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Champions
IN WAR, HEROES ARE MADE. LEGENDS ARE BORN. CHAMPIONS WILL RISE.
Present day, Cielos, the city closest to heaven. The Sword of Sargatanas has been stolen from the most powerful stronghold in Cielterra. When used at a time when the planets align, the sword has the power to open Gate Pandora and unleash unto the Worlds legions upon legions of monsters and beasts from hell.
Present day, location undisclosed. One clueless Human acquaints himself with the barrel of a gun—belonging to the woman he almost fell in love with, no less—and finds himself kidnapped and whisked to a world standing on the brink of war.
The Worlds—both visible and invisible to us—are in danger. The Towers that guard the Flaming Sword of Eden have chosen the heroes. It just so happened that the heroes aren’t really… hero-material. Not at all.
Seven angry, sarcastic, violent, belligerent, uncaring and uncompassionate young men and women were forced to team up to stop a possible apocalypse from happening. As they journey towards the Far West to retrieve the stolen sword, the seven Champions brave one trial after another (including, but not limited to, falling in love with ill-tempered bullies) and ultimately find out what it means to become a true hero.
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Present day, Cielos, the city closest to heaven. The Sword of Sargatanas has been stolen from the most powerful stronghold in Cielterra. When used at a time when the planets align, the sword has the power to open Gate Pandora and unleash unto the Worlds legions upon legions of monsters and beasts from hell.
Present day, location undisclosed. One clueless Human acquaints himself with the barrel of a gun—belonging to the woman he almost fell in love with, no less—and finds himself kidnapped and whisked to a world standing on the brink of war.
The Worlds—both visible and invisible to us—are in danger. The Towers that guard the Flaming Sword of Eden have chosen the heroes. It just so happened that the heroes aren’t really… hero-material. Not at all.
Seven angry, sarcastic, violent, belligerent, uncaring and uncompassionate young men and women were forced to team up to stop a possible apocalypse from happening. As they journey towards the Far West to retrieve the stolen sword, the seven Champions brave one trial after another (including, but not limited to, falling in love with ill-tempered bullies) and ultimately find out what it means to become a true hero.
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212 pages, Paperback
First published September 1, 2014
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About the author
Karren Renz Seña
2 books35 followersKarren Renz Seña grew up wanting to be an astronaut, but has discovered early in life that her core gifts lie in speaking and writing. She has learned to read at age three and hasn’t stopped since. As a young girl, if she’s not locked up in her room reading, she would write about the 'desolation that comes with the falling rain’ in her letters to her cousins. She took up AB Literature at the University of Santo Tomas and finished strong--cum laude. She also took up her post-graduate degree in Comparative Literature at the University of the Philippines, but is yet to finish her thesis. She has participated in several writing workshops, such as the UST Summer National Creative Writing Workshop and the J. Elizalde Navarro National Workshop for Arts Criticism. She had also taught Literature, Humanities and English at the University of Santo Tomas and had suddenly become a mother of thousands overnight.
Karren now writes for several magazines, including Kerygma and FiSH magazines, POP Mag and Rogate. She works as the Accessible Publishing Specialist of Shepherd’s Voice Publications and serves at The Feast PICC Formation Ministry as a worship leader and facilitator for Bible Studies. She is also a Campus Missionary. An advocate for writing and Literature, she also conducts her own seminars and workshops on creative writing and reading, and has spoken in conferences such as the Ligaya Harvest Conference 2014. She also gives motivational talks on following one’s purpose. Her modules Heart of Ink and Might of Ink are her most popular yet.
Karren wouldn't mind getting flushed down the toilet as a means to get to Narnia. She also believes in Neverland and Middle Earth, and is still bitter about not receiving her Hogwarts acceptance letter.
The Lost Chronicles of Eden: CHAMPIONS is the first of her many books. Beware.
Visit www.karrenrenzsena.com and join her and Solenn as they carefully lay down their nefarious plans for world domination. The awesome kind, of course. Contact her at karrenrenzsena@gmail.com for inquiries about her seminars. Prepare to be wowed by the awesome that is she.
Karren now writes for several magazines, including Kerygma and FiSH magazines, POP Mag and Rogate. She works as the Accessible Publishing Specialist of Shepherd’s Voice Publications and serves at The Feast PICC Formation Ministry as a worship leader and facilitator for Bible Studies. She is also a Campus Missionary. An advocate for writing and Literature, she also conducts her own seminars and workshops on creative writing and reading, and has spoken in conferences such as the Ligaya Harvest Conference 2014. She also gives motivational talks on following one’s purpose. Her modules Heart of Ink and Might of Ink are her most popular yet.
Karren wouldn't mind getting flushed down the toilet as a means to get to Narnia. She also believes in Neverland and Middle Earth, and is still bitter about not receiving her Hogwarts acceptance letter.
The Lost Chronicles of Eden: CHAMPIONS is the first of her many books. Beware.
Visit www.karrenrenzsena.com and join her and Solenn as they carefully lay down their nefarious plans for world domination. The awesome kind, of course. Contact her at karrenrenzsena@gmail.com for inquiries about her seminars. Prepare to be wowed by the awesome that is she.
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January 3, 2015
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I heard of Champions by Karren Renz Sena from a fellow book blogger who was tweeting about the book when she was reading it. I noted it, seeing as it was published by Shepherd's Voice Publications, a local Catholic publishing house that I used to write for, and it was fiction - something new from them. It took me until after Christmas to get myself a copy, and I decided to read it while I was in the jeepney on the way home, and then I couldn't stop.
Champions is a story of seven men and women who were put together in a team to help retrieve the Sword of Sargatanas, a powerful weapon that is locked up in Cielterra, the stronghold of Cielos, the city closest to Heaven. This sword, when used on the day that the planets aligned, has the capacity to tear open the boundaries between dimensions, and when used on Gate Pandora, will unleash demons and monsters from Hell. These seven men and women - called Champions - are the only hope for this to be stopped, and to retrieve the Sword. One of these Champions is a Human called Gabriel, kidnapped from his life in Earth and brought to a battle that he didn't ask for, but even so, he felt that he somehow belonged. Perhaps this was the link to his past that he has been looking for all along?
Champions was fun. This is your good old fantasy novel with Christian references that is so well-written that I think anyone who just likes fantasy and action will just really sink their teeth into this. Though there were times when it felt like there were too many switches in the POVs as I was placed in the heads of almost all the characters, it was still quite fun, and I think the author did that to lay the foundation for the series. It gave me a bit of insight in every character, but I hope the next books in the series will focus on say, one or two instead of all of them so I'll be able to understand what makes these characters tick. If I were to pick a favorite, I really like the human Gabriel, followed by Solenn who seemed all fire at first but had a big heart inside of her. I would also love to learn more about Matteo, as I always felt affectionate to any group's tech guy. Oh, and I loved the judges - Samson, Gideon, and Deborah. Their banter was so fun. :D
As I said, the world building here was good, and I really liked the idea of how Eden was set to be the most protected place, and how Cielos being the city closest to Heaven, is the one in charge of its protection. This book makes the Bible seem more alive, and I love how the names used here were from the Bible - Samson, Gideon, Deborah, Memorare, Ark of the Covenant, Passover, etc etc. The names don't feel out of place, and even the things that they do - rallying aka worship, prayer and meditation - felt like they just fit right into the story, and not a bit preachy.
I wanted more at the end, especially after the revelations about some characters. I am really glad this is a series, so the next question is: when will the next book be out? Please let it be soon!
I heard of Champions by Karren Renz Sena from a fellow book blogger who was tweeting about the book when she was reading it. I noted it, seeing as it was published by Shepherd's Voice Publications, a local Catholic publishing house that I used to write for, and it was fiction - something new from them. It took me until after Christmas to get myself a copy, and I decided to read it while I was in the jeepney on the way home, and then I couldn't stop.
Champions is a story of seven men and women who were put together in a team to help retrieve the Sword of Sargatanas, a powerful weapon that is locked up in Cielterra, the stronghold of Cielos, the city closest to Heaven. This sword, when used on the day that the planets aligned, has the capacity to tear open the boundaries between dimensions, and when used on Gate Pandora, will unleash demons and monsters from Hell. These seven men and women - called Champions - are the only hope for this to be stopped, and to retrieve the Sword. One of these Champions is a Human called Gabriel, kidnapped from his life in Earth and brought to a battle that he didn't ask for, but even so, he felt that he somehow belonged. Perhaps this was the link to his past that he has been looking for all along?
Champions was fun. This is your good old fantasy novel with Christian references that is so well-written that I think anyone who just likes fantasy and action will just really sink their teeth into this. Though there were times when it felt like there were too many switches in the POVs as I was placed in the heads of almost all the characters, it was still quite fun, and I think the author did that to lay the foundation for the series. It gave me a bit of insight in every character, but I hope the next books in the series will focus on say, one or two instead of all of them so I'll be able to understand what makes these characters tick. If I were to pick a favorite, I really like the human Gabriel, followed by Solenn who seemed all fire at first but had a big heart inside of her. I would also love to learn more about Matteo, as I always felt affectionate to any group's tech guy. Oh, and I loved the judges - Samson, Gideon, and Deborah. Their banter was so fun. :D
As I said, the world building here was good, and I really liked the idea of how Eden was set to be the most protected place, and how Cielos being the city closest to Heaven, is the one in charge of its protection. This book makes the Bible seem more alive, and I love how the names used here were from the Bible - Samson, Gideon, Deborah, Memorare, Ark of the Covenant, Passover, etc etc. The names don't feel out of place, and even the things that they do - rallying aka worship, prayer and meditation - felt like they just fit right into the story, and not a bit preachy.
I wanted more at the end, especially after the revelations about some characters. I am really glad this is a series, so the next question is: when will the next book be out? Please let it be soon!
November 15, 2014
*Copy given by Shepherd's Voice Publications in exchange for an honest review.
Champions caught my fancy with its talk of swords and the Garden of Eden. I hadn't thought about the Garden of Eden in fiction in a long time, although it is a point of fascination for me since it was paradise on earth. At first, I thought 'champions' were just another way of referring to angels, but I was wrong, and the book proved to be more interesting than I expected, in several ways.
The "good vs bad" theme in fiction is nothing new, and I thought, coming from Kerygma, the book would be heavily laced with not-so-subtle moral lessons. But I was happily proven wrong. A point in Seña's favor: I did not feel like I was being preached to, but integrity, human frailty, and perseverance was evident in the champions' journey from day 1.
Champions turned out to be a book I spent several days reading because I wanted to savor every page. The last page became something I dreaded to reach - something that only occurs when I've become emotionally involved in the story. I wanted the book to last longer because I've gotten caught up in the battle and I just wanted to know that things will turn out okay. I know, I know, things almost always turn out okay in books like these. But as a reader who has read thousands of books, this is a feeling and edge I have never gotten quite used to.
The characters were "champions" so to speak, because they were chosen for their abilities, and were deemed deserving to wield special swords. I thought they were angels, but they were just more than human, but below angels. The seven champions felt very human, and I was able to sympathize and empathize with their hopes and dreams, fears and triumphs, confusion and arrogance. I love kick-ass heroines, and Champions did not disappoint. But what I loved even more is that there was a balance between the male and female protagonists. While the women were strong, the men were also capable of holding their own, and vice versa. They each had their weaknesses, and they each had their triumphs.
A portion of the story happened in present-day earth, but most of the story took place in Cielterra. Cielterra is how I imagine future cities could look like maybe in a few hundreds of years. The most graphic comparison I could think of is the city of Asgard. Their way of transportation, from the hover boards to the puestos, made me wish I'll live long enough to see them become a reality.
By the end of Champions, there were several questions that I am just burning to have answered. What does it mean to be the "King" of Cielterra? Why did Xandros become a traitor? Will Solomon be able to fight his internal demons in time to be a more effective warrior and leader? These are not questions that the first book was unable to answer, but questions that I hope will be (and should be) answered in the next books.
And when I turned the last page of the book, I could not help but wish that it was twice as long, or that its sequel will be out not long after (please Kerygma!). The writing felt raw in some places, but it did not detract from my overall reading pleasure. I have high hopes for the overall plot and story, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series as soon as they're out. Good job, Karren Seña!
Champions caught my fancy with its talk of swords and the Garden of Eden. I hadn't thought about the Garden of Eden in fiction in a long time, although it is a point of fascination for me since it was paradise on earth. At first, I thought 'champions' were just another way of referring to angels, but I was wrong, and the book proved to be more interesting than I expected, in several ways.
The "good vs bad" theme in fiction is nothing new, and I thought, coming from Kerygma, the book would be heavily laced with not-so-subtle moral lessons. But I was happily proven wrong. A point in Seña's favor: I did not feel like I was being preached to, but integrity, human frailty, and perseverance was evident in the champions' journey from day 1.
Champions turned out to be a book I spent several days reading because I wanted to savor every page. The last page became something I dreaded to reach - something that only occurs when I've become emotionally involved in the story. I wanted the book to last longer because I've gotten caught up in the battle and I just wanted to know that things will turn out okay. I know, I know, things almost always turn out okay in books like these. But as a reader who has read thousands of books, this is a feeling and edge I have never gotten quite used to.
The characters were "champions" so to speak, because they were chosen for their abilities, and were deemed deserving to wield special swords. I thought they were angels, but they were just more than human, but below angels. The seven champions felt very human, and I was able to sympathize and empathize with their hopes and dreams, fears and triumphs, confusion and arrogance. I love kick-ass heroines, and Champions did not disappoint. But what I loved even more is that there was a balance between the male and female protagonists. While the women were strong, the men were also capable of holding their own, and vice versa. They each had their weaknesses, and they each had their triumphs.
A portion of the story happened in present-day earth, but most of the story took place in Cielterra. Cielterra is how I imagine future cities could look like maybe in a few hundreds of years. The most graphic comparison I could think of is the city of Asgard. Their way of transportation, from the hover boards to the puestos, made me wish I'll live long enough to see them become a reality.
By the end of Champions, there were several questions that I am just burning to have answered. What does it mean to be the "King" of Cielterra? Why did Xandros become a traitor? Will Solomon be able to fight his internal demons in time to be a more effective warrior and leader? These are not questions that the first book was unable to answer, but questions that I hope will be (and should be) answered in the next books.
And when I turned the last page of the book, I could not help but wish that it was twice as long, or that its sequel will be out not long after (please Kerygma!). The writing felt raw in some places, but it did not detract from my overall reading pleasure. I have high hopes for the overall plot and story, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series as soon as they're out. Good job, Karren Seña!
February 3, 2020
I recommend it to the youth who hasn't read better works and does not mind lack of narrative solidity.
I rated this with two stars, because one, the story concept isn't that bad. Two, I've definitely read worse. And three, I only finished half of it, and for all I know it gets better.
But with that in mind, I want to share why I cannot continue. Maybe, one day I will... who knows. But for now let me defend my stance.
NOTE: I apologize to the author in advance if this review is too negatively frank. But remember to take it with a grain of salt. Think of it as pointers for future works! Although to be honest, this review is mostly for my fellow readers
Problems with Champions
1. Same Lettered Names: Samson, Solomon, Solenn, Selena, Ciellterra, Cielos, Citadel. Which is which again?
2. Exposition Dump
Show, don't tell please! While detailed prologues akin to the Star Wars scroll is okay, I think readers would appreciate some of the finer details to be unfolded later on, or more specifically unfolded craftily and naturally throughout the narrative. And while some of that was done, I think the balance was not achieved. I, for one, could not relate to Gabriel's discoveries throughout the story. Because no matter how fantastical the things he witnesses are, I already know most of what they are and why he is there.
Moreover, exposition dump at the beginning is one thing, but unnatural solid lumps for every chapter?! Give me a break. And at least weave it naturally in the story. But no, it feels like reading a history book sometimes.
3. Unlikable Heroes
They're interesting enough with cool powers and all, but that's about it. The characters hate the humans. They look at them, and I semi-quote, as 'a gum stuck on their shoe'. Unlikable characters are okay if they are compelling enough. But no, the characters here are paper cut-out people who bully the main character.
4. Plot Holes
5. Romantic Portrayal (Mild spoilers included)
There's this two sort-of students in the Citadel who kept bickering at each other venomously. Not even in a fun and teasing way. It is clear that they hate each other. And then their betters, their teachers really, commented behind their backs that what they have was true love.What??? It's not even sarcasm, I assure you. They actually mean that.
Okay. Look, I'm sorry. Just imagine someone you truly dislike in front of you. Maybe the person hates you back but maybe not. You don't care about the person's appearance; you can only feel the hurt because the person treats/or has treated you like dirt. You truly dislike this person, almost bordering on hate. Now try kissing that. I'm sorry, but... a bit effed up, eh?
Look, I understand the appeal of love-hate relationships though they are becoming more cliché and problematic in my opinion. But even that love, takes time to develop. And while you can argue that the relationship of the two this book is not what it seems... Then work on that.
Maybe the guy will stop the flow of his words on his lips when he realizes the very small glint of tears in the girl's eyes. Maybe he realizes he's gone too far, so he tries to reach out but she walks away. Maybe, despite harsh words, we still see them try to attain a level of human decency at the end of their fighting...Maybe when the a teacher berates them to behave, they'll in turn scream compliments to one another (also, for comedic effect, story-wise).... because in the end, they care about each other.
But don't just make them treat each other like trash via verbal abuse and immediately make the onlookers go, “Ooh! That's love!”. This is a poor narrative plant to a possible romantic narrative pay off later. Geez.
I rated this with two stars, because one, the story concept isn't that bad. Two, I've definitely read worse. And three, I only finished half of it, and for all I know it gets better.
But with that in mind, I want to share why I cannot continue. Maybe, one day I will... who knows. But for now let me defend my stance.
NOTE: I apologize to the author in advance if this review is too negatively frank. But remember to take it with a grain of salt. Think of it as pointers for future works! Although to be honest, this review is mostly for my fellow readers
Problems with Champions
1. Same Lettered Names: Samson, Solomon, Solenn, Selena, Ciellterra, Cielos, Citadel. Which is which again?
2. Exposition Dump
Show, don't tell please! While detailed prologues akin to the Star Wars scroll is okay, I think readers would appreciate some of the finer details to be unfolded later on, or more specifically unfolded craftily and naturally throughout the narrative. And while some of that was done, I think the balance was not achieved. I, for one, could not relate to Gabriel's discoveries throughout the story. Because no matter how fantastical the things he witnesses are, I already know most of what they are and why he is there.
Moreover, exposition dump at the beginning is one thing, but unnatural solid lumps for every chapter?! Give me a break. And at least weave it naturally in the story. But no, it feels like reading a history book sometimes.
3. Unlikable Heroes
They're interesting enough with cool powers and all, but that's about it. The characters hate the humans. They look at them, and I semi-quote, as 'a gum stuck on their shoe'. Unlikable characters are okay if they are compelling enough. But no, the characters here are paper cut-out people who bully the main character.
4. Plot Holes
5. Romantic Portrayal (Mild spoilers included)
There's this two sort-of students in the Citadel who kept bickering at each other venomously. Not even in a fun and teasing way. It is clear that they hate each other. And then their betters, their teachers really, commented behind their backs that what they have was true love.What??? It's not even sarcasm, I assure you. They actually mean that.
Okay. Look, I'm sorry. Just imagine someone you truly dislike in front of you. Maybe the person hates you back but maybe not. You don't care about the person's appearance; you can only feel the hurt because the person treats/or has treated you like dirt. You truly dislike this person, almost bordering on hate. Now try kissing that. I'm sorry, but... a bit effed up, eh?
Look, I understand the appeal of love-hate relationships though they are becoming more cliché and problematic in my opinion. But even that love, takes time to develop. And while you can argue that the relationship of the two this book is not what it seems... Then work on that.
Maybe the guy will stop the flow of his words on his lips when he realizes the very small glint of tears in the girl's eyes. Maybe he realizes he's gone too far, so he tries to reach out but she walks away. Maybe, despite harsh words, we still see them try to attain a level of human decency at the end of their fighting...Maybe when the a teacher berates them to behave, they'll in turn scream compliments to one another (also, for comedic effect, story-wise).... because in the end, they care about each other.
But don't just make them treat each other like trash via verbal abuse and immediately make the onlookers go, “Ooh! That's love!”. This is a poor narrative plant to a possible romantic narrative pay off later. Geez.
December 5, 2014
This is the only book that distracted me from my IELTS review two days ago! For P250, it was so worth it! To be honest, I never thought someone could ever capture Biblical concepts like the Garden of Eden or archangels or even the Apocalypse and turn it into a novel that showcases an amazing tale of heroism that every Filipino could relate to until Karren Renz Sena came along and proved me wrong. Set in present-day Manila and Cielterra, the city closest to heaven, 7 sarcastic, angry and insensitive young men and women came together to retrieve a stolen sword, battle demons, stop a possible apocalypse from happening and find out what it means to become a true hero. Can't wait for the next book!
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September 16, 2020
This is about a journey of becoming a hero and a champion. A never ending struggle of fighting and overcoming our biggest fears and weaknesses. Nevertheless, finding the strength to be brave, and discovering what it really means to be a true champion.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I want to read the next book.
Thank You Ma'am Karren for writing this wonderful and awesome book!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I want to read the next book.
Thank You Ma'am Karren for writing this wonderful and awesome book!
July 30, 2015
The book captures you with its yet to be told mystery and wonderfully woven words. It will light you up and lift you to a different world. With the adventures and identities behind the names of the champions, you will levitate high up above. That's when it will leave you hanging, and before you know it, you already are one of the champions; waiting for the next sentence, craving for the next scene. The readers are not told of the champions, but are discovered within us. Champions are not only read within the book but are found within ourselves. An awesome work from an awesome mind. Can't wait for the next one.
December 19, 2014
It's like The Mortal Instruments and Divergent (there's this part in the book which was like the fear landscape) rolled into one. But what's good about this book is not only was it written by a Filipino, it's also a telling of the story of Guardians--the ones who defend humans against evil and who fight for the will of the Lord. That's pretty rad.
March 25, 2018
Hey. Read this overnight!
May 23, 2015
3.78
one word: short.
that’s it. that’s the only major problem i had with this book.
not the world
it is hard to grasp it at first, since too much information is thrown at you at the beginning. but afterwards, i was fascinated.
city closest to heaven? angels and demons fighting? seven champions of eden?
i’ve never encountered one of these books before. usually, fantasies immediately dismiss the idea of God. being a catholic, it doesn’t upset me because, well, it’s fiction. but this book is one of a kind. it has elements from the Bible; angels, city of Eden, and the idea of the one above isn’t completely disregarded.
i can’t tell you how beautiful the world is! in fact, i’m actually extremely jealous. how could anyone think of that in their head?
but i would love a chance to experience it more but, you know, the book is too short.
not the characters
they are a bunch of unlike people. they are not the same, which means most of them do not go along together.
and they’re not just different from one another, they’re different from other young adult characters. so many YA characters are intense and never have a sense of humor. (i don’t even know how the main characters fall in love with them) but here, probably most of them know how to joke and it fills me with unending joy. funny characters are my favorite characters which meant each of the seven are in my heart. (but most especially mateo and gabriel. <3)
but i just wished i got to know them better. each and everyone of them. their backstories, their families whatever.
i would love that but … this book is too short.
not the setting:
rarely is a YA book set in asia, much less my country – The Philippines. it’s all about america or the UK. so it was great to finally understand and know where the characters are.
it’s so original! yet, i would be more pleased if the book wasn’t too short.
it all comes down to this: THIS BOOK IS TOO SHORT. it’s like a comic book! i know a graphic novel – novels – longer than this book!
it didn’t have much character development neither much world building. yes, be concise but not to the point wherein probable good parts were cut off.
conclusion: you know it already.
one word: short.
that’s it. that’s the only major problem i had with this book.
not the world
it is hard to grasp it at first, since too much information is thrown at you at the beginning. but afterwards, i was fascinated.
city closest to heaven? angels and demons fighting? seven champions of eden?
i’ve never encountered one of these books before. usually, fantasies immediately dismiss the idea of God. being a catholic, it doesn’t upset me because, well, it’s fiction. but this book is one of a kind. it has elements from the Bible; angels, city of Eden, and the idea of the one above isn’t completely disregarded.
i can’t tell you how beautiful the world is! in fact, i’m actually extremely jealous. how could anyone think of that in their head?
but i would love a chance to experience it more but, you know, the book is too short.
not the characters
they are a bunch of unlike people. they are not the same, which means most of them do not go along together.
and they’re not just different from one another, they’re different from other young adult characters. so many YA characters are intense and never have a sense of humor. (i don’t even know how the main characters fall in love with them) but here, probably most of them know how to joke and it fills me with unending joy. funny characters are my favorite characters which meant each of the seven are in my heart. (but most especially mateo and gabriel. <3)
but i just wished i got to know them better. each and everyone of them. their backstories, their families whatever.
i would love that but … this book is too short.
not the setting:
rarely is a YA book set in asia, much less my country – The Philippines. it’s all about america or the UK. so it was great to finally understand and know where the characters are.
it’s so original! yet, i would be more pleased if the book wasn’t too short.
it all comes down to this: THIS BOOK IS TOO SHORT. it’s like a comic book! i know a graphic novel – novels – longer than this book!
it didn’t have much character development neither much world building. yes, be concise but not to the point wherein probable good parts were cut off.
conclusion: you know it already.
February 2, 2015
I was hooked with this book!
You will learn to like all characters. The writing being in the 3rd person omniscient POV is just perfect to get to know all the important people in the book. It also made me feel a part of the story, and at the same time like watching a movie.
THUMBS UP! Can't wait for the next one, it still has many unanswered questions...
You will learn to like all characters. The writing being in the 3rd person omniscient POV is just perfect to get to know all the important people in the book. It also made me feel a part of the story, and at the same time like watching a movie.
THUMBS UP! Can't wait for the next one, it still has many unanswered questions...
October 8, 2014
Really beautiful, inspiring and empowering book! This book shows how every person can still be something of great worth no matter how flawed that person is. ❤️
October 27, 2014
A great book that got me hooked from the very first sentence to the last page. I'm waiting for the next one!
August 25, 2016
PART 2 please!
May 11, 2020
This is one great book. I have this since 2014 and I read it again and again up to this moment. I am just wondering if there is a second book after this because this one is just the beginning. Please englighten me as I am looking for the next.😊
September 17, 2023
Deep within the confines of her room, her imagination is vast. It travels beyond the four corners, modern ideas, time, and life itself. For she closes her eyes and creates worlds unimaginable to the modern mind. And with her pen in her hand and paper in another, she intends to lure people who relish in curiosity and wonder. Whatever is scribbled on such a feeble surface will be immortalized by ink and fascination… A narration in the subconscious of the reader every time a book like this is opened.
I have been introduced to this book by the persistence of my sister, this is one of her favorites and she has been recommending this nonstop after finding out how I adore stories with well-written lore, just the whole history of the world setting. And despite being non-religious, implications of biblical characters or tales from mythology are considered must-haves before adding them to my library.
Finding a fantasy book inspired by biblical lore with a dash of details from various cultures, myths, legends, and even conspiracy theories is one thing—writing one is another. A writer needs to be knowledgeable enough to write about a certain topic and experienced enough to provide quotes as lessons and chapters full of relatable hardships, trauma, and small achievements—Karen Renz Seña is the prime example of this kind of writer, this piece inspired me to continue writing what I have been setting aside all these years.
The Lost Chronicles of Eden: Champions starts with an oblivious human being, Gabriel, guarded in plain sight by a few adolescents while remaining clueless about the happenings unseen by human beings. Until one fateful day, he was whisked away to another world only to find out the life he knew was not the life he was born to be. One moment he was a normal student who once dreamed to be a hero, the next he stands with six adolescents: Solenn, Solomon, Selina, Joanna, Mateo, and Lukas, who he will share a path with and identity known as the Champions. They were forced to incorporate themselves with one another as they were chosen to save the realms after a powerful weapon was stolen threatening peace and order, especially in the city closest to heaven. In this life-changing journey, he and his allies will realize the true meaning of being a hero.
This book is told in a third-person point of view which is always a plus whenever I read fantasy novels. I just adore how you could jump from one perspective to another without compromising the flow of the conversation or the events in a chapter. Now mentioning the flow, this is quite fast-paced which is good for the most part, but I would like to see more details on their friendship—from how it started to how it was strengthened. And also, I had a hard time processing some information because of how it was unveiled in some chapters, but I think it might be a technique to make us feel what Gabriel felt, or how he was confused and overwhelmed by the revelations. Finally, the thing that really challenged my comfort was the fact that even though it is fantasy, it is hard to comprehend the presence of technology in other dimensions. It could be just me who was uncomfortable with that.
All in all, this is still a well-written story! I can clearly see the scenes in my mind, especially that scene in the Triad Pass. I was constantly underlining the lines I empathize with. Everything is vivid and engaging, but if I was to be asked for suggestions, I would like to see maps of the dimensions or some kind of Dante’s Circles of Hell type of illustration! I am a sucker for maps and illustrations!
If you want to enter the fantasy genre, Champions is a great start serving you an action-packed, fast-paced storyline with relatable perspectives and gut-wrenching struggles from the young protagonists.
I have been introduced to this book by the persistence of my sister, this is one of her favorites and she has been recommending this nonstop after finding out how I adore stories with well-written lore, just the whole history of the world setting. And despite being non-religious, implications of biblical characters or tales from mythology are considered must-haves before adding them to my library.
Finding a fantasy book inspired by biblical lore with a dash of details from various cultures, myths, legends, and even conspiracy theories is one thing—writing one is another. A writer needs to be knowledgeable enough to write about a certain topic and experienced enough to provide quotes as lessons and chapters full of relatable hardships, trauma, and small achievements—Karen Renz Seña is the prime example of this kind of writer, this piece inspired me to continue writing what I have been setting aside all these years.
The Lost Chronicles of Eden: Champions starts with an oblivious human being, Gabriel, guarded in plain sight by a few adolescents while remaining clueless about the happenings unseen by human beings. Until one fateful day, he was whisked away to another world only to find out the life he knew was not the life he was born to be. One moment he was a normal student who once dreamed to be a hero, the next he stands with six adolescents: Solenn, Solomon, Selina, Joanna, Mateo, and Lukas, who he will share a path with and identity known as the Champions. They were forced to incorporate themselves with one another as they were chosen to save the realms after a powerful weapon was stolen threatening peace and order, especially in the city closest to heaven. In this life-changing journey, he and his allies will realize the true meaning of being a hero.
This book is told in a third-person point of view which is always a plus whenever I read fantasy novels. I just adore how you could jump from one perspective to another without compromising the flow of the conversation or the events in a chapter. Now mentioning the flow, this is quite fast-paced which is good for the most part, but I would like to see more details on their friendship—from how it started to how it was strengthened. And also, I had a hard time processing some information because of how it was unveiled in some chapters, but I think it might be a technique to make us feel what Gabriel felt, or how he was confused and overwhelmed by the revelations. Finally, the thing that really challenged my comfort was the fact that even though it is fantasy, it is hard to comprehend the presence of technology in other dimensions. It could be just me who was uncomfortable with that.
All in all, this is still a well-written story! I can clearly see the scenes in my mind, especially that scene in the Triad Pass. I was constantly underlining the lines I empathize with. Everything is vivid and engaging, but if I was to be asked for suggestions, I would like to see maps of the dimensions or some kind of Dante’s Circles of Hell type of illustration! I am a sucker for maps and illustrations!
If you want to enter the fantasy genre, Champions is a great start serving you an action-packed, fast-paced storyline with relatable perspectives and gut-wrenching struggles from the young protagonists.
June 10, 2016
Okay… I dunno why it’s taking me too long finishing this ‘Uglies’ book. And since I had vacation with co-workers for two days, I’ve decided to bring The Lost Chronicles of Eden: Champions by Karren Renz Seña. And I was able to finish it! Hooray…
I was so excited for this book. And I really searched for it. And take note, it is written by Filipina author, so it’s a worth read.
It’s so strange reading a book with familiar places and familiar words and familiar scenes. But I really enjoyed it. It’s makin me smile coz it’s been a while since I’ve read a Filipino-written book that isn’t ‘romance-pocket-book’.
THE STORY. I’m not totally blown-up with this kind of story. The candidates, and champions, and the judges, and the demons, and the chosen ones are not new things to me. But since it’s written by Seña, maybe it’s the reason why I appreciated it.
THE CHARACTERS. The characters are fine. Typical teenagers with special abilities is really a good concept. I am just confused with the names. Solenn, Selina, Solomon, Samson. I almost lose track who’s talking, Solenn or Selina? Solomon or Samson? But there was Lukas and Mateo and Joana and Gabriel. Well at least their names isn’t starting with ‘S’ too! And don’t forget Xandros!
THE TWIST. I really have some instinct on some scenes that came to reality. It’s just the latter part that I didn’t expect. Xandros and Gabriel. That’s the biggest twist to me.
THE SCENES. There are scenes that are predictable, and as I was saying im not totally blown away. One of the scene that I want to re-read is the confrontation between Solomon, Solenn and Xandros. I was seeing Hatake Kakashi on Xandros, with a book. Yeah! With a book! :p
THE SEQUEL. I am anticipating for the sequel. The literal book like this one. I don’t want installment episodes. So I am hoping to see the sequel on bookstore ASAP.
FINAL RATING: Well, only first book? 3 out of 5 stars. Waitin for the sequel until the chronicle is done. Maybe then I’ll be givin my final rating! :)
I was so excited for this book. And I really searched for it. And take note, it is written by Filipina author, so it’s a worth read.
It’s so strange reading a book with familiar places and familiar words and familiar scenes. But I really enjoyed it. It’s makin me smile coz it’s been a while since I’ve read a Filipino-written book that isn’t ‘romance-pocket-book’.
THE STORY. I’m not totally blown-up with this kind of story. The candidates, and champions, and the judges, and the demons, and the chosen ones are not new things to me. But since it’s written by Seña, maybe it’s the reason why I appreciated it.
THE CHARACTERS. The characters are fine. Typical teenagers with special abilities is really a good concept. I am just confused with the names. Solenn, Selina, Solomon, Samson. I almost lose track who’s talking, Solenn or Selina? Solomon or Samson? But there was Lukas and Mateo and Joana and Gabriel. Well at least their names isn’t starting with ‘S’ too! And don’t forget Xandros!
THE TWIST. I really have some instinct on some scenes that came to reality. It’s just the latter part that I didn’t expect. Xandros and Gabriel. That’s the biggest twist to me.
THE SCENES. There are scenes that are predictable, and as I was saying im not totally blown away. One of the scene that I want to re-read is the confrontation between Solomon, Solenn and Xandros. I was seeing Hatake Kakashi on Xandros, with a book. Yeah! With a book! :p
THE SEQUEL. I am anticipating for the sequel. The literal book like this one. I don’t want installment episodes. So I am hoping to see the sequel on bookstore ASAP.
FINAL RATING: Well, only first book? 3 out of 5 stars. Waitin for the sequel until the chronicle is done. Maybe then I’ll be givin my final rating! :)
December 17, 2023
NOVEL-LENGTH RELIGIOUS PAMPHLET, ANYONE?
How entitled and self-righteous does one have to be to come up with this proselytising and painfully cringe-worthy drivel disguised as a proper “novel”? This author might as well have just published a religion-based self-help book for the poor small-minded saps who don’t know any better and haven’t an ounce of critical thinking skills, because this is just the author preaching and preaching and preaching some more. So loudly and in-your-face, that it’s astounding! the level of audacity and sheer superiority complex it took for one to devote this much time and effort to write a book more than 200 pages just to impose her own brand of morality to people whom she believes are beneath her holier-than-thou-ness and naïve idiots who can be easily manipulated by stone-age scare tactics employed by “holy people” since the beginning of time to control their would-be followers with the idea that “demons”, “devils” and whatnot, are the root of evil. Yes, because nothing screams maturity more than blaming fictional entities rather than taking responsibility for our own actions, yeah? Hallelujah! Who is this book’s target audience anyway? Tiny tots and gullible children? Misguided souls who need to be threatened with punishment and terrorism in order to be good people? Ouch.
I’m surprised to see that the author actually studied creative writing because the opening of her book actually already breaks the two most important rules of good writing: 1.) the author must be invisible 2.) SHOW NOT TELL. Yet right off the bat, we get the author herself (yes, in her unapologetic, very obnoxious voice) nagging us to get on board or else. And yes, that’s a whole lotta telling in there already. Who prefaces a book like that? Religious pamphlets, LOL. If you’re into being pontificated to, and have a thing for religious pamphlets, then this is your jam. Because that’s all this is—a 212-page religious pamphlet.
How entitled and self-righteous does one have to be to come up with this proselytising and painfully cringe-worthy drivel disguised as a proper “novel”? This author might as well have just published a religion-based self-help book for the poor small-minded saps who don’t know any better and haven’t an ounce of critical thinking skills, because this is just the author preaching and preaching and preaching some more. So loudly and in-your-face, that it’s astounding! the level of audacity and sheer superiority complex it took for one to devote this much time and effort to write a book more than 200 pages just to impose her own brand of morality to people whom she believes are beneath her holier-than-thou-ness and naïve idiots who can be easily manipulated by stone-age scare tactics employed by “holy people” since the beginning of time to control their would-be followers with the idea that “demons”, “devils” and whatnot, are the root of evil. Yes, because nothing screams maturity more than blaming fictional entities rather than taking responsibility for our own actions, yeah? Hallelujah! Who is this book’s target audience anyway? Tiny tots and gullible children? Misguided souls who need to be threatened with punishment and terrorism in order to be good people? Ouch.
I’m surprised to see that the author actually studied creative writing because the opening of her book actually already breaks the two most important rules of good writing: 1.) the author must be invisible 2.) SHOW NOT TELL. Yet right off the bat, we get the author herself (yes, in her unapologetic, very obnoxious voice) nagging us to get on board or else. And yes, that’s a whole lotta telling in there already. Who prefaces a book like that? Religious pamphlets, LOL. If you’re into being pontificated to, and have a thing for religious pamphlets, then this is your jam. Because that’s all this is—a 212-page religious pamphlet.
February 2, 2016
2016 Read 5/N
- I've always seen this book in the stores in the malls but I ignored it because it seemed to me like a book in a series. And one rule I always have about books in a series is that I will not buy any of its book not unless I am sure that I can buy the other ones.
Few years passed and I still did not see any sequel of this book so I decided to buy this during a club activity. Little did I know that I am actually right, that it's actually from a series. Too bad though since I have not seen any of the sequel. It's either not yet published or not yet distributed in this part of our country.
Regarding the plot, it's quite heavy and complicated for me. Since it created an entirely new world, I think this book would be better if there were more backstories of the characters and the world it has created. A spin-off or a sequel book would be good.
I have to give it to the author though. She is very good at using adjectives and is very good with her imaginations. Some parts however, seemed dragging due to the lack of character dialog.
I am not sure but I think I spot some errors but I can never be sure until I ask the author herself. I still have faith in this book. and I would definitely buy the sequel and this book (since the one I'm reading is not my own copy).
- I've always seen this book in the stores in the malls but I ignored it because it seemed to me like a book in a series. And one rule I always have about books in a series is that I will not buy any of its book not unless I am sure that I can buy the other ones.
Few years passed and I still did not see any sequel of this book so I decided to buy this during a club activity. Little did I know that I am actually right, that it's actually from a series. Too bad though since I have not seen any of the sequel. It's either not yet published or not yet distributed in this part of our country.
Regarding the plot, it's quite heavy and complicated for me. Since it created an entirely new world, I think this book would be better if there were more backstories of the characters and the world it has created. A spin-off or a sequel book would be good.
I have to give it to the author though. She is very good at using adjectives and is very good with her imaginations. Some parts however, seemed dragging due to the lack of character dialog.
I am not sure but I think I spot some errors but I can never be sure until I ask the author herself. I still have faith in this book. and I would definitely buy the sequel and this book (since the one I'm reading is not my own copy).
November 14, 2015
This book uplifted my spirit. It made me realize that truly, when God calls you to do something, it means you can do it. He believes in you. It's not about your skills, your attitude or your family background that made you qualified. It's your heart. It's your core. So no matter how imperfect you are, you can be of great use to this world! Accept that you're a Champion, and discover the unique gift the Triune will bestow upon you!
I like the author's writing style just as much as I like classics. Her diction was enough to inspire me to craft my own string of words. Her words brought me to Cielterra. I imagined Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter and my favorite computer game, Diablo, while reading it! (I really hope somebody would turn Champions into a computer game!) And I'm adding Samson to my favorite fictional characters list. I'm looking forward to reading the book 2.
I like the author's writing style just as much as I like classics. Her diction was enough to inspire me to craft my own string of words. Her words brought me to Cielterra. I imagined Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter and my favorite computer game, Diablo, while reading it! (I really hope somebody would turn Champions into a computer game!) And I'm adding Samson to my favorite fictional characters list. I'm looking forward to reading the book 2.
June 28, 2023
Never thought I would like this book but I do. Such a fun read and the concept, world building and all is so good. I love that it's fast paced and really it's just a good short read when you're bored and need some fun adventure.
May 6, 2016
More like 3.5 stars
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