I received an eARC from the author through NetGalley and this is my honest review
- 🖤he's the dark twin, cursed
- his brother is the light twin 💛
- 👑 The twins share the crown as princes
- 🧙♀️she's an empath and a mage
- starts as a possible love triangle with the twins 🔺
- longing, tension, slow burn
- she's a 24 year old virgin still living with her parents
- he's been celibate for 10 years
- political manipulation and potential war
- Romance is the primary focus, plot in the background
- low, almost PG-13 level spice
If you are looking for a easy, predictable, tropey, standalone romance taking place in a fantasy world, this book is for you!
Overall, this is a 2.5 star read that I rounded up to 3 stars. There were several reasons why this was not 4-5 star read, with two main big ones which I will describe after I review what I liked.
What I liked:
- The MFC was the one keeping a secret AND the hurt from the secret was resolved in this book.
- I also liked that the golden brother knew his dark brother liked the MFC, but would never seek her out, so the golden brother manipulated his dark brother in order to get him to pursue her. We were not told that the golden prince kissed the MFC for this reason until the end, but this was NOT surprising in anyway.
- I was happy to see the MFC grow and move past her more passive approach with the MMC and become more assertively aggressive towards him. He was an aggressive, isolated, jerk and needed someone more pushy to get what they wanted from him. So, again, I was happy to see her get that strength and take what she wanted from him since he was so scared.
- When the MFC was frustrated and just wanted to be alone, she decided to be selfish and not listen to the MMC when he said she needed a guard for her safety. For some reason, she thought she knew better than the MMC and could protect herself. Surprise, she couldn't. She jeopardized everyone's safety, including herself and put the MMC back into a dark place. Immediately after, she was able to reflect and understand that she was acting selfishly. I appreciated this growth in her ability to reflect and change behavior. She also was able to reflect after she finally shared her secret and could understand her fault in that. Her maturity developed in this book.
- I also appreciated that the MMC was able to reflect back on his avoidant behavior and understand that this was an approach considered cowardly. It would have been more mature to have faced her in an honest and direct way.
- At first, the connection between the MMC and MFC was more because of their magic pulling each other together; however, as the story moved forward, they grow personally together. I appreciated this.
- As noted, the MFC starts to find her strength and grows in this book. She uses this strength to defy the Assembly that are evil jerks. I was delighted to see that happen.
My main two issues with this book:
- First, I just finished a six book series with four novella's, all of which were each very unique, full of depth, had complex and messy characters, and was really well written. I was not just given some superficial maybe moderately deep information about the characters, I was given and shown in-depth detail about each character and how they became the way they were, in addition to incredible depth to the plot and overall storyline, I was hooked for all six. Therefore, coming into this book, I was having a hard time with loving the characters and story because of how little depth there was. I would say that the most nuanced detail given was about the MFC. Don't get me wrong, there is some detail about the MMC and why he was dark and disturbed but, overall, the information about him AND his internal dialogue was repeated throughout the book and we were not given the contextual and nuanced details I was seeking. I was hoping for at least one chapter that showed us the suffering he was experiencing. We do get insight into the struggles he has with his low self-worth and not perceiving he was good enough for the MFC, but that is it. The MFC sees him on the ground in a fetal like position and she then understands that he suffers that severely each day, but we never get to understand that from his lens. When did this start? What did that look and feel like for him? I wanted more of this emotional and physical information, but we were really only given, repeatedly the same internal dialogue over and over again regarding his thoughts about her. I was even hoping for a flashback to when he absorbed the ring and became dark and cursed. What was that like for him? What changes did he experience? Why did he start isolating? What happened during and after he hurt people (not just his thoughts)?
I was also hoping for more context about the golden prince. He was more charismatic, yet carried a lot of guilt. I wanted more about him too.
- Second, there really wasn't anything to this book that felt different or stood out. I was excited about this story by the way it was proposed, but unfortunately it was just the same ole tropes with nothing extra added. I love some very basic tropes WITH the combination of a unique story, magic system, plot, and/or relationship, but I did not find that in this book. For example, the MFC is living with twin, prince brothers (brother and twin brother trope), one dark and one light, while of course she is keeping a secret. The brother she is attracted to is a brooding, closed off, self-loathing, dark jerk who puts up a wall to keep her at a distance because he believes he's not good enough for her. She's the stubborn, pushy, beauty all the men want and she's naturally good at everything (mediating, engineering, maps, strategy). They both cannot communicate, keep secrets about how they feel, make assumptions about each other, and someone else is interested in her but she isn't in him. There is push and pull. Eventually, they are honest with each other, they get together, a secret is shared, distance happens, and then forget the distance and they get back together. There were zero twists, turns, or surprises.
Other issues:
- Although the MFC was 24, she read like she was a 16-18 year old. The mouthing off, being ridiculed by her parents, and her having to remind herself she wasn't a child and was 24 was juvenile.
Further about this, one of my pet peeves in books is when a trope makes women, who are all about trying to survive, act in incredibly stupid ways that threaten their survival, all for a man. They "just can't help it" or "I don't know why I'm like this around him," when that behavior threatens their and their family's safety. This book at 8%, "By the gods, I'd said too much, but something about that man made me irrational. A powerful, rich mage like him could end me and my family for the small slight without facing consequences." So, she gets her behavior could get her and her family killed, but she just does it anyway for an unknown reason? Yet, we the readers have just been told about how much she sacrifices everyday to survive and how much she avoids the mages attention. But, this man, a powerful mage, just makes her sassy and defiant, and she's willing to comprise everything to talk back?! WOMEN ARE SMARTER THAN THIS. I wish women would not be written as unintelligent, impulsive, irrational people because of a man when they were JUST written as smart survivors!
- Don't get me wrong, I love a woman who mouths off, but I love it when she 1) does it strategically and is reading the room and/or 2) has the power or status backing her and/or 3) knows he won’t hurt her due to some pre-existing knowledge (likely going back to point 1).
I was happy to see the MFC’s internal dialogue at 16% start shifting into strategy on how to defy the evil group of mages because of how they are treating her. She was figuring out how to play the game, which I loved.
- Overall, this was a sloowwwwww paced book. I took a note that, at 45%, almost nothing had happened. The MFC was living with the princes, all the men wanted her (of course), she had made no progress in mediation, and that's about it. There was very little action at this point and the plot had barely moved forward. I started to skip paragraphs because I got really bored at nothing happening or the repeated internal dialogue.
- I was confused by the magic system and the world. These were both under explained. We get more explanation about the magic, but again not enough for me to feel like finished the book understanding it, which is an issue since this is a standalone.
- Another thing I was confused by was the MFC's reasons for not wanting the MMC. "I wasn't supposed to want him like this. I was supposed to think of the good of the realm, stability of Darreth, of getting back to my family as quickly as possible. " Why? Why would being with him not be for the good of the realm or creating stability for the people? She was the calm to his storm… That had been clearly established and emphasized multiple times by the author when the MFC was having these thoughts. She was helping him and making him better, which was helping the realm and their people. Yet, she's telling herself being with him wouldn't do that? This was the most confusing rational I have read in a long time in a book to justify keeping distance. Also, why would she need to get back to her family as soon as possible? They were very poor and she was another mouth to feed, and she was the oldest sibling and the only one unmarried besides the one minor child left in the home. Why wouldn't she get with a prince and have money to give to her family? I just didn't understand this in any capacity.
I will note: Although the MFC’s rationale for keeping distance in a romanic sense was confusing, the MMC's rationale for keeping distance was well justified and I could believe why he kept pushing her away- he was so dangerous and harmful, he didn't want to hurt one of the people he actually cared about and helped him.
- By the end, there were several plot holes left unanswered. Maybe the other standalone in this same world will address these.
- There was little banter and really only one action scene.