All right how do I begin..well honesty I ran into this book when I was using an app Similar to episode and wattpad ..This story was fascinating to me from the beginning I was instantly hooked with the fact that there were 2 men and she didn't have to choose I wasn't familiar With the genre of this book And I had never read a romance with an age gap.. So yes as you can tell This was 1 of the books that generally Made me dive into reverse harems and age gaps just so many new genres that I had yet to explore. I enjoyed this book but overall I believe there was so much potential for An incredible ending a wayy better ending than this was given ..I read this book a long time ago I think It was during the beginning of quarantine And to this day I remember this book And how much I loved it but when I read the second book that went along with this one it disappointed me so much and I just wish there was something written that could have gave me closure.

[Shannon · Rating 4 out of 5]

Personally I loved it. Yeah there were some grammatical errors but nothing I couldn't get past. I'm not a hardcore reader so someone who has read a lot may find this more of an author in the beginning of their career and lacking. I stayed into it enough I finished it in 2 days.

[Christin James · Rating 1 out of 5]

Disclaimer: I read this book for free. Boy am I glad I didn't pay for this. It started off with a 50 Shades feel with a polyamorous spin to it but ultimately it was a let down. The amount of spelling and grammatical errors are astounding!!! The mistakes get worse as the book comes to a close. The ending was the most disappointing. It felt like the author didn't know how to end it so they tied everything in a cookie cutter bow that just doesn't jive with the first half of the book. I regret wasting my time.

[Amelia Pluck · Rating 4 out of 5]

The story overall was surprising with loads of feelings mixed in. As I read it the editing was awful BUT it was still easy to understand. The ending through me for a bit of a loop but it really worked out for the best with honesty being extremely important. I would read more from this author. I hope they grow as an author if this is the path they want.

[Megan McEntyre · Rating 3 out of 5]

Feels like a rough draft. This book has a lot of potential, though.

[Heidi Valeriani]

How can I get this book downloaded to read? Nothings working...suggestions?

[Kristen · Rating 2 out of 5]

I wish I could give it more because LOVED it until the end! Harper's ending was so disappointing. I finished it yesterday and it's still bothering me today. It was going so well, and for that to get thrown in randomly at the end was a complete let down.

[savage dove · Rating 3 out of 5]

Came across the prologue via Readict on Facebook and thought I'd give it a read. The cover on there isn't as suggestive so wasn't expecting the kinky turn of events. Felt like Eden getting custody of her sister was random and unnecessary. Also Harper's actions in the end were a twist and reasoning felt half assed, more like a means to an end and as a result was disappointed with the ending.

[Jamie Leigh · Rating 1 out of 5]

********SPOILER ALERT*****
I really, really hope that I got the wrong download. The book started out okay. There were lots of minor errors but I was still enjoying the book. Then in chapter 9, she & Elijah were at the charity event. She saw the woman in red and....that was it. It jumps to chapter 10 where she's having cramps and goes downstairs to talk to her nana...jumps to chapter 11 where she's telling the guys about her dad. I'm so confused. Then the next page is talking about her house burning. I have no idea what's going on. And I gave up!

P.S. if this was the wrong book, I would be willing to re-try and post another review.

[Tiffany · Rating 1 out of 5]

This could have been a good book. There were a ton of grammatical errors but I could over look that if the story was good. There were several plot twists that did not need to be there. But, even those I could overlook. The ending was the worst. A bad ending makes the whole book a waste of time.

[Melissa Moon · Rating 5 out of 5]

Omg in love with this
Love her work friends they are great characters they made me lol

[TolerantIdiot · Rating 2 out of 5]

The book was amazing opening up to different types of relationships and normalizing that type of relationship but the last two chapters definitely took away from the whole book the background stories their personality traits Harper turned into a totally different person I feel as if the last two chapters you were trying to add in a climax in the falling action and it just didn’t clash well Harper wasn’t the type to lie as it was proven many times in the beginning and at the end it just twists which just doesn’t seem right their pregnancy would have been a really good ending or maybe you could have put the relationship secret in the middle so it didn’t strain on the entire book otherwise it was pretty good

[Kim · Rating 5 out of 5]

So I'm going to be of the unpopular opinion of really enjoying the book... The ending did seem a bit off, so I will say it's more 4.5 star worthy vs a full 5. There are a lots of spoilers...

Eden had a difficult upbringing because of her abusive mom due to her mom's alcohol abuse. Her neighbors, Harper and Jasper (who were 10 and 12 years her senior) were her safe haven. That grew to a polyamorous relationship after Eden returned home from college to care for her mom. Her guys, as she calls them, have always been her best friends and go to people so it made sense.

I enjoyed seeing her coming out of her shell and exploring a sexual relationship (she was a 19 year old virgin) with the guys based on 4 years built of trust and accidently seeing them sharing another woman. Except she didn't want to share them and they didn't want to lose her. So they ultimately committed to each other.

I also aplreciated her mom getting the help she needed for her alcoholism and getting back to the mom who treated Eden properly. It also left to her father coming back into her life only to realize he too was an abuser who did awful things which ultimately messed up Eden's mom in the first place. So her journey was positive.

I liked the guys' sister coming into play too and the sisterhood that Eden felt with her too. Quinn was quite a shocking turn with her friendship being the longest and her ultimately trying to harm Eden. I even liked Elijah, though not his lie about the flowers, coming into the picture and even having sex with Eden. It gave her an additional sexual experience (where she also realized how much she missed and loved her guys). And speaking of them... Their mother. She started out as an awful person to Eden and Eden left because the guys weren't standing up for her. After they lost Eden, they finally told their mom. And she became a much better and nicer person to Eden after understanding it. Eden's little sister came into play after her father was out of the picture. That was a bit odd but also sweet.

Now, for the things I didn't like:

-The grammar and the typos were awful. Like 1 star worthy. Most times I was able to get through them, but there was one time that I was utterly confused as to what the proper words were supposed to be... But it didn't change the message of the story so I looked last it.

-Harper at the end.... I wasn't a huge fan of his actions. And while others have demoted stars and taken a couple away, I didn't think it was that dramatic. Harper loves Eden, but just like Eden loves the two guys, Harper turned out to love two women. That wouldn't work out for Eden and Jasper so he didn't go through with the commitment ceremony in the long run. However, he was quite spineless about it which wasn't ok. He had moments of thinking Jasper was a better fit for Eden and I thought he was just looking long term and trying not to over complicate their future especially with the little sister in the picture later too, not that he was cheating on her and lying to them both (her and his brother). That part wasn't cool at all.

But overall, I enjoyed the book and am glad I read it. I liked that Harper was the more "friendly" brother to Eden growing up and Jasper was the more disciplined one who knew Eden and the situation she was in from the get go. I would have thought she ended up with Harper but I'm glad she ended up with Jasper. And it sounds like they needed up with a baby down the road which is fun for them too. :)

[Aimee · Rating 3 out of 5]

I love reading books on Wattpad and supporting small authors. There were a lot of grammar issues which I can mostly look over because I definitely understand how writing can be, but if that is something that is a deal-breaker for you I would stay away from this book.

My main issue with this story is that I didn’t feel as though the characters had a truly believable development. As someone that has been abused by a family member I understand the desire and reality of forgiveness, but the way the story was developed and written it was hard to believe that the mother in the story would come out of the story in the light that she did.

There were also a lot of unnecessary and frustrating plot issues that made me kind of wish that the story just ended sooner instead of trying to make the story a longer drama that it didn’t need to be.

Overall the story was fun, intriguing, and sensual but I found myself too frustrated in the frivolous drama plots to really enjoy the story.

[Gina Kline · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is my first actual review on this app, besides star ratings. This was the very first book I read online. I was drawn in from a misleading article on Facebook, not realizing it was a book until the readict app appeared to finish the novel. I always need to have a book in my hand for tangability, so to read on a device was something new for me. The storyline deserves five stars. This author clearly must be fresh off the keyboard. She has a way of sucking you in for more;however, there are so many typos and grammatical errors. I would give one to zero stars for all of the errors if there was a category. Are brains are wired to teach us to transpose the words correctly. I am happy we are able to transpose, I would have been lost if unable to overcome the misspellings and wrong word usage drove me crazy. Aside from that criticism, it was an overall page turner and very steamy!

[Carolyn Johnson]

The author perseverated on one area to a nausea too many times, I had to put the book on hold for awhile to take a break from the same nauseating triangulating intercourses; the author needs to be more captivating for all readers to keep the interest going. The grammar was "horrible;" the adoption of Eden's sister was a an awful side liner; however, I enjoyed the twists and turns in Eden's life and the fact that she finally found out that Jasper is the father of the baby. I got extremely disappointed when discovering that the book ended abruptly at Chapter 46 when Eden is 11 months pregnant, attempting to begin a life with Jasper and suddenly this is the end. I am truly disappointed and would love to know if Eden carried the pregnancy to full term, what type of baby she had and so much more.
The story has so much more potential.

[Elizabeth Buck · Rating 4 out of 5]

Awesome book considering I don’t read books that much it captivated my attention. I would have given it five stars however there is a lot of miss grammar and even though the offer is just starting out I believe the grammar should be a lot better that it is. You have to re-read it to figure out what words are supposed to be where some words make no sense at all. Also in series 2 there is a mess up with something between Gary and Eden, Gary happens to be looking over Eden shoulder and sees is doing on her phone, he figures out she is pregnant. Later on in the chapters it’s like Stacy and Gary don’t know Eden is pregnant. However it was clearly stated earlier in the chapters that he figured out she was. Please continue the story so we know what happens to the characters.

[Stakie · Rating 2 out of 5]

I have never been so upset with a book before. Until the last few chapters its a pretty good read. I was happy to see a polyamorous relationship in a book without super toxic relationship troupes. That is the only reason I give this book any stars.

Why I do not like the book.
•Errors are crazy and it gets worse as the book goes on
•it ultimately feels rushed.
°Throughout the story the "problems" that keep happening feels like filler at times. Moving too fast from one problem to the next.
°Ending doesn't feel right. Feels pretty half assed.
•Completely destroys the polyam relationship that drew me into this to begin with.

[Amanda · Rating 3 out of 5]

I didn't know what to think when I first decided to read it. I picked it on a whim and it did pull me into the story.. Her background is such a mess with every twist and turns. Definitely a damsel in distress with 2 brothers to the rescue. Interesting polyamorous romance there between the 3 of them. There are some grammatical errors which you can definitely look past. This story does have potential but its still missing something...I felt the ending could be better, it was definitely quick and I felt it was rushed. Is it even an ending?! it could be more to it...

[Jennifer Feltz Milkowski · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed this story. I was not expecting the way this ended. It had a good ending a more traditional ending. I loved how Jasper and Harper protected Eden from the minute they met her. I loved how everything was able to be wrapped up.

Good story. There were many missing words in what I read but for the most part I could make sense of the sentences. Which is why I gave it a 3 and not a 4.

[Kiyomi · Rating 3 out of 5]

I liked the polyamorous/menage trope. The age gap is fine as well, it worked most of the time. Three storyline was decent, but you have to look past the grammatical errors. I didn't like the ending. They kept saying they are meant to be, the three were made for watch other, etc. But near the end it doesn't work anymore and it goes into a regular couple to quickly. It seems like that should have happened earlier, with it at the end, I am still mad at how Harper treated Jasper and Eden.

[DiLori Benally · Rating 5 out of 5]

I Loved this book so much. I cried with her and her feelings especially with the last three chapters. I was angry with Haper pulling his feelings that late when they all agreed to keep communicating properly with each other. And for the book to end that quickly made me made when I knew that there would be more to their lives.
But I do love the book and looking forward to the second if there is one.

[Jenny · Rating 3 out of 5]

It started well, but went on way too long. How much stuff can happen to one girl? Two surprise sisters, and there didn’t seem to be any consequences, or even any follow up, after what happened with her Dad. That was weird, one interview with the Police and she just went home.

The typos were atrocious and only got worse as the story went on. It was like the author never bothered to get anyone to read it before hitting publish.

[Amanda · Rating 2 out of 5]

There are SOOOOOO MANY grammatical and spelling errors. I had to put it down several times before I could finish it. The story is what kept me going back. Lissa, darling, send me the story and I will edit it for you!! Some parts are completely random but life can be like that. The love between Eden, Harper, and Jasper is the whole story until you get to the end and it all goes down the drain. Happy and sad at the same time.

[Dakota · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ok i love this book yes there were a lot of spelling errors and so on but I just loved the romance and how things went about. Some of it was very out of place but I still really enjoyed it. However is the ending really just the ending???? I read this on Readict and most of those books get 3 chapters released every day so I thought maybe I'd just have to wait but now that I'm researching im thinking ill never know what happened with them and it breaks my heart.

[Shannon Marie · Rating 3 out of 5]

It’s started off pretty good. There were some areas that were rushed or not really believable. Like the really quick emotional scenes, and then bam! The main character is just over it.

The end was also VERY rushed. Which was so disappointing, as it has so much potential to be a good book.

Also, the girl sleeps a lot. Why is she so damn sleepy all the time.

Note to the author trash your last chapters as start over. Also, proof read please!