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193 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 22, 2014





"She'd made a mistake running from the grip of an intoxicated man into the arms of a monster- a mistake that would cost her the rest of her life.
“When she started to fight again, I tossed her in the shower. Her head cracked against the glass enclosure and I grimaced to think how it must have felt – but she asked for it so I didn’t feel bad about having done it.”
“She was light and when I shoved her towards the bed, she flew farther than I’d intended. Her head cracked against the headboard and she immediately turned and vomited all over the sheets before springing from the bed to run towards the bathroom. Guilt instantly slid across my spine and I followed her, concerned that she’d hit her head too hard.”
“When she attempted to close her eyes, I forced her forehead into the mirror so hard that the glass splintered into tiny fissures. ”
“I don’t want your hands on me.” I sassed him back and, in the blink of an eye, his open palm collided with my face. The fucker slapped me – my head spinning around from the force of his strike.“I won’t tell you again, Eleni. Let me finish cleaning this. I was fucking polite the first time.” He had no remorse for his actions and I could only cup my cheek with my free hand.”
“The loud thud against the wall was unexpected and I fell to my knees when her body doubled over and she slid to the floor. I’d tossed her like nothing more than a broken doll – my anger and rage driving me to a point where I no longer controlled my actions.”
“Her bones cracked when I grabbed her wrists, she screamed when I spun and forced her to the floor.

“How ironic that the one thing she used to adorn her body was also the thing that would break her apart in the end. “
“You have something I want- something that no other person can show me or teach me. It’s something I don’t understand. You have life, Eleni, and I want it.”
“She’d made a mistake running from the grip of an intoxicated man into the arms of a monster- a mistake that would cost her the rest of her life.”

“There comes a time in every person’s life where they run against a brick wall. A time when the pressure is too high- the nightmares are too real- and the past, present and future all collide into an explosive and cataclysmic moment that brings you to your knees.”
4.5 Stars
Eleni thinks she’s got the world fooled. She’s a functioning alcoholic with no family, one friend, and an addiction to tattoos and sex with strangers. Elle thinks she’s got her shitty life under control. She goes to school and work pretending that she doesn’t have a problem with her addictions. She refuses to see how destructive and ugly her life has become. But Gabriel knows better.
Gabriel is dark. Not the kind of dark and mysterious that’s cute. He’s dark in ways that would make you run screaming. After his parents died, something in Gabriel surfaced that would forever change his life. The voices Gabriel now hears continually taunt him. Sometimes they’re a welcome respite from the silence of his isolation, other times they drive him to the verge of insanity, either way they’re always there.
After a chance meeting outside a tattoo parlor Gabriel becomes infatuated with Eleni. He hates how alive she feels when all he can feel is oppressive darkness. Even though he can tell she shares many of the same demons, Elle has a vibrancy about her. But her need to destroy herself with alcohol and sex enrages Gabriel. One night after Elle gets too inebriated to fend off a drunken dance partner, Gabriel steps in to save her. But Elle should have been more careful. She stepped from the arms of one monster to an even more dangerous one.
This book is dark, very dark. It made me squirm in ways I wasn’t ready for. It was constantly throwing me off guard, making me feel uncomfortable and vulnerable. Gabriel’s emotions continually threw me off guard. Just when he would do something to make me like him, he would do something equally as shocking to make me hate him. Eleni didn’t make it easy to like her either. Her determination to damage herself was hard to watch. It was easy to understand how maddening Gabriel found Elani’s flippant attitude about her addictions. Even though Gabriel went about it the wrong way, he did show Elle that she was killing herself. But her refusal to accept the truth was unbelievably frustrating.
Both Robertson and White did an amazing job of capturing the chaos inside Gabriel’s head. At first I was upset because there were constant inconsistencies in Gabriel’s thought process. But then I realized that his way of thinking wasn’t in his control. The discrepancies were because of the war that was raging inside his head. I think one of the reasons the novel made me so uncomfortable was because they made it so real. Labeling Gabriel with schizophrenia gave a reason for his actions. In many stories where the main character is abusive the heroine believes she can change him with love or kindness. But in Gabriel’s case there was no fooling the reader into thinking Elle could magically make Gabriel “snap out of it.” Knowing there was an actual reason for some of his hatred made it real and less of a fantasy. The actuality that someone could be struggling with similar thoughts in my world chilled me to the bone.
The end of The Good Girl floored me. I guess I shouldn’t have been surprised considering the entire book was a rollercoaster. But I never could have imagined the direction the story turned. I’m still not sure how I feel about the conclusion, but I admire Robertson and White for creating a story so complex that it stayed with me for days.
If you are strong enough to immerse yourself in the mind of an angry schizophrenic I highly recommend this novel. The feelings it evoked in me were startling and uncomfortable, a rare combination that still has me thinking. The collaboration of these authors is an exciting development that has resulted in my newest writing duo obsession. I can only hope the two decide to partner on more projects in the future.