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Melody's Crush
18 year old Melody Jenkins has spent the last 3 years of high school crushing on one guy, Jake Kensington, who sees her as no more than a sister from another mister and best friend. Not wanting to risk their friendship, Melody has kept her crush a secret and her emotions in check whenever she’s around him… which is daily since they live on the same property.
It’s her senior year and she has made it through the past three years of high school with little social psychological trauma. That’s excellent considering she goes to a school in Los Angeles where the majority of the bored students graduating will have executive paying jobs the moment they walk across stage. If all goes well, she will graduate as the Valedictorian with multiple offers from colleges on the East Coast, far away from California.
But when the health teacher announces a “special” project that requires students to be paired and live under the same roof for one week, Melody’s world gets completely turned upside down. She is forced to spend time with someone totally opposite of her and frankly, she can't stand… or so she thought. One night of catching a glimpse of the softer side of Kyle Warner, the school’s most popular and arrogant quarterback, has her heart pounding and her stomach doing flip-flops.
But when Melody shows an ounce of affection toward Kyle, Jake discovers feelings of his own as he tries to protect his best friend from the guy he knows Kyle can be.
As the project comes to an end, Melody goes to homecoming… will it be a night to remember, forget or both?
It’s her senior year and she has made it through the past three years of high school with little social psychological trauma. That’s excellent considering she goes to a school in Los Angeles where the majority of the bored students graduating will have executive paying jobs the moment they walk across stage. If all goes well, she will graduate as the Valedictorian with multiple offers from colleges on the East Coast, far away from California.
But when the health teacher announces a “special” project that requires students to be paired and live under the same roof for one week, Melody’s world gets completely turned upside down. She is forced to spend time with someone totally opposite of her and frankly, she can't stand… or so she thought. One night of catching a glimpse of the softer side of Kyle Warner, the school’s most popular and arrogant quarterback, has her heart pounding and her stomach doing flip-flops.
But when Melody shows an ounce of affection toward Kyle, Jake discovers feelings of his own as he tries to protect his best friend from the guy he knows Kyle can be.
As the project comes to an end, Melody goes to homecoming… will it be a night to remember, forget or both?
316 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 28, 2014
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January 30, 2015
Amazing!
Wow, I loved this book! The writing is great and the characters are amazing. I loved Melody and Jake's friendship and the special bond they shared. As for Kyle, wow I loved him and the chemistry between him and Mel was awesome. I highly recommend this book and can't get the next book from Kyle's point of view fast enough!
Wow, I loved this book! The writing is great and the characters are amazing. I loved Melody and Jake's friendship and the special bond they shared. As for Kyle, wow I loved him and the chemistry between him and Mel was awesome. I highly recommend this book and can't get the next book from Kyle's point of view fast enough!
February 18, 2015
I FINALLY, FINALLY got this one and read it. Oh man, it was so good and I loved the change ups from the three different novels. It was so much smoother when it was all put together. I really wished it would of ended differently but it set my heart aflutter regardless!
January 14, 2015
3 stars for Kyle not for Melody. Love that cover
Normally I don't like these story's, I hated the main character I wanted to bitch slap her so many times, but for some reason I still liked this book. Don't ask me why I have no clue. Ohh and this book is as unrealistic as the come.
I want to read the sequel, I want more Kyle
Normally I don't like these story's, I hated the main character I wanted to bitch slap her so many times, but for some reason I still liked this book. Don't ask me why I have no clue. Ohh and this book is as unrealistic as the come.
I want to read the sequel, I want more Kyle
December 19, 2014
This book was too cute and I found myself grinning like a Cheshire Cat at many points throughout the book. From the beginning I felt a connection between Kyle and melody that just wasn't there with her and Jake. One of the better teen romance novels I have read in a while! Love!
January 11, 2015
***WARNING!!! This review may contain spoilers!***
Awww God, I loved this book! It was cute, funny, amazing, hot and set my blood on fire. Seriously! Is it just me having hormonal issues or did it make your hormones do a happy dance too? God, Kyle and Melody together were just.... wow! Fireworks, sparkles and goosebumps! I loved, loved, loved Kyle! I know I was supposed to be teaming for Jake, the best friend. And I meant to, really. I actually did want him and Melody together for real, at first. Bu then....after that weird morning when he saw her change clothes (and I assure you, I loved that scene! It was hilarious and kind of satisfying seeing him so awestruck and amazed and Melody didn't even realize what she'd done!), he started to annoy me a little more each passing day. Until that friday when the Parental project started. From the moment of the wife&husband picking at school, I didn't like Jake much.
Then I got back to likig him a little, and he was really nice and sweet with Mel, most of the time. But I was already crushing hard on Kyle, so.... although I felt sorry for Jake in the end, and I was hurting with Mel for breaking his heart, I was also hoping for a happy ending with Kyle.
There are a bunch of favorite scenes I'd read and re-read again... such as... that first friday night when Kyle arrived at her house and particularly their wrestling match and Melody's mom meeting the "husband". Or every time Mel almost passed out by drooling too much over Kyle's hotness (and when she actually passed out!). Their almost kiss when Kyle locked her out of her house. Their first real kiss at his house (Wow!). The kiss at the dance, although it was ruined by a b!tch. And finally, finally, the last scene in the end that was hot, sweet, cute and amazing! And how cute and sexy was Kyle (half naked some times) cradling a baby (fake, but still...)!
I didn't expect to like this book so much. I mean, I thought the story would be nice and interesting before starting to read it. But when I started.... I just couldn't stop reading. And I loved it so much!
I want more! I think it was too short. I'll miss Mel and Kyle!
Awww God, I loved this book! It was cute, funny, amazing, hot and set my blood on fire. Seriously! Is it just me having hormonal issues or did it make your hormones do a happy dance too? God, Kyle and Melody together were just.... wow! Fireworks, sparkles and goosebumps! I loved, loved, loved Kyle! I know I was supposed to be teaming for Jake, the best friend. And I meant to, really. I actually did want him and Melody together for real, at first. Bu then....after that weird morning when he saw her change clothes (and I assure you, I loved that scene! It was hilarious and kind of satisfying seeing him so awestruck and amazed and Melody didn't even realize what she'd done!), he started to annoy me a little more each passing day. Until that friday when the Parental project started. From the moment of the wife&husband picking at school, I didn't like Jake much.
Then I got back to likig him a little, and he was really nice and sweet with Mel, most of the time. But I was already crushing hard on Kyle, so.... although I felt sorry for Jake in the end, and I was hurting with Mel for breaking his heart, I was also hoping for a happy ending with Kyle.
There are a bunch of favorite scenes I'd read and re-read again... such as... that first friday night when Kyle arrived at her house and particularly their wrestling match and Melody's mom meeting the "husband". Or every time Mel almost passed out by drooling too much over Kyle's hotness (and when she actually passed out!). Their almost kiss when Kyle locked her out of her house. Their first real kiss at his house (Wow!). The kiss at the dance, although it was ruined by a b!tch. And finally, finally, the last scene in the end that was hot, sweet, cute and amazing! And how cute and sexy was Kyle (half naked some times) cradling a baby (fake, but still...)!
I didn't expect to like this book so much. I mean, I thought the story would be nice and interesting before starting to read it. But when I started.... I just couldn't stop reading. And I loved it so much!
I want more! I think it was too short. I'll miss Mel and Kyle!
March 13, 2015
I loved this book! It put me through a lot of emotions but, mostly, it made me laugh. Teenagers dealing with fake but realistic, newborn babies, crushes, real love, family drama, grief, guilt, expectations ... etc.
I adored Melody! She's smart-mouthed but extremely lovable. Jake is the perfect big brother/best friend. I loved how he swung back and forth between being selfish about Melody, and doing what would make her happy. And Kyle ... what a doll!! A totally jerk in the beginning but then ... total Prince Charming! Gorgeous, sweet, flawed, heart-broken, you just want to give him a big hug. Well, maybe that's not all, but ... since he's only a senior in high school, a big hug, it is. *wink*
Terrific young adult book perfect for just about any age to enjoy.
I adored Melody! She's smart-mouthed but extremely lovable. Jake is the perfect big brother/best friend. I loved how he swung back and forth between being selfish about Melody, and doing what would make her happy. And Kyle ... what a doll!! A totally jerk in the beginning but then ... total Prince Charming! Gorgeous, sweet, flawed, heart-broken, you just want to give him a big hug. Well, maybe that's not all, but ... since he's only a senior in high school, a big hug, it is. *wink*
Terrific young adult book perfect for just about any age to enjoy.
January 13, 2015
Couldn't stop reading. Want to hear more about how jake find his love and more about maxi!
January 15, 2015
Can't wait to read the next book
I loved this book! It was perfect for anyone to read. Hopefully it will last even when they go off to college.
I loved this book! It was perfect for anyone to read. Hopefully it will last even when they go off to college.
March 29, 2015
Give it a chance.
Isn't it every girls' dream to have 2 hot guys fall for her? Well, it is mine.
It all starts with a project. Melody gets paired up with the 'jock' instead of her bestfriend and discovers many things which she did not anticipate.Over the duration of the project she begins to learn new things and starts embracing the changes.
Despite this being Alora's first book it was really well written. The characters were likable and as soon as you start you are pulled into Melody's story which made me read 3/4 of this book in one sitting. It had a good plot progression however when it nears the end it left me strangely unsatisfied which surprised me since i'm a sucker for those types of endings.
Unknowingly Maxi found a special place in my heart as I longed for his appearance in this novel.
So, Alora. How about writing Maxi's story next?
Isn't it every girls' dream to have 2 hot guys fall for her? Well, it is mine.
It all starts with a project. Melody gets paired up with the 'jock' instead of her bestfriend and discovers many things which she did not anticipate.Over the duration of the project she begins to learn new things and starts embracing the changes.
Despite this being Alora's first book it was really well written. The characters were likable and as soon as you start you are pulled into Melody's story which made me read 3/4 of this book in one sitting. It had a good plot progression however when it nears the end it left me strangely unsatisfied which surprised me since i'm a sucker for those types of endings.
Unknowingly Maxi found a special place in my heart as I longed for his appearance in this novel.
So, Alora. How about writing Maxi's story next?
December 6, 2014
Enjoyable and sweet reading
I waited until the final book was out until I started reading because I knew it was going to be that good. Not your typical high school activity. Am I glad the author didn't fall into the typical plot of covering bullying as many of the YA books. Loved the female character and the hot guys. It was unexpected who she ended up with. Am I glad since I was rooting for her to end up with him. The only drawback was the ending. Too short of the HE A moment. I give this a 4.5 rating. Didn't like photo of the final book. It was somewhat a turn off for me. The first front of the book photo captured the age of the characters, but the second photo made the guy looked really young like 16 yr. old. They don't even look alike. Just my pet peeve I guess. Definitely recommend this book. I will be buying other books by this author. Couldn't even tell this her first book.
I waited until the final book was out until I started reading because I knew it was going to be that good. Not your typical high school activity. Am I glad the author didn't fall into the typical plot of covering bullying as many of the YA books. Loved the female character and the hot guys. It was unexpected who she ended up with. Am I glad since I was rooting for her to end up with him. The only drawback was the ending. Too short of the HE A moment. I give this a 4.5 rating. Didn't like photo of the final book. It was somewhat a turn off for me. The first front of the book photo captured the age of the characters, but the second photo made the guy looked really young like 16 yr. old. They don't even look alike. Just my pet peeve I guess. Definitely recommend this book. I will be buying other books by this author. Couldn't even tell this her first book.
January 14, 2015
Great first book by Alora Dillon. Melody's Crush takes you through the awakening of Melody, who transforms from shy brainiac nerd to the desirable, adorable focus of two young men's love. Melody has had that "first love crush" on her best friend, brother from another mother, Jake for 3+ years, but buries it in order to preserve a friendship that is the dearest thing to her in all the world. A school project puts her in the sights of the spoiled rich boy, school star jock, cocky QB Kyle. Melody finds through the course of the project that people have many sides, and in fact hide their true selves in order to fit the mold that others believe they should put forth. Melody finds herself drawn to Kyle, a nemesis turned sweet, sexy and endearing guy. As she fights her feelings between her lifelong crush for Jake and her new found attraction to Kyle, she finds a new self, with new dreams, and new realizations. Great light, fast, and charming read from Alora Dillon.
February 6, 2015
4.5 STARS!! A friend added this book to her "to read" shelf and after reading the description, I new it was something I would like. I'm so glad I was right! This book had me hooked within the first couple of chapters and I couldn't put it down! I really enjoyed the characters and story-line. The characters are well written and I found myself unable to predict what was going to happen next! This love triangle had me on a roller coaster ride. Seriously. Multiple times I laughed out loud. I mean if a line like "I just got schooled on how to fart by Kyle Warner and had no one I could tell it to" doesn't make you want to pick up this book, something is seriously wrong with you! The only down side I had was that I felt like the end was a bit rushed, like the story wasn't quite over... or at least Im hoping that it means that I haven't seen the end of Melody and Kyle
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January 21, 2017This is a G-rated, young-adult romance, which itself is refreshing. However, if you do not like romantic triangles, this book employs an overwhelming use of that young-adult, Twilight-inspired, plotting device. I personally jumped to the end of the book before finishing it because I wanted to know which boy she ultimately chose. I don't like to waste time emotionally investing in the loser. I do not think it is a spoiler to say that the author does not completely assure us which boy is the winner until about the last five pages of the book! I personally consider that dragging out the triangle's suspense much too long. But I don't really like romantic triangles.
March 25, 2015
I think I got the wrong book here. Am I the only one confused by how much it skips from one boy to the next?
I gave it a solid 2.75 annoying electronic babies.
but it does hold a lot of potential.
you can see a full review at my blog.
I gave it a solid 2.75 annoying electronic babies.
but it does hold a lot of potential.
you can see a full review at my blog.
March 27, 2015
OHMYGOSH! So cute! I was a little wRy about how I'd like this but I shouldn't of been because it was adorable and captivating! Ugh! I have to get up early in the morning but I just had to finish this book, I had to.....and possibly sneak a peak at the second one...which I'm reading next...
Aaah! Melody was a great heroine in this book. I could relate to her a lot. Jake was great too. Iv never really like both sides of the whole two love interests thing but this one actually had me conflicted. But I'm glad with how it went so much! KYLE! SWOON. That is all.
Great Kindle freebie for me!
Aaah! Melody was a great heroine in this book. I could relate to her a lot. Jake was great too. Iv never really like both sides of the whole two love interests thing but this one actually had me conflicted. But I'm glad with how it went so much! KYLE! SWOON. That is all.
Great Kindle freebie for me!
December 10, 2014
Wonderful book.......
I had the wonderful chance to read the first 2 parts of this unbelievably wonderful story melodys crush. As I continue to read the rest of this story I was amazed at how well written it was. Alora is a very gifted and talented writer. I hope she will continue with this beautiful young love story. As with all books I love to read the beginning of a book the dedication and to my surprise there was my name. Thanks Alora your the greatest. Hugs Andrea
I had the wonderful chance to read the first 2 parts of this unbelievably wonderful story melodys crush. As I continue to read the rest of this story I was amazed at how well written it was. Alora is a very gifted and talented writer. I hope she will continue with this beautiful young love story. As with all books I love to read the beginning of a book the dedication and to my surprise there was my name. Thanks Alora your the greatest. Hugs Andrea
April 17, 2015
I really liked the story and the dynamic between Melody, Jake and Kyle.
When you thrown Kyle's brother in the mix, Max or "Maxi" it just becomes kind of funny. I am excited to begin reading Melody's heart to see the POV of Kyle because he seems like such a complex character with all the "issues." The only thing I wish came out more clearly was WHY. Why didn't Jake make a move sooner? I don't understand. He never comes all out and say it.
When you thrown Kyle's brother in the mix, Max or "Maxi" it just becomes kind of funny. I am excited to begin reading Melody's heart to see the POV of Kyle because he seems like such a complex character with all the "issues." The only thing I wish came out more clearly was WHY. Why didn't Jake make a move sooner? I don't understand. He never comes all out and say it.
January 18, 2015
Not bad. Dont judge a book by its cover
The cover is questionable but it was cute and not unbelievable. There were a few grammatical errors throughout the book and it was heavily cliched but not to the point where it distracts from the story or is intolerable. It doesn't get inappropriate so it's a safe read, and I suggest it to anyone looking for a fluffy novel.
The cover is questionable but it was cute and not unbelievable. There were a few grammatical errors throughout the book and it was heavily cliched but not to the point where it distracts from the story or is intolerable. It doesn't get inappropriate so it's a safe read, and I suggest it to anyone looking for a fluffy novel.
October 21, 2015
Fun, fluffy story but seriously needs a copy editor (I'd be willing, lol). Maybe there's been a better version released, but the one I read looked like it was written and formatted by a middle schooler. If you can read it without cringing too much, it's an enjoyable read, though a bit cliche and not very deep.
January 19, 2016
Sweet and endearing
I loved this book! You have moments where you hate all three main characters but love them all at the same time. This isn't the girl loves her best friend and he realizes it and falls for her too typical story line. I love the twists and turns and the sweetness and in cogency of the story line!
I loved this book! You have moments where you hate all three main characters but love them all at the same time. This isn't the girl loves her best friend and he realizes it and falls for her too typical story line. I love the twists and turns and the sweetness and in cogency of the story line!
November 4, 2014
Great start.
Cute start, easy reading. After the first couple of pages it kinda sucked you in until the last page. The characters need a little development and the heroine seems a little immature but the writing was good.
Cute start, easy reading. After the first couple of pages it kinda sucked you in until the last page. The characters need a little development and the heroine seems a little immature but the writing was good.
November 8, 2014
Awesome book
OMG this book is amazing. I guess everyone shouldn't judge people by their faces and all because Kyle turned out to be some one she could consider a husband and a father. I wish that Alora Dillon could consider writing a next book about this character.
OMG this book is amazing. I guess everyone shouldn't judge people by their faces and all because Kyle turned out to be some one she could consider a husband and a father. I wish that Alora Dillon could consider writing a next book about this character.
December 16, 2014
Great Book
This book had me sitting on the edge of my seat, dying laughing, and crying tears of joy and sadness. Anybody who loves a great teen romance should definitely read this book.
This book had me sitting on the edge of my seat, dying laughing, and crying tears of joy and sadness. Anybody who loves a great teen romance should definitely read this book.
December 26, 2014
Great book
I loved this book because it ended differently than I expected it to. I like a book to surprise me. I also really liked the characters. They were well developed and relatable.
I loved this book because it ended differently than I expected it to. I like a book to surprise me. I also really liked the characters. They were well developed and relatable.
January 8, 2015
I enjoyed the characters, but the story was too all over the place for me. First she's in love with her best friend that she's known for forever. Then in the span of a week while doing a social experiment for health class she falls in love with this other guy. It was just ok for me I guess.
January 15, 2015
Sweet young love story
Sweet young love story. Nerd gets the jock after discovering she is not truly in love with her best friend. Well written pg rated. Good story line and likable characters.
Sweet young love story. Nerd gets the jock after discovering she is not truly in love with her best friend. Well written pg rated. Good story line and likable characters.
January 22, 2015
It was cute. I felt the author drew it out way too long, and made the female character especially naive. For as strong as it seemed the author wanted the main character to come across, she barely spoke up to eliminate confusion and had too much self doubt. But all in all it was a cute story.
November 2, 2014
Way too short but so great, now I want the next one. Someone PM me when it comes out! lol
November 2, 2014
Good
I enjoyed this book wished it was longer but for a first time writer it's pretty good can't wait for the second book. hopefully comes out soon.
I enjoyed this book wished it was longer but for a first time writer it's pretty good can't wait for the second book. hopefully comes out soon.
November 3, 2014
Has great potential! Good work! <3
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