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284 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 5, 2015
*Spoilers*
The book begins with the protagonists, Kandace and Rome, as college students with Kandace being a straight-laced A student majoring in medicine while Rome is a very popular football player. She has a crush on him and while he feels the same, he goes out of his way to consistently demean and verbally abuse her, all because he thought she was too good for him.
His college and football dreams screech to a halt when he is falsely accused of rape and was thereafter incarcerated for 10 yrs. FF 10 years, Kandace is a doctor who decompresses by singing at a lounge/bar where Rome, recently released on parole, works as bouncer/doorman.
So, to get her attention, Rome orchestrates a series of physically harmful juvenile stunts that leave him in need of medical attention which he receives at the same hospital where Kandace works. I suppose straight out asking for her number, would have been too mature.
Meanwhile, Kandace is still crushing on him and allows him back into her life. Following this, what transpires is a tragic case of abusive drama whereby she takes one step toward him, opens her heart only for him to take two steps back while spewing abusive nonsense. This scenario plays out through the entire book and surprisingly Kandace enables this appalling behaviour as shown in the excerpts below:
“I want a shot with you,” he says kissing me this time. His breath was hot and his lips tasted of citrus. Drowning right here on the couch would happen if I didn’t use the common sense I was sometimes known for. But with him, I wanted to be reckless only that wouldn’t be good for Rome. Rome needed stability. “You’re heaven to me,” he says.
“Let’s start with friendship,” I offer, pulling away even though I’d rather be in his lap.
“Forget it,” he mumbles moving away. Instantly he shut down on me. Tossing the cover off, he doesn’t even say goodbye to my parents as he storms out of the house. Following him out, he ignores me in favor of getting in his car. It was becoming a habit, but this time, I sat on the hood of his car and if he drove off, he was taking me with him."
“Get the fuck off my hood,” he yells at me.
“Get the stick out of your ass,” I yell back.
“God dammit, doc, I don’t want to be here with you, so get the fuck off.”
“Bullshit,” I argue adjusting the strap of my dress before I lost a boob. “You don’t want to be anywhere but with me, you just become a little bitch when you don’t get your way.”
“I didn’t need the show and tell with your fucking family,” he growls"
End of excerpt
Initially, and with an understanding of the crap hand that life dealt him, I held out hope that Rome would step up and prove that he had matured from who he was prior to his incarceration, however, he refused to either show any remorse or any desire to achieve/be better.
Halfway through this book, I was ready to do a DNF but, with hopes that surely the plot could only improve, I persisted, only to be left acutely disappointed because there was no character growth from either of them.
Motown Throwdown could be summed as a "verbal abuse manual for dummies" or perhaps a manual for women on "how not to behave when you are the victim of verbal abuse"
It also has extremely weak characters, lacks a coherent plot structure/scene placement, includes a fair number of gratuitous violence and scene after scene of unprovoked verbal abuse from Roman. Not for me.