It's nice that the author does drop some tidbits in that are from the actual mythology (highly edited of course)...that way I can look up and read it myself. More selfish gods threatening Demon, escaping peril, etc. It never feels like Demon is in actual danger, so that lowers the tension considerably. Even when the maenads are chasing him, he's rescued easily and it just skips past Chiron healing Dionysus. Oh, and the animals are only fed ambrosia, even though they hate it. It keeps saying that there are no other options except on feast days, but...then why is Hestia always cooking non-ambrosia...?
There is also nonsense about Demon riding Keith (flying horse) and basically they collapse into the water. Demon attempts to swim and hold the "small beast's" head above water. Look, if he can ride Keith, that means Keith isn't that small, and there's no way he can hold it's head above the water...
Apparently Demon didn't write about the phoenix as his first case, since Pegasus and Chimera are going to be the first ones written about.
The illustrations are STILL getting in the way of the text. Whoever made the e-book really screwed up.