I won this as a goodreads.com First Reads giveaway. I came at this book having been one of those smart-but-stupid teen moms (though I found out I was 3 weeks pregnant just 2 days before my 18th birthday, so a year+ older than the character Sarah) and having suffered some hemorrhaging in childbirth myself. Was, like Sarah, a good student who made a rather stupid choice. I found this book to be preachy (though not necessarily of the Christian sort of preaching), contrived, over-thought....
It started with a total info-dump in the first 5 chapters, giving us each of the main characters in a chapter, each chapter from their point of view, and much too much more info in those chapters than was necessary. We learn about the strained relations between extended family members when such info could've been dropped much more casually further on in the book, and in most cases those minor-characters (relatives of the main characters) didn't come into play at all. We didn't need to know all about Cordelia's auntie who owns a rustic cabin on the shores of Lake Michigan. She wasn't mentioned more than twice more in the rest of the book. That kind of info-dump was the whole set-up of those first 5 chapters and it was unnecessary.
The teen characters, Sarah and Cordelia are often much more thorough about their thoughts and feelings on certain issues and concepts than any teenager I've ever seen, or been. Again, having come at this book as a past teen mom, I see Sarah thinking through her pregnancy as even more "mature" than most 20-somethings would. It didn't ring true, it felt forced and overthought. It felt as though the author was contemplating all this and putting her thoughts in Sarah's or Cordelia's mind. If it had been a woman of Adelaide' or Cindy's age, those thoughts would've made more sense, but the depth and solid consideration of the experiences, problems, complications, frustrations, etc.... coming from these teen minds just felt fake. Sarah is portrayed as being very smart, but the way she thinks about things is mature on a level that most 30-year olds I know don't consider things. She became a very unbelievable character. Cordelia was unbelievable from another perspective. She was portrayed as being shallow and self-absorbed. I found her frequently very unlikable. But just about the time the author would have her being incredibly shallow and immature (even freaking out about a dentist appointment or any other doctor's appointment, to a degree that most people stop being terrified after about 10 or 12), Cordelia would spout something too well-thought out and contrived to be coming out her mouth even as a 40-year old. Stevie was the only teen who's thought-process felt reasonably real, though once or twice she also felt over-done.
Cindy's secret-keeping from her hubby was not resolved in any way, and I felt like it should've been resolved in some manner, either with her hubby finding out by accident and being upset, or being sad that she didn't confide sooner after she finally does. She never does confide, and given the supposed strength of their relationship, this feels false.
Adelaide is about the most likable of the character, though she gets rather preachy at times and is also sometimes very wishy-washy in her opinions and thoughts on Sarah's pregnancy and other incidences in the story. I felt that there was a situation involving Adelaide's parents that should've been resolved.
I also really liked Stevie. I think she's the character that I came to care about the most. She felt the most real, the most well-rounded. The cat, Clarissa, was a bit of a device that didn't seem to really go anywhere.
One thing I felt was positively ridiculous was that the author gave 4 of the 7 or 8 guys mentioned in the book names beginning with J. We had Cindy's hubby Joe, Adelaide's hubby Jack, Sarah's boyfriend -father-of-her-child- Justin, and Cordelia's crush John. Makes one wonder if the author knows that there are a million other names out there that can be chosen, some very "all-american, blue collar" names, and they don't all start w/ "J."
The BEST part of this book was how quickly it went. Each chapter was no more than 5 pages long, which means that for all the contrived nature of this story, it did flow quickly.
Finally, I found the events at the climax and following to be contrived as well. Suddenly there's a character who's not needed any more, kill them off. And in a way that had been made much of throughout the story, so yeah.... let's go with that mechanism of death. So many other ways that this character could've been killed off, that the author had to pick the one that had at least 2 of the characters scared through half the book just felt gimmicky.