I picked this up as a free read on apple and really didn't have high hopes for it. That said, I was ready to be proved wrong if the story turned out to actually be decent. Unfortunately, I was disappointed. There are SO many things wrong with this book and I don't want to rant, so I'll put some of the major things in to good and bad bullet points.
Good (list considerably shorter):
>Sera, the main protagonist, did actually seem to do a bit of developing. So I guess that's something that's usually in a good story.
>Also, The main characters did seemed to be fleshed out quite well and you did get a good glimpse all their personalities (although I never did understand the importance of Doug and Danielle).
>Sera's and Liam's initial attraction to each other seemed to be quite believable.
That's about it for the good points, sorry!
Bad (list considerably longer):
>First of all, the story was VERY underdeveloped and simplistic. The idea was not original at all. Yes, there are a lot of writers who decide to go for the whole vampire thing, but usually have a different take on it! The writer had no different take on it and nothing about the vampires was really explained (how the vampires evolved in the first place, what powers they have, etc) and if it was it would be the old legends that everyone knows all about anyway. They didn't even talk about vampires for the first half of the book and it seemed a little silly to bother putting it in when the main story was CLEARLY not about vampires... rather the main protagonists' sex life.
>The spelling and grammatical errors were terrible and incredibly annoying! Someone needs to edit this book! Honestly, how old if this writer? I expect I'm younger and can still tell the difference between when to use 'too' and 'to'.
>It seemed a little unbelievable that every character the main protagonist walked into was out of-this-dimension-hot or breathtakingly beautiful (herself included). Really? Every character? Are slightly less good-looking characters not allowed to go to Sera's college or something?
>I also DON'T understand how Sera, the snotty nosed biatch, had any friends at all. She didn't try to get friends, wasn't very interesting, was also very rude- but somehow Kathleen, the very friendly girl, wanted to be best friends with her. Why? Sera refused to go out with her, didn't make much conversation and constantly slagged Kathleen off in her head about the messy room. And to top it all off, she also complained once or twice that she would have to tidy it later. No, you don't have to tidy it later, you're her room mate- not her mother.
>The only remotely interesting part of this story was Sera's mystery past, and her fear of it. However it was quickly given away so my curiosity was the stubbed out. She started to overcome her fear and get better and then we find out that Liam is also a raving lunatic. What is this writer trying to get at? What is the moral of that story? Leave one abusive relationship and dive head first into another? Liam ended becoming a psycho with his jealousy, he controlled Sera and she seemed to be fine with it... all because they were "soul mates". Really?
>Then there's the sex. Do I even have to say anything? Every chapter give or take a few, had a sex scene in. What is with the recent craze in sex novels? Does every writer have to copy 50 Shades of Grey? I actually started having a game with myself while reading this, it was called: "guess how many pages till the next sex scene". Jesus! Their entire relationship seemed to be based on sex and intense jealousy and possessiveness!
>Lastly, the thing that most irritated me of all with this book was the sexism. The writer is a woman and she's being sexist to her own gender? It seemed that every girl other than our precious Sera is 'easy' and a 'slut', but Liam's boy band of friends are labelled as nothing? Sera parades and laughs with them as although she hates every other sex-crazed boy at parties because of her past, somehow these ones are totally okay. It constantly irritated me that every girl that either Jack, Doug or Mike would bring back would be described in exactly the same way every time just with varying hair colours. "Mike came forward with a little brunette under his arm, and behind him Jack had a red-head under his. Doug was behind him with another brunette". Fab, I'm so glad we had such fantastic details of these poor girls squashed under these boys arms. It's as if they're not even good enough to be given a little more detail. The writer could have just mentioned that they had girls with them. But no, every girl other than Sera is portrayed as an easy-going slut with no morals.
Also how Liam describes the girls he has previously fed off, as if they are objects that are his for the taking. Shouldn't Sera be scared of him? That boy in her past was trying to take something off of her that she didn't want to give up but she finds nothing wrong with Liam actually taking these girls' blood? I don't expect they wanted that taken off them, they didn't ask to be blood donors! She should be repulsed.
Finally it seems our heroine unfortunately turned into the typical damsel in distress. Liam or someone else saving her butt every time she's in a spot of bother.
There's loads more but I would be going on forever. The plot was pathetic, the characters were also strange and lacked common sense (e.g Sera repeatedly asking the stupidest questions going) and all the villains were crazy jealous and beautiful girls who apparently had nothing better to do than pine over Liam and try and get revenge on Sera just because she was going out with him. The only character I had slight hope for and who seemed to have a bit more common sense was Jack but they never seemed to take any of his advice.
I don't know if sequels are coming out, but if I ever see the next one in the book shop I will actually buy it to burn it.