After I started reading this book, I remembered why I had meant to skip this one of EEW's. There's murder, not just a burned building. I don't really enjoy mystery, but I was searching for EEW's books I hadn't read yet, and I really should have skipped it.
No one warned me that a woman would be severely beaten in this book. It was Meg Powers again, with the knee and the shoulder and the pain pills. Finally there's a PT appointment, but Dana goes all over doing all sorts of things before it seemed she'd had time to heal much. Shrugging makes her wince, so I really wondered how she managed to put tape over a camera in an elevator. And get dressed and stuff. With broken ribs.
So, right. The plot is not for me at all. It's like, Dana suspects it's this guy. And it's that guy. There's not a whole lot to the story, except talking to different people and violent and illegal--and totally unbelievable--things. I suppose they work in a hijinks buddy comedy; I just didn't know that's what I was going to read.
But what really makes me sad it that I had trouble with the writing. The writing that I *loved* in The Road Home. The deadpan deliveries and the sarcasm. Maybe they worked in wartime, but got tiresome in a "witty" murder mystery.
The writing style, it just has so many--interruptions. Many, hell--most--sentences interrupted themselves for some kind of an aside. And it just became--tiresome. See what I did there? Really. Open up to any page and there will be a slew of commas and dashes. That kind of thing really needs to be used more sparingly than White did in this novel.
Still couldn't help myself and ordered Romance is a Wonderful Thing on eBay! At least a woman shouldn't be pummeled in this one...