1.5 stars rounded down, DNF @ 62%.
As a former tennis player, I was so excited when I first heard about this book! Needless to say, though, it seems my expectations were way too high, and this book ended up thoroughly disappointing me. Apologies if this review is a bit disjointed!
I initially kinda liked the book, and I thought the tennis play-by-play was kinda fun to read in the first few chapters. I thought Luca was a decent character for a bit as well. That’s pretty much all the positives I have about the book.
Let’s get to the negatives. The only things pushing Luca and Juliette together, two women who have zero chemistry and have mutually exclusive tennis goals, are their soulmate marks on their wrists, called “soulmarks”. It was the only supernatural element of the entire book and it barely had any real impact because some people could just ignore the soulmark and be with someone else (e.g. Juliette’s own parents who aren’t soulmates and are happily married). And it just throws in that the soulmarks have been around for all of human history, but it wasn’t really a big thing because people couldn’t easily find their soulmate without the use of social media, which just seemed like a weird detail to add. The soulmark thing just teeters on this line where it’s simultaneously too much (the characters talk about soulmates SO MUCH and it’s the only reason Luca and Juliette are pushed to get together) and too little (it was the only fantasy element and it was made to be so inconsequential that people could just choose not to pursue their soulmate and be happy with someone else).
And then there’s Juliette. She was SO annoying and bratty, she just gives the vibe of a spoiled rich girl who's never been told no and therefore doesn’t know how to handle it when she’s told no (prime example being Luca saying she doesn’t want her because Luca doesn’t want just a physical relationship and Juliette is so dismissive of her feelings). I'm just amazed anyone even enjoys her company. Maybe she gets better after the 62% mark, but I’m not sticking around to see it.
Even though I initially liked the tennis stuff, it eventually delved into being totally unrealistic, and I mean unrealistic in the truest sense of the word, like these things would not happen in real life. But I won’t bore you with all the details that irked me.
Also I feel like this book thought its readers were stupid or something because it was a very tell-don’t-show kind of book, as if anything slightly ambiguous would’ve just flown right over our heads. And it probably thought we all had short term memory loss too because it would repeat very obvious information, like “Leo, Octavia’s boyfriend, blah blah blah,” like WE KNOW, we read about them locking lips like 10 pages ago! Ugh. I think a big part of this problem is that it’s written in a dual-perspective, 3rd-person limited POV, which I’m sure could’ve been pulled off if it was written by a stronger author, but it wasn’t. It just felt so impersonal and detached because it wasn’t 1st-person, and it didn’t even use 3rd-person to its fullest extent to make up for it.
The best comparison I could make is that it reads like a fanfiction, but not the amazing AO3 fic you stayed up till 4am last night to finish reading, no, it’s like the very mediocre Wattpad fics that make you turn off the app and question your life choices up to that point.
Questioning my life choices was a very common theme throughout my reading of this book. Some of the romantic scenes near the beginning of the book were actually kinda nice, but then it just went right into cringe territory. Like a steamy scene would have a nice flow to it and then the characters or narration would just say something so stupid and ruin it all.
Overall, I did not enjoy this, and I really wish I did cause I was so siked to read this book! Big thanks to Netgalley for providing me with this eARC in exchange for an honest review.