Short, sweet story
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.
Rating: 8/10
PROS:
- The character of Ghost has an ability that is unusual and manifests in interesting ways. It’s also quite a mystery at the beginning of the story, so I was intrigued right from the start.
- The story isn’t long (about 40 pages), but it has several sex scenes. Michael tends to create BDSM characters who fall hard and fast, so all of the scenes here are tender and emotional, even when the characters hardly know each other. I also thought Ghost’s and Trip’s descriptions of each other as cats and butterflies were cute.
CONS:
- If you read many of Sean Michael’s stories, particularly those that take place in the same universe (for example, the Velvet Glove stories or the Hammer stories), they all start to look the same. (I *like* them, so that doesn’t bother me per se, but it is a weakness overall, I think.)
- I know I harp on editing in my reviews, but I can’t stop myself from noticing errors and misspellings. They’re more prevalent in Michael’s books than in books by many other authors, and many of the mistakes seem so obvious to me. It’s like no one even reads the stories through between the time when they’re written and the time when they go into print. Here’s an example: “He slid his hand down along Ghost’s braid and slowly undoing it.”