DNF at 30%
So, in a very expected turn of events, I must DNF this book. This is actually my first time DNFing a book, something I´ve always been reluctant to do, but I´ll put more in practice in the near future, cause honestly, I can´t do this anymore.
It seems unfair to me to keep on investing my time in something I clearly dislike, so I simply won´t do it. It´s a change of heart and mind, but I know deep in my chore that it´s for the better.
This book has been sitting on my kindle for weeks now, and though I tried to make it past the 30% mark, it seems I couldn´t even force myself to do, at least, that. So, it´s endgame for me and this book.
I could blame this on just another case of "it´s me, not you", but I´d be lying.
This is definitely 100% on the book and only the book.
This is also a first to me, cause I´ve always been against rating or reviewing dnfed books, and yet here I am ( never say never, huh?). The reason I´m doing this is because it´s the least thing I can do, since this was giving to me freely in exchange of an honest review. So, here´s that.
Keep in mind that this review will be based on how much of the book I´ve read so far, meaning this is a partial review, and not a take on the whole book.
For starts, I wasn´t liking the story, and that´s the main reason why I decided to call it quits.
And also, just like almost every single book I´ve dared to touch this year, I found out that while the premise may seemed interesting, the execution was not to par.
According to the blurb, we follow the story of a bunch of youngsters living in a secluded, ultrarreligious community, completely isolated from the rest of the world, who are force to marry between them, when they turn 18. Our protagonist, doesn´t want that for her life, so she elaborates a plan to get away from that place, after she and her friends uncovered a terrible secret. Or that´s what we are supposed to believe.
One of my many issues with this novel is that we are told things instead of being shown. We are supposed to buy the oppresive atmosphere of the community, and their religious fanatism, but we are never shown that. There´s a thing or two tossed over there, but never enough to actually buy it.
I also had trouble understanding where and when exactly this story is taking place.
There are descriptions of a forest, sure, but they were insufficient to place the reader in the place. Same for the fictional historic period time this is happening. Some characters wield swords and bows, setting this on a medieval time? But the, the moment they open their mouths, whatever comes out of it is so generation z it´s almost jarring. Besides the fact that dialogues seemed very unreaslitic and artificial. I just could´t buy people talking that way. In fact, there was never a moment I felt this world or this characters real or came to life.
And speaking of the characters....I felt them very flat and unidimensional, because their whole personality was built around a trait and that was it. The rebellious runaway girl was just that, and we are never told what´s the reason for her to get away, besides that she just doesn´t want to marry. Or the overprotective muscle guy who´s just strong and hot. Or the smartass guy who´s just smart. And yeah, hot. Call me picky, but I want my characters with a little more gravitas.
Another reviewer said she found the characters a little bit stupid. Well, I wouldn´t go as far to say that, but I´ll admit their decisions to be at least, questionable.
I mean, I find it hard to believe that first thing you do when discovering a terrible truth about your ultrarreligious and super secretive community is shouting over the rooftops to every fellow youngster who wants to hear it.
Or that your genius plan to escape is to set the whole wooden fence on fire, alerting all the people you didn´t want to know you were escaping in the first place.
Maybe it´s just me liking my books with proper plotting, instead of making things plot convenient, you know?
So, in all, another failure in a year full of reading failures. I had high hopes cause this was my first request, but to be honest, I ended up reconsidering my decision of taking requests. I have two impending ones, but I don´t think I´ll be taking more in the future, cause I like to leave the decision of what I want to read to be solely on my hands.
As a word of advice for indie/self published authors asking for requests, consider offering and excerpt of your book instead of the whole book, so the reviewer can decide if they vibe with the story or not.
Thanks to Nathan on behalf of the author for this free copy on exchange of an honest review. All words and opinions are my own.