This one pissed me off.
It didn't just make me angry, it actually made me want to throw my unfortunate e-reader at the wall. Luckily for it, I love it dearly and so refrained. But the anger remains.
A warning to those of you who liked the book: don't read this review, please. It's my own opinion, but it will probably clash with yours.
The things that worked in favour of this story:
1. It had a Navy SEAL (I always enjoy reading about them)
2. It had a lovely setting
3. It had a good romance plot ... until a certain degree.
That's about it, however.
The crux of the matter is this: Willow has been bullied her entire life by her mother, Ona, who is a world-class fashion designer, because she was never skinny enough for her. So as a result, she cut all ties and built her own life, and lost a lot of weight to win that one battle. At the point in the story when we meet her, she is planning a wedding and runs into an old schoolmate of hers from university, Nick, who had rejected her offer/plea to be her first lover at the time. As the story progresses, we learn he's writing about his experience in Afghanistan, and that he and Willow are definitely going to be sleeping together soon.
So far, so good, and I liked the story up until this point. The chemistry was good, the characters made sense, the setting was beautiful.
But, then came that other subplot.
Ona had a medically curious experience of flatlining and then coming back to life, and in the process, she realized - or just decided, really - that she needs to make amends with her daughter. But of course, unlike any SANE mother, she has to manipulate and bully everyone in the scheme so that Willow won't know that a wedding she's planning is actually for her parents, doing precisely what her daughter has always hated, and her husband is such a doormat he can't even get enough guts to tell her she's a moron. And I was even fine with her experience of a white light and whatnot; what bugged me was how she went about fixing things, when she ACKNOWLEDGED, herself, that it was what Willow didn't like.
The worst part came when they managed to manipulate idiot Nick (yes, idiot) into agreeing not to tell Willow, because, newsflash men around the world: if you want to get into a woman's pants, the surest way is to keep a monumental secret and manipulation plan from her so she can learn about it later.
Yeah, right.
And then, the cherry on top of the cake: everything would have been fine. I would have liked it a whole lot. But then, one conversation between mother and daughter - after, I will admit, Willow just being an ass and not letting Nick to tell her anything - BAM! Happily ever after. It literally went like this:
Willow: OH MY GOD I HATE YOU YOU WERE SUCH A BULLY WHY CAN'T YOU LEAVE ME ALONE?
Ona: NO CAN DO SISTA SEE I HAD THIS TALK WITH ALMIGHTY AND HE SAYS I HAVE TO CLEAN UP MY ACT
Willow: OH MY GOD WHO CARES ABOUT THIRTY YEARS OF MENTAL ABUSE, KISSES AND HUGS!
She even gets proposed to by Nick eventually, and she says yes, duh, so they can finally have sex.
My word, there was SO much wrong with the last third of the book, I can't even. It went flat-out into unrealistic territory. One, Ona was just an idiot, and didn't change her personality one bit, just decided she was getting old and wanted in on the grandbabies fest Willow and Nick were about to have. Two, Willow turned out to be a spineless, mindless creature who got lobotomized on the spot by all the woo-woo talk. Three, the guys in the book turned out to be class-A douchebags.
Me, if MY mother had pretty much screwed me over for all my life? Or half of it? Yeah, I would have slammed her a new one for another manipulation scheme. An actual apology later would have gotten her a 'yeah, fine, I'll think about it', but then she'd have to WORK to get back into my good graces. Sorry, harsh reality, but you can't slam someone's body image and their own self-worth for twenty-six years and then just expect them to forget the past. Doesn't happen. People hold grudges. Badly. And I won't even get into the fact that Nick should NEVER have allowed the idiots of parents to tell him what was best for him. He knew what he should have done - and didn't do it. Strike out, mate.
Grrrrr.