'One of the coolest fantasy series to come along in an age' aurealisXpress Two heroes, one soul, and all the world to conquer - the first book in The Broken Well Trilogy. 'Prophecy's Ruin may just be the start of the next big thing in Australian Fantasy.' Weekend Australian 'Two of the most intriguing protagonists I've encountered in a long time' Bookseller and Publisher 'Sam Bowring's debut is the stuff of fantasy writers' fantasies. An epic, enthralling, towering triumph'aurealisXpress For a millennium the lands of Kainordas and Fenvarrow have been at war, ever since the gods of shadow and light broke the Great Well of Souls. In the absence of victory, they have settled into an uneasy stalemate - until a prophecy foretells of a child of power who will finally break the balance. Each side races to find the child, and when they do, a battle ensues with unexpected consequences - in a terrible accident, the child's very soul is ripped in two. Each side retreats with their own part of the child, uncertain as to whether they now possess the one capable of finally ending their age-old battle. PROPHECY'S RUIN tells the story of the two boys as they grow to be men. Bel becomes a charismatic though troubled warrior, Losara an enigmatic and thoughtful mage. Both are powerful young men, yet incomplete. As they struggle to discover their place in the world and the shape of their destinies, inevitably each has to ask the ultimate will he, one day, have to face himself? ** Includes preview chapters of Book 2 in the Broken Well DESTINY'S RIFT ** Sam Bowring is a comedian and writer. As well as creating his own stand-up routines, he has written for a number of television shows and written children's books. He is the author of the acclaimed Broken Well Trilogy and the Strange Threads Duology. He lives in Sydney.
It started with a brutal battle of magic and wit between mage Elessa and undead soul Fazal over the right to claim the blue haired boy who’d lead them to victory and shape their sides’ destiny. Corlas – the father could do nothing but watch as his newborn’s soul was torn in two by the Gods will through lightning strike leaving each of Kainordas (light) and Fenvarrow (dark) a powerful future leader.
Both sides of the equation, the light (Bel), and the shadow (Losara) were given equal page time with Losara's shadowland companions reading the more interesting; their characterization blurring the lines between traditional good and evil.
Of the more memorable moments (of which there are many) the battle in the forest of Drel stands out, I could almost smell the blood dripping off the pages and was filled with a sense of dread with each combatant felled or wounded. There's also a fantastic twist I didn't see coming, a sure sign of great writing.
My rating: 5/5 stars. This is a great start to what I’m sure is a highly entertaining Broken Well Trilogy with enough twists and turns to keep the reader guessing.
This book is a very good read if you stick it out to the end, which i highly recommend you do!
As the book picks up steam, it just gets better and better. The enjoyment of the story increases as we learn and remember more of the back-story of both the world that is Prophecy's Ruin and the characters that reside within it.
The maturing (aging) of the two main characters is the key highlight of the book due to the fact that they become exponentially more interesting the further in you read.
The beginning is very fast moving and the action is plentiful, however this can be detrimental to the story as it leads to some confusion and a lot of effort is required to absorb all the new information. The overly detailed beginning can be expected (to some extent) in the first book of a trilogy because it is usually needed to create a solid base for the ones that follow.
The second half of Prophecy's Ruin is extremely rewarding, and i hope that the next two in the trilogy will more more like the latter part of the first book.
Overall, very much worth the read. I could not put it down and cant wait for the next one!
This was going to be a 3* review, but then I thought the ending was so baffling and confusing, I had to take a star off. There were some good ideas in this, some cool concepts that could have gone somewhere really interesting, but it got so bogged down in unnecessary scenes and details that it all got lost along the way. Whole scenes and chapters could have been removed and made no difference to the story. Some characters made decisions that seemed wholly out of character compared to the rest of the novel, and seemed contrived just to allow the plot to advance. Time skips were also handled poorly, as it was not always apparent that one had taken place.
Magic Twins. Magic twins who are technically the same person but split into their 'light' and 'dark' sides. Magic twins with bright blue hair.
Was there any possibility that I wouldn't love this book?
Actually, yes. The story gets off to a slow start and you really have to battle to get your head wrapped around the world and its mythology and such. But it's totally worth it! From the time the boys are running around as children this story takes off. Not gonna lie, though, kind of wanted to punch Bel in the face. What can I say? The quiet mage always wins over the arrogant soldier in my books.
I loved this book so much. I also hated it so much too. I can't believe I picked up such a good read on a whim and it turned out to be one in a trilogy. Moreover, I couldn't believe I picked it up so quickly after it being published that I have to wait to next year for the next one.
I read the blurb for this book a few times before I purchased it. A prophecy spoken years ago foretells of a Child of Power who will be born. He will have blue hair and he will destroy the balance forever. The child has been born and Light and Shadow race to claim him as theirs. He lives in the place of Balance where Old Magic rules and in a fight between Light and Shadow the child's soul is torn in two resulting in two babies with blue hair. One is raised in the Light and one in the Shadow. Each knows about the other and they struggle to understand their destined path and how the two of them will meet.
I loved the world building that happened in the start of the story. The book is thankfully broken into smaller pieces; the birth, the initial raising, the boy/man at his coming of age. The gaps in between are filled in with memories as the current plot arc continues. The world building is necessary although at times the difference between shadowdreams and reality can be confusing.
I found the characters to be well built and the choice between Bel the Light Warrior and Losara the Shadow Mage to be difficult. I want to see them each succeed and I want to see their halves united. Gah! I can't wait for the next book. As the first novel by Bowring he's done a great job and it reads as a seasoned fantasy book rather than a first foray.
This is a beautifully wrought book, with a plot woven impeccably neatly in a way it is both interesting and every part is vital in some way, without being rushed. There is an excellent range of characters, with a charmingly unreliable narration to tie them together. It really brought to mind the idea of Nature Vs Nurture, and I found it intriguing that the Hero of Shadows was the one I found to be more genuinely caring and thoughtful, whereas the Hero of Light was brash and less aware of the impacts of his actions. Unfortunately Bel was just so unlikeable for me, and I couldn't accept his actions, and that detracted from the tale. Despite that, I was very pleased with this novel, and will read the next two eagerly.
I got up to page 100 and gave up. The blurb was enticing, and the cover supported my interest, however I struggled to stay attentive as the book progressed. Each time I picked it up, I found myself in a remote world, however this only came about after reading quite a few pages, and left after a paragraph or so. I found it impossible to remember what had happened in the previous chapter every time I went to read it again, making the story-line...difficult to understand. I also found myself being put off of reading this book, opting to sit and be bored rather than read it. In the long run, It was Ok, but I would not recommend reading it to many people.
I read this book in the space of about 5 days. I couldn't put it down. I'll admit, the cover did attract me to this book and the blurb just bettered my first impression of it. The idea for this story is very original and it was good to read something with a different kind of plot to it. The characters all differed from one another and you couldn't help but love them. I look forward to reading the next two books :)
Wonderful book. Characterisation is fantastic, couldn't help but empathise with the two protagonists. I especially liked the character of Isiaah, Bowring's constructed a trully malicious personality. I couldn't help but read his storyline with interest. I enjoyed this book immensely and encourage anyone to read it. Be warned! You will be sucked in to it!
The tagline reads "Two heroes, one soul, and all the world to conquer", but IMO it should say "One hero, one arrogant entitled brat, one soul, etc..." The story was a bit slow to start, but this was okay, as it set up the world of the story in a good way to draw the reader in. In the Broken Well world, the gods had a disagreement a long time ago and now the world is divided into Light and Shadow. A prophecy fortels that a man with blue hair will end the stalemate. But when the blue-haired baby is born the mages of Light and Shadow fight over him so much that he is literally split into two babies. One of the babies is taken by the Light and the other by the Shadow, and so the story begins. Which boy is the right one? I really like how the author disputes the idea of Light=good, Shadow=evil, as the story progresses. It starts with the POV of Battu the Shadowdreamer, who is undoubtedly evil, but then we move to the Light-aligned characters and we see that really they're no better. In fact, with the exception of Elessa, who unfortunately doesn't make is past the first chapter, none of the Light characters are IMO in any way likeable or sympathetic. They all read like fundamentalists, with an inflexible world view that they're right and will not even consider the notion that they may not be. It is really irritating how they insult anything to do with the Shadow in really petty ways. None of the Shadow characters do this. The only halfway tolerable Light character is Baygis, but even he is a stereotypical jerk who brags about how many women he's bedded (ugh). The baby taken to be brought up in the Light, Bel, is a very unlikeable character. Right from the start he is a little brat who thinks he's better than everyone else because her thinks that the "evil" has been stripped from him. He too brags about how many women he's slept with but didn't love. (Why do people think that this is somehow a good thing to be proud of??) On the other hand, the Shadow characters are all much deeper and more interesting. The boy taken to the Shadow at the start Losara, is one of the coolest characters ever created. Unlike Bel, he is a considerate and smart little boy, and when he grows up, despite being a very powerful mage, is still kind, conscientious, and super cool under pressure. He only sleeps with one woman whom he loves. The goblin Tyrellan, who takes the baby Losara in the first chapter is also an awesome character. Who would have thought that a goblin could be so cool? But he is. Tyrellan is as much of a fundamentalist about the Shadow, as the Light characters are about the Light, but despite this, he comes across as a lot more likeable than his Light counterparts, perhaps because he doesn't stoop to petty insults. The gods also make an appearance, as does an evil talking bird called Iassia. Iassia is probably the most evil character of them all, but even he is more likeable than some of previously mentioned characters. I am really looking forward to finding out what happens next. I give the book 4 stars because I am not sure if the reader is supposed to dislike Bel as much as I do.
Thank you very much to the author for sending me an ecopy of this novel.
Prophecy's Ruin is book one of the Broken Well Trilogy and what an immersive and exciting experience it is. Set in a world where the lands of Kainordas (the light) and Fenvarrow (shadows) are teetering on the brink of another war despite the stalemate brought on by the breaking of The Great Well of Souls.
The book starts with a fantastic action sequence with a memorable battle of wizards who fight to lay claim to a blue haired baby, a child of power prophesied to end the balance of power. This battle sets up an unexpected chain of events throughout the book as the soul of the newborn is split in two leaving twin baby boys!
We follow Bel as he grows up in Kainordas and Losara in the shadowland. What I really liked is that it's not straightforward good vs evil. Both boys feel a part of them is missing and this blurs their personality in unpredictable ways and makes them really interesting characters.
There are many members of the supporting cast that are very interesting in their own right and add to the intriguing plot. I especially liked the goblin Trellin and his reactions to being stuck with a butterfly (you'll have to read it to find out what that is about).
This is a fantasy with everything. Great plot, interesting use of magic, various races and creatures, battles full of action, planning and plotting on both sides of the world, the prophecy and the destinies of the boys and what will happen if they meet?
There's a twist that was totally unexpected and set the story off in another direction and then sets things up nicely for the next book.
A well written story, easy to read, packed with emotion and characters to care about. I have no idea what is going to happen next and that's an exciting prospect!
After reading the Strange Threads duology and really liking it, I went ahead and read Prophecy's Ruin. And I was a bit disappointed after finishing it. I really wanted to like the story, but I ended up skimming through pages on certain chapters.
Of the two halves, Losara's perspective was the most interesting to read, while Bel's was the old cliché of a young hero eager to save the world. I was hoping that since he'll be raised under the tutelage of an old, powerful and knowledgeable wizard, you'd think that he would grow up to be thoughtful. His whole characterization is based on the old fantasy hero cliché. Even the romance was shallow. At least in Losara's case, we get to know more about his love interest before they hit it off. I understand if mister Bowring wanted to write Bel as the total opposite of Losara, but at least make his character and story more compelling.
What I liked about the Strange Threads duology was how stirring every page was. In Prophecy's Ruin, there were a lot of dull moments, pages that were too tedious to read. It didn't give off the same feeling I had when I was reading Strange Threads. Losara's pilgrimage, which could have added more excitement in the book, ended up to be more tell than show.
While Prophecy's Ruin had me absorbed and eager in the first couple chapters, ultimately it failed to keep me enthused through the rest of the story. I'm still interested to how the story will get resolved, but after my experience with book one, there's little chance I'll continue reading the series.
A prophecy plays out but a storm results in the son dividing into two boys with blue hair; thus, the characters have more questions than answers since this odd occurrence. The world-building is complex and darts between different perspectives with many characters introduced as the story progresses.
I received a free copy and am leaving a review voluntarily. Thank you to Hidden Gems Books and author.
Surprisingly a good read! The boy of prophecy is split in two as a baby and both sides, light and dark, take one boy each. They are set up to battle each other in the future, but in this book we watch them grow into men. Bell is the warrior in the light and Losara the mage of the dark. I like both and cannot predict how the story will go, which is refreshing change.
QUICK OPINION: This is a brilliant and intricate book, with excellent characters and an intriguing and unique plot line - would 100% recommend!
THE DETAIL: The premise rests on a child of prophecy that has been split into two by two sides of a stalemate war, light and shadow, in their vie for power. Bowring uses this as a way to explore and the nature of prophecy and fate and the classic trope of heroes and villains, turning it all on its head.
His book presents nuanced perspectives exploring both sides of the war. Through the character development of both children and through the exploration of the powers at play that are trying to control how this prophecy comes to fruition, he shows that perhaps the nature of light and shadow is not so black and white.
The story is full of intriguing characters with strong believable motives. People of power blinded by vengeance, tyrannical leaders forsaken by gods, cunning and sly individuals looking for personal gain, a distraught father searching for his child, a servant questioning his immovable loyalty... the list goes on and Bowring impressively interweaves them all into a thrilling story that keeps you guessing and hungry for more.
Honestly 10/10 would recommend to anyone (and I have done to many friends). The story enchanted me and had my mind wandering back to it constantly during the times i was forced to put it down.
Really good fantasy series beginning with an interesting twist on the hero concept. The second book would be worth reading. Also, Australian author. Yay!
Light and Dark have been forcibly separated and the two forces pursue an endless war for dominance. A prophecy announces that a boy with blue hair will end the bloodshed. When this child is finally born both the light and dark are looking for him. Two warring mages discover him and in the massive battle that follows they tear the child’s soul in half, creating two blue haired boys – but which is the prophecised hero?
I loved this concept. Blue-hair touches on my anime/manga affections, twins is just a weird obsession I have, and I love stories which look deeper into prophecies. I know some people whinge about being over prophecies in fantasy, but as long as it’s a fresh take like this I love it.
This book was the sort of book I would have powered through in a matter of days. Unfortunately my still undiagnosed vertigo disorder means that sometimes looking at text makes me feel like my eyes are bleeding. I thought when I started the book on one of my good days that I’d slam through the whole series this month (I have waaaaay too many series I’ve started but haven’t finished with the reading challenge I'm doing (Death Works, Black Magician,)). No such luck.
The world is rich and full. There are so many places and species of both the light and dark. I really love the border between the two, and the gods themselves are pretty cool. Fans of world building should love this. The characters of the saviour’s soul split in two, Losara and Bel, are delightfully opposite sides of the same coin, though I think most people will probably like Losara more than Bel.
The only thing that bugged me was a bit at the end. Not the ending itself, but something that happened near the end. SPOILER ALERT. END SPOILER
I’m looking forward to finding the time to finish this series when my head is a little clearer.
A magic system that is not the whole story yet is the whole story. A new world with a lot of different characters and species, good and bad.
Bel and Losara, two brothers who have somehow had their soul divided by magical means no less. Who is the Darker brother and who is the brother that will fight for the light? That is a question that I have been pondering the entire first book. Are the right brothers really fighting on the "proper" sides of good and evil.
Gods are divided. Both have champions. Both have been set upon their paths. Can two brothers divided by magic come together and prevail one over the other. How does seeing a possible future and making changes to it affect the present and the future.? Who knows. But it is on book 2 in this series.
Very well written and not too much back story and world building to bog the story IMO. Enough to keep you interested and let you know where you are and why.
The ending, interesting and fast paced. And the best part is finding out that sometimes you come full circle and vengeance or retribution can come in many forms. This is just supposition on my part. Hopefully you do not take this as a spoiler. It is simply my feeling after finishing the story.
I am looking forward to book 2 in the series. The author has done a very nice job writing this story and I cannot wait until the next novel. A new way of looking at a sci-fi fantasy story and not the same old same old one can read time and again.
I think it's a fantastic read. It took a while to get my head around where the author was going in the first few chapters, as characters kept dying and I found difficult to forsee how they will fit into the plot later. I've noticed a few people mention similar issues in their reviews, but I can only recommend people persist, as the story definitely develops to draw you in further as the main characters develop. The characters themselves are far from ordinary, they do things you don't expect them to do. The author constantly challanges general perceptions of good and evil and that is so refreshing.
The story is very original and deserves to be read, if I had millions I think I'd make it into a movie.
Can hardly wait to get Destiny's Rift.... I've definitely become a fan of Bowring :)
The writing of the book was excellent and the plot was very unique and interesting however I felt that the plot was carried out in such a way that the book felt dragged out and long. Now looking back on my reading experience I cannot remember much of the book other than the important bits and fighting/action scenes. The rest just seemed to be a bit of a waste of time.
This book is the first in a trilogy (I have NOT read any more of the series) but I felt as though a lot more could have been added into the story. I have heard people say that it gets better and better as it goes on, and maybe in the future I will but I am not planning on reading the rest of the trilogy any time soon just because really I am no longer interested.
I was given this book by my sister and had it around for a few weeks before I actually started it. After that I just couldn't put it down, I really enjoyed it and thought it was very creative and original plot. I loved the division of the character and think it will lead to very interesting aspects in the second and third books. It has very exciting characters and is just a relaxing book that takes your imagination to very distant places.
The only problem now is the wait for the next 2 books.
This was a different type of book than I normally read but sometimes I like to step outside my box and discover new authors and new exciting things. This book is a very well written magical fantasy that you have to really stay alert and on top of. Definitely not a skim the page read. You have to pay attention to know what you are reading. Great storyline and characters.