There are quite a few places in the book where the author's phrasing is somewhat awkward or grammatical errors are made, which can make the meaning a bit obscure without re-reading the relevant passage, sometimes more than once. Perhaps a greater problem is the use of punctuation, or the lack of it. Commas occur where they don't need to be and frequently don't get added where they should be, which again can be a bit confusing and forces the re-reading of a sentence to get the real sense, breaking the flow of the narrative. Typos also occur now and then. However, the story itself is a good one and the author does manage to build tension and drama as he takes us to an imaginitive, exciting and fitting climax to the story. We are mostly told the characters back stories, rather than being shown during the course of the narrative and they tend to be a little less than three dimensional, but this is not surprising in this kind of story, where the events take place over a short period of time and mainly focus, as they should, on the central drama. There is still enough depth there to empathise with the characters. I enjoyed the story enough to buy the author's other three books and enjoyed them just as much, despite them suffering to much the same extent from the same flaws. That is not to say that the author's writing was not developing, nor that he has any lack of talent, and it is sad that his career and his life were cut short. It is a shame that his publisher has not seen fit to give the books the decent edit they deserve. Despite their shortcomings I would recommend them to all with an interest in this genre.