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The Lance Chronicles #2

Running Through a Dark Place

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In Children of the Knight, Lance and Arthur created a New Camelot of Knights in Los Angeles by using might for right. They rallied the populace to take charge of their communities, while simultaneously putting the detached politicians in check. Now, despite what appears to be the loss of their First Knight, the young activists—joined by a significant new recruit named Ricky—must find a way to move forward.

Their new goal is lofty: give adult rights to kids fourteen and older who are only considered “adults” when they break the law. The crusade seeks to provide teenagers with rights that make a difference in the real world: voting, driving, trading high school for work, and sitting as jurors for peers charged with criminal behavior.

The adults of California balk at giving such power to youth, and the road ahead is anything but clear. However, before Arthur can fully contemplate these matters, he finds himself face-to-face with an ally from the past—one who proves that things aren’t always what they seem, especially for the fallen Lance.

The Lance Chronicles Continue…

380 pages, Paperback

First published May 1, 2014

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Michael J. Bowler

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Michael J. Bowler is an award-winning author who grew up in Northern California. He majored in English/Theatre at Santa Clara University, earned a master’s in film production from Loyola Marymount University, a teaching credential in English from LMU, and a master’s in Special Education from Cal State University Dominguez Hills. Michael taught high school in Hawthorne, California for many years, both in general education and students with disabilities. When Michael is not writing you can find him volunteering as a youth mentor with the Big Brothers Big Sisters program, volunteering within the juvenile justice system in Los Angeles, or caring for his newly adopted son. He is a passionate advocate for the fair treatment of children and teens in California, and hopes his books can show young people they are not alone in their struggles.

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54 reviews4 followers
June 15, 2014
We tend to forget that famous people are still just people...especially when those famous people are youth/kids. I read an article recently about Jennifer Lawrence (a young lady who is quickly becoming one of my favorite actresses) of "Hunger Games" fame. Her father said her fame hasn't changed her in their family much, that she is still going to go through all of the same processes of identity formation and such that other young people go through. She will just do so under a microscope since she is so famous. But when a young person is famous because of a crusade to make the world better for children, can fame actually be a problem??

LONG STORY SHORT
Awhile ago I reviewed the first book in this series, Children of the Knight, and absolutely loved it. This continuation of the story did not disappoint. We rejoin the characters right in the middle of the scene which closed the first book - Lance has just died while television audiences watched in horror. An act of love designed to save King Arthur's life. An act of love that cost Lance his life. Or did it? An unexpected character from Arthur's past shows up and changes the game in a way that Lance becomes "the boy who came back".

A superbly written tale, this book kept me on the edge of my seat as I lost more than a few hours sleep from needing to know what happened next. How was character XYZ's behavior going to be explained? What exactly was Operation Silent Treatement? A difficult past haunts main characters, a mysterious figure becomes a part of daily life in a way that is difficult to figure out, and a wonderfully rich story unfolds in a way that gives me hope that a spark can move mountains. Can children change the world? Watch them.

On an ascending scale of 1 to 5, I give this book a 5.

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The Good
Much of what I said about the first book in this series is true here as well: Bowler here utilizes a writing style that dragged me into the scenes in a way that made me forget for a little while that while reading I was laying beside my son in his hospital bed for a week after he was diagnosed with leukemia. This was a welcome relief and one that I appreciated deeply.

Anyways, Bowler's writing style is approachable, likeable, snarky in all the right places, and engaging. Settings are created in an extremely realistic fashion, we always know how people are moving around in space (it bugs me when books have characters all over a room and don't explain how that is happening), the story progresses naturally from the first book, and just the right amount of new characters to figure out are introduced. Oh, and a nitpicky thing: characters communicate via looks and body language just as much as they do through words. Why am I pointing this out? I tend to find that many fiction books tend towards being dialog heavy as they attempt to work out the vast amounts of silent communication that happens between individuals. Not so here. Here we get "the looks", body gestures, and such laid out in such a way that makes perfect sense and is true to life.

But let's get to the story for a moment: King Arthur is still in modern-day L.A. championing the rights of children in a society where adults look upon children as something to be disregarded...at least until they screw up. He has gathered together a rag-tag group of people to help him in this crusade, people who have names that are remarkably similar to individuals from Arthurian legend (I see what you did there, Bowler). This rag-tag group includes Sir Lance, a young man who lost his life at the end of the first book in a successful attempt to save King Arthur from being shot by a sniper. A young man who becomes "the boy who came back" after a mysterious figure from Arthur's distant past shows up and resets a wrong: Lance was not supposed to die. Unfortunately, the manner in which he was saved cost a life that was very dear to everyone, and Lance spends the rest of the book struggling with this sacrifice, as well as with the feeling that death just might want him back.

Well, in becoming "the boy who came back", Lance becomes the most famous person in the world. People either love him or hate him. Adults tend to be suspicious, especially when he proves so successful at wielding words that his oration skills are likened to those of President Lincoln, because he shines a light on how they have failed children (apparently conveniently forgetting how they were failed as children). Yet just because he is famous and engaged in a noble crusade does not mean he is perfect. Sir Lance is still just fourteen and learning what living means (especially after having died). A teenager struggling through identity formation, he makes some rather public glaring errors in judgment that threaten to derail the crusade entirely. And what should he do with the enigmatic Michael, a boy whom everyone else seems to want to have nothing to do with but to whom Lance somehow feels a connection and the sense that there is some good in Michael to be unleashed?

Never underestimate what children and youth are capable of when their energies are harnessed for good.

This is yet another work which exposes how poorly children are treated in our society. They are considered children and incapable of making informed decisions until they are 18, but they can be tried as an adult in court and - in some rare cases - executed as such. They cannot vote, but must abide by laws which affect nearly every aspect of their lives. Seriously, I think the political world would look a bit different if youth were able to hold politicians to task in the same way they do so here. Now, I understand why kids are not allowed to vote....truly I do. But what if politicians were actually held accountable to the children they are making laws for? For example, what if politicians had to answer to all of the children whom their recent actions towards food stamps affected?

Anyways, to get back to the book. As I said about the first one, it is superbly written, deeply engaging, and made me want to see about getting a crusade such as this organized. The plot moves along very well and flows very naturally. People engage with one another in ways that make perfect sense. Characters' emotions are explored in a way that actually helps readers get to know the characters as more than just a name on a page - they are someone you could meet when going about your daily life.

On another note, this book is more "real" than I would like it to be. I've met these optional, disenfranchised, violent, and "difficult" children everywhere. On the whole, adults don't tend to give them much of a chance. This is a crime to our children. I've witnessed first-hand how much these "optional" children are capable of when taken seriously and given a chance, and it is incredible.

Read this book. May it ignite a fire in you to pursue justice for the youngest "least of these" in our society.

The Bugly (bad/ugly)
I've only got two big nitpicks here, and they weren't really enough to derail my giving this book a perfect score. First, there are minor typos scattered throughout the book. Not enough to completely derail me as I read, but enough that I noticed it did not seem as thoroughly edited as the first book. Second, CLIFFHANGER. BLAHGASDFIAQWESFNAS!! I HATE cliffhangers!! I'm not going to knock part of a score down from this, as this is a stylistic choice that makes sense for a book that is part of a series. Just be prepared that there is a MAJOR freaking cliffhanger at the end.
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Author 85 books190 followers
May 24, 2016
“We shalt find another way” declares King Arthur in his slightly obscure version of olde English, as destiny’s path seems thwarted. But a friend from the past has a solution in this tale of modern-day knights on (and off) the streets of LA and when a miracle occurs, the whole world will take notice.

Religious authorities question what comes from God and what from Satan, as they simultaneously chase after and try to ignore the miraculous Lance. Politicians question the rights of children to be heard while they seek to be safe. And courts question the rights of adults, in particular of King Arthur, to provide the parental guidance once missing in these street kids' lives.

Forgiveness and second chances are a major theme in this novel, as Lance struggles with a magnified case of teen angst, and grows into the leader he’s called to be. Kids forced to grow up too fast on the streets now call for the rights of all children, not to be cared for, but to vote. Meanwhile the protagonist reminds his father again, “I’m just a kid,” and the reader wonders if votes would change anything.

Running Through a Dark Place takes a boy of uncertain sexual orientation through the dark places of his world, his history and his psyche, offering him a quest to save those like himself through politics and media. Perhaps in our uncertain world these might be the only paths. But it's hard not to wonder if the promises are a little too simplistic.

The story’s long, sometimes repetitive, but wise and kindly in the end. Olde English phrases fade into the background, becoming less distracting, and the well-tuned voices of youth, beautifully rendered, take up the cry. Will these knights change the world, or just change LA? Will a Mordred arise to torment them and King Arthur? Who is Michael? And how will it end?

Dark Place is a story complete in itself, a smoother read than its predecessor, and an intriguing step on a journey that promises to continue through many more books.

Disclosure: A was given a free ecopy and I offer my honest review.

Merged review:

“We shalt find another way” declares King Arthur in his slightly obscure version of olde English, as destiny’s path seems thwarted. But a friend from the past has a solution in this tale of modern-day knights on (and off) the streets of LA and when a miracle occurs, the whole world will take notice.

Religious authorities question what comes from God and what from Satan, as they simultaneously chase after and try to ignore the miraculous Lance. Politicians question the rights of children to be heard while they seek to be safe. And courts question the rights of adults, in particular of King Arthur, to provide the parental guidance once missing in these street kids' lives.

Forgiveness and second chances are a major theme in this novel, as Lance struggles with a magnified case of teen angst, and grows into the leader he’s called to be. Kids forced to grow up too fast on the streets now call for the rights of all children, not to be cared for, but to vote. Meanwhile the protagonist reminds his father again, “I’m just a kid,” and the reader wonders if votes would change anything.

Running Through a Dark Place takes a boy of uncertain sexual orientation through the dark places of his world, his history and his psyche, offering him a quest to save those like himself through politics and media. Perhaps in our uncertain world these might be the only paths. But it's hard not to wonder if the promises are a little too simplistic.

The story’s long, sometimes repetitive, but wise and kindly in the end. Olde English phrases fade into the background, becoming less distracting, and the well-tuned voices of youth, beautifully rendered, take up the cry. Will these knights change the world, or just change LA? Will a Mordred arise to torment them and King Arthur? Who is Michael? And how will it end?

Dark Place is a story complete in itself, a smoother read than its predecessor, and an intriguing step on a journey that promises to continue through many more books.

Disclosure: A was given a free ecopy and I offer my honest review.
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Author 42 books541 followers
May 12, 2014

Running Through a Dark place is a 5 STAR 2014 YA “motion picture of books!”

Reading Michael Bowler’s newest novel in his Children of the Knight series was comparable to experiencing a live action and adventure motion picture—the story’s compelling action reeled through my head as if projected on the big screen. Closely entwined with the action that I will confess yanked the rug out from beneath my feet time and again, were touching moments that tapped me on the shoulder and demanded my attention. And as I likely would do with an outstanding movie aimed at the Young Adult audience, I experienced palpable frustration regarding certain less-than-logical teenage behaviors—if you know what I mean—which caused me to endure the frequent urge to grasp their youthful shoulders firmly, in order to gently shake sense into them.
All of the above components, along with moments of overwhelming sorrow, chilling cruelty, and intriguing fantasy, combined to shape a novel with a gripping cinema worthy plot. In fact, as I rapidly progressed through this sequel to Children of the Knight, I will admit to labeling author Michael Bowler as “Mr. Plot Twist.” I learned to expect the unexpected. You would be wise to do the same.
Bowler’s continuing modern-day story of the youthful LA-based Knights of the Round Table and their noble leader, King Arthur, Running Through a Dark Place, is truly one of the great ones. But what is most uncommon about this exhilarating work of fantasy is that it is packaged as convincing reality. In a manner of storytelling that is highly imaginative, yet somehow still quite credible, Bowler persists with his message of change and choices for children. And like many of the best motion pictures, the conclusion of Running Through a Dark Place left me contemplating these profound messages, the many “what if’s” it introduced into my consciousness, weeks after I finished reading.
I will admit that I have, at this point, become quite addicted to tracking the struggles of these genuine teenage characters and their interactions with a passionate and compassionate population of the enlightened adults, as well as to unraveling the mystery at the center of the evolving danger. I look forward with great anticipation to the third book in this series, as Michael Bowler, like many movie directors, has concluded Running Through a Dark Place with what is commonly referred to as a “cliffhanger” that left me feeling eager—extremely eager…chomping at the bit, even—for resolution.
Before I conclude I would like to note that, although I was greatly intrigued and moved by the substance of book one of this series, Children of the Knight, I became more far engrossed by its sequel, Running Through a Dark Place. This was due to stylistic differences—or expressive enhancements—employed by Michael Bowler. To sum it up, as much of the groundwork had been laid in book one, while reading book two there was far less narration, so that I found myself more “in the moment”. Bowler’s writing in Running Through a Dark Place was free of the boundaries that accompany the building of a strong foundation for what is to be an epic tale of five books, and his writing was, in a sense, unrestricted, whisking me away into each of the gripping scenes his characters braved. And he did this in such I way that I experienced physical sensations while reading, such as heart pounding and breathlessness, as I would endure while watching a suspenseful film.
In conclusion, I will confess to my secret wish: I hope that Hollywood discovers the Children of the Knight books and bases a series of blockbuster movies on them. And lucky for them, there will be no need to hire Christopher Nolan; the books come with the talented and unconventional author Michael Bowler.


Highly highly recommended.
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3,843 reviews
May 11, 2015
I won this book in a competition on Elisa Rollle's blog and YA is not normally a favoured reading genre of mine. I was advised that book 1 was essential reading before starting this and whilst I could see how knowing some more about the relationships would enhance the overall experience. I did find this one compelling and readable on its own though. 3.5*+
Overall I found this to be a very emotive read, as well as a long intense read. Certainly the opening chapters (as well as a number through the book) were very emotional even without having the history in book 1 of Jack and Lavern.
I found the '3' voice styles interesting - the street slang of the boys, the old world formal style of Arthur and the modern 'normal' talk of the rest.

lance is a person on that brink - seesawing between adulthood and childhood in that awkward time teens have when they are neither. But I'm not certain that Prop 51 is the panacea they all hope.
Michael is a true enigma. Whilst we get some insight into his highly scarred and emotional psyche, I am not certain we have his full story yet - and I am certain Reyna and Lance were talking about different things in his background. i am still waiting for the sword to fall as regards Michael.
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January 25, 2019
King Arthur and all the knights of his new Round Table return in Running Through a Dark Place, book two of the Lance Chronicles. Starting off right where book one ended, King Arthur and the rest of his knights mourn the loss of their friend, Lance Sepulveda. The vast crowd of Los Angeles residents remains outside City Hall and mourns with them. After Lance saved King Arthur from a sniper, he died in the arms of the miserable king. Not knowing how he can possibly continue his quest to further the rights of children without Lance by his side, Arthur is all but ready to give up hope. His despair continues as he is cryptically asked to accompany Lance’s body by the paramedic. Arthur does as he is told and gets into the ambulance, accompanied by Lance’s best friend, Jack.

The vehicle begins to drive off, but not minutes later the driver stops on the opposite side of City Hall and rushes his surprised passengers back outside. With only the cryptic explanation, “Hurry, King Arthur, before it’s too late.” The mysterious paramedic grabs Lance’s stretcher and hurries into the building, with Arthur and Jack in tow. Finally, the paramedic stops in a room and reveals himself as Arthur’s old friend, Merlin. He explains to the confused pair that he has the power to bring Lance back to life, as long as they can find someone to agree to take Lance’s place in death. With no time to spare, they find a willing volunteer, and Lance is brought back to life!

After making a grand reappearance on the front steps of City Hall, the crowd looks at Lance in awe. Having just died less than an hour prior, and on live TV no less, it’s an understatement to say that this event will have a lasting effect on the entire world. Lance’s life changes instantly as he becomes the most famous person on Earth. Although this publicity seems to be beneficial to the knights’ crusade, the question is, will fourteen-year-old Lance be able to handle the pressure? Even if he can, is it possible that Arthur and his knights will overcome all their obstacles and complete their crusade?

Opinion:
Running Through a Dark Place was a fast-paced book that incorporated lots of action throughout. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and in fact, I think Michael J. Bowler succeeded in making book two even more exciting than book one. There was more action, and the characters seemed better developed. Even further, the book had very few spots, if any, that contained too much unnecessary information, as was sometimes the case in book one. I was also very impressed that the author was able to infuse his book with the emotions that he did; when the characters were mourning Lance, or other fellow knights, I could tangibly feel their emotions.

One more thing that was really nice was that the author included a quick summary of the first book prior to the start of this one. Because of this, the storyline can be easily followed, even by those who haven’t read the first installment. Although I loved this book tremendously, I feel I should give potential readers a quick warning. In order to enjoy this book, a reader should have an open mind because it includes many controversial themes, such as children questioning whether they are gay. This book did seem slightly more mature than its predecessor, so I would recommend it to anyone 14 and up who enjoys action-filled stories that depict children picking up the reigns and bettering society.
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May 27, 2014
I am not sure I can remember reading a book that tugged my heart strings in this way. Up, down, backwards, forwards, in, out, over here, over there...simultaneously…and TIGHTLY! I started Running Through a Dark Place and could not put it down. My emotions ran rampant, crying regularly, lying awake angry at one character or another, mostly just trying to internalize a story that consumes you from word one. I was mesmerized with Michael J. Bowler’s second novel of children who are trying to take over the world. The book draws you in from the foreword (penned by Mia Kerick) and beyond that, you are on your own.

Before I go on, I must say that you have to read Children of the Knight first. If you haven’t, read no further. I tried for no spoilers, but a review of this breakthrough novel will probably not be able to avoid them. (OK, MAJOR SPOILER ALERT COMING!)
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Running Through a Dark Place continues King Arthur’s crusade of young people showing that they are the future of the country, if not the world. The Boy Who Came Back and his fellow knights are presented as real people. Kids. Those among us who make mistakes, and the novel tends to show us that in very graphic testimony. As well as the consequences. Thus the anger…not at Bowler’s presentation, but of the kids who act stupid! But those mistakes are predicated on typical adolescent behavior so it’s hard to get but so mad. I got mad. Then I was sad as the boys realized what they had done. Heartstrings, remember? The backgrounds of Lance and Ricky are important here, as is the intrusion (introduction?) of Michael, so deftly interviewed by Mia here…http://miakerick.com/2014/05/14/mia-k.... In Running Through a Dark Place Michael shows his true colors, from one end of the gamut to the other, and we are left to wonder exactly what the true hues may be. He helps, he hurts, he…is an enigma.

Lance and Ricky must face many of their greatest fears. Can they actually be the leaders of this crusade? It’s a hard thing to do! And…are they gay? For each other?!?!?! Oh no, they are “real boys” as Bridget and Ariel prove over and over. Or do they? What about Michael? As the boys struggle to be regular kids who can be famous and also have girlfriends, the travails of running a crusade in California proves to be the match for King Arthur and his knights. There is so much going on as the crusade progresses from neighborhoods in LA to a statewide push to change the fate of youth in the state. Sometimes, you have to wonder if anyone can control the whole thing. That’s a good question. There is hell to pay, over and over again as various factions act out for their own good. From individuals to the organizations involved, we are constantly wondering what comes next in the give and take of a huge undertaking that involves everyone in the state (country? world?). God help them.

Running Through a Dark Place is at all times compelling, drawing you in, and not letting go. You are truly heartless if you cannot empathize with every character involved; Lance, Ricky, Jenny, Arthur, Michael, Reyna, Esteban, all the other knights, the mayor, the cops, the governor. I challenge you to read this without a tear in your eye. It’s that strong. All the way around.
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Author 5 books40 followers
October 7, 2018
I am updating my review of Michael Bowler's second volume of The Lance Chronicles as I am in the midst of reading the newly revised editions of the series.

This followup to the excellent Children of the Knight picks up where the former volume left off. In that book, Lance was killed by a sniper's bullet. But now the paramedic taking Arthur and Jack 'to the hospital' with Lance's body is revealed to be Merlin. The wizard explains that Lance's role in the crusade is crucial, and he can be brought back but only if someone freely chooses to die in his place. Jack volunteers, and soon a confused Lance is returned to life, devastated that Jack sacrificed himself on his behalf.

The world is stunned at Lance's resurrection, and he is dubbed "The Boy Who Came Back." In short order, we are introduced to Ricky, a homeless boy who so resembles Lance that they could be twins, and who quickly becomes his closest friend. We are also introduced to Michael, an older boy who is rich, arrogant, and who provokes a strong (and confusing) attraction in Lance. While Arthur and the Knights find knew lodging in a donated Hotel and plan the next phase of their crusade for children, Lance tries to deal with his new-found fame and notoriety, embarrassing mistakes, and the ongoing PTSD from his years of being sexually abused as a child.

This book is a roller coaster ride of suspense and passion. Bowler is a masterful writer and readers of this series need to prepare themselves for many warm smiles as Lance and Ricky grow closer, and also for scenes that are so emotionally powerful they will be left in tears. The complex interactions between Lance, Ricky, and Michael - including touching moments, maddening misunderstandings, and potentially tragic mistakes - builds in intensity and keeps one glued to the page. And believe me, this entry in the series, like all of them really, is a page turner. A decision to read a few pages inevitably leads to a whole chapter.

I would also note that if you have read the series previously, picking up the new editions will be worth your expense. Bowler has updated the text in many understated but significant ways that strengthen the story and make the characters even more authentic. As a non-spoiler example, one exchange between Michael and Ricky while at a party has been subtly tweaked in a way that will be more acceptable to some readers while retaining every bit of the power in the original edition. If you've read the original edition, you'll spot what I'm talking about when you get to that passage in the new one.

I would strongly suggest that if you've already read Children of the Knight, go ahead and purchase There Is No Fear together with this one. I guarantee that as soon as you finish Running Through a Dark Place you'll want to jump in and start it.
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Author 1 book230 followers
July 2, 2014

Not long ago I reviewed the book Children of the Knight which was Michael Bowler's first book. Little did I know that this was only the first book in a series of five. I loved his first book and thought when I got the chance to read this second book, that it would be great.

The book picked up where the last had ended with Sir Lance's death. Or is he? We find out soon enough that he is not and that pushes Lance into an unintentional celebrity status. The book throughout deals with his celebrity status and how he becomes accustomed to it. Even the appearance of a ancient wizard does not trump his status. This first few chapters was certainly author privilege but I thought it was an interesting twist right off the bat.

The book also deals with very dark and horrible issues of molestation and child rape. These topics, although I know they happen, were hard for me to take. If anything, I wanted so desperately to just hug the characters and let them know someone truly cared. It was sickening to me and I think unless this is an older teen to young adult reading (which this book is targeted for), this book would need a conversation prior to reading.

Also among the pages was adoption issues, the usual teenage angst, sexual identity, (Ricky and Lance"s relationship-drove me nuts!) teen drinking and bullying. These were not so hard to take but the repetitive issues of them was a bit much for me.

In fact, I found the whole book to be quite repetitive and the chapters long. I thought this book could have been much shorter than it was especially since this was just book two of an entire series. However, I was just really getting into the book when...WHAM...the book ends abruptly in a cliffhanger!
I have mentioned before in other reviews how much I hate that!

So, where does that leave me overall? Well, I think Michael Bowler's series is interesting and understand where he is coming from as he most likely has run into children much like the characters. I was able to get into the characters for the most part and understood them but in the long run, the book I simply did not like as much as the first.

Still, an overall ok book and for that I give 3 stars. I hope to see a better book in the next round.
~Naila Moon

Disclosure: I was given a PDF copy of this book for review with my open and honest opinion. The review is part of a book tour but I was not required to give a positive review. The views expressed here are 100% my own.
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871 reviews30 followers
August 9, 2021
Running through a Dark Place is the second book in the Lance Chronicles series and successfully carries the story forward from its first book that I reviewed few days ago. If you haven't read it and you are planning to read it just pick it up, read it and then come back to this review asthere may be some spoilers in this review related to the first book.

King Arthur and all the knights of his new Round Table return in Running Through a Dark Place, book two of the Lance Chronicles. The story picks up right from the cliffhanger point on which it left us on the first book. Lance is dead, in order to save King Arthur. The whole roundtable members of the Knights team of Arthur are completely broken and are in complete darkness. They don't know how they will continue their mission in the same momentum without Lance. But this is not the end to the story of Lance. A friend from past appears, and helps Arthur revive Lance, but at a cost( which I am not going to tell).

With Lance back, they picks up on a new mission to give the rights of Adults to children of age 14 and above. A new member Ricky has joined the group and has many similarities with Lance. Some new members are also added to the group. But with all these new members, Lance's new found fame as "The boy who returned", with all the pressures, will Lance be able to help Arthur and his team members to achieve this mission or will he fail?

The book is as good as its first part, even better than that. The story takes its readers on a roller coaster ride of emotions and thrills. The addition of Fantasy to this great thriller story makes it more interesting and good. The language used is simple and easily conveys the emotions and will touche the heart of every reader.

The book is a great young adult fiction and a great series. I can't wait to read the next books in series. Those readers who are trying to find a good series that can keep them intrigued with the story till the end, this series has the potential.
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May 19, 2014
"Children of The Knight II: Running Through a Dark Place" Review.

WOW, what a roller coaster ride Michael sent me on with this second installment of his Children of the Knight series.

I was crying with sadness, then spell-cast, then crying with happiness.

Arthur's "Childrens' Crusade" is well on it's way after cleaning up the various `hoods in L.A.. His new Round Table is growing by leaps and bounds. But even as they gain momentum and more supporters, they are also gaining more enemies. Will the adults manage to derail the crusade, or will problems from within cause it to fail? Will various personality conflicts within the knights cause things to fall apart or will Arthur manage to maintain the peace and feeling of brotherhood and family intact long enough to finish what they have started?

Michael manages to draw you in like you're under one of Merlin’s spells and traps you in this world that he has created and not turn you loose. But I, personally, would not WANT to be turned loose. His characters have great depth and complexity, something a lot of writers seem to have trouble achieving, and he does it without boring you with a whole lot of un-needed details like some very famous authors I could name tend to do.

If you have not read Children of The Knight, and gotten drawn into Michaels spell, then you really need to get it, read it and then get and read this second installment. You will be very glad that you did. And you'll want to do this before book 3 comes out in a few more months.

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Author 19 books183 followers
June 4, 2015
This book was recently entered and was a BRONZE medal winner in The Wishing Shelf Book Awards. This is what our readers thought:

Star Rating: 5 stars
Number of Readers: 28

Readers’ Comments
‘This is a very exciting adenture. I love the knights and Lance. He’s cool. Tons of twists and a good ending.’ Boy, aged 14
‘There’s a lot going on with this book. Not only is it a wonderful adventure for teenagers, it also sends a messge about loyalty and never giving up. The three children in my class who read it for the awards thought it was very exciting and we enjoyed a long discussion about incorporating myths ad legends in story writing.’ Teacher, year 10
‘I liked the way the author described the characters and the setting. Also I think it’s good to write a book that is pushing for children to be more important in the world. Another thing I liked was the range of characters and that there were not too many. Lance is by far the most interesting character (I liked the mayor too) and the pacing is excellent.’ Boy, aged 14
‘Fab cover, fab blurb and and fab story. This was the best book I read for The Wishing Shelf Awards.’ Boy, aged 15

Stats
Of the 28 readers:
26 thought the cover was good or excellent.
28 would read another book by this author.
19 felt the best part of the book was the plot.
7 felt the best part was the fast pacing.
2 thought the character, Lance, was the best.

‘A compelling, fast-paced adventure. A BRONZE medal winner and highly recommended.’ The Wishing Shelf Awards
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89 reviews6 followers
June 28, 2014
Having read and enjoyed the first book in the series, Children of the Knight, I was very interested in the sequel, Running Through a Dark Place.  It picks up literally five minutes after Book 1 ends, with the aftermath of a death of one of King Arthur's "knights."
I was a little turned off by the first two chapters.  I don't want to give away too much, but some events take place which serve to make Lance, Arthur's first knight, a bit of a celebrity.  I thought that the development of these first two chapters felt a little contrived.
After that, though, the story picked up in intensity and emotion and I felt pulled in, just as I had with its predecessor.  Again, I must warn that there are some seriously dark themes running throughout the story. Since these are mostly street kids, they have been abused, molested and otherwise taken advantage of.  The story does not go into a lot of detail, but young teenagers might be disturbed.
My favorite part of Running Through a Dark Place was Lance attempting  to come to terms with his new found fame as well as with his sexuality (although what that might be has yet to be determined, as with many of his age).
Running Through a Dark Place is a strong story that will appeal to young people who enjoy a story with adventure and danger.  Parents will appreciate the message of self-respect and responsibility.
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162 reviews41 followers
July 28, 2017
Very good story. It got a little tedious in places, and I kept wanting to grab lance and smack him. For such a wonderful smart boy, he was also incredibly stupid sometimes. In fact he acted just like a kid.

I guess for a kid that has been through what he went through and didn't have anyone to guide him, he came out remarkably good.

Some parts of this story made me really angry. Any adult that would do something to a kid and call the kid names, is beyond despicable. Too bad kids don't know the adults are really talking about themselves.

I like the idea of kids having more rights. They used to. Not sure how things changed, but there is a lot in this world that needs fixing.

Not sure most kids should read this unless they have a trusted adult around for answering questions. Some could handle it, because they are familiar with nasty, but some might not. That said there is a lot of hope in this story. And some bloody good folks too.
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1,537 reviews172 followers
December 20, 2014
A nice continuation of book #1, Children of the Knight. Some sad moments, some new love and some action, some Arthurian characters and real heart.
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Author 20 books311 followers
September 19, 2018
Thought I'd share this review from a teen reader who is not on Goodreads

Reviewed by Ben Weldon (age 17)

“Running Through a Dark Place: Children of the Knight II” by Michael J. Bowler is the story of fifteen-year-old Lance and his adventures in Los Angeles with the recently resurrected King Arthur. Brought back from the dead by Merlin and Lance’s friend, Jack, Lance was tasked with the monumental job of maintaining the crusade and winning rights for Californian kids. However, despite the best efforts of Lance and his friends, there remained those who were less than pleased at the prospect of forfeiting power to children. Will Lance’s crusade succeed, or will his movement be shut down by those too afraid to give up control?

In LA, King Arthur’s quest to save the outcast and abused children was going well. His dear Lance had been returned from the dead and work on a proposition to give political rights to children had started. Then Michael showed up. He was unpleasant and threatening, yet brilliant and had the political know-how to get Arthur’s proposition into play. He quickly gained Lance’s trust and before long invited him to parties and other social gatherings. Little did Lance know that there were people out there who hated him and his movement enough to kill. Michael’s parties would offer just such an opportunity. Will Lance be able to cheat death for the second time, or will conspiring factions manage to bring down both Lance and Arthur’s crusade?

The writing style was pretty smooth, but conversations could be a touch hard to interpret due to the old English used by Arthur and the slang used by the main characters. The main characters were persuaded to do things a bit too easily. Despite this, it was still a fairly easy, if not light, read.

I would recommend “Running Through a Dark Place: Children of the Knight II” by Michael J. Bowler to people who like teen adventure books and Arthurian legend. There were a lot of adult themes, including sex, drugs, alcohol, and a lot of swearing. The book would be best suited for teen audiences. This is the second book in a series. It ended with a cliffhanger, and I can’t wait to read the next one.
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Author 109 books236 followers
December 6, 2015
2014 Rainbow Awards Honorable Mention (5* from at least 1 judge)
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